Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR7WPW1J5AMJQYZM62WSYF

Run Details

Duration:
21.9s
Cost:
$0.019293
Provider:
Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain pelted the pavement in bursts, a rhythmic drumming that matched the rapid cadence of Detective Harlow Quinn’s heartbeat. She adjusted her grip on the worn leather watch, its familiar texture grounding her amidst the chaos. Her eyes, sharp as a hawk’s, scanned the rain-soaked streets ahead. The distant figure of the suspect flicked into view for a heartbeat, heading deeper into the city’s slick alleys. Tomás Herrera was somewhere behind her, keeping pace with a steady determination. He had insisted on coming after Quinn had muttered under her breath about the peculiar medallion she had seen the suspect wear—reminded her of the kind Herrera sported like a talisman. The thought that their man might dash into the supernatural realms prickled her nerves. She knew Herrera had connections through his dark web of off-books treatments, some she couldn’t quite fathom, yet had come to trust in their value. “There!” Quinn barked, dodging a slick puddle, her feet pounding with precision across the pavement. The suspect made a sharp left into an alley, disappearing into shadow. Herrera was beside her in an instant, his eyes fixed on the dark mouth of the alley. “What’s he onto, Quinn?” “Does it matter?” she shot back, though doubt gnawed at her resolve. “He’s a ghost, Tommy. Slippery as hell.” Rain streamed down her forehead, blurring her vision till she wiped it away with a swift hand. Her quarry had turned the streets into a tapestry of illusions, every corner a trick, every shadow a promised escape. But Quinn was relentless. DS Morris’s haunting absence propelled her forward, an ever-present reminder of mysteries left unsolved. Quinn cursed under her breath, drawing in what felt like jagged pieces of air as they reached the alley entrance. The stench of the city’s night mingled with the taste of metal in the rain. “No time to linger.” The alley narrowed, the walls closing in like a vice. The suspect ahead seemed less like a man and more a shape weaving through the night, the edges of his form barely visible. Quinn surged forward, ignoring the sharp protest of her lungs. Her detective's instincts screamed—he wasn’t just running. He was leading them somewhere. “Harlow! He’s going underground!” Herrera’s voice sliced through her fevered chase, urgent. A splash echoed not far ahead. She caught sight of the suspect's silhouette as he slipped into the mouth of an old Tube entrance. A spot barely conspicuous save for the ghostly gleam of its wrought iron gate. Quinn hesitated, a breath tangled in uncertainty. Underground, the path became less predictable, more dangerous. A terrain she'd only heard about in whispers—The Veil Market. “Quinn, this is—” “—a risk.” The words came out colder than she intended. Quinn’s gaze flicked to the medallion on Herrera’s neck. They both knew the rumors surrounding the Market. Supernaturals with bone-tokens laughing in the shadows, and dangers she couldn’t prepare for. “Hell, Tommy. I didn’t think tonight would get biblical.” Herrera stayed firm beside her, rain dripping from the curls framing his face. “Do we follow?” For the first time, Quinn truly faltered, a precarious teetering on the precipice of choice. A flash of her old partner’s face haunted the periphery of her decision. An unsolved enigma. Quinn breathed deep. The scent of rain and earth wrapped around her decision. Her hand unconsciously brushed the scar from her own encounter with the supernatural past. “We can’t let him rough us up, Tommy. If he's in the Market and it’s moving soon,” she nodded towards where the suspect had vanished, “We need a bone token.” She glanced toward Herrera, the urgency sparking her nerves. Without her even asking, he produced a weathered bone token from his pocket, tossing it to her. “This’ll cover you.” Quinn caught it, its surface etched with cryptic symbols she couldn't decipher. She marveled, but hid it with the precision of steely resolve. “Don’t ask why I trust you. Might be the first sensible decision.” She slid the bone token into her jacket, knowing full well it might be the difference between seeing another dawn. Together, they surged forward, plunging beneath the surface where old echoes replaced the rain’s song. Torches lined the slick tunnel walls, flickering with an unnatural hue. The scent of alchemical concoctions invaded their senses, guiding them deeper. The tunnel branched out like veins in a limb, winding toward the Market—a place that thrived on whispers. Quinn sped up, Herrera mirroring her pace. The air held tension, charged and electric, weaving an unspoken kinship between them. Both understood the stakes, the consequences of stepping into the unknown. Soon, the tunnel opened up, revealing a space thrumming with life, the Market alive with transactions spoken in tongues beyond the ordinary. Stall owners peddled curses and artifacts, eyes trailing Quinn with calculated interest. The suspect was there, vanishing into the throng like smoke. Quinn scanned the crowd, her instincts a taut wire. “Tommy, keep eyes patched to flesh.” Ignoring the curious gazes, they maneuvered through the stalls. Old maps decorated spaces where secrets transpired and goods of forbidden origin changed hands. The air buzzed, whispers sliding like snakes. Yet, beneath her persistent drive, Quinn sensed the gravity of the place—the pull of undiluted power lurking beneath enchanted surfaces. Beyond a veil of incense, the suspect appeared near a vendor, exchanging hurried words and concealed commodities. Quinn and Herrera crept closer, her movements deft and silent. The suspect looked over his shoulder, recognizing the threat of pursuit. He paused, eyes narrowing upon Quinn like a cornered animal. Everything about his stance reeked of desperation, his presence blending with the chaos of the Market. Quinn felt an invigorating rush of adrenaline, her resolve rekindled. “Oi!” she lunged forward, voice cracking with authority. “Stop scuttling around!” The suspect bolted, his feet barely touching the ground as he tore through the Market. Quinn sprinted after him, Herrera on her heels. They wove through enchantments that simmered on the edges of reality, torches casting miraculous shadows in their wake. Quinn’s breath turned to steam, each inhalation a battleground of cold air versus heat, her muscles straining at full capacity. Around her, the Market watchers were oblivious or charmed by unfolding drama—a stark contrast to the frantic pace of the chase. But she felt it—victory drawing close like moth to flame. Tenacity kept her focus sharp, the memory of DS Morris a driving force to conquer the night’s trials. Unbeknownst to others, one decision had carved her path, calibrated by courage and resolve. Herrera matched her intensity stride for stride. “Quinn, if we catch him—” “No ifs, Tommy. We’re nearly there!” Her words sliced the air, filled with the velocity of pursuit. Together, they closed in on the suspect who was finally shedding the skin of anonymity and showing his true face: Panic. A final calculated sprint, and Quinn seized her chance. Her arm reached forward, snagging the suspect’s jacket as he stumbled on uneven cobblestones. His face twisted in realization, defeat glimmering in his eyes. “End of the line,” Quinn growled, dragging him to an unexpected halt. Herrera flanked her, breathless yet composed, channeling the poised strength she knew was buried within. Suspense hung heavy in the air, sizzling under the flickers of torchlight as Quinn and Herrera stood resolute. Their chase had brought them face-to-face with the unknown, yet clarity had seized the moment, pinning the shadows into submission. With a renewed display of relentless tenacity, Detective Harlow Quinn had notched another victory in a world that blurred the boundaries of reality, supported by the unwavering presence of Tomás Herrera—an ally in unimaginable realms.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:48:27.616Z" 2/19/2026, 10:48:27 AM
model"openai/gpt-4o-2024-08-06"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency1660
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time21869
tokens_prompt1140
tokens_completion2095
native_tokens_prompt985
native_tokens_completion1683
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.0192925
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"59ea8d2a-1b1b-47f1-83de-a358a724caeb"
id"chatcmpl-DAvs3inwKNQkYsUBtKL259qQIe54y"
is_byokfalse
latency608
model_permaslug"openai/gpt-4o-2024-08-06"
provider_name"Azure"
status200
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1771498107-9fkkJlukINq44yT4zGgY"
upstream_id"chatcmpl-DAvs3inwKNQkYsUBtKL259qQIe54y"
total_cost0.0192925
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Azure"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1280
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1280
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"amidst"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count2
4
word"flicked"
count2
5
word"pounding"
count1
6
word"resolve"
count4
7
word"tapestry"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"predictable"
count1
11
word"enigma"
count1
12
word"encounter"
count1
13
word"etched"
count1
14
word"marveled"
count1
15
word"echoes"
count1
16
word"tension"
count1
17
word"charged"
count1
18
word"electric"
count1
19
word"unspoken"
count1
20
word"calculated"
count2
21
word"stark"
count1
22
word"calibrated"
count1
23
word"intensity"
count1
24
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"familiar"
2"amidst"
3"scanned"
4"flicked"
5"pounding"
6"resolve"
7"tapestry"
8"reminder"
9"echoed"
10"predictable"
11"enigma"
12"encounter"
13"etched"
14"marveled"
15"echoes"
16"tension"
17"charged"
18"electric"
19"unspoken"
20"calculated"
21"stark"
22"calibrated"
23"intensity"
24"unwavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1266
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1164
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.06
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective2
Harlow2
Quinn24
Herrera15
Rain2
Morris2
Tube1
Veil1
Market7
Together2
Panic1
Tomás2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Rain"
4"Morris"
5"Together"
6"Tomás"
places
0"Veil"
1"Market"
globalScore0.469
windowScore0.333
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite fathom, yet had come to trust in their value"
1"felt like jagged pieces of air as they"
2"appeared near a vendor, exchanging hurried words and concealed commodities"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1266
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
91.55% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean35.17
std16.54
cv0.47
sampleLengths
066
182
227
321
419
555
639
755
818
957
103
1149
1216
1331
1457
1529
1655
1737
1849
1934
2025
2130
2220
2327
2437
2521
2641
2741
2842
2912
3017
3121
3233
3327
3438
3535
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"was buried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs202
matches
0"was leading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences98
ratio0.082
matches
0"He had insisted on coming after Quinn had muttered under her breath about the peculiar medallion she had seen the suspect wear—reminded her of the kind Herrera sported like a talisman."
