| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx’s voice curled around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.196 | | leniency | 0.392 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.039 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1385 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.80% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1385 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "trembled" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "wavering" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "depths" | | 11 | "unreadable" | | 12 | "flicked" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "glistening" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 162 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1375 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "\"You carry the mark of Dymas.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 26.94% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 1097 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.46 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 27 | | Fae | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 12 | | Isolde | 14 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.269 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 21.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite touch the air" | | 1 | "looked like a mirror" | | 2 | "looked like caramel" | | 3 | "looked like butter" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.727 | | wordCount | 1375 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 75 | | mean | 18.33 | | std | 16.52 | | cv | 0.901 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 60 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 58 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 38 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 66 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 207 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 162 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something older—ozone and crushed herbs." | | 1 | "Something moved in the undergrowth—too fast, too fluid." | | 2 | "The air grew warmer, thick with the scent of ripe fruit and something metallic beneath it—blood?" | | 3 | "The trees here were different—taller, their trunks gnarled and twisted, their leaves shimmering like stained glass." | | 4 | "The pool rippled as something broke the surface—a hand, pale and slender, fingers beckoning." | | 5 | "Her own reflection stared back, but wrong—her eyes too bright, her skin too pale, like something wearing her face." | | 6 | "Beyond it, the light shifted—amber deepening to gold, then to something richer, darker." | | 7 | "They moved between the rows, their skin tones ranging from deep russet to pale gold, their clothes a riot of colors—silks and velvets, embroidered with patterns that made Rory’s eyes water." | | 8 | "Rory took it, the flavors exploding on her tongue—sweet, savory, spiced with something she couldn’t name." | | 9 | "The man led them to a courtyard where long tables groaned under the weight of food—roasted meats glistening with fat, towers of fruit, platters of cheese so rich it looked like butter." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1107 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03071364046973803 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0018066847335140017 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 162 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 162 | | mean | 8.49 | | std | 5.98 | | cv | 0.704 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 51.23% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 162 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 90.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a sound like a" | | 1 | "Then it turned and walked" | | 2 | "Then the path opened." |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She didn’t look back." | | 2 | "She crossed the threshold." | | 3 | "She plucked a wildflower from" | | 4 | "She crouched, pressing her palm" | | 5 | "She reached for the Fae" | | 6 | "Its coat was the color" | | 7 | "It regarded them with eyes" | | 8 | "They walked in silence after" | | 9 | "It was liquid amber." | | 10 | "Her own reflection stared back," | | 11 | "She reached out, and the" | | 12 | "Her stomach growled." | | 13 | "They stood at the edge" | | 14 | "They moved between the rows," | | 15 | "His smile was warm, his" | | 16 | "he said, voice like honeyed" | | 17 | "He turned, robes swirling around" | | 18 | "It pulsed once, slow and" |
| | ratio | 0.171 | |
| 18.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 98 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 3 | "Nyx’s voice curled around her," | | 4 | "Rory didn’t turn." | | 5 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 6 | "Isolde stepped between the stones" | | 7 | "She didn’t look back." | | 8 | "A shiver ran down Rory’s" | | 9 | "The last time she’d followed" | | 10 | "This was the Veil, the" | | 11 | "She crossed the threshold." | | 12 | "The world twisted." | | 13 | "The trees bent inward, their" | | 14 | "The air thickened, sweet and" | | 15 | "Rory’s boots sank into moss" | | 16 | "Nyx solidified beside her, their" | | 17 | "Isolde laughed, the sound like" | | 18 | "She plucked a wildflower from" | | 19 | "Rory’s stomach tightened." |
| | ratio | 0.883 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 49.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees bent inward, their branches weaving a canopy that blotted out the sky." | | 1 | "The ground hummed beneath Rory’s feet, a low vibration that thrummed in her bones." | | 2 | "Its coat was the color of moonlight, its antlers woven with vines that bloomed with tiny white flowers." | | 3 | "The trees pressed closer, their bark etched with symbols that made Rory’s eyes ache if she stared too long." | | 4 | "The sky above was a warm, unnatural amber, streaked with clouds that looked like caramel." | | 5 | "They moved between the rows, their skin tones ranging from deep russet to pale gold, their clothes a riot of colors—silks and velvets, embroidered with patterns…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.059 | | leniency | 0.118 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.039 | |