Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR7JRH5H3TG51083WERGMT

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Duration:
42.3s
Cost:
$0.015584

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against Rory’s collarbone, a slow, insistent warmth like a second heartbeat. She adjusted the strap of her bag, fingers brushing the Fae blade tucked inside. The air smelled of damp earth and something older—ozone and crushed herbs. "Still think we should’ve brought a map?" Nyx’s voice curled around her, a whisper that didn’t quite touch the air. Rory didn’t turn. The standing stones loomed ahead, their bark blackened with age, runes carved deep into the wood. "Maps don’t work here. You know that." Isolde stepped between the stones first, her silver hair catching the dim light like spun glass. She didn’t look back. "The Grove does not welcome the unprepared." A shiver ran down Rory’s spine. The last time she’d followed someone into the unknown, it had ended with a broken rib and a restraining order. But this wasn’t Evan. This was the Veil, the space between worlds, and the pendant’s heat was a warning she couldn’t ignore. She crossed the threshold. The world twisted. The trees bent inward, their branches weaving a canopy that blotted out the sky. The air thickened, sweet and heavy, like honey left too long in the sun. Rory’s boots sank into moss so soft it muffled every step. Nyx solidified beside her, their violet eyes flickering like candle flames. "Time’s different here. Don’t get lost in it." Isolde laughed, the sound like wind chimes. "Time is a river, child. You cannot lose what you do not possess." She plucked a wildflower from the ground, twirling it between her fingers. "But do hurry. The solstice weakens the Veil, and Belphegor’s hunters are never far behind." Rory’s stomach tightened. "You didn’t mention hunters last time." "Didn’t I?" Isolde’s lavender eyes gleamed. "Memory is a fickle thing." A path unfolded before them, winding through towering ferns and mushrooms the size of dinner plates. The ground hummed beneath Rory’s feet, a low vibration that thrummed in her bones. She crouched, pressing her palm to the earth. The moss pulsed. "Alive," she murmured. Nyx crouched beside her. "Everything here is alive. Even the shadows." A rustle. Rory’s head snapped up. The ferns trembled, though there was no wind. Something moved in the undergrowth—too fast, too fluid. She reached for the Fae blade, but Isolde’s hand closed over hers. "Not yet." The seer’s voice was a blade of its own. "Listen." The rustling stopped. Then, a sound like a sigh, long and slow. The ferns parted. A deer stepped onto the path. Its coat was the color of moonlight, its antlers woven with vines that bloomed with tiny white flowers. It regarded them with eyes like polished obsidian, unblinking. Then it turned and walked deeper into the grove, hooves leaving no prints. Isolde followed. Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx. "That was…" "Unsettling?" Nyx offered. "Normal," Rory finished. "For here." They walked in silence after that, the path narrowing until they had to move single file. The trees pressed closer, their bark etched with symbols that made Rory’s eyes ache if she stared too long. The air grew warmer, thick with the scent of ripe fruit and something metallic beneath it—blood? No, copper. Like old coins left in the rain. Then the path opened. A clearing stretched before them, bathed in golden light that didn’t come from the sky. The trees here were different—taller, their trunks gnarled and twisted, their leaves shimmering like stained glass. At the center stood a pool, its surface so still it looked like a mirror. But when Rory stepped closer, she saw it wasn’t water at all. It was liquid amber. The pool rippled as something broke the surface—a hand, pale and slender, fingers beckoning. Isolde knelt at the edge, her reflection wavering in the amber. "The Grove remembers you, Aurora Carter." Rory’s pulse jumped. "I’ve never been here before." "Not in this life." Isolde dipped her fingers into the pool. The amber clung to her skin, glowing faintly. "But the Veil remembers all who pass through it." Nyx shifted beside her. "That’s not ominous at all." Rory ignored them, staring into the pool. Her own reflection stared back, but wrong—her eyes too bright, her skin too pale, like something wearing her face. She reached out, and the reflection did the same. The amber rippled. A voice, neither male nor female, whispered from the depths. *"You carry the mark of Dymas."