Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR7AV18Z8K7Z03P411ZHZ4

Run Details

Duration:
12.9s
Cost:
$0.000662
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stepped into the Fae Grove just as the last light from the city slunk beneath the horizon, her boots crunching softly on the uneven carpet of wildflowers. The ancient oak standing stones loomed at the boundary, their twisted limbs reaching darkly into the night sky. She hesitated, breath caught in her throat, her sharp eyes darting around. The air was thick, not with fog, but something else—an intangible presence that prickled her skin. She clutching the Heartstone Pendant tight around her neck, feeling the faint pulse from the crimson gemstone through the silver chain. It warmed her, or maybe it was just her own nervousness. Hard to say anymore these days. The detached quiet of the Grove seemed to swallow the faint rustling of her clothes as she moved toward the clearing. A faint breeze stirred the leaves, but it didn’t come from any natural direction. It flitted against her face, cold and whispering. She blinked, instinctively brushing her shoulder, eyes flickering over the shadows cast by the standing stones. Nothing moved. She thought about the stories, the warnings, but she’d convinced herself this was just another quiet night. Just a strange park, an ancient boundary tucked away from the world. Yet, something was wrong. The silence stretched, oppressive. Then, she heard it—no, not just a sound. A faint, almost inaudible whisper, like a voice caught in a low draft, sliding through the trees. She froze, ears strained. The voice was strange—soft, almost soothing, yet not quite human. It slithered just beyond the edge of her perception, sliding around the nape of her neck. "Who's there?" she asked, her voice thin as the night stretched around her. She hesitated, waiting. The grove remained silent except for the whispering, which ebbed and flowed, like the faint murmur of a distant river. Then, a flicker of movement caught her eye—just at the edge of her vision. Something dark slipped behind a tree, gone before she could focus. Her heart quickened. She told herself it was just a trick. She knew the Grove could play tricks, but that wasn’t her mind conjuring shadow. She took a tentative step forward, hand brushing her pocket, feeling the reassuring weight of the pendant. It seemed to throb in her palm, faintly pulsing like a heartbeat, or a warning. A sudden crack split the quiet—sharp and unnatural. Aurora spun around, searching. No movement, no sound, just the dense quilt of shadows. Her muscles tensed, camera-ready, as her eyes darted through the darkness. Then, a faint sound, like fabric brushing against bark, came from behind her. She swung around, catching a glimpse of something retreating into the trees. She rushed toward it, quiet steps crunching softly on the grass. Her fingers hovered over the Heartstone, its pulsing comforting against her chest. The grove’s flora seemed alive tonight—flowers swayed without any breeze, their petals shimmering in the moonlight as if faintly luminous. The wildflowers bloomed out of season, unnaturally vivid, with petals that had a slight shimmer, like eyes peering out from petals too perfect for the dark. She kept walking, her breath steady but her mind racing. Every other night, these woods felt ancient, alive, but tonight, they felt wrong. The shadows clung tighter. Something waited in the dark, waiting for her. A rustle sounded again, closer this time, behind her knees. She spun abruptly, hands raised, ready to defend herself against a threat she wasn’t sure existed. Nothing. Just the night’s oppressive silence, broken only by her own heartbeat. The whisper returned, softer but insistent, brushing her ear like a child's breath. She clenched her fists, feeling the subtle warmth of the pendant. Its faint glow flickered—faint, but enough to cut through the dark. The woods fell quiet again, but she was no longer convinced. She knew the Grove’s silence could hide unseen things. Things that watched and waited. She could feel their presence, a prickling at her skin, on the edge of perception. Beneath the ancient oak, she paused, eyes darting between the shadows. The night stretched around her, vast and empty, but the wrongness thrummed like a second heartbeat. Her gaze settled on the boundary stones. They looked different tonight—more twisted, their gnarled limbs reaching lower, as if pulling down from the sky. The stones were supposed to be markers, ancient and unmoving. Now, they felt alive—like they were watching her, waiting for her to get closer. A movement at the corner of her eye—it was quick, barely there—like someone flickering in and out of existence. She reached into her pocket, fingers closing around the Heartstone pendant, pulling it slightly free from her neck for a better grip. Her mind raced for a reason she was here, in a place that shouldn't exist, in a night that refused to stay silent. The stories she'd heard, the warnings about the Grove being a boundary... maybe they weren’t just stories. Maybe the Grove remembered. And maybe something else remembered her, too. Another rustling, this time directly behind her. She spun, feet planting firmly, breathing shallow. No more background whispers, no more shadows slipping away. Whatever was there, she was sure it was watching her, not just lurking in the dark but studying her, waiting for a chance. Her eyes fixed on the boundary stones, on the woods beyond. The faint pulse of the Heartstone thrummed harder now, its glow growing with each passing second. On impulse, she traced a finger over the scar on her wrist—the crescent-shaped mark from childhood—reminding herself she had survived worse. A faint flicker—what could have been a flicker—moved between two trees, so quick it might have been a trick of the light. She didn’t blink. She straightened, every muscle tight, muscles aching for some kind of run or fight that never came. The Grove was supposed to be a hiding place, but now it felt like a trap. The wrongness seeped out of the shadows, filling her stomach with cold. Then, out of nowhere, a faint glow flickered along the ground—just for a second—like an ember ash drifting across the grass. Aurora froze, her breath caught. She knew what that was—something strange, something dangerous. Something waiting just at the edge of discovery. She stepped back slowly, clutching the pendant. The night grew darker, the glow dying out, the shadows thickening. Behind her, the whispering returned, softer now, more insistent—an invitation or a warning. She couldn’t tell. It didn’t matter. What mattered was the feeling that she was no longer alone in the Grove.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1101
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1101
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"oppressive"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"flicker"
count3
6
word"quickened"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"throb"
count1
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count2
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"raced"
count1
16
word"firmly"
count1
17
word"traced"
count1
18
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"oppressive"
4"whisper"
5"flicker"
6"quickened"
7"weight"
8"throb"
9"comforting"
10"perfect"
11"racing"
12"warmth"
13"flickered"
14"could feel"
15"raced"
16"firmly"
17"traced"
18"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1083
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount1081
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.74
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae1
Grove8
Heartstone4
Pendant1
Aurora3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
16.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"not quite human"
1"seemed alive tonight—flowers swayed without any breeze, their petals shimmering in the moonlight as if faintly luminous"
2"as if pulling down from the sky"
3"felt like a trap"
15.33% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.847
wordCount1083
matches
0"not with fog, but something else"
1"not just lurking in the dark but studying her, waiting for a chance"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"feeling that she"
48.77% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean43.32
std13.89
cv0.321
sampleLengths
075
159
269
34
459
536
650
732
833
948
1046
1135
1238
1335
1440
1534
1641
1741
1851
1946
2048
2125
2245
2342
2451
97.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"were supposed"
1"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs197
matches
0"were watching"
1"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences91
ratio0.165
matches
0"The air was thick, not with fog, but something else—an intangible presence that prickled her skin."
1"Then, she heard it—no, not just a sound."
2"The voice was strange—soft, almost soothing, yet not quite human."
3"Then, a flicker of movement caught her eye—just at the edge of her vision."
4"A sudden crack split the quiet—sharp and unnatural."
5"The grove’s flora seemed alive tonight—flowers swayed without any breeze, their petals shimmering in the moonlight as if faintly luminous."
6"Its faint glow flickered—faint, but enough to cut through the dark."
7"They looked different tonight—more twisted, their gnarled limbs reaching lower, as if pulling down from the sky."
8"Now, they felt alive—like they were watching her, waiting for her to get closer."
9"A movement at the corner of her eye—it was quick, barely there—like someone flickering in and out of existence."
10"On impulse, she traced a finger over the scar on her wrist—the crescent-shaped mark from childhood—reminding herself she had survived worse."
11"A faint flicker—what could have been a flicker—moved between two trees, so quick it might have been a trick of the light."
12"Then, out of nowhere, a faint glow flickered along the ground—just for a second—like an ember ash drifting across the grass."
13"She knew what that was—something strange, something dangerous."
14"Behind her, the whispering returned, softer now, more insistent—an invitation or a warning."
82.45% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1099
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount66
adverbRatio0.06005459508644222
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.012738853503184714
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean11.9
std5.95
cv0.5
sampleLengths
029
118
212
316
421
511
66
721
814
98
1016
112
1217
1312
144
154
168
1717
184
1910
2016
2113
223
2320
2414
2511
263
278
2814
2917
3015
318
324
3310
3411
3513
3612
3711
3812
3920
4026
4110
4213
434
448
4510
4616
471
4811
4913
42.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.2967032967032967
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences89
matches
0"Just a strange park, an"
1"Then, she heard it—no, not"
2"Then, a flicker of movement"
3"Then, a faint sound, like"
4"Just the night’s oppressive silence,"
5"maybe they weren’t just stories."
6"Maybe the Grove remembered."
7"Then, out of nowhere, a"
ratio0.09
53.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences89
matches
0"She hesitated, breath caught in"
1"She clutching the Heartstone Pendant"
2"It warmed her, or maybe"
3"It flitted against her face,"
4"She blinked, instinctively brushing her"
5"She thought about the stories,"
6"She froze, ears strained."
7"It slithered just beyond the"
8"she asked, her voice thin"
9"She hesitated, waiting."
10"Her heart quickened."
11"She told herself it was"
12"She knew the Grove could"
13"She took a tentative step"
14"It seemed to throb in"
15"Her muscles tensed, camera-ready, as"
16"She swung around, catching a"
17"She rushed toward it, quiet"
18"Her fingers hovered over the"
19"She kept walking, her breath"
ratio0.416
61.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences89
matches
0"Aurora Carter stepped into the"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"She hesitated, breath caught in"
3"The air was thick, not"
4"She clutching the Heartstone Pendant"
5"It warmed her, or maybe"
6"The detached quiet of the"
7"A faint breeze stirred the"
8"It flitted against her face,"
9"She blinked, instinctively brushing her"
10"She thought about the stories,"
11"The silence stretched, oppressive."
12"A faint, almost inaudible whisper,"
13"She froze, ears strained."
14"The voice was strange—soft, almost"
15"It slithered just beyond the"
16"she asked, her voice thin"
17"She hesitated, waiting."
18"The grove remained silent except"
19"Something dark slipped behind a"
ratio0.798
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"Yet, something was wrong."
1"Now, they felt alive—like they"
ratio0.022
33.90% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The air was thick, not with fog, but something else—an intangible presence that prickled her skin."
1"She clutching the Heartstone Pendant tight around her neck, feeling the faint pulse from the crimson gemstone through the silver chain."
2"The grove remained silent except for the whispering, which ebbed and flowed, like the faint murmur of a distant river."
3"She took a tentative step forward, hand brushing her pocket, feeling the reassuring weight of the pendant."
4"The grove’s flora seemed alive tonight—flowers swayed without any breeze, their petals shimmering in the moonlight as if faintly luminous."
5"The wildflowers bloomed out of season, unnaturally vivid, with petals that had a slight shimmer, like eyes peering out from petals too perfect for the dark."
6"She kept walking, her breath steady but her mind racing."
7"They looked different tonight—more twisted, their gnarled limbs reaching lower, as if pulling down from the sky."
8"The faint pulse of the Heartstone thrummed harder now, its glow growing with each passing second."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she asked, her voice thin as the night stretched around her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.4548%