Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR7KKM0XMBDHFHGEXK7DPN

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Duration:
9.1s
Cost:
$0.000252

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain lashed against Quinn’s face like a thousand needles, each drop stinging her skin through the thin fabric of her trench coat. She ducked beneath the flickering glow of a streetlamp, her breath fogging in the cold air as she watched the figure ahead vanish into the alleyway. A man’s silhouette, hunched and fast, moving with the kind of urgency that didn’t belong to a Londoner after midnight. Quinn adjusted the grip on her revolver, the weight familiar in her palm. She’d followed him from the Raven’s Nest, where the scent of old whiskey and something sharper—like ozone after a storm—had clung to the air. The same scent that had clung to the suspect’s coat when she’d seized him outside the bar, his fingers twitching like he’d been holding something small and dangerous. She didn’t recognise him. No file, no record. But the way he’d looked over his shoulder before bolting, like he’d known she was there before she’d even stepped into the shadows—something about that told her he wasn’t just running from a detective. He was running from something else. The alleyway opened into a narrow passage, the rain now a solid sheet, turning the cobblestones to slick mirrors. Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles, her breath steady despite the cold. She could lose him here. The city swallowed people every night. But the way he’d moved—too sure, too precise—made her think he knew where he was going. And if he did, then so could she. She followed the sound of his footsteps, muffled now beneath the rain, until the alley dead-ended at a rusted fire escape. A single flickering bulb cast long shadows up the side of a brick building. Quinn paused, listening. Nothing. Then—footsteps on the metal stairs above her. Light footsteps, careful. She didn’t hesitate. She sprinted, her boots clicking against the metal, and grabbed the railing just as the figure reached the top. He turned, his face half-lit by the bulb, his expression a mix of surprise and something darker—relief, maybe, or recognition. Quinn lunged, her fingers closing around his wrist. He didn’t fight. Just stared at her, his breath coming fast. “You’re not from the Met,” he said, voice rough with something like exhaustion. Quinn didn’t answer. She yanked him back down the stairs, her grip bruising. He didn’t resist, but his eyes flicked to the side, like he was seeing something she couldn’t. “You’re not the only one watching,” he muttered. She didn’t let go. “Who are you?” The fire escape ended in a narrow ledge, and Quinn shoved him forward, her revolver still in her hand. He stumbled, catching himself against the brick wall. She followed, pressing her back to the cold stone, her breath fogging in the damp air. “You’re not going to like what you find,” he said, his voice low. Quinn didn’t care. She pulled out her phone, the screen lighting up her face in blue. “I’m recording. Talk.” He laughed, sharp and bitter. “You don’t understand. You’re too close.” She stepped forward, her boot connecting with his knee. He crumpled, but she didn’t let him fall. Instead, she dragged him to his feet, her revolver pressed against his ribs. “Where are we going?” He didn’t answer. Just stared at the ground, his breath coming in ragged gasps. Then, suddenly, he grabbed her wrist, his fingers tight around her arm. “Down.” She didn’t understand. But before she could ask, he yanked her forward, and they dropped into the darkness below. The world tilted. Quinn landed hard, her ribs protesting, but she rolled, her revolver still in her hand. The man—*Tomás*—was already moving, his body low and fast, his movements fluid despite the darkness. She followed, her pulse hammering in her ears. They were in a tunnel, the air thick with the scent of damp earth and something metallic. The walls were slick with moisture, and the only light came from the faint glow of bioluminescent fungi clinging to the stone. Tomás moved like he knew this place, his steps sure, his breath steady. Quinn followed, her revolver raised. “Where are we?” He didn’t answer. Just kept moving, his hand outstretched, guiding her forward. The tunnel sloped downward, the air growing colder, the scent of damp earth turning sharp, like ozone. Then, suddenly, the tunnel opened into a cavern. The air was thick with the scent of smoke and something else—something sweet and acrid, like burnt sugar. Tomás stopped, his body tense, his eyes locked on something ahead. Quinn followed his gaze. A market. A proper market, with stalls and people moving between them, their faces half-lit by flickering lanterns. But this wasn’t any market she’d seen before. The goods on display were strange—bottles of liquid that shimmered like liquid silver, jars of something that pulsed with a faint inner light, and weapons that looked like they belonged in a fantasy novel. And then there were the people. Their faces were half-hidden, their movements too fluid, too precise. They moved like they weren’t quite solid, like they were made of something other than flesh and bone. Tomás grabbed her arm, his fingers digging into her skin. “We have to go.” Quinn didn’t argue. She followed him, her revolver still raised, her breath coming fast. The market was alive with noise and movement, the scent of the strange goods thick in the air. She didn’t understand any of it. But she knew one thing—she wasn’t leaving until she did. Tomás led her through the crowd, his movements fast and sure. They ducked behind a stall, the vendor’s back turned, his face half-hidden in the shadows. Quinn watched, her revolver still raised, her breath steady. Then, suddenly, a hand clamped down on her shoulder. She spun, her revolver raised, but it was too late. The man—*Tomás*—was already moving, his body low and fast, his movements fluid despite the darkness. She followed, her pulse hammering in her ears. The market was alive with noise and movement, the scent of the strange goods thick in the air. She didn’t understand any of it. But she knew one thing—she wasn’t leaving until she did. Tomás pulled her into a narrow alleyway, the walls slick with moisture. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something metallic. He stopped, his body tense, his eyes locked on something ahead. Quinn didn’t ask. She just followed, her revolver still raised, her breath steady. The alleyway opened into a narrow passage, and they stepped into the light. A man stood in the doorway, his face half-lit by the flickering lantern. He smiled, his teeth sharp and white. “Detective Quinn. I was wondering when you’d find us.”
total_cost0.0002517

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1126
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count3
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1126
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count3
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"familiar"
2"footsteps"
3"flicked"
4"pulse"
5"shimmered"
6"pulsed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count2
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1110
ratio0.002
matches
0"Tomás"
1"Tomás"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1058
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn14
Londoner1
Raven1
Nest1
Tomás7
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
places
0"Londoner"
1"Raven"
globalScore0.838
windowScore0.833
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like exhaustion"
1"looked like they belonged in a fantasy no"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1110
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean34.69
std18.05
cv0.52
sampleLengths
069
165
248
365
449
561
613
730
88
97
1043
1113
1219
1311
1434
1527
1619
1741
1852
198
2029
2137
2264
2334
2414
2548
2635
2742
2834
2936
3026
3129
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"were made"
21.75% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs187
matches
0"was running"
1"was going"
2"was seeing"
3"wasn’t leaving"
4"wasn’t leaving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences103
ratio0.107
matches
0"She’d followed him from the Raven’s Nest, where the scent of old whiskey and something sharper—like ozone after a storm—had clung to the air."
1"But the way he’d looked over his shoulder before bolting, like he’d known she was there before she’d even stepped into the shadows—something about that told her he wasn’t just running from a detective."
2"But the way he’d moved—too sure, too precise—made her think he knew where he was going."
3"Then—footsteps on the metal stairs above her."
4"He turned, his face half-lit by the bulb, his expression a mix of surprise and something darker—relief, maybe, or recognition."
5"The man—*Tomás*—was already moving, his body low and fast, his movements fluid despite the darkness."
6"The air was thick with the scent of smoke and something else—something sweet and acrid, like burnt sugar."
7"The goods on display were strange—bottles of liquid that shimmered like liquid silver, jars of something that pulsed with a faint inner light, and weapons that looked like they belonged in a fantasy novel."
8"But she knew one thing—she wasn’t leaving until she did."
9"The man—*Tomás*—was already moving, his body low and fast, his movements fluid despite the darkness."
10"But she knew one thing—she wasn’t leaving until she did."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1074
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.038175046554934824
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0037243947858473
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean10.78
std6.91
cv0.641
sampleLengths
023
126
220
313
424
528
64
74
834
96
1019
1111
125
136
1416
158
1621
1714
183
191
207
213
223
2319
2420
258
263
278
2813
293
3010
3117
328
334
343
3519
368
3716
3813
393
4013
413
425
436
449
458
4613
474
483
4911
48.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.22330097087378642
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners23
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences92
matches
0"Then—footsteps on the metal stairs"
1"Just stared at her, his"
2"Instead, she dragged him to"
3"Just stared at the ground,"
4"Then, suddenly, he grabbed her"
5"Just kept moving, his hand"
6"Then, suddenly, the tunnel opened"
7"Then, suddenly, a hand clamped"
ratio0.087
59.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences92
matches
0"She ducked beneath the flickering"
1"She’d followed him from the"
2"She didn’t recognise him."
3"He was running from something"
4"She could lose him here."
5"She followed the sound of"
6"She didn’t hesitate."
7"She sprinted, her boots clicking"
8"He turned, his face half-lit"
9"He didn’t fight."
10"he said, voice rough with"
11"She yanked him back down"
12"He didn’t resist, but his"
13"She didn’t let go."
14"He stumbled, catching himself against"
15"She followed, pressing her back"
16"he said, his voice low"
17"She pulled out her phone,"
18"He laughed, sharp and bitter."
19"She stepped forward, her boot"
ratio0.402
57.83% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences92
matches
0"The rain lashed against Quinn’s"
1"She ducked beneath the flickering"
2"A man’s silhouette, hunched and"
3"Quinn adjusted the grip on"
4"She’d followed him from the"
5"The same scent that had"
6"She didn’t recognise him."
7"He was running from something"
8"The alleyway opened into a"
9"Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles,"
10"She could lose him here."
11"The city swallowed people every"
12"She followed the sound of"
13"A single flickering bulb cast"
14"Quinn paused, listening."
15"She didn’t hesitate."
16"She sprinted, her boots clicking"
17"He turned, his face half-lit"
18"Quinn lunged, her fingers closing"
19"He didn’t fight."
ratio0.804
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The same scent that had clung to the suspect’s coat when she’d seized him outside the bar, his fingers twitching like he’d been holding something small and dang…"
1"She sprinted, her boots clicking against the metal, and grabbed the railing just as the figure reached the top."
2"She followed, pressing her back to the cold stone, her breath fogging in the damp air."
3"The goods on display were strange—bottles of liquid that shimmered like liquid silver, jars of something that pulsed with a faint inner light, and weapons that …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, voice rough with something like exhaustion"
1"he said, his voice low"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.182
76.8505%