Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR7YVXSKWRSKBDX0BG12JV

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Duration:
31.8s
Cost:
$0.001004

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clinking of glasses punctuating the air like a heartbeat. Dim light flickered from the green neon sign outside, casting a soft glow on the faces of patrons scattered across the bar. Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass, his hazel eyes scanning the room with a practiced ease. He caught sight of Rory as she slipped through the door, her straight black hair framing her bright blue eyes, a hint of uncertainty in her posture. “Rory!” Silas called, a smile breaking across his face. He set the glass down and wiped his hands on a towel, moving to greet her. “Si,” she replied, her voice steady but laced with a hint of nostalgia. She stepped closer, the familiar scent of aged wood and whiskey wrapping around her like a long-lost embrace. Silas studied her, noting the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a remnant of childhood mischief. “You look good. London suits you.” “Thanks. It’s been a ride,” she said, glancing around the bar, her gaze lingering on the old maps and photographs that adorned the walls. “I didn’t expect to find you here.” “Life has a way of leading us to unexpected places.” He gestured toward a vacant table in the corner. “Care for a drink?” “Sure.” She followed him, her heart racing with a mix of excitement and apprehension. They settled into the worn leather seats, the weight of years pressing down between them. Silas poured two glasses of amber liquid, sliding one across the table. “To old friends.” “To old friends,” she echoed, raising her glass. The warmth of the whiskey spread through her, but it couldn’t chase away the chill of memories that lingered in the back of her mind. “So, what’s new?” Silas leaned back, his expression curious yet cautious. Rory hesitated, the words caught in her throat. “I’m working at a restaurant. Delivery mostly. It’s... not what I imagined, but it pays the bills.” “Still running from the law, I see.” He chuckled softly, but the laughter didn’t reach his eyes. “Something like that.” She shifted in her seat, the leather creaking beneath her. “What about you? Still playing the spymaster?” “Retired, mostly. This place keeps me busy.” He gestured around the bar, his gaze drifting to the patrons. “But I still have my contacts. You never really leave that life behind.” Rory nodded, the weight of his words settling heavily between them. “I guess some things never change.” “True.” Silas’s eyes narrowed slightly, a flicker of concern crossing his face. “But you’ve changed, Rory. You seem... different.” “Different how?” She crossed her arms, a defensive gesture that felt instinctive. “More guarded. Like you’re carrying something heavy.” He leaned forward, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper. “What happened?” She looked away, tracing the rim of her glass with her finger. “It’s a long story.” “Got time.” He studied her, the lines on his face deepening with concern. “You know I’m here if you want to talk.” Rory took a deep breath, the air thick with unspoken words. “I left Cardiff to escape... Evan. It wasn’t easy. I thought I could start fresh, but the past has a way of creeping back in.” Silas’s expression softened. “I remember him. A real piece of work.” “Yeah.” She forced a smile, but it didn’t reach her eyes. “I thought I could handle it. I thought I was stronger.” “Strength isn’t just about handling things alone.” He leaned back, his gaze steady. “You don’t have to carry it all by yourself.” “I know that now.” She met his eyes, the vulnerability in her voice cutting through the tension. “But it took me a while to realize it. I spent too long pretending everything was fine.” “Pretending can be exhausting.” Silas’s voice held a note of understanding. “You don’t have to pretend with me.” Rory’s heart raced. “I just... I don’t want to burden you with my problems.” “Rory, we’ve known each other long enough. You could never be a burden.” He paused, his expression shifting. “But you need to let someone in. You can’t keep running.” “I’m not running anymore.” She straightened, a flicker of defiance igniting within her. “I’m just trying to figure things out.” “Figuring things out is part of living.” Silas’s tone softened, a hint of encouragement lacing his words. “But you can’t do it alone.” Rory looked down at her glass, the amber liquid swirling like her thoughts. “I don’t know how to let go of the past.” “Start by sharing it.” He leaned forward, his eyes locked onto hers. “What do you want to let go of?” The question hung in the air, heavy and unyielding. Rory swallowed hard, the memories flooding back—Evan’s anger, the feeling of being trapped, the nights spent in fear. “I want to let go of the fear. The feeling that I’m always looking over my shoulder.” “Then you need to confront it.” Silas’s voice held a quiet strength. “Face it head-on. You’re stronger than you think.” “I don’t feel strong.” She shook her head, frustration bubbling to the surface. “I feel lost.” “Lost is just a place on the map.” He gestured to the old maps on the wall, their edges frayed and worn. “You can find your way back.” Rory’s gaze followed his gesture, the maps telling stories of journeys taken and paths forged. “What if I don’t know where to go?” “Then start with what you do know.” Silas leaned back, his expression thoughtful. “What do you want?” “I want to feel safe.” The words slipped out before she could stop them, raw and unfiltered. “Then let’s work on that.” He smiled, a glimmer of hope in his eyes. “You’re not alone in this.” Rory felt a flicker of warmth in her chest, a small spark of possibility igniting within her. “I appreciate that, Si. I really do.” “Good.” He raised his glass again, a gesture of solidarity. “To new beginnings.” “To new beginnings.” She clinked her glass against his, the sound resonating like a promise. As they sipped their drinks, the conversation flowed, weaving through memories and laughter, the weight of the past slowly lifting. The bar buzzed around them, but in that moment, it felt like they were the only two people in the world.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
9.52% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"Silas leaned back [back]"
1"He chuckled softly [softly]"
2"He gestured around [around]"
3"Silas’s eyes narrowed slightly [slightly]"
4"He leaned back [back]"
5"Silas leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.476
leniency0.952
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.19
76.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1059
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1059
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"practiced ease"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"racing"
count1
5
word"apprehension"
count1
6
word"weight"
count3
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count2
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count3
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"tracing"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanning"
2"practiced ease"
3"familiar"
4"racing"
5"apprehension"
6"weight"
7"echoed"
8"warmth"
9"chill"
10"flicker"
11"whisper"
12"tracing"
13"unspoken"
14"tension"
15"raced"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
3
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"the weight of his words"
2"hung in the air"
3"a glimmer of hope"
93.55% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences53
matches
0"t in fear"
1"a flicker of warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1055
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount643
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.71
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory9
Silas11
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.645
windowScore0.667
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like they were the only two people"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.948
wordCount1055
matches
0"not what I imagined, but it pays the bills"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean23.98
std12.23
cv0.51
sampleLengths
087
125
231
323
431
523
629
715
833
911
1025
1117
1220
1331
1417
1519
1612
1719
1816
1922
2036
2111
2222
2322
2434
2518
2614
2729
2820
2923
3023
3120
3244
3320
3416
3528
3623
3717
3817
3919
4024
4113
4215
4341
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"being trapped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs111
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences86
ratio0.012
matches
0"Rory swallowed hard, the memories flooding back—Evan’s anger, the feeling of being trapped, the nights spent in fear."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount646
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02786377708978328
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007739938080495356
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean12.27
std5.74
cv0.468
sampleLengths
020
122
218
327
49
516
613
718
817
96
1024
117
1219
134
1414
1515
1612
173
188
1925
2011
218
2217
2317
2413
257
2618
2713
2811
296
3012
317
3212
3317
342
3512
364
3713
389
3911
4025
413
428
4311
4411
4513
469
4717
4817
4911
65.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4186046511627907
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences53
matches
0"He caught sight of Rory"
1"He set the glass down"
2"she replied, her voice steady"
3"She stepped closer, the familiar"
4"she said, glancing around the"
5"He gestured toward a vacant"
6"She followed him, her heart"
7"They settled into the worn"
8"she echoed, raising her glass"
9"He chuckled softly, but the"
10"She shifted in her seat,"
11"He gestured around the bar,"
12"She crossed her arms, a"
13"He leaned forward, his voice"
14"She looked away, tracing the"
15"He studied her, the lines"
16"She forced a smile, but"
17"He leaned back, his gaze"
18"She met his eyes, the"
19"He paused, his expression shifting"
ratio0.509
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences53
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"Silas stood behind the counter,"
2"He caught sight of Rory"
3"Silas called, a smile breaking"
4"He set the glass down"
5"she replied, her voice steady"
6"She stepped closer, the familiar"
7"Silas studied her, noting the"
8"she said, glancing around the"
9"He gestured toward a vacant"
10"She followed him, her heart"
11"They settled into the worn"
12"Silas poured two glasses of"
13"she echoed, raising her glass"
14"The warmth of the whiskey"
15"Silas leaned back, his expression"
16"Rory hesitated, the words caught"
17"He chuckled softly, but the"
18"She shifted in her seat,"
19"He gestured around the bar,"
ratio0.962
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The warmth of the whiskey spread through her, but it couldn’t chase away the chill of memories that lingered in the back of her mind."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount17
matches
0"Silas called, a smile breaking across his face"
1"she replied, her voice steady but laced with a hint of nostalgia"
2"She followed, her heart racing with a mix of excitement and apprehension"
3"Silas leaned back, his expression curious yet cautious"
4"She shifted, the leather creaking beneath her"
5"He gestured around, his gaze drifting to the patrons"
6"Silas’s eyes narrowed slightly, a flicker of concern crossing his face"
7"He leaned, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper"
8"He leaned back, his gaze steady"
9"He paused, his expression shifting"
10"She straightened, a flicker of defiance igniting within her"
11"Silas’s tone softened, a hint of encouragement lacing his words"
12"She shook, frustration bubbling to the surface"
13"Silas leaned back, his expression thoughtful"
14"He smiled, a glimmer of hope in his eyes"
15"He raised, a gesture of solidarity"
16"She clinked, the sound resonating like a promise"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He chuckled softly (chuckle)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.127
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.032
70.5916%