1"Her detective's instincts screamed—he wasn’t just running."
2"A terrain she'd only heard about in whispers—The Veil Market."
3"The tunnel branched out like veins in a limb, winding toward the Market—a place that thrived on whispers."
4"Yet, beneath her persistent drive, Quinn sensed the gravity of the place—the pull of undiluted power lurking beneath enchanted surfaces."
5"Around her, the Market watchers were oblivious or charmed by unfolding drama—a stark contrast to the frantic pace of the chase."
6"But she felt it—victory drawing close like moth to flame."
7"With a renewed display of relentless tenacity, Detective Harlow Quinn had notched another victory in a world that blurred the boundaries of reality, supported by the unwavering presence of Tomás Herrera—an ally in unimaginable realms."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1178
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.019524617996604415
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008488964346349746
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean12.92
std6.47
cv0.501
sampleLengths
019
117
211
319
412
531
614
725
815
912
1017
114
1212
137
1417
1520
164
1714
1820
1915
204
2110
2223
2310
247
255
2612
276
2818
2914
307
318
3210
333
3410
359
368
3713
389
3913
403
4115
4213
433
443
4510
4614
4730
489
4917
79.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4897959183673469
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences88
matches
0"She adjusted her grip on"
1"Her eyes, sharp as a"
2"He had insisted on coming"
3"She knew Herrera had connections"
4"she shot back, though doubt"
5"Her quarry had turned the"
6"Her detective's instincts screamed—he wasn’t"
7"He was leading them somewhere."
8"She caught sight of the"
9"They both knew the rumors"
10"Her hand unconsciously brushed the"
11"she nodded towards where the"
12"She glanced toward Herrera, the"
13"She marveled, but hid it"
14"She slid the bone token"
15"He paused, eyes narrowing upon"
16"she lunged forward, voice cracking"
17"They wove through enchantments that"
18"Her words sliced the air,"
19"Her arm reached forward, snagging"
ratio0.25
39.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences88
matches
0"Rain pelted the pavement in"
1"She adjusted her grip on"
2"Her eyes, sharp as a"
3"The distant figure of the"
4"Tomás Herrera was somewhere behind"
5"He had insisted on coming"
6"The thought that their man"
7"She knew Herrera had connections"
8"Quinn barked, dodging a slick"
9"The suspect made a sharp"
10"Herrera was beside her in"
11"she shot back, though doubt"
12"Rain streamed down her forehead,"
13"Her quarry had turned the"
14"DS Morris’s haunting absence propelled"
15"Quinn cursed under her breath,"
16"The stench of the city’s"
17"The alley narrowed, the walls"
18"The suspect ahead seemed less"
19"Quinn surged forward, ignoring the"
ratio0.841
56.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Yet, beneath her persistent drive,"
ratio0.011
96.02% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rain pelted the pavement in bursts, a rhythmic drumming that matched the rapid cadence of Detective Harlow Quinn’s heartbeat."
1"Without her even asking, he produced a weathered bone token from his pocket, tossing it to her."
2"They wove through enchantments that simmered on the edges of reality, torches casting miraculous shadows in their wake."
3"With a renewed display of relentless tenacity, Detective Harlow Quinn had notched another victory in a world that blurred the boundaries of reality, supported b…"
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Herrera’s voice sliced, urgent"
1"she lunged, voice cracking with authority"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn barked (bark)"
1"Quinn growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.105
leniency0.211
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.211
77.0765%