Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR8C5EJEJFQK74V1FRV681

Run Details

Duration:
26.7s
Cost:
$0.018884
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
He stepped across the threshold before I could decide whether to slam the door. Rain trickled off his charcoal suit onto my threadbare rug, and the hallway smelled of damp concrete and ancient curry spoons. I narrowed my bright blue eyes. The door closed somewhere behind me with a dull click, but my fingers pressed the frame, ready to wrench it open again. “Lucien.” My voice stayed calm. Betrayal tasted coppery in my mouth. He bowed once, head dipping so that his slicked-back blond hair caught the lamplight. One amber eye flicked over the worn runner, the other dark as spilled ink. “Aurora.” His tone remained effortless, as if he’d wandered into a gallery rather than barged into my life unannounced. “May I come in?” I released the doorframe and shot aside. “Why?” The tabby cat, Ptolemy, hissed from the edge of Eva’s threshold as if he recognised danger. He paused in the narrow entry, cane in hand, ivory handle glinting. His suit jacket hung slightly open, revealing a slim blade concealed in the lining. I clenched my fingers against the chipped plaster. “Do you have the courtesy to announce yourself, or did courtesy die on your side of the Channel?” He stepped forward, placing a single polished shoe on my scuffed wooden floor. He drew in a measured breath. “I apologise for the intrusion.” His British accent carried a faint French inflection. “I have nowhere else to go.” The words sounded rehearsed