Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR80VH6ZZX9SM1DA18SDFK

Run Details

Duration:
40.7s
Cost:
$0.021263
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter realised she was not alone when the echo of a twig snapping pierced the eerie calm. Her pulse quickened, each heartbeat resonating in her ears like a war drum playing a grim, solitary tune. She halted mid-step, adrenaline slicing through her composure. Instinct urged her to turn back or perhaps run, but she forced herself to stand firm. The Fae Grove waited, its otherworldly presence pulsing with anticipation just ahead. Rory had ventured into Richmond Park with a singular purpose: to locate the Heartstone Pendant's peculiar connection to something unseen, yet powerful. The crimson pendant throbbed like a second heartbeat against her chest, thrumming in time with the grove's subtle energy. It had led her true so far, the subtle warmth against her collarbone a constant guide toward the grove’s hidden entrance. She squinted, peering into the shadows beyond the ancient oak markers lining the grove's boundary. Despite the dimness closing around her, the wildflowers surrounding her feet seemed to gleam with an internal luminescence, casting surreal flickers of light that danced with her every move. The air prickled with an undercurrent of strangeness, as if refusing to settle upon her skin. The moon hung in the sky like a silent sentinel, casting pallid beams through the skeletal tree branches that gnarled the grove's clearing. Rory's breath misted as she adjusted the thin leather strap of her courier bag and pressed onward, curiosity and trepidation intertwining like old friends. Her footsteps crunched through the crisp carpet of leaves, each sound magnified in the otherwise breathless night. Silence reigned aside from the leaves, though it felt brittle. To Rory, it seemed as if the whole world was holding its breath, listening—watching. Her eyes darted toward the periphery of her vision, catching the fleeting impression of movement: a shadow slipping behind a tree, a figment conjured by nerves, perhaps. Or something else. She pressed her lips together, a determined line. It was not the first time she had navigated peculiar situations. She brushed a finger over the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, seeking comfort in memories of past resilience. Rory could almost hear Eva's voice, urging her not to back down, to face whatever challenges awaited head-on. Another sound—a faint rustling, too deliberate to be mere wind. Her fingers flexed, a surge of instinctive readiness sharpening her senses. But when she turned, there was nothing. Nothing but shadows cast long and deep across the grove’s floor. Her breath found a fragment of ease, shifting in her lungs, but it was short-lived. Building unease clung to her, a shadow within shadows. A chill descended over the grove, as if a veil between two worlds had momentarily quivered. Rory shook off a shiver, the sensation crawling down her spine. She reached for the pendant, curling her fingers around its crimson stone, determined to finish what she had come for. She skirted the towering stone pillars marking the grove's entrance and slipped inside, where time itself twisted and bent in curious arcs. The strangeness intensified, with the pendant's warmth growing stronger, urging her deeper. Rory's foot caught the edge of a protruding root, and she stumbled, landing awkwardly on one knee. She became acutely aware of the silence again, now deafening without the comforting crunch of leaves—and then of something else. Behind her, a whisper—a voice?—barely audible, woven with the grove's enchantment. She couldn't catch the words, just a fragment of melody that teased her ear. She spun around, eyes scanning the clearing, but it lay empty, save for the ancient trees and riotous blooms swaying under an invisible breath. No footprints in the loamy ground except her own. She exhaled sharply, forcing a shaky laugh that fell flat. "Steady on, Rory. Just a grove. Nothing dangerous about a few flowers and stones." The grove answered with a breeze that prickled her skin. The pendant pulsed, tugging at her senses, leading her toward a particular spot amongst the trees. The ground dipped there, ringed with stones and overgrown with tangled vines. Rory hesitated. A sense of gentle foreboding tugged her, as though the very earth held its breath. She approached the centre, the pendant's glow intensifying, casting blood-red hues amidst the silvery gloom. The sound came again, like soft footsteps behind her—closer this time. She tightened her grip on the chain, heart pattering against her ribs. "Hello?" Her voice sounded feeble, dissipating like smoke in the predawn air. Still nothing. No answer, no acknowledgement of her presence from anything human or otherwise. She inhaled slowly, each breath a measured step against the tight coil of something electric that hummed beneath her skin. The air felt thicker here, brimming with