| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "quickened" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "throb" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "racing" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "raced" | | 16 | "firmly" | | 17 | "traced" | | 18 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1083 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 1081 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.74 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 8 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 16.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite human" | | 1 | "seemed alive tonight—flowers swayed without any breeze, their petals shimmering in the moonlight as if faintly luminous" | | 2 | "as if pulling down from the sky" | | 3 | "felt like a trap" |
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| 15.33% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.847 | | wordCount | 1083 | | matches | | 0 | "not with fog, but something else" | | 1 | "not just lurking in the dark but studying her, waiting for a chance" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 48.77% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 43.32 | | std | 13.89 | | cv | 0.321 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 51 |
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| 97.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "were supposed" | | 1 | "was supposed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | | 0 | "were watching" | | 1 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.165 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was thick, not with fog, but something else—an intangible presence that prickled her skin." | | 1 | "Then, she heard it—no, not just a sound." | | 2 | "The voice was strange—soft, almost soothing, yet not quite human." | | 3 | "Then, a flicker of movement caught her eye—just at the edge of her vision." | | 4 | "A sudden crack split the quiet—sharp and unnatural." | | 5 | "The grove’s flora seemed alive tonight—flowers swayed without any breeze, their petals shimmering in the moonlight as if faintly luminous." | | 6 | "Its faint glow flickered—faint, but enough to cut through the dark." | | 7 | "They looked different tonight—more twisted, their gnarled limbs reaching lower, as if pulling down from the sky." | | 8 | "Now, they felt alive—like they were watching her, waiting for her to get closer." | | 9 | "A movement at the corner of her eye—it was quick, barely there—like someone flickering in and out of existence." | | 10 | "On impulse, she traced a finger over the scar on her wrist—the crescent-shaped mark from childhood—reminding herself she had survived worse." | | 11 | "A faint flicker—what could have been a flicker—moved between two trees, so quick it might have been a trick of the light." | | 12 | "Then, out of nowhere, a faint glow flickered along the ground—just for a second—like an ember ash drifting across the grass." | | 13 | "She knew what that was—something strange, something dangerous." | | 14 | "Behind her, the whispering returned, softer now, more insistent—an invitation or a warning." |
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| 82.45% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1099 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 66 | | adverbRatio | 0.06005459508644222 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012738853503184714 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 11.9 | | std | 5.95 | | cv | 0.5 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 42.31% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.2967032967032967 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a strange park, an" | | 1 | "Then, she heard it—no, not" | | 2 | "Then, a flicker of movement" | | 3 | "Then, a faint sound, like" | | 4 | "Just the night’s oppressive silence," | | 5 | "maybe they weren’t just stories." | | 6 | "Maybe the Grove remembered." | | 7 | "Then, out of nowhere, a" |
| | ratio | 0.09 | |
| 53.71% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "She hesitated, breath caught in" | | 1 | "She clutching the Heartstone Pendant" | | 2 | "It warmed her, or maybe" | | 3 | "It flitted against her face," | | 4 | "She blinked, instinctively brushing her" | | 5 | "She thought about the stories," | | 6 | "She froze, ears strained." | | 7 | "It slithered just beyond the" | | 8 | "she asked, her voice thin" | | 9 | "She hesitated, waiting." | | 10 | "Her heart quickened." | | 11 | "She told herself it was" | | 12 | "She knew the Grove could" | | 13 | "She took a tentative step" | | 14 | "It seemed to throb in" | | 15 | "Her muscles tensed, camera-ready, as" | | 16 | "She swung around, catching a" | | 17 | "She rushed toward it, quiet" | | 18 | "Her fingers hovered over the" | | 19 | "She kept walking, her breath" |
| | ratio | 0.416 | |
| 61.12% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped into the" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "She hesitated, breath caught in" | | 3 | "The air was thick, not" | | 4 | "She clutching the Heartstone Pendant" | | 5 | "It warmed her, or maybe" | | 6 | "The detached quiet of the" | | 7 | "A faint breeze stirred the" | | 8 | "It flitted against her face," | | 9 | "She blinked, instinctively brushing her" | | 10 | "She thought about the stories," | | 11 | "The silence stretched, oppressive." | | 12 | "A faint, almost inaudible whisper," | | 13 | "She froze, ears strained." | | 14 | "The voice was strange—soft, almost" | | 15 | "It slithered just beyond the" | | 16 | "she asked, her voice thin" | | 17 | "She hesitated, waiting." | | 18 | "The grove remained silent except" | | 19 | "Something dark slipped behind a" |
| | ratio | 0.798 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, something was wrong." | | 1 | "Now, they felt alive—like they" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 33.90% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was thick, not with fog, but something else—an intangible presence that prickled her skin." | | 1 | "She clutching the Heartstone Pendant tight around her neck, feeling the faint pulse from the crimson gemstone through the silver chain." | | 2 | "The grove remained silent except for the whispering, which ebbed and flowed, like the faint murmur of a distant river." | | 3 | "She took a tentative step forward, hand brushing her pocket, feeling the reassuring weight of the pendant." | | 4 | "The grove’s flora seemed alive tonight—flowers swayed without any breeze, their petals shimmering in the moonlight as if faintly luminous." | | 5 | "The wildflowers bloomed out of season, unnaturally vivid, with petals that had a slight shimmer, like eyes peering out from petals too perfect for the dark." | | 6 | "She kept walking, her breath steady but her mind racing." | | 7 | "They looked different tonight—more twisted, their gnarled limbs reaching lower, as if pulling down from the sky." | | 8 | "The faint pulse of the Heartstone thrummed harder now, its glow growing with each passing second." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, her voice thin as the night stretched around her" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |