Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR7WR5EKHK5CZJBAWX78TQ

Run Details

Duration:
21.8s
Cost:
$0.015603
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory took in the ancient oak standing stones marking the entrance to the fae grove, feeling a buzz of excitement despite herself. The grove existed between worlds, she knew, and she couldn't shake the sense of trespassing even as she stepped over the threshold. The air felt heavier, as if each breath was more substantial, and the world seemed to shift around her. "Come on, then," Nyx urged, their voice a subtle whisper carried in the breeze that stirred the silver hair of the half-fae seer, Isolde. "This is only the beginning." The group ventured deeper, Rory's eyes adjusting to the dimmer light. The ground sloped downwards, and trees became more sparse, their branches twisting and contorting into otherworldly shapes. "What is this place?" Rory asked, her voice hushed as if speaking loudly would disturb some ancient slumber. Isolde turned, her eyes piercing with pale lavender intensity, lips curling in a mysterious smile. "A sanctuary," she replied, her words dancing around an answer. "A place of transition, where the boundaries between realms blur." She gestured, and a gust of wind followed her hand's path, rustling leaves and sending a shower of wildflowers fluttering around them. The petals, in shades of violet and gold, seemed to dance in the air, lingering as if defying gravity. Nyx's form shifted, their shadow spreading and receding with the movement, as if the grove itself were alive, whispering secrets to them. "It is a place of wonder, where the very fabric of reality bends," they whispered. Rory's eyes widened as she took in the surroundings. The tree trunks, gnarled and knotted, seemed to twist and change shapes, displaying brief glimpses of shadowed realms beyond. A faint, shimmering distortion in the air hinted at other planes of existence, but it faded as she tried to focus, leaving her with a vague sense of unease. "Are... are we safe here?" she asked, her voice uncertain. Isolde's laughter tinkled like a silver bell, and she spun in a slow circle, her hair sweeping the air. "Safe?" she echoed. "There are no guarantees in between-places. But it is a sanctuary of sorts, where time and rules bend to the will of those who understand its ways." Rory's heart pounded as she realized the implications. Isolde's words sounded like a warning and an invitation simultaneously. She glanced at Nyx, whose form blurred slightly at the edges, blending with the shifting shadows. "What do you seek here, humans? Do you wish to glimpse the realms beyond or learn the secrets of this place?" Nyx asked, their eyes glowing with a faint violet light. Rory hesitated, then spoke up, her voice steady now. "I seek understanding. I want to know why I was given this." She touched the Heartstone Pendant, its crimson glow intensifying under her fingertips. Nyx nodded, their shadowy form coalescing briefly into a more solid silhouette. "The Heartstone is a key, a guide for the lost. It brings you to places of power, to crossroads and thresholds. Who gave it to you?" Rory swallowed, her memories stirring. "I don't know. It appeared one night in my room. I felt drawn to it, and when I touched it, I knew... I knew it was meant for me." Isolde moved closer, her silver eyes softening. "The Heartstone chooses its bearers carefully. It seeks out those with the ability to see beyond. Mortals with a connection to the realms beyond." "Is that why I keep feeling like I'm being watched?" Rory asked, shivering slightly as if brushing against an unseen barrier. Nyx's laugh sounded like rustling leaves. "You are not alone in this place, Rory. This realm is alive with watchers and guardians. They keep an eye on those who pass through, ensuring they don't stray too far." "Then what's to stop me from wandering into the wrong place?" she asked, her eyes scanning the shifting shadows and twisted trees. "Your instincts and the Heartstone," Nyx said. "Follow its warmth, and it will guide you to where you need to be." Rory glanced down at the pendant, now glowing brightly in her palm. It felt alive, pulsing with a power that made her skin tingle. She closed her fingers around it, and the warmth spread up her arm, a comforting sensation in this strange place. As if sensing her determination, the environment around them shifted. The trees drew back, revealing a sprawling meadow of flowers in every imaginable colour. Butterfly-like creatures, with shimmering wings in iridescent hues, danced over the blooms, their beauty otherworldly. "Where are we?" Rory whispered, not wanting to disturb the serene atmosphere. "The heart of the grove," Isolde replied, her voice filled with awe. "This is a nexus, a place of intense energy. Here, the boundaries between realms are thin." Rory breathed in the fragrant air, alive with the scents of a thousand flowers. She felt lighter, her worries slipping away as the grove beckoned her deeper.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.591
