| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 74.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 772 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 772 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "imposing" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "racing" | | 4 | "electric" | | 5 | "quivered" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "unsettled" | | 10 | "shattered" | | 11 | "looming" | | 12 | "dance" | | 13 | "raced" | | 14 | "pounding" | | 15 | "surreal" | | 16 | "scanned" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 768 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 3 | | wordCount | 757 | | uniqueNames | 1 | | maxNameDensity | 0.4 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed different in the air, an eerie quietness that made the hairs on the back of her neck stand up" | | 1 | "felt like a whispered breath" | | 2 | "felt like an intruder in a sacred place" | | 3 | "e stone circle seemingly calling to her" | | 4 | "as if seeking strength" | | 5 | "as if urging her to a safe distance, and she clutched it tightly, picturing the faceless figure she knew lay on the other side of the silent stone wall" | | 6 | "felt like she'd left something behind," |
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| 69.79% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.302 | | wordCount | 768 | | matches | | 0 | "Not sound or sight, but a tug" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.63% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 48 | | std | 23.77 | | cv | 0.495 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 85 | | 2 | 60 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 70 | | 12 | 67 | | 13 | 76 | | 14 | 66 | | 15 | 41 |
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| 99.51% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.69% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 62 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "Was someone—something—lurking in the darkness?" | | 1 | "Not sound or sight, but a tug—a pull on the pendant as though a string of energy tied it to something unseen." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 761 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.0328515111695138 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013140604467805518 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 62 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 62 | | mean | 12.39 | | std | 7.77 | | cv | 0.627 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 33 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 74.73% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.46774193548387094 | | totalSentences | 62 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Just out of her periphery," | | 1 | "Then a flicker of something." | | 2 | "Finally, a sliver of brightness" | | 3 | "Just the clean interior, waiting" |
| | ratio | 0.071 | |
| 77.14% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been drawn to the" | | 1 | "She felt like an intruder" | | 2 | "She'd come to this spot" | | 3 | "Her curiosity didn't outweigh her" | | 4 | "She spun, heart racing." | | 5 | "Her voice quivered, echoing through" | | 6 | "She shook her head." | | 7 | "Her voice, loaded with effort," | | 8 | "Her hand gripped the necklace," | | 9 | "She felt the Grove watching," | | 10 | "She froze, breath trapped in" | | 11 | "She ran, desperate, away from" | | 12 | "She checked over her shoulder," | | 13 | "It felt like she'd left" | | 14 | "She suddenly sensed the wrongness" | | 15 | "She raced to it, heart" | | 16 | "It felt surreal to witness" | | 17 | "She snatched open the passenger" | | 18 | "She hurried inside, slamming the" | | 19 | "She clicked the central locking," |
| | ratio | 0.357 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient stone circle loomed" | | 1 | "Aurora shivered in the cool" | | 2 | "She'd been drawn to the" | | 3 | "Something seemed different in the" | | 4 | "The silence surrounded her, heavy" | | 5 | "A whispered hush that held" | | 6 | "The wildflowers, still blooming in" | | 7 | "She felt like an intruder" | | 8 | "A soft glow emanated from" | | 9 | "She'd come to this spot" | | 10 | "Her curiosity didn't outweigh her" | | 11 | "She spun, heart racing." | | 12 | "A quiver coursed through her" | | 13 | "Her voice quivered, echoing through" | | 14 | "She shook her head." | | 15 | "Her voice, loaded with effort," | | 16 | "Her hand gripped the necklace," | | 17 | "She felt the Grove watching," | | 18 | "The moment she turned away," | | 19 | "A branch shattered nearby, wood" |
| | ratio | 0.714 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been drawn to the clearing by an odd feeling, a strange pull on her senses, as if the mysterious pendant hanging around her neck buzzed with an unknowable…" | | 1 | "Something seemed different in the air, an eerie quietness that made the hairs on the back of her neck stand up." | | 2 | "The wildflowers, still blooming in the odd evergreen climate, swayed gently in a breeze that felt like a whispered breath." | | 3 | "Her hand gripped the necklace, fingers running along the surface of the gem, as if seeking strength." | | 4 | "Breath coming in gasps, she fled through the shadows towards the copse of trees that marked the boundary of the Grove, her laces loose, tripping her halfway bac…" | | 5 | "Adrenaline kept her momentum going and she stumbled on, heart now raging." | | 6 | "The pendant glowed gently, as if urging her to a safe distance, and she clutched it tightly, picturing the faceless figure she knew lay on the other side of the…" | | 7 | "She suddenly sensed the wrongness of her surroundings, as if time, space, and dimension had tangled into a mess of confusion." | | 8 | "The ground beneath her feet felt solid and yet insubstantial, as if she might slip through at any moment." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |