| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 78.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsms | 43 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "echo" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "quickened" | | 3 | "solitary" | | 4 | "otherworldly" | | 5 | "anticipation" | | 6 | "throbbed" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "surreal" | | 9 | "sentinel" | | 10 | "trepidation" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "fleeting" | | 14 | "determined" | | 15 | "navigated" | | 16 | "chill" | | 17 | "quivered" | | 18 | "down her spine" | | 19 | "comforting" | | 20 | "whisper" | | 21 | "scanning" | | 22 | "pulsed" | | 23 | "sense of" | | 24 | "foreboding" | | 25 | "amidst" | | 26 | "gloom" | | 27 | "measured" | | 28 | "electric" | | 29 | "reverberated" | | 30 | "apprehension" | | 31 | "fractured" | | 32 | "shattered" | | 33 | "chilling" | | 34 | "depths" | | 35 | "delve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1131 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1107 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Eva | 1 | | Silence | 2 | | Laila | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Silence" | | 5 | "Laila" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 79.58% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if refusing to settle upon her skin" | | 1 | "as if welcoming an old acquaintance who had stumbled upon its doorway once more" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.83% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 49.17 | | std | 14.4 | | cv | 0.293 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 60 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 71 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 61 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 187 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.107 | | matches | | 0 | "To Rory, it seemed as if the whole world was holding its breath, listening—watching." | | 1 | "Another sound—a faint rustling, too deliberate to be mere wind." | | 2 | "She became acutely aware of the silence again, now deafening without the comforting crunch of leaves—and then of something else." | | 3 | "Behind her, a whisper—a voice?—barely audible, woven with the grove's enchantment." | | 4 | "The sound came again, like soft footsteps behind her—closer this time." | | 5 | "A creeping apprehension kept her from breathing—or dared her to breathe more deeply, as if the air itself could be scarce." | | 6 | "And then, a sound—a distinct sigh or growl—arose, forming words she recognized: \"Malphora, you seek... you search...\" Her given name, but warped, fractured like a memory that was never entirely hers." | | 7 | "As the laughter faded, a silhouette materialised on the very edge of sight—a form detached from the substantial, woven from shadows and starlight." |
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| 99.91% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1122 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.040106951871657755 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011586452762923352 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 15.08 | | std | 6.21 | | cv | 0.412 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 53.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.36 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 46.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, without warning, it shattered" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 75.56% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Her pulse quickened, each heartbeat" | | 1 | "She halted mid-step, adrenaline slicing" | | 2 | "It had led her true" | | 3 | "She squinted, peering into the" | | 4 | "Her footsteps crunched through the" | | 5 | "Her eyes darted toward the" | | 6 | "She pressed her lips together," | | 7 | "It was not the first" | | 8 | "She brushed a finger over" | | 9 | "Her fingers flexed, a surge" | | 10 | "Her breath found a fragment" | | 11 | "She reached for the pendant," | | 12 | "She skirted the towering stone" | | 13 | "She became acutely aware of" | | 14 | "She couldn't catch the words," | | 15 | "She spun around, eyes scanning" | | 16 | "She exhaled sharply, forcing a" | | 17 | "She approached the centre, the" | | 18 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 19 | "Her voice sounded feeble, dissipating" |
| | ratio | 0.361 | |
| 57.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter realised she was" | | 1 | "Her pulse quickened, each heartbeat" | | 2 | "She halted mid-step, adrenaline slicing" | | 3 | "Instinct urged her to turn" | | 4 | "The Fae Grove waited, its" | | 5 | "Rory had ventured into Richmond" | | 6 | "The crimson pendant throbbed like" | | 7 | "It had led her true" | | 8 | "She squinted, peering into the" | | 9 | "The air prickled with an" | | 10 | "The moon hung in the" | | 11 | "Rory's breath misted as she" | | 12 | "Her footsteps crunched through the" | | 13 | "Silence reigned aside from the" | | 14 | "Her eyes darted toward the" | | 15 | "She pressed her lips together," | | 16 | "It was not the first" | | 17 | "She brushed a finger over" | | 18 | "Rory could almost hear Eva's" | | 19 | "Another sound—a faint rustling, too" |
| | ratio | 0.806 | |
| 69.44% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 33.90% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Despite the dimness closing around her, the wildflowers surrounding her feet seemed to gleam with an internal luminescence, casting surreal flickers of light th…" | | 1 | "The air prickled with an undercurrent of strangeness, as if refusing to settle upon her skin." | | 2 | "To Rory, it seemed as if the whole world was holding its breath, listening—watching." | | 3 | "Her eyes darted toward the periphery of her vision, catching the fleeting impression of movement: a shadow slipping behind a tree, a figment conjured by nerves,…" | | 4 | "She couldn't catch the words, just a fragment of melody that teased her ear." | | 5 | "The pendant pulsed, tugging at her senses, leading her toward a particular spot amongst the trees." | | 6 | "She approached the centre, the pendant's glow intensifying, casting blood-red hues amidst the silvery gloom." | | 7 | "It glowed faintly whenever she disturbed the ground, the ancient script sparking in response as if welcoming an old acquaintance who had stumbled upon its doorw…" | | 8 | "A creeping apprehension kept her from breathing—or dared her to breathe more deeply, as if the air itself could be scarce." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she commanded, voice firming with a sudden surge of defiance" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |