| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her gaze shifted back [back]" | | 1 | "Rory's gaze darted around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.7 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 91.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1190 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1190 | | totalAiIsms | 38 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pounding" | | 1 | "amiss" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "depths" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "fleeting" | | 8 | "sense of" | | 9 | "looming" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "scanning" | | 14 | "oppressive" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "anticipation" | | 17 | "echoed" | | 18 | "reminder" | | 19 | "resonance" | | 20 | "foreboding" | | 21 | "echo" | | 22 | "flickered" | | 23 | "stomach" | | 24 | "racing" | | 25 | "pawn" | | 26 | "unravel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 92.11% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "d with warmth" | | 1 | "k with anticipation" | | 2 | "felt a twinge" |
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| 67.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1183 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.29% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "With her heart banging on her ribcage like a heavy bass drum, Rory snapped her head towards every sound or movement, lik…" |
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| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1021 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.27 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 5 | | Welsh | 1 | | Do | 1 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.863 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 36.36% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "It was as if the very air became heavier as she pedalled deeper into the park's depths" | | 1 | "seemed longer than it should have been, and the usual signs of urban life had all but vanished" | | 2 | "as if turning into cotton wool that forced her to wheeze" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 49.29 | | std | 30.19 | | cv | 0.612 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 144 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 102 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 67 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 79 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | | 0 | "was rushing" | | 1 | "was holding" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "The pathway she was rushing down should have been familiar – she had ventured into Richmond Park's wilderness more times than she could remember as a kid – and yet, a suffocating foreignness washed over her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 188 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 0 | | adverbRatio | 0 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005319148936170213 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 14.43 | | std | 8.04 | | cv | 0.557 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 78.46% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 45.05% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the soft whoosh of" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 95.68% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "It was an ordinary night" | | 1 | "It was as if the" | | 2 | "she muttered to herself, her" | | 3 | "Her gaze shifted back to" | | 4 | "Her eyes darted around the" | | 5 | "She rubbed her wrist, feeling" | | 6 | "Her breath grew more laboured," | | 7 | "It was warmer here, like" | | 8 | "She stepped inside and pulled" | | 9 | "she whispered, scanning the perimeter" | | 10 | "She realised she was holding" | | 11 | "She crept forward, her breathing" | | 12 | "She pointed the beam of" | | 13 | "Her voice echoed across the" | | 14 | "Her voice quavered" | | 15 | "Her face was striking, with" | | 16 | "She wore a flowing gown" | | 17 | "She couldn't believe she was" | | 18 | "Her voice was soothing, almost" | | 19 | "She wanted to trust the" |
| | ratio | 0.311 | |
| 81.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The old bike rattled over" | | 1 | "Aurora, or Rory as her" | | 2 | "It was an ordinary night" | | 3 | "A cryptic note." | | 4 | "An address in Richmond Park." | | 5 | "Rory was no stranger to" | | 6 | "The chill in the air" | | 7 | "It was as if the" | | 8 | "The path seemed longer than" | | 9 | "The pathway she was rushing" | | 10 | "she muttered to herself, her" | | 11 | "Her gaze shifted back to" | | 12 | "A sudden overwhelming sense of" | | 13 | "Her eyes darted around the" | | 14 | "Trees became ominous silhouettes, their" | | 15 | "The deeper she ventured, the" | | 16 | "She rubbed her wrist, feeling" | | 17 | "Her breath grew more laboured," | | 18 | "It was warmer here, like" | | 19 | "Wildflowers bloomed in vibrant colours" |
| | ratio | 0.757 | |
| 67.57% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 79.37% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "With her heart banging on her ribcage like a heavy bass drum, Rory snapped her head towards every sound or movement, like a frightened old horse eyeing every he…" | | 1 | "She rubbed her wrist, feeling the small crescent-shaped scar and remembering the stakes." | | 2 | "Peering closer, she noticed the peculiar stone-like markers that circled the grove's perimeter, each one surrounded by a ring of colourful flowers, a deliberate…" | | 3 | "She realised she was holding her breath, waiting for something to break the silence." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her breath forming fleeting mist clouds in the cool air" | | 1 | "The voice grew, and a figure emerged from the darkness" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.15 | | leniency | 0.3 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.3 | |