| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 67.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1220 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | adverb | "seductively" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "lazily" | | 5 | "seductively" | | 6 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1220 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pounding" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "clenching" | | 7 | "dance" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "fleeting" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "churn" | | 17 | "synthetic" | | 18 | "reminder" | | 19 | "echoing" | | 20 | "symphony" | | 21 | "lurched" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched her fists" | | 1 | "fists clenched" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.62% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1190 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 1163 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.26 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Fae" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Isolde | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 25.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as though waiting for her to cross into something that wasn’t meant to be disturbed" | | 1 | "It was as if the grove itself was breathing, watching her" | | 2 | "felt like it would burst from her ears" | | 3 | "sounded like a breathy laugh, thin and raz" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1190 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.95% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 41.03 | | std | 16.78 | | cv | 0.409 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 74 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 37 |
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| 97.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "was marked" | | 1 | "was layered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 211 | | matches | | 0 | "was lurking" | | 1 | "was breathing" | | 2 | "was lurking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 27 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 23 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.253 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere nearby, something moved—something that wasn’t supposed to be here." | | 1 | "It had been quiet at first—the usual chorus of night sounds, distant owl hoots, and the crackle of twigs breaking—but now the quiet thrummed with an undercurrent of menace." | | 2 | "She spun quickly, heart pounding beneath the weight of her purpose—find Isolde’s grove, find the Fae that her friend suspected was lurking, and retrieve that damned Heartstone Pendant." | | 3 | "Then she saw it—just at the edge of her vision." | | 4 | "A flicker—like something shifting just out of sight, a blur of motion." | | 5 | "She knew the risks—inside this grove, time had no rules, and something dark watched with patience." | | 6 | "It stirred the wildflowers, making them dance lazily—almost seductively—in the moonlight." | | 7 | "A low, raspy chuckle echoed—thick, slow, and wrong." | | 8 | "Yet, the presence of something deliberate—something predatory—pressed her forward." | | 9 | "The stones, ancient and weathered, bore symbols she didn’t recognise—northern runes, or perhaps something older, more arcane." | | 10 | "She spun, trying to locate the speaker, but nothing materialised—only shadows that seemed to thicken, distort." | | 11 | "The wind lifted again, this time carrying a melody—disjointed, warped, like a lullaby sung by broken pipes." | | 12 | "From somewhere close—too close—came a whisper that sounded like a breathy laugh, thin and razor-sharp." | | 13 | "“You looked... so curious. Strange how curiosity brings folk here.” The voice was layered—synthetic, ancient, and unnervingly seamless." | | 14 | "The faint glow warmed her palm, a reminder that she carried something others did not—something powerful and cloaked in uncertainty." | | 15 | "Shadows converged—twisting, stretching, writhing with hunger." | | 16 | "The grove was no longer silent; it was alive with a malicious, grinding chorus, a symphony of unseen terrors." | | 17 | "Her breath caught—her mind braced for whatever was about to emerge, whatever nightmare lurked in the edges of her vision." | | 18 | "Noises grew clearer—the scrape of claws on bark, the faint scrape of thin, brittle fingers brushing against her sleeve." | | 19 | "The grove’s shadows coiled at her feet, waiting—and then, in the darkness, something moved, fluid and silent." | | 20 | "A shape—half-seen, yet all-consuming—lurched into the faint glow of her pendant." | | 21 | "The strange, wrong feeling crept into her mind—an overwhelming certainty that she wasn’t alone anymore, that the dark had already begun to claim her." | | 22 | "And then, just as the shadows inched closer, a piercing cry rent the air—a raw, primal scream that echoed beyond the trees, shattering the eeriness of the night, and pushing everything else into silence in an instant." |
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| 91.73% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1193 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.04945515507124895 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014249790444258172 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 13.08 | | std | 6.43 | | cv | 0.492 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 47.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.32967032967032966 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere nearby, something moved—something that" | | 1 | "Then she saw it—just at" | | 2 | "Then, a whisper, distant but" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 72.87% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots sank half an" | | 1 | "It had been quiet at" | | 2 | "She inhaled sharply, trying to" | | 3 | "Her body tensed, eyes narrowing." | | 4 | "She spun quickly, heart pounding" | | 5 | "Its faint glow was her" | | 6 | "She blinked, forcing her gaze" | | 7 | "Her fingers brushed the pendant," | | 8 | "She knew the risks—inside this" | | 9 | "She reminded herself of that," | | 10 | "It stirred the wildflowers, making" | | 11 | "Her eyes darted around, searching" | | 12 | "It was as if the" | | 13 | "Her hand tightening around the" | | 14 | "Her breath caught." | | 15 | "She spun, trying to locate" | | 16 | "It seeped into her mind," | | 17 | "Her eyes fixed on the" | | 18 | "Her pulse hammered so loudly" | | 19 | "She took a step back," |
| | ratio | 0.368 | |
| 34.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "The rustling came again, sharper" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter paused, breath hitching" | | 2 | "The moon hung heavy, a" | | 3 | "Her boots sank half an" | | 4 | "The crimson gem aboard its" | | 5 | "It had been quiet at" | | 6 | "The grove pressed in from" | | 7 | "She inhaled sharply, trying to" | | 8 | "The boundary was marked by" | | 9 | "The stones sat silent, inscrutable," | | 10 | "An hour here could stretch" | | 11 | "Rory’s eyes darted from shadow" | | 12 | "A branch snapped sharply behind" | | 13 | "Her body tensed, eyes narrowing." | | 14 | "She spun quickly, heart pounding" | | 15 | "Its faint glow was her" | | 16 | "A flicker—like something shifting just" | | 17 | "She blinked, forcing her gaze" | | 18 | "The trees seemed to lean" | | 19 | "Her fingers brushed the pendant," |
| | ratio | 0.851 | |
| 57.47% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, the presence of something" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 16.13% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The rustling came again, sharper this time, just beyond the dense thicket of wildflowers that obscured her view." | | 1 | "Somewhere nearby, something moved—something that wasn’t supposed to be here." | | 2 | "The stones sat silent, inscrutable, as though waiting for her to cross into something that wasn’t meant to be disturbed." | | 3 | "Rory’s eyes darted from shadow to shadow, searching for any sign of movement, but all she saw was the stillness that felt far too deliberate." | | 4 | "The sound was impossible, an echo that didn’t belong, yet it had an undeniable presence." | | 5 | "Her hand tightening around the Heartstone’s chain, she set her jaw, taking careful steps toward the standing stones." | | 6 | "It seeped into her mind, demanding she listen, making her stomach churn." | | 7 | "That dark voice recoiled just briefly, an almost imperceptible gasp that echoed inside her skull." | | 8 | "Her instincts screamed to run, but her steps were slow, tentative, as if rooted in the earth itself." | | 9 | "Her heart hammered a staccato rhythm, a desperate drumbeat that kept her tethered to reality." | | 10 | "And then, just as the shadows inched closer, a piercing cry rent the air—a raw, primal scream that echoed beyond the trees, shattering the eeriness of the night…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |