Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR7PN7H01X00ADF3441742

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Duration:
14.8s
Cost:
$0.017163
Provider:
Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain pounded the pavement like a relentless drumbeat. Streetlights flickered, casting sickly yellow halos through the dark, and neon signs winked at passersby who hurried through the downpour, heads bowed against the storm. Detective Harlow Quinn pushed the brim of her hat lower, her leather shoes splashing through puddles as she pursued her quarry through narrow alleyways and cluttered streets. Her lungs burned with exertion, but determination propelled her forward. She caught fleeting glimpses of the suspect: a shadowy figure darting through the kaleidoscope of London’s nightlife, shifting between crowds of revelers and clusters of hooded passersby. Whoever he was, he moved with the desperation of a cornered animal. Harlow's instincts triggered sharp memories—a hunt in a haze of rain, a chase after a ghost who had left her partner dead. The sprawling maze of London unfurled beneath her, a city both familiar and alien with each turn. Her quarry bolted down a cobblestone lane that snaked deeper into the city’s underbelly, a part of Soho she knew well for its secrets. The Raven's Nest loomed, its distinctive green neon sign shining like a beacon in the rain. It was a place that hid more than it revealed, but Harlow had danced its dimly lit corners before. Her enemy’s trail bypassed its inviting glow, tearing past old maps and black-and-white photographs that whispered stories from the walls, and continued down into a network of tunnels. Harlow hesitated at the entrance to what she recognized as more than just a simple dive bar—a gateway to the unknown. Her quarry was slipping through the gap between the mundane and the hidden. Her heart pounded a rhythm that matched the rain’s incessant beat as she considered what lay beneath her feet: The Veil Market, an infamous underground sanctuary of the supernatural, shifting its location like a ghost at every full moon. The decision weighed heavy in the hollow of her stomach. She considered the bone token tucked inside the leather pocket of her jacket. A secret gift from an informant, worn smooth from years of handling, it held power enough to grant her passage into that concealed world. Harlow’s fingers brushed the token—an anchor to lead her through the darkness, but it promised danger and the eeriness of forbidden knowledge. Shouting erupted in her mind: a flash of DS Morris, his eyes glazed in fear as they both battled a force that had no name. There was no time for dwelling. The suspect vanished into an entrance marked by the subtle imprint of mystic design, camouflaged under the guise of a fading Tube sign. Harlow inhaled sharply, pulling warmth from her stolen memories, a memento to her partner’s bravery. “Detective, think twice before jumping,” came an echo from her past, but her resolve defied the caution. Her grit solidified the path ahead. She shifted, her focus becoming an unwavering arrow. The bone token clicked against the wet stony surface, urging the door into understanding. She stepped through, the metallic taste of something supernatural hanging ominous in the air. Below, the Veil Market unfolded beneath the shattered ceiling of the forgotten Tube station. Lamps swung above ancient goods with idle foresight—enchanted items adorned in wilful shadows. Booths lined by forbidden alchemical substances released incense that mingled with the whispered secrets of rain. Harlow’s pupils dilated against a spectrum of intangible realities, each corner disrupting the calm with whispers from other realms. Figures moved steadily in the market’s recesses, eyes masked under cloaks and hoods. Shimmering goods exchanged hands—a barter of tokens and intangible favors, gilt by trust and desire. A web of eldritch deals spun through obscured venders clinging to shadows. She glimpsed her quarry again, weaving through the crowd with panicked haste. Following meant stepping deeper into unknown territory, risking past lessons against this maelstrom of clandestine magic. A fleeting pause marked her indecision in the submerged world. The suspect pivoted, catching her gaze, measuring danger against motive—an unfathomable daring met with a challenge silently answered by his bold escape. The rain dripped from Harlow’s coat, drawing tight the possibilities still untangled in her mind. She took a breath, steadying the military precision that defined her method. Deliberation counted the ticking seconds with irreversibility. Through the swarming specters of the market, his dark silhouette maneuvered, arrested by the crowd’s currents—a shadow shifting like wraiths between the market’s vibrant stalls. Harlow stepped forward, trailing in purpose, trailing in knowledge, her lineage entangled with the ethereal pull from the past. She moved, the ongoing chase tracing a fatal dance amid facades of truth. His hurried footsteps echoed a staccato rhythm between ancient tracks. Her quarry raced ahead, tempted by the promise of freedom in the market’s uneasy corridors. His steps halted where a wall of bodies guarded a mystical stall. The scent of blood and sulfur intermingled, hinting at concealed truths layered beneath the veneer of markets. Harlow saw his eyes glimmer, reflecting urgency; a wordless plea carved into the echoing realm that enveloped them. Her gaze met his; a battle initiated in echoes and silence. “Quinn.” Tomás Herrera’s voice emerged—a whisper in the madness. He stood at the edge of the stall, hand touching a hidden compartment under shadowed exchange, the sacred Saint Christopher medallion sheltering his heart. “You’re out of your depth, you realize that?” “Am I now?” A flicker of challenge tinted her reply, charging through adversity. She held onto the vortex, knowing none could sever her resolve stronger than the echoes from past fears. “Harlow, this place makes its own rules,” Tomás warned, haunted realization anchoring his tone. “Do you trust what lies beneath its surface?” “No choice now, Herrera.” Her defiance solidified, rekindled flames igniting every possibility. “If it means catching him before those hidden truths slip further. Our game hasn’t ended.” Tomás’ expression mirrored the gravity of her decision, paths unfolding in dissonance. Harlow urged forward, guided by an instinct that aligned raw pursuit—a singular purpose drawing near, as the market’s shadows closed around them. Her quarry shifted through recognition, his flight trailing into evasion amidst arcane offerings. Winter’s breath cascaded through the exchange; market eyes tracked their paths in silent accord. Harlow erased distance between myths—a bridge laid from realization to inquiry. All was suspended in time: invisible truth, invisible determination. She projected ahead, her course coming undisputed towards her elusive quarry’s running tale. The market thrummed with its own heartbeat, urging momentum, urging the dance. Behind, the chase persisted, an odyssey etched in secrecy as London's outlines receded under mystic rain's serenade, holding remnants of choices beyond comprehension. Below, through tunnels shrouded in shadow, the chase transcended mortal breath—a saga unfolding until destiny strode its unseen step, veiled within markets limitless in their whispered offerings of the supernatural and the unknown.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1137
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1137
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"fleeting"
count2
2
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"beacon"
count1
6
word"sanctuary"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"resolve"
count2
11
word"unwavering"
count1
12
word"shattered"
count1
13
word"disrupting"
count1
14
word"desire"
count1
15
word"clandestine"
count1
16
word"tracing"
count1
17
word"dance"
count2
18
word"footsteps"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count1
20
word"raced"
count1
21
word"echoing"
count1
22
word"echoes"
count2
23
word"silence"
count1
24
word"whisper"
count1
25
word"flicker"
count1
26
word"aligned"
count1
27
word"amidst"
count1
28
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"fleeting"
2"kaleidoscope"
3"familiar"
4"loomed"
5"beacon"
6"sanctuary"
7"stomach"
8"warmth"
9"echo"
10"resolve"
11"unwavering"
12"shattered"
13"disrupting"
14"desire"
15"clandestine"
16"tracing"
17"dance"
18"footsteps"
19"echoed"
20"raced"
21"echoing"
22"echoes"
23"silence"
24"whisper"
25"flicker"
26"aligned"
27"amidst"
28"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences66
matches
0"d in fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1124
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.45% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1061
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow12
Quinn1
London3
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Veil2
Market2
Morris1
Tube2
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Morris"
5"Herrera"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
globalScore0.934
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1124
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
65.06% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean53.52
std20.22
cv0.378
sampleLengths
070
161
2104
373
494
544
659
762
840
960
1059
1157
1258
1341
1431
1522
1627
1747
1847
1935
2033
99.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"was suspended"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was slipping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences70
ratio0.2
matches
0"Harlow's instincts triggered sharp memories—a hunt in a haze of rain, a chase after a ghost who had left her partner dead."
1"Harlow hesitated at the entrance to what she recognized as more than just a simple dive bar—a gateway to the unknown."
2"Harlow’s fingers brushed the token—an anchor to lead her through the darkness, but it promised danger and the eeriness of forbidden knowledge."
3"Lamps swung above ancient goods with idle foresight—enchanted items adorned in wilful shadows."
4"Shimmering goods exchanged hands—a barter of tokens and intangible favors, gilt by trust and desire."
5"The suspect pivoted, catching her gaze, measuring danger against motive—an unfathomable daring met with a challenge silently answered by his bold escape."
6"Through the swarming specters of the market, his dark silhouette maneuvered, arrested by the crowd’s currents—a shadow shifting like wraiths between the market’s vibrant stalls."
7"Harlow saw his eyes glimmer, reflecting urgency; a wordless plea carved into the echoing realm that enveloped them."
8"Her gaze met his; a battle initiated in echoes and silence."
9"“Quinn.” Tomás Herrera’s voice emerged—a whisper in the madness."
10"Harlow urged forward, guided by an instinct that aligned raw pursuit—a singular purpose drawing near, as the market’s shadows closed around them."
11"Winter’s breath cascaded through the exchange; market eyes tracked their paths in silent accord."
12"Harlow erased distance between myths—a bridge laid from realization to inquiry."
13"Below, through tunnels shrouded in shadow, the chase transcended mortal breath—a saga unfolding until destiny strode its unseen step, veiled within markets limitless in their whispered offerings of the supernatural and the unknown."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount921
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.011943539630836048
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00760043431053203
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean16.06
std6.54
cv0.408
sampleLengths
08
125
227
310
427
512
622
717
824
916
1019
1128
1221
1313
1439
1510
1613
1724
1822
1925
206
2123
2215
2317
246
258
2614
2714
2814
2913
3016
3119
3213
3315
3412
3512
3616
3710
3822
3915
4012
417
4225
4319
4413
4510
4615
4712
4817
4918
73.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.45714285714285713
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners32
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"All was suspended in time:"
ratio0.015
80.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences66
matches
0"Her lungs burned with exertion,"
1"She caught fleeting glimpses of"
2"Her quarry bolted down a"
3"It was a place that"
4"Her enemy’s trail bypassed its"
5"Her quarry was slipping through"
6"Her heart pounded a rhythm"
7"She considered the bone token"
8"Her grit solidified the path"
9"She shifted, her focus becoming"
10"She stepped through, the metallic"
11"She glimpsed her quarry again,"
12"She took a breath, steadying"
13"She moved, the ongoing chase"
14"His hurried footsteps echoed a"
15"Her quarry raced ahead, tempted"
16"His steps halted where a"
17"Her gaze met his; a"
18"He stood at the edge"
19"She held onto the vortex,"
ratio0.348
35.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences66
matches
0"Rain pounded the pavement like"
1"Streetlights flickered, casting sickly yellow"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn pushed the"
3"Her lungs burned with exertion,"
4"She caught fleeting glimpses of"
5"Harlow's instincts triggered sharp memories—a"
6"The sprawling maze of London"
7"Her quarry bolted down a"
8"The Raven's Nest loomed, its"
9"It was a place that"
10"Her enemy’s trail bypassed its"
11"Harlow hesitated at the entrance"
12"Her quarry was slipping through"
13"Her heart pounded a rhythm"
14"The decision weighed heavy in"
15"She considered the bone token"
16"A secret gift from an"
17"Harlow’s fingers brushed the token—an"
18"Shouting erupted in her mind:"
19"The suspect vanished into an"
ratio0.848
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Whoever he was, he moved"
ratio0.015
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"She caught fleeting glimpses of the suspect: a shadowy figure darting through the kaleidoscope of London’s nightlife, shifting between crowds of revelers and cl…"
1"Harlow's instincts triggered sharp memories—a hunt in a haze of rain, a chase after a ghost who had left her partner dead."
2"Her quarry bolted down a cobblestone lane that snaked deeper into the city’s underbelly, a part of Soho she knew well for its secrets."
3"Her enemy’s trail bypassed its inviting glow, tearing past old maps and black-and-white photographs that whispered stories from the walls, and continued down in…"
4"Her heart pounded a rhythm that matched the rain’s incessant beat as she considered what lay beneath her feet: The Veil Market, an infamous underground sanctuar…"
5"Shouting erupted in her mind: a flash of DS Morris, his eyes glazed in fear as they both battled a force that had no name."
6"Booths lined by forbidden alchemical substances released incense that mingled with the whispered secrets of rain."
7"The suspect pivoted, catching her gaze, measuring danger against motive—an unfathomable daring met with a challenge silently answered by his bold escape."
8"She took a breath, steadying the military precision that defined her method."
9"Harlow saw his eyes glimmer, reflecting urgency; a wordless plea carved into the echoing realm that enveloped them."
10"She projected ahead, her course coming undisputed towards her elusive quarry’s running tale."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Tomás warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.25
79.8340%