Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR7S91Z5X1HXY4W5Y7VM63

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Duration:
37.0s
Cost:
$0.001064

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with quiet voices and the clinking of glasses. A distinct green neon sign flickered over the entrance, casting a welcoming glow on the dimly lit street of Soho. Inside, the bar brimmed with character: old maps plastered across the walls, and black-and-white photographs of faces long gone watched over the patrons. Silas Blackwood leaned against the polished wood of the bar, a glass of amber whiskey in hand. He surveyed the room, his hazel eyes darting over the barflies and lost souls seeking solace from the murmur of the outside world. A slight limp betrayed his years of service in the field, yet he carried himself with an air of quiet authority that few dared to challenge. Rory Carter slipped through the door, the familiar scent of aged whiskey and something earthy engulfing her. She had just finished a long delivery shift, her uniform crumpled and her hair spilling from its bun in dark waves. The dim light caught the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a reminder of her childhood. She scanned the room, her bright blue eyes settling on Silas. “Si!” she exclaimed, her surprised smile brightening the shadows that fell across her face. Silas turned, his brows knitting for a moment in confusion before recognition washed over him. He set down the glass and straightened with a flourish. “Rory! I hardly recognized you.” As she stepped closer, memories flooded him—the wild days of youth, the dreams they once spun together. She looked different now, more grounded, yet the spark in her eyes remained. “Been ages, huh?” She couldn’t hide her delight. An unexpected warmth filled the space between them. He gestured for her to sit, pouring a fresh glass and sliding it toward her. “Too long. You vanished. What’s happened?” Rory wrapped her fingers around the glass, the chill seeping into her skin. “Life,” she said, her tone light but the trace of weightiness lingered. “Cardiff wasn’t my scene anymore.” “You fled the nest then. Smart move.” He leaned in, curious. “But why London? It’s a rat race.” A shadow crossed her face. “A friend of mine was here and… well, it was better than home.” Silas studied her left wrist. The scar didn’t match her confident demeanor. “Better than home, or better than Evan?” Rory looked away, shifting in her seat. “Let’s not dig up the past. I’m here now, and I’m doing okay.” He nodded slowly, as fatigue lined his features. “And what about law school? Heard you were chasing the barrister dream.” She let out a short laugh, the sound hollow. “That was a different Rory. She wanted things—status, approval. I realized I’d rather deliver meals than sit in a courtroom.” “Deliver meals?” Silas raised an eyebrow, amusement tugging at the corner of his lips. “Risky business. Don’t they have cyclists for that?” “Extremely risky,” she quipped back, matching his playful tone. “But surprisingly liberating. Just me, a bike, and the city.” He leaned back, taking a sip of his whiskey. “And what about the old dreams? The purpose you strived for? You still carry that fire?” Rory hesitated, glancing down at her drink. She toyed with the rim before answering, and Silas could see the flicker of hesitation beneath her confident surface. “Purpose shifts, like the tides. I’ve found… different paths now. Still exploring.” “Exploring?” Silas pressed, intrigued. “You sound like an adventurer. There’s more to it, isn’t there?” Her eyes sparkled for a moment, then dimmed. “You know, Si, after Evan… I just needed to breathe.” “Did you get that breath?” “Not always,” she admitted, her voice softer now. “But I’m in a better place. Trust me.” If only time could bridge the gap between their past selves. He recognized the weight she carried but couldn’t pry it open. Instead, he cleared his throat, redirecting the conversation toward smoother waters. “So, tell me about this delivery gig. Any wild stories?” A sly grin spread across her face, and the tension broke like glass shattering on concrete. “Just last week, I nearly tripped over a cat while delivering sushi to a little flat. The door swung open and there it was—sitting on the threshold, acting like it owned the place. I thought I would die of shock.” Silas chuckled, picturing it. “Damn cats. They’ve got it all figured out.” “Right? And the guy who answered the door? He looked like one of those Instagram fitness gurus—abs, muscles, the whole nine yards. Meanwhile, I’m standing there, trying to balance this massive delivery on my bike.” “Found your footing then?” “Sort of.” Her laughter faded, replaced by a more somber glint in her blue eyes. “The city is chaotic but… I find a certain comfort in that chaos.” “Comfort in chaos,” Silas echoed, nodding. “You’ve changed, Rory.” She took a deep breath, setting her glass down harder than she intended, the taper of the ice cracking with a small, sharp sound. “I have,” she said, a flicker of defiance lighting her gaze. “And I’m not ashamed of it.” “Nor should you be.” He regarded her with a thoughtful nod, wanting to bridge the chasm between who they had become and what lay in the past. “Change isn’t a bad thing, but it begs for context, doesn’t it? What do you want now? Restarting, moving on.” The corners of her mouth turned up slightly, but shadows danced behind her eyes. “Mostly clarity. Maybe some healing. It’s messy, ya know?” Silas shifted, feeling the weight of their ghosts around them. “Have you found it? Clarity?” “More like glimpses.” Rory’s voice quivered, barely above a whisper. “I understand regret’s a companion now. One I can’t shake off.” “Regret,” he murmured, remembering his own battles with it. “A familiar face. But it can’t define you.” For a moment, silence settled between them, heavy with unspoken words. Rory leaned back, her posture wavering between confidence and doubt. “Tell me about you, then. You always knew how to do things. To choose wisely.” “Someone must’ve told you the wrong story.” He rolled his eyes. “I’d call myself a cautious pathfinder. Lessons learned, but not without scars.” “Scar?” Rory raised an eyebrow, curiosity piquing her interest. He shrugged, a small grin lifting the corners of his mouth. “Another tale for another drink. Let’s not dwell on the past. Not yet, anyway.” “Fair enough.” She lifted her glass. “To new stories.” “To new stories,” he echoed, clinking their glasses together. Then the weight of their histories loomed near again, a silent understanding that neither needed to voice. Outside, the city pulsed with life, oblivious to the crossroads inside The Raven’s Nest.
total_cost0.00106425