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount821
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount821
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"sense of"
count2
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"otherworldly"
count2
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"sanctuary"
count2
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"dance"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"ensuring"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count2
11
word"comforting"
count1
highlights
0"sense of"
1"whisper"
2"otherworldly"
3"intensity"
4"sanctuary"
5"dancing"
6"dance"
7"echoed"
8"ensuring"
9"scanning"
10"warmth"
11"comforting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
85.32% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences42
matches
0"filled with awe"
1"d with awe"
6.80% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences42
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences51
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords819
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
48.52% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount542
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.03
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Isolde6
Rory11
Nyx7
Heartstone1
Pendant1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
places
0"Pendant"
globalScore0.485
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"as if speaking loudly would disturb some ancient slumber"
1"as if defying gravity"
2"sounded like a warning and an invitation s"
3"as if brushing against an unseen barrier"
4"sounded like rustling leaves"
5"As if sensing her determination, the environment around them shifted"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount819
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
63.65% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean32.76
std12.21
cv0.373
sampleLengths
063
129
228
318
435
541
637
757
810
949
1034
1131
1233
1338
1434
1531
1621
1737
1822
1921
2044
2139
2212
2328
2427
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs109
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount543
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.03314917127071823
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.014732965009208104
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences51
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences51
mean16.06
std7.15
cv0.445
sampleLengths
022
122
219
324
45
511
617
718
815
910
1010
1122
1219
1322
1415
159
1619
1729
1810
1919
203
2127
228
2310
2416
2531
269
2724
2812
2926
305
3129
327
3324
3421
356
3631
3722
387
3914
4012
4112
4220
4310
4414
4515
4612
4712
4816
4914
66.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.43137254901960786
totalSentences51
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences39
matches
0"she replied, her words dancing"
1"She gestured, and a gust"
2"she asked, her voice uncertain"
3"She glanced at Nyx, whose"
4"She touched the Heartstone Pendant,"
5"she asked, her eyes scanning"
6"It felt alive, pulsing with"
7"She closed her fingers around"
8"She felt lighter, her worries"
ratio0.231
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences39
matches
0"Rory took in the ancient"
1"The grove existed between worlds,"
2"The air felt heavier, as"
3"Nyx urged, their voice a"
4"The group ventured deeper, Rory's"
5"The ground sloped downwards, and"
6"Rory asked, her voice hushed"
7"Isolde turned, her eyes piercing"
8"she replied, her words dancing"
9"She gestured, and a gust"
10"The petals, in shades of"
11"Nyx's form shifted, their shadow"
12"Rory's eyes widened as she"
13"The tree trunks, gnarled and"
14"A faint, shimmering distortion in"
15"she asked, her voice uncertain"
16"Isolde's laughter tinkled like a"
17"Rory's heart pounded as she"
18"Isolde's words sounded like a"
19"She glanced at Nyx, whose"
ratio0.974
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences39
matches
0"As if sensing her determination,"
ratio0.026
18.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The ground sloped downwards, and trees became more sparse, their branches twisting and contorting into otherworldly shapes."
1"She gestured, and a gust of wind followed her hand's path, rustling leaves and sending a shower of wildflowers fluttering around them."
2"Nyx's form shifted, their shadow spreading and receding with the movement, as if the grove itself were alive, whispering secrets to them."
3"It felt alive, pulsing with a power that made her skin tingle."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she asked, her voice uncertain"
1"Nyx asked, their eyes glowing with a faint violet light"
2"She touched, its crimson glow intensifying under her fingertips"
3"she asked, her eyes scanning the shifting shadows and twisted trees"
4"Rory whispered, not wanting to disturb the serene atmosphere"
13.64% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx urged (urge)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.273
69.3592%