Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR886KW1C366PN4VJ4C2S4

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the heart of Soho, where neon lights cast their glow on cobblestones slick with rain, stood The Raven's Nest. The distinctive green sign buzzed softly, casting a glow that danced with the raindrops. Inside, the air was thick with the scent of aged wood and the hum of quiet conversation. The walls, papered with old maps and black-and-white photographs, seemed to whisper tales of the city's past. Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner, was wiping the counter with a cloth that had seen better days. His grey-streaked auburn hair, neatly trimmed, matched his beard. His left leg bore the weight of his body with a slight limp, a memento from his days in the service. His right hand, as always, bore the silver signet ring, a relic from his past life. The bell above the door chimed, a sound that barely registered in the hum of the bar. But Silas looked up, his hazel eyes meeting those of the woman who had just entered. His brow furrowed, recognition flickering across his face. He hadn't seen her in years, not since she'd left Cardiff, leaving behind a trail of whispers and unanswered questions. Aurora Carter, or Rory as she was known to her friends, stepped into the bar. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair was damp from the rain, clinging to her face and neck. Her bright blue eyes scanned the room, landing on Silas. She offered him a small smile, her eyes crinkling at the corners. "Silas," she said, her voice barely above a whisper, yet it carried across the room, reaching him like an arrow finding its mark. Silas nodded, a slow movement that seemed to acknowledge more than just her presence. "Rory," he replied, his voice steady, giving nothing away. He gestured to the bar, an unspoken invitation. She walked towards him, her steps measured, her eyes never leaving his face. She slid onto a stool, her small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catching the light. Silas noticed it, his gaze lingering on the mark before he turned away to pour her a drink. He knew the story behind that scar, just as he knew the stories behind the lines that had begun to etch themselves around her eyes, the ones that spoke of laughter and tears, of joy and sorrow. He placed the drink in front of her, a glass of red wine, the exact shade of her lips when they were flushed with cold or passion. She wrapped her fingers around the stem of the glass, her nails short and unpolished, a far cry from the perfectly manicured hands he remembered. "You've changed," he said, his voice low, a statement rather than a question. Rory looked at him, her eyes meeting his gaze head-on. "Haven't we all, Silas?" she replied, her voice steady, a challenge in her tone. Silas leaned against the counter, his hands gripping the edge. "Some more than others," he said, his gaze never leaving her face. "What brings you to London, Rory?" She took a sip of her wine, her eyes never leaving his. "I could ask you the same thing, Silas," she said, her voice soft, a hint of a smile playing on her lips. "Last I heard, you were still in the game, running around the globe, playing spy." Silas chuckled, a low sound that seemed to rumble in his chest. "And last I heard, you were still in Cardiff, causing trouble with your friends, making your father pull his hair out." Rory laughed, a sound that was both familiar and foreign to Silas. It was the same laugh he remembered, the one that could light up a room, yet there was a hardness to it now, a sharp edge that hadn't been there before. "I did leave quite the impression, didn't I?" she said, her eyes gleaming with a mischief that was both comforting and unsettling to Silas. Silas nodded, a small smile playing on his lips. "You did indeed," he said, his voice soft. "But you didn't answer my question, Rory. What brings you to London?" Rory took a deep breath, her eyes flickering away from his for a moment before she met his gaze again. "I needed a change," she said, her voice steady. "I needed to get away from... from everything." Silas nodded, understanding more than she was saying. He knew about the abusive ex, the one she'd left behind in Cardiff. He knew about the whispers, the looks, the pitying glances. He knew because he'd seen it all before, in the eyes of the people he'd helped, the ones he'd failed. "And you?" Rory asked, her voice soft, a hint of vulnerability in her eyes. "Why are you here, Silas? Why aren't you still out there, playing spy, saving the world?" Silas looked at her, his eyes reflecting the dim light of the bar. "I got tired of the game, Rory," he said, his voice low. "I got tired of the lies, the secrets, the constant looking over my shoulder." Rory nodded, her eyes never leaving his face. "I can understand that," she said, her voice soft. "I got tired of the lies too, the ones I told myself, the ones I told others." Silas looked at her, his gaze intense, probing. "And what lies are those, Rory?" he asked, his voice steady, a challenge in his tone. Rory looked at him, her eyes meeting his gaze head-on. "The ones that said I was happy, that said I was living the life I wanted, that said I was the person I wanted to be," she said, her voice steady, a hint of pain in her eyes. Silas nodded, his gaze never leaving her face. "And who do you want to be, Rory?" he asked, his voice soft, a hint of concern in his eyes. Rory took a deep breath, her eyes flickering away from his for a moment before she met his gaze again. "I want to be the person I was before," she said, her voice steady, a hint of longing in her eyes. "The one who wasn't afraid to take risks, to make mistakes, to live." Silas looked at her, his gaze intense, understanding. "But that person is still here, Rory," he said, his voice soft, a hint of conviction in his eyes. "She's just been buried under layers of fear and regret. But she's still here, waiting to be found." Rory looked at him, her eyes reflecting the dim light of the bar, a hint of hope in their depths. "Do you really believe that, Silas?" she asked, her voice soft, a hint of vulnerability in her eyes. Silas nodded, his gaze never leaving her face. "I do, Rory," he said, his voice steady, a hint of conviction in his eyes. "I've seen it before, people who thought they were lost, who thought they were beyond redemption. But they weren't. They just needed someone to help them find their way back." Rory looked at him, her eyes reflecting the dim light of the bar, a hint of gratitude in their depths. "And will you help me, Silas?" she asked, her voice soft, a hint of hope in her eyes. Silas looked at her, his gaze intense, probing. "I'll do my best, Rory," he said, his voice steady, a hint of determination in his eyes. "But you have to want it too, Rory. You have to be willing to fight for it, to claw your way back from the darkness." Rory nodded, her eyes meeting his gaze head-on. "I am, Silas," she said, her voice steady, a hint of determination in her eyes. "I am willing to fight for it, to claw my way back from the darkness." Silas looked at her, his gaze reflecting the dim light of the bar, a hint of pride in his eyes. "Then we'll do it together, Rory," he said, his voice soft, a hint of conviction in his eyes. "We'll find our way back, together." The bell above the door chimed again, the sound breaking the spell that had fallen over them. Rory looked away, her gaze flickering towards the door before she turned back to Silas. "I should go," she said, her voice soft, a hint of reluctance in her eyes. Silas nodded, his gaze never leaving her face. "But you'll come back, won't you, Rory?" he asked, his voice soft, a hint of hope in his eyes. Rory looked at him, her eyes meeting his gaze head-on. "I will, Silas," she said, her voice steady, a hint of conviction in her eyes. "I will come back." She slid off the stool, her movements measured, her eyes never leaving his face. She walked towards the door, her steps steady, her back straight. She paused at the door, her hand on the handle, looking back at Silas. "Thank you, Silas," she said, her voice soft, a hint of gratitude in her eyes. Silas looked at her, his gaze reflecting the dim light of the bar, a hint of pride in his eyes. "You're welcome, Rory," he said, his voice soft, a hint of conviction in his eyes. "But remember, this is just the beginning. The hard part is still to come." Rory nodded, a small smile playing on her lips. "I know, Silas," she said, her voice soft, a hint of determination in her eyes. "But I'm ready for it. I'm ready to fight." With that, she opened the door, the bell chiming softly as she stepped out into the rain. Silas watched her go, his gaze reflecting the dim light of the bar, a hint of determination in his eyes. He knew the road ahead was long and difficult, but he also knew that Rory was ready to walk it. And he would be there, every step of the way, helping her find her way back to the person she was meant to be.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.63
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1658
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"perfectly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1658
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"whisper"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"furrowed"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"measured"
count2
6
word"etch"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"depths"
count2
highlights
0"whisper"
1"weight"
2"furrowed"
3"scanned"
4"unspoken"
5"measured"
6"etch"
7"familiar"
8"gleaming"
9"comforting"
10"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
95.76% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1649
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
58.07% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1251
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.84