latent energy, more alive than any patch of woodland had a right to be. Rory edged forward carefully, the ground subtly shifting underfoot. The grove’s heartbeat synced with her own, an erratic duet. She knelt, one hand brushing away leaves from a rune inscribed circle. It glowed faintly whenever she disturbed the ground, the ancient script sparking in response as if welcoming an old acquaintance who had stumbled upon its doorway once more. Her touch reverberated through the clearing. A creeping apprehension kept her from breathing—or dared her to breathe more deeply, as if the air itself could be scarce. At that moment, the clearing seemed to breathe around her, exhaling stories untold, secrets once hidden within the earth's embrace. And then, a sound—a distinct sigh or growl—arose, forming words she recognized: "Malphora, you seek... you search..." Her given name, but warped, fractured like a memory that was never entirely hers. Rory's skin crawled, riddled with the prickling discomfort of being watched by unseen eyes. But she couldn’t turn away now, not with the pendant throbbing in alignment with each quivering syllable emanated from the grove’s core. "Who’s there?" Her voice was a whisper lost to the phantom wind. Silence bore down again, weighted, significant. Then, without warning, it shattered with a spine-chilling cackle that rose, unbidden, from the depths of the darkness. The sound itself a beckoning, an invitation to delve deeper into shadows. Rory’s blood ran cold, her breath hitching in a gasp. As the laughter faded, a silhouette materialised on the very edge of sight—a form detached from the substantial, woven from shadows and starlight. “Reveal yourself,” she commanded, voice firming with a sudden surge of defiance. But the only answer was a soft rustle, like leaves whispering secrets centuries old. The grove coalesced into focus, the world narrowing to the ancient circle at her feet, where secrets writhed beneath the surface waiting to swallow her whole. Aurora Carter, Laila in darkened moments, knew one undeniable truth: she was not alone. The grove pulsed with silent spectres of what was, or what might be, unfolding her into its silent machinations without end.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"very"
2"slowly"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsms43
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"solitary"
count1
4
word"otherworldly"
count1
5
word"anticipation"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"surreal"
count1
9
word"sentinel"
count1
10
word"trepidation"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count2
12
word"silence"
count3
13
word"fleeting"
count1
14
word"determined"
count2
15
word"navigated"
count1
16
word"chill"
count1
17
word"quivered"
count1
18
word"down her spine"
count1
19
word"comforting"
count1
20
word"whisper"
count2
21
word"scanning"
count1
22
word"pulsed"
count2
23
word"sense of"
count1
24
word"foreboding"
count1
25
word"amidst"
count1
26
word"gloom"
count1
27
word"measured"
count1
28
word"electric"
count1
29
word"reverberated"
count1
30
word"apprehension"
count1
31
word"fractured"
count1
32
word"shattered"
count1
33
word"chilling"
count1
34
word"depths"
count1
35
word"delve"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"pulse"
2"quickened"
3"solitary"
4"otherworldly"
5"anticipation"
6"throbbed"
7"warmth"
8"surreal"
9"sentinel"
10"trepidation"
11"footsteps"
12"silence"
13"fleeting"
14"determined"
15"navigated"
16"chill"
17"quivered"
18"down her spine"
19"comforting"
20"whisper"
21"scanning"
22"pulsed"
23"sense of"
24"foreboding"
25"amidst"
26"gloom"
27"measured"
28"electric"
29"reverberated"
30"apprehension"
31"fractured"
32"shattered"
33"chilling"
34"depths"
35"delve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences74
matches
0"g with anticipation"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1131
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1107
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter2
Fae1
Grove1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory10
Eva1
Silence2
Laila1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Silence"
5"Laila"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
79.58% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if refusing to settle upon her skin"
1"as if welcoming an old acquaintance who had stumbled upon its doorway once more"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1131
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
40.83% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean49.17
std14.4
cv0.293
sampleLengths
072
162
260
364
454
555
663
747
871
958
1024
1155
1238
1326
1441
1559
1647
1731
1836
1948
2033
2126
2261
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"being watched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs187
matches
0"was holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences75
ratio0.107
matches
0"To Rory, it seemed as if the whole world was holding its breath, listening—watching."