* Rory’s breath caught. The pendant at her throat burned. Isolde’s fingers tightened around hers. "Do not answer it." "But—" "The Grove tests you." The seer’s voice was sharp. "It always tests." The pool stilled. The reflection vanished. Rory exhaled, her hands shaking. The pendant’s heat faded, leaving only the cold press of the silver chain against her skin. Nyx’s shadow stretched long across the clearing. "So. That was fun." Isolde stood, brushing moss from her dress. "The path narrows from here. Stay close." The trees ahead bent inward, their branches forming an archway. Beyond it, the light shifted—amber deepening to gold, then to something richer, darker. The scent of roasting meat curled through the air, mingling with spices Rory couldn’t name. Her stomach growled. Nyx smirked. "Hungry?" Rory glared. "I skipped lunch." Isolde stepped through the archway first. "Then you’ll want to see this." The world opened again. They stood at the edge of a valley, but not like any valley Rory had seen before. The sky above was a warm, unnatural amber, streaked with clouds that looked like caramel. Below, terraced vineyards spilled down the slopes, rows of grapes so dark they were almost black. Between them, orchards of fruit trees bore apples the size of fists, their skins shimmering like polished gemstones. And the people. They moved between the rows, their skin tones ranging from deep russet to pale gold, their clothes a riot of colors—silks and velvets, embroidered with patterns that made Rory’s eyes water. Some carried baskets of fruit, others led goats with coats like spun silver. A few turned to watch the newcomers, their expressions unreadable. Nyx’s voice dropped to a whisper. "Are those—?" "Helbound," Isolde said. "Souls contracted to Dymas. They tend the gardens, prepare the feasts." Rory’s fingers twitched toward the Fae blade. "They don’t look like prisoners." "They’re not." Isolde’s gaze flicked to the pendant. "Gluttony is a sin of indulgence, not suffering. They are rewarded for their service." A man approached them, his robes embroidered with threads of gold. His smile was warm, his eyes sharp. "Visitors," he said, voice like honeyed wine. "The Grove does not often send guests to Dymas." Isolde inclined her head. "We seek Prince Belphegor." The man’s smile didn’t waver. "The Prince is… occupied. But you are welcome to wait. The kitchens are always open." Rory’s stomach growled again. Nyx shot her a look. "Subtle." The man laughed, a rich, rolling sound. "Come. The solstice feast begins at dusk. You’ll want to see it." He turned, robes swirling around his ankles. Rory hesitated, then followed. The path wound down into the valley, past stalls where vendors sold spiced wines and pastries stuffed with meat so tender it fell apart at the touch. A woman offered Rory a sample, her fingers stained red with juice. Rory took it, the flavors exploding on her tongue—sweet, savory, spiced with something she couldn’t name. Nyx leaned in. "You’re drooling." Rory swallowed. "Shut up." The man led them to a courtyard where long tables groaned under the weight of food—roasted meats glistening with fat, towers of fruit, platters of cheese so rich it looked like butter. Musicians played in the corners, their instruments strange and beautiful, the music weaving through the air like smoke. And at the head of the table, a throne of gilded wood. Empty. The man gestured to the feast. "Eat. Drink. The Prince will join you when he’s able." Rory’s fingers curled around the pendant. It pulsed once, slow and steady, like a heartbeat. Nyx’s shadow pooled at her feet. "This feels like a trap." Isolde plucked a grape from a nearby platter, rolling it between her fingers. "Everything is a trap, child. The question is whether you’re the hunter or the prey." Rory exhaled. "And which are we?" The seer’s lavender eyes gleamed. "That depends on what you’re willing to risk."
total_cost0.015584

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx’s voice curled around [around]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.392
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.039
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1385
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1385
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count3
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"wavering"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"depths"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"flicked"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"glistening"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"whisper"
3"loomed"
4"stomach"
5"trembled"
6"silence"
7"etched"
8"wavering"
9"pulse"
10"depths"
11"unreadable"
12"flicked"
13"weight"
14"glistening"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences123
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences162
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords1375
ratio0.004
matches
0"\"You carry the mark of Dymas.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
26.94% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1097
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.46
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory27
Fae3
Evan1
Veil1
Nyx12
Isolde14
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Pendant"
1"Fae"
globalScore0.269
windowScore0.5
21.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite touch the air"
1"looked like a mirror"
2"looked like caramel"
3"looked like butter"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.727
wordCount1375
matches
0"neither male nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean18.33
std16.52
cv0.901
sampleLengths
041
120
226
327
448
54
642
719
847
99
1011
1141
123
1311
1434
1512
1615
176
1840
192
208
213
225
2360
244
2558
264
2714
2817
298
3028
319
3235
333
3416
359
369
371
3812
396
4021
4111
4214
4338
443
453
465
4712
484
4966
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs207
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences162
ratio0.062
matches
0"The air smelled of damp earth and something older—ozone and crushed herbs."
1"Something moved in the undergrowth—too fast, too fluid."
2"The air grew warmer, thick with the scent of ripe fruit and something metallic beneath it—blood?"
3"The trees here were different—taller, their trunks gnarled and twisted, their leaves shimmering like stained glass."
4"The pool rippled as something broke the surface—a hand, pale and slender, fingers beckoning."
5"Her own reflection stared back, but wrong—her eyes too bright, her skin too pale, like something wearing her face."
6"Beyond it, the light shifted—amber deepening to gold, then to something richer, darker."
7"They moved between the rows, their skin tones ranging from deep russet to pale gold, their clothes a riot of colors—silks and velvets, embroidered with patterns that made Rory’s eyes water."
8"Rory took it, the flavors exploding on her tongue—sweet, savory, spiced with something she couldn’t name."
9"The man led them to a courtyard where long tables groaned under the weight of food—roasted meats glistening with fat, towers of fruit, platters of cheese so rich it looked like butter."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1107
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03071364046973803
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0018066847335140017
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences162
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences162
mean8.49
std5.98
cv0.704
sampleLengths
015
114
212
320
43
516
67
716
84
97
106
1120
124
1318
144
153
1614
1714
1811
1911
208
217
2225
2315
243
256
266
275
2816
2914
308
313
323
334
347
352
364
378
388
3912
4011
411
423
439
443
456
4618
479
4813
492
51.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences162
uniqueOpeners54
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences111
matches
0"Then, a sound like a"
1"Then it turned and walked"
2"Then the path opened."
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences111
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She didn’t look back."
2"She crossed the threshold."
3"She plucked a wildflower from"
4"She crouched, pressing her palm"
5"She reached for the Fae"
6"Its coat was the color"
7"It regarded them with eyes"
8"They walked in silence after"
9"It was liquid amber."
10"Her own reflection stared back,"
11"She reached out, and the"
12"Her stomach growled."
13"They stood at the edge"
14"They moved between the rows,"
15"His smile was warm, his"
16"he said, voice like honeyed"
17"He turned, robes swirling around"
18"It pulsed once, slow and"
ratio0.171
18.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences111
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The air smelled of damp"
3"Nyx’s voice curled around her,"
4"Rory didn’t turn."
5"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
6"Isolde stepped between the stones"
7"She didn’t look back."
8"A shiver ran down Rory’s"
9"The last time she’d followed"
10"This was the Veil, the"
11"She crossed the threshold."
12"The world twisted."
13"The trees bent inward, their"
14"The air thickened, sweet and"
15"Rory’s boots sank into moss"
16"Nyx solidified beside her, their"
17"Isolde laughed, the sound like"
18"She plucked a wildflower from"
19"Rory’s stomach tightened."
ratio0.883
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The trees bent inward, their branches weaving a canopy that blotted out the sky."
1"The ground hummed beneath Rory’s feet, a low vibration that thrummed in her bones."
2"Its coat was the color of moonlight, its antlers woven with vines that bloomed with tiny white flowers."
3"The trees pressed closer, their bark etched with symbols that made Rory’s eyes ache if she stared too long."
4"The sky above was a warm, unnatural amber, streaked with clouds that looked like caramel."
5"They moved between the rows, their skin tones ranging from deep russet to pale gold, their clothes a riot of colors—silks and velvets, embroidered with patterns…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.059
leniency0.118
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.039
79.5367%