Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR7WG48AXDW9ZFAJY47KPG

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Duration:
7.3s
Cost:
$0.000332

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain pounded London's streets like a relentless drum solo, each drop a staccato note on the city's concrete skin. Detective Harlow Quinn, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull, pursued her suspect through the neon-drenched alleys of Soho. The man, Tomás Herrera, darted around a corner, his dark figure swallowed by the night. Quinn's breath fogged in the chilly air, her heart pounding in sync with the rain's rhythm. She rounded the corner, her sharp jaw set, eyes scanning the shadows. There— Herrera's olive skin stood out against the gloom, his Saint Christopher medallion glinting under a flickering streetlight. He glanced back, panic etched on his face, then disappeared down a narrow staircase leading to an abandoned Tube station. Quinn hesitated, her worn leather watch ticking against her wrist. The station was a known haunt of the supernatural clique she'd been investigating. It was a rabbit hole, dark and dangerous, but Herrera was her key to unraveling the mystery of her partner's disappearance three years ago. She drew her gun, the metal cool and familiar in her hand, and descended into the unknown. The air grew colder, damp and heavy with the scent of decay. The station was a labyrinth of crumbling brick and rusted iron, the tracks swallowed by darkness. Quinn's footsteps echoed ominously, her flashlight beam slicing through the gloom. She caught sight of Herrera's silhouette, heard his ragged breaths. He was close. Suddenly, he stopped, turned. His eyes, warm brown in the light, widened in fear. "Detective, wait—" he began, but Quinn was already lunging, her gun trained on him. "Herrera, you're under arrest," she growled. He held up his hands, a bone token clutched in one. "Please, it's not what you think. I can explain—" A low rumble echoed through the station, the ground vibrating beneath their feet. A hidden door in the wall groaned open, revealing a dimly lit corridor. Herrera took a step back, towards the opening. "I can't let you stop me, Detective. Not now." Quinn's grip tightened on her gun. "You're not going anywhere, Herrera." He looked at her, resignation in his eyes. "I'm sorry, Detective. I truly am." Then he turned and disappeared into the corridor, the door slamming shut behind him. Quinn cursed, holstering her gun. She approached the door, her military precision faltering. It was a heavy wooden affair, reinforced with iron bands. A symbol was carved into the wood, glowing faintly: a stylized eye, the pupil a swirling vortex. She'd seen it before, in her partner's case notes, scrawled in the margins of pages detailing the inexplicable. She placed her hand on the symbol. It was warm, pulsing with an otherworldly energy. She closed her eyes, took a deep breath, and pushed. The door creaked open, revealing a vast, cavernous space filled with stalls and makeshift shops. The Veil Market, the underground black market for the supernatural. She was in way over her head, but she'd come this far. She stepped inside, her heart pounding in her ears. The market was a riot of color and sound, a stark contrast to the gloom of the station. Creatures of every shape and size bustled about, their voices a cacophony of languages and tones. Quinn scanned the crowd, looking for Herrera. She spotted him at a stall, bartering with a hooded figure. She started towards him, her hand hovering near her gun. Suddenly, a hand clamped down on her shoulder. She spun, her fist flying, but it was caught mid-air. She looked up into the face of a man with eyes like ice chips and hair like a raven's wing. He smiled, a slow, dangerous curve of his lips. "Welcome to the Veil Market, Detective," he said, his voice a low rumble. "I'm Silas. And you're not welcome here." Quinn wrenched her arm free, her breath coming in short gasps. "I'm looking for someone. Tomás Herrera. I need to speak with him." Silas' smile didn't reach his eyes. "Tomás is a friend. And you're a problem, Detective. I can't allow that." Quinn stood her ground, her gaze unwavering. "I'm not leaving without him." Silas' laugh echoed through the market, turning heads. "Brave, aren't you? Stupid, but brave." He leaned in, his voice dropping to a low growl. "This is my domain, Detective. You're out of your depth. Leave now, while you still can." Quinn met his gaze, her expression unchanging. "I can't do that." Silas sighed, a sound like distant thunder. "Very well. But don't say I didn't warn you." He turned, his cloak billowing behind him. "Come, Detective. Let's find Tomás. But remember, once you're in, there's no going back." Quinn followed, her heart pounding in her chest. She was stepping into the unknown, into a world she barely understood. But she was close, she could feel it. Close to answers, close to justice. And she wouldn't back down, not now, not ever. The rain might pound the streets above, but here, in the Veil Market, a different storm was brewing. And she was right in the eye of it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Then he turned [Then]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.125
76.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount846
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"truly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount846
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"pounding"
count3
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count3
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"unraveling"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count3
9
word"otherworldly"
count1
10
word"stark"
count1
11
word"cacophony"
count1
12
word"scanned"
count1
13
word"unwavering"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"scanning"
2"gloom"
3"glinting"
4"etched"
5"unraveling"
6"familiar"
7"footsteps"
8"echoed"
9"otherworldly"
10"stark"
11"cacophony"
12"scanned"
13"unwavering"
14"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences62
matches
0"d in fear"
96.77% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords842
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount701
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.71
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow1
Quinn12
Soho1
Tomás1
Herrera6
Saint1
Christopher1
Tube1
Veil2
Market2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Veil"
globalScore0.644
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount842
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean38.27
std21.14
cv0.552
sampleLengths
070
150
264
352
428
56
620
743
811
928
1058
1171
1262
1347
1420
1523
1619
1712
1840
1911
2037
2170
93.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"was carved"
1"was caught"
87.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs118
matches
0"was stepping"
1"was brewing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences74
ratio0.014
matches
0"There— Herrera's olive skin stood out against the gloom, his Saint Christopher medallion glinting under a flickering streetlight."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount650
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.023076923076923078
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010769230769230769
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean11.38
std4.66
cv0.41
sampleLengths
020
119
215
316
412
518
620
710
813
924
1017
1112
1216
1311
1410
153
164
1710
1814
196
2011
219
2213
2313
248
259
266
275
288
2920
305
318
3210
3317
3418
357
368
3710
3815
3910
4012
419
4218
4316
447
4511
4610
478
4810
4920
46.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.33783783783783783
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners25
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences61
matches
0"Suddenly, he stopped, turned."
1"Then he turned and disappeared"
2"Suddenly, a hand clamped down"
ratio0.049
42.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences61
matches
0"She rounded the corner, her"
1"He glanced back, panic etched"
2"It was a rabbit hole,"
3"She drew her gun, the"
4"She caught sight of Herrera's"
5"He was close."
6"His eyes, warm brown in"
7"he began, but Quinn was"
8"He held up his hands,"
9"He looked at her, resignation"
10"She approached the door, her"
11"It was a heavy wooden"
12"She'd seen it before, in"
13"She placed her hand on"
14"It was warm, pulsing with"
15"She closed her eyes, took"
16"She was in way over"
17"She stepped inside, her heart"
18"She spotted him at a"
19"She started towards him, her"
ratio0.443
17.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences61
matches
0"The rain pounded London's streets"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn, her salt-and-pepper"
2"The man, Tomás Herrera, darted"
3"Quinn's breath fogged in the"
4"She rounded the corner, her"
5"There— Herrera's olive skin stood"
6"He glanced back, panic etched"
7"Quinn hesitated, her worn leather"
8"The station was a known"
9"It was a rabbit hole,"
10"She drew her gun, the"
11"The air grew colder, damp"
12"The station was a labyrinth"
13"Quinn's footsteps echoed ominously, her"
14"She caught sight of Herrera's"
15"He was close."
16"His eyes, warm brown in"
17"he began, but Quinn was"
18"He held up his hands,"
19"A low rumble echoed through"
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Then he turned, the door slamming shut behind him"
1"he said, his voice a low rumble"
2"He leaned in, his voice dropping to a low growl"
3"He turned, his cloak billowing behind him"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.125
79.6055%