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Blackwood1
Silas23
Cardiff2
Carter1
Rory15
persons
0"Raven"
1"Blackwood"
2"Silas"
3"Carter"
4"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.581
windowScore0.667
92.53% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"movement that seemed to acknowledge more than just her presence"
1"sound that seemed to rumble in his chest"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1649
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"knew that Rory"
58.32% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean43.39
std15.37
cv0.354
sampleLengths
068
163
261
376
444
571
652
713
824
928
1049
1133
1243
1324
1429
1537
1651
1730
1839
1934
2024
2148
2228
2354
2445
2538
2653
2738
2850
2938
3044
3147
3227
3329
3454
3549
3633
3781
93.70% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences91
matches
0"was known"
1"were flushed"
2"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was wiping"
1"was saying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences108
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1260
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.018253968253968255
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004761904761904762
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean15.27
std6.13
cv0.401
sampleLengths
020
114
217
317
417
59
621
716
817
916
108
1120
1215
1316
1410
1512
1623
1714
189
198
2013
2116
2218
2337
2427
2525
2613
2710
2814
2910
3012
316
3212
3322
3415
3512
3621
3712
3831
3924
409
418
4212
4320
449
458
468
4713
4810
4920
35.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.23148148148148148
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences91
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn hair, neatly"
1"His left leg bore the"
2"His right hand, as always,"
3"His brow furrowed, recognition flickering"
4"He hadn't seen her in"
5"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
6"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
7"She offered him a small"
8"she said, her voice barely"
9"he replied, his voice steady,"
10"He gestured to the bar,"
11"She walked towards him, her"
12"She slid onto a stool,"
13"He knew the story behind"
14"He placed the drink in"
15"She wrapped her fingers around"
16"he said, his voice low,"
17"she replied, her voice steady,"
18"he said, his gaze never"
19"She took a sip of"
ratio0.56
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences91
matches
0"The distinctive green sign buzzed"
1"The walls, papered with old"
2"Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner,"
3"His grey-streaked auburn hair, neatly"
4"His left leg bore the"
5"His right hand, as always,"
6"The bell above the door"
7"His brow furrowed, recognition flickering"
8"He hadn't seen her in"
9"Aurora Carter, or Rory as"
10"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
11"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
12"She offered him a small"
13"she said, her voice barely"
14"Silas nodded, a slow movement"
15"he replied, his voice steady,"
16"He gestured to the bar,"
17"She walked towards him, her"
18"She slid onto a stool,"
19"Silas noticed it, his gaze"
ratio0.945
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The distinctive green sign buzzed softly, casting a glow that danced with the raindrops."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount25
matches
0"he replied, his voice steady, giving nothing away"
1"he said, his voice low, a statement rather than a question"
2"she replied, her voice steady, a challenge in her tone"
3"he said, his voice soft"
4"she said, her voice steady"
5"Rory asked, her voice soft, a hint of vulnerability in her eyes"
6"he said, his voice low"
7"she said, her voice soft"
8"he asked, his voice steady, a challenge in his tone"
9"she said, her voice steady, a hint of pain in her eyes"
10"he asked, his voice soft, a hint of concern in his eyes"
11"she said, her voice steady, a hint of longing in her eyes"
12"he said, his voice soft, a hint of conviction in his eyes"
13"she asked, her voice soft, a hint of vulnerability in her eyes"
14"he said, his voice steady, a hint of conviction in his eyes"
15"she asked, her voice soft, a hint of hope in her eyes"
16"he said, his voice steady, a hint of determination in his eyes"
17"she said, her voice steady, a hint of determination in her eyes"
18"he said, his voice soft, a hint of conviction in his eyes"
19"she said, her voice soft, a hint of reluctance in her eyes"
20"he asked, his voice soft, a hint of hope in his eyes"
21"she said, her voice steady, a hint of conviction in her eyes"
22"she said, her voice soft, a hint of gratitude in her eyes"
23"he said, his voice soft, a hint of conviction in his eyes"
24"she said, her voice soft, a hint of determination in her eyes"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags29
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.63
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.6755%