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she quipped back [back]"
1"Rory’s voice quivered barely [barely]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.346
leniency0.692
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.077
86.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1109
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1109
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"solace"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"race"
count1
8
word"eyebrow"
count2
9
word"flicker"
count2
10
word"weight"
count3
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"glint"
count1
13
word"chaotic"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count2
15
word"quivered"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"silence"
count1
18
word"unspoken"
count1
19
word"wavering"
count1
20
word"loomed"
count1
21
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"solace"
2"familiar"
3"reminder"
4"scanned"
5"warmth"
6"chill"
7"race"
8"eyebrow"
9"flicker"
10"weight"
11"tension"
12"glint"
13"chaotic"
14"echoed"
15"quivered"
16"whisper"
17"silence"
18"unspoken"
19"wavering"
20"loomed"
21"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences58
matches
0"t in confusion"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1102
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount671
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Blackwood1
Carter1
Silas10
Rory7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Blackwood"
3"Carter"
4"Silas"
5"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.755
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1102
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean22.96
std13.52
cv0.589
sampleLengths
055
166
265
314
430
530
616
721
830
918
1018
1119
1220
1320
1429
1522
1619
1725
1838
1915
2018
215
2216
2333
2410
2516
2640
2712
2835
294
3028
319
3224
3317
3447
3523
3615
3721
3817
3911
4025
4123
429
4325
449
459
4617
4714
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs123
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences92
ratio0.011
matches
0"As she stepped closer, memories flooded him—the wild days of youth, the dreams they once spun together."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount675
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02666666666666667
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008888888888888889
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean11.98
std6.44
cv0.538
sampleLengths
012
120
223
317
423
526
617
721
816
911
1014
1115
1210
135
1417
1513
168
178
1815
196
2013
2112
225
2311
247
255
2613
275
287
297
307
3113
328
3312
349
3520
3614
378
389
3910
409
4116
427
4319
4412
454
4611
478
4810
495
93.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5760869565217391
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners53
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences58
matches
0"Instead, he cleared his throat,"
1"Then the weight of their"
ratio0.034
33.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences58
matches
0"He surveyed the room, his"
1"She had just finished a"
2"She scanned the room, her"
3"she exclaimed, her surprised smile"
4"He set down the glass"
5"She looked different now, more"
6"She couldn’t hide her delight"
7"He gestured for her to"
8"she said, her tone light"
9"He leaned in, curious"
10"He nodded slowly, as fatigue"
11"She let out a short"
12"she quipped back, matching his"
13"He leaned back, taking a"
14"She toyed with the rim"
15"Her eyes sparkled for a"
16"she admitted, her voice softer"
17"He recognized the weight she"
18"Her laughter faded, replaced by"
19"She took a deep breath,"
ratio0.466
20.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences58
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"A distinct green neon sign"
2"Silas Blackwood leaned against the"
3"He surveyed the room, his"
4"A slight limp betrayed his"
5"Rory Carter slipped through the"
6"She had just finished a"
7"The dim light caught the"
8"She scanned the room, her"
9"she exclaimed, her surprised smile"
10"Silas turned, his brows knitting"
11"He set down the glass"
12"She looked different now, more"
13"She couldn’t hide her delight"
14"An unexpected warmth filled the"
15"He gestured for her to"
16"Rory wrapped her fingers around"
17"she said, her tone light"
18"He leaned in, curious"
19"A shadow crossed her face."
ratio0.879
86.21% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"If only time could bridge"
ratio0.017
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He leaned, curious"
1"Silas raised, amusement tugging at the corner of his lips"
2"she admitted, her voice softer now"
3"she said, a flicker of defiance lighting her gaze"
4"Rory raised, curiosity piquing her interest"
53.85% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she exclaimed (exclaim)"
1"she quipped back (quip)"
2"Silas pressed (press)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.135
leniency0.269
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.192
84.5058%