1"Another sound—a faint rustling, too deliberate to be mere wind."
2"She became acutely aware of the silence again, now deafening without the comforting crunch of leaves—and then of something else."
3"Behind her, a whisper—a voice?—barely audible, woven with the grove's enchantment."
4"The sound came again, like soft footsteps behind her—closer this time."
5"A creeping apprehension kept her from breathing—or dared her to breathe more deeply, as if the air itself could be scarce."
6"And then, a sound—a distinct sigh or growl—arose, forming words she recognized: \"Malphora, you seek... you search...\" Her given name, but warped, fractured like a memory that was never entirely hers."
7"As the laughter faded, a silhouette materialised on the very edge of sight—a form detached from the substantial, woven from shadows and starlight."
99.91% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1122
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.040106951871657755
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.011586452762923352
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean15.08
std6.21
cv0.412
sampleLengths
018
118
28
316
412
522
619
721
815
929
1016
1123
1224
1317
1410
1514
1627
173
188
1911
2018
2118
2210
2311
247
2511
2615
279
2816
2911
3020
3122
3212
3317
3420
3511
3614
3724
389
3910
4014
4110
4216
4312
442
4515
4615
4711
4812
4912
53.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners27
46.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Then, without warning, it shattered"
ratio0.014
75.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences72
matches
0"Her pulse quickened, each heartbeat"
1"She halted mid-step, adrenaline slicing"
2"It had led her true"
3"She squinted, peering into the"
4"Her footsteps crunched through the"
5"Her eyes darted toward the"
6"She pressed her lips together,"
7"It was not the first"
8"She brushed a finger over"
9"Her fingers flexed, a surge"
10"Her breath found a fragment"
11"She reached for the pendant,"
12"She skirted the towering stone"
13"She became acutely aware of"
14"She couldn't catch the words,"
15"She spun around, eyes scanning"
16"She exhaled sharply, forcing a"
17"She approached the centre, the"
18"She tightened her grip on"
19"Her voice sounded feeble, dissipating"
ratio0.361
57.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences72
matches
0"Aurora Carter realised she was"
1"Her pulse quickened, each heartbeat"
2"She halted mid-step, adrenaline slicing"
3"Instinct urged her to turn"
4"The Fae Grove waited, its"
5"Rory had ventured into Richmond"
6"The crimson pendant throbbed like"
7"It had led her true"
8"She squinted, peering into the"
9"The air prickled with an"
10"The moon hung in the"
11"Rory's breath misted as she"
12"Her footsteps crunched through the"
13"Silence reigned aside from the"
14"Her eyes darted toward the"
15"She pressed her lips together,"
16"It was not the first"
17"She brushed a finger over"
18"Rory could almost hear Eva's"
19"Another sound—a faint rustling, too"
ratio0.806
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"To Rory, it seemed as"
ratio0.014
33.90% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Despite the dimness closing around her, the wildflowers surrounding her feet seemed to gleam with an internal luminescence, casting surreal flickers of light th…"
1"The air prickled with an undercurrent of strangeness, as if refusing to settle upon her skin."
2"To Rory, it seemed as if the whole world was holding its breath, listening—watching."
3"Her eyes darted toward the periphery of her vision, catching the fleeting impression of movement: a shadow slipping behind a tree, a figment conjured by nerves,…"
4"She couldn't catch the words, just a fragment of melody that teased her ear."
5"The pendant pulsed, tugging at her senses, leading her toward a particular spot amongst the trees."
6"She approached the centre, the pendant's glow intensifying, casting blood-red hues amidst the silvery gloom."
7"It glowed faintly whenever she disturbed the ground, the ancient script sparking in response as if welcoming an old acquaintance who had stumbled upon its doorw…"
8"A creeping apprehension kept her from breathing—or dared her to breathe more deeply, as if the air itself could be scarce."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she commanded, voice firming with a sudden surge of defiance"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.8083%