Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR7BVYPN5YRMHE9RNK1EZP

Run Details

Duration:
13.1s
Cost:
$0.000630
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood in the narrow hall of Eva’s flat, fingers curled around the doorframe, holding it open just enough to see the figure on the other side. The familiar silhouette paused, hesitating in the shadows. Bright blue eyes flicked upward, catching the faint flicker of a cigarette glow, then widened in disbelief. Lucien Moreau. He leaned casually against the doorjamb, the ivory handle of his cane twirling absentmindedly between his fingers. The tailored charcoal suit clung to him, pressed and sharp, yet there was an ease to his stance that suggested he belonged there—almost as if he’d never left. His dark, slicked-back hair caught the flickering light from the corridor, and the heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto her. Rory’s breath caught. Her mind scrambled to find a reason for him to be here, memories flooding in—things she’d tried not to think about after they parted, after everything exploded between them. She blinked, trying to steady herself, then spoke. “What are you doing here?” He shifted, half-smile tugging at the corner of his mouth. “I could ask you the same thing. Should I come in?” “No—yes, I mean.” She hesitated, tongue stumbling over her words. “It’s late, Lucien. What’s this about?” He extended a hand, letting his cane dangle by his side. “I need to talk to you.” Her gaze flicked past him, down the hall to her cluttered living space. Books balanced precariously on the edge of a table, scrolls spilled over a chair, and Ptolemy, her tabby cat, stretched lazily on a pile of research notes. The scent of spices from the curry house below mingled with the faint scent of smoke and old memories. Rory’s chest tightened. “You should’ve called. Or—” “Should’ve what? Come tonight? Tell you I was here?” His voice was low, almost velvet, but edged with something unreadable. “I had to see you. After everything.” She didn’t lower the door. “After everything, you mean?” He took a step closer, voice softening. “You know what I mean. I didn’t come back to cause trouble. Just to talk. Please.” Could she pretend for a moment that the past didn’t threaten to topple her? Her pulse hammered, and her fingers clenched the doorframe tighter. Behind her, Ptolemy’s paws stirred, but the cat stayed put, watching with bright green eyes. “You break into my flat,” she finally said, voice rough. “And now you want to talk?” Lucien’s eyes flicked down the hall, then back again, dark and intense. “I didn’t plan this. I just… I needed to see you again. I shouldn’t have waited so long.” Her jaw clenched. “And I suppose you thought I’d be thrilled?” He shrugged, a flicker of something like remorse crossing his face. “No. I thought maybe I’d get to see if you still—” “Still what?” She cut him off, voice shaking. “Care? Remember what we had?” “That’s why I’m here,” he said softly, voice strained. “Because I remember. And I can’t forget. Not without trying to set things straight.” Her mind spun. Every instinct told her to shut him out, to slam the door, block him from her life again. But something in his voice begged her to listen. The softness. The regret. The longing. “I’m not sure I want to hear this,” she admitted, voice quieter now. He hesitated. Then, with a measured grace, he moved past her, into the flat. His steps echoed softly on the worn floorboards. He didn’t look at her as he took a few paces into the cramped space, as if gathering courage. “Nice place,” he said, voice echoing faintly in the clutter. “Small, but it’s mine.” She folded her arms, watching him closely. “So? Spill it. Why are you really here?” Lucien rounded on her, dark eyes unwavering. “Because I need to know if there’s still something between us. If whatever we had was just a mistake or if maybe—” “If maybe what?” She cut him off again, anger rising. “Maybe there’s a chance to fix what was broken.” His voice cracked slightly, honest in a way that struck her hard. For a moment, she couldn’t speak. The words stuck in her throat, tangled with every hurt and distraction from the past. Her shoulders sagged, and she looked away, eyes settling on the mess of research and Ptolemy curling into a ball. “You walked away,” she finally said, voice trembling. “You said it was better for both of us. That I deserved more than whatever this was. And now you show up like nothing’s happened?” His jaw tightened. “You think I didn’t want to come back? That I didn’t want to fix it?” “Then why didn’t you? Huh? Why leave?” He hesitated, then stepped closer, voice low and urgent. “Because I was scared. Because I didn’t know if I could handle the chance of losing what little we had left. That scar on your wrist—” “I told you about that when we met,” she interrupted, voice edged. “It was from a childhood accident. Doesn’t mean I want to relive every regret.” Lucien’s gaze softened, almost painfully so. “I never stopped thinking about you. Not for a moment. And I think… maybe, you didn’t either.” Rory’s eyes stung, but she blinked back tears. “I didn’t. Not after what you did. Not after you disappeared.” His hand twitched toward her, reaching out—a gesture almost afraid to ask for permission. “Can we just talk? No promises. No expectations. Just… talk?” Her breath caught, mind whirling. Part of her wanted to slam the door again, turn away, erase the ache that tugged at her chest. But instead, she stepped back, just slightly. “Fine,” she whispered. “We can talk.” Lucien nodded slowly, a faint smile touching his lips. “Good.” And in that thin moment, beneath the flickering light of her flat, the silence stretched between them, thick with all the words they’d never said.
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native_tokens_reasoning0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she finally said [finally]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
2"His voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
3"she finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.205
64.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount981
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"softly"
2"really"
3"slightly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount981
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count3
2
word"flicker"
count2
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"jaw clenched"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"unwavering"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"flicked"
2"flicker"
3"velvet"
4"unreadable"
5"pulse"
6"jaw clenched"
7"measured"
8"echoed"
9"echoing"
10"unwavering"
11"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences61
matches
0"d in disbelief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords975
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount634
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Eva1
Moreau1
Ptolemy3
Lucien5
Rory3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
5"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
33.72% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like remorse crossing his face"
1"as if gathering courage"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount975
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean23.78
std14.43
cv0.607
sampleLengths
053
12
265
340
45
521
616
717
859
97
1027
119
1223
1339
1416
1530
1611
1722
1813
1923
2036
2113
2241
2310
2419
2529
2610
2721
2841
2933
3018
317
3235
3326
3423
3519
3624
3731
386
3910
4025
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs127
matches(empty)
11.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences87
ratio0.046
matches
0"The tailored charcoal suit clung to him, pressed and sharp, yet there was an ease to his stance that suggested he belonged there—almost as if he’d never left."
1"His dark, slicked-back hair caught the flickering light from the corridor, and the heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto her."
2"Her mind scrambled to find a reason for him to be here, memories flooding in—things she’d tried not to think about after they parted, after everything exploded between them."
3"His hand twitched toward her, reaching out—a gesture almost afraid to ask for permission."
78.75% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount640
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.0625
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.021875
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean11.21
std6.99
cv0.624
sampleLengths
028
18
217
32
417
528
620
73
829
98
105
1110
1211
1310
146
1511
166
1713
1827
1919
203
214
2220
237
245
254
267
2716
2814
2910
3015
3110
326
3312
3418
353
368
3711
3811
398
405
419
4214
433
4418
459
462
472
482
4913
69.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4367816091954023
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences55
matches
0"Bright blue eyes flicked upward,"
1"Then, with a measured grace,"
ratio0.036
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences55
matches
0"He leaned casually against the"
1"His dark, slicked-back hair caught"
2"Her mind scrambled to find"
3"She blinked, trying to steady"
4"He shifted, half-smile tugging at"
5"She hesitated, tongue stumbling over"
6"He extended a hand, letting"
7"Her gaze flicked past him,"
8"His voice was low, almost"
9"She didn’t lower the door."
10"He took a step closer,"
11"Her pulse hammered, and her"
12"she finally said, voice rough"
13"Her jaw clenched."
14"He shrugged, a flicker of"
15"She cut him off, voice"
16"he said softly, voice strained"
17"Her mind spun."
18"she admitted, voice quieter now"
19"His steps echoed softly on"
ratio0.582
32.73% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences55
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood in the"
1"The familiar silhouette paused, hesitating"
2"He leaned casually against the"
3"The tailored charcoal suit clung"
4"His dark, slicked-back hair caught"
5"Rory’s breath caught."
6"Her mind scrambled to find"
7"She blinked, trying to steady"
8"He shifted, half-smile tugging at"
9"She hesitated, tongue stumbling over"
10"He extended a hand, letting"
11"Her gaze flicked past him,"
12"Books balanced precariously on the"
13"The scent of spices from"
14"Rory’s chest tightened."
15"His voice was low, almost"
16"She didn’t lower the door."
17"He took a step closer,"
18"Her pulse hammered, and her"
19"she finally said, voice rough"
ratio0.855
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The tailored charcoal suit clung to him, pressed and sharp, yet there was an ease to his stance that suggested he belonged there—almost as if he’d never left."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"She hesitated, tongue stumbling over her words"
1"she finally said, voice rough"
2"She cut, voice shaking"
3"he said softly, voice strained"
4"she admitted, voice quieter now"
5"he said, voice echoing faintly in the clutter"
6"she finally said, voice trembling"
7"she interrupted, voice edged"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"she interrupted (interrupt)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.179
leniency0.359
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.154
72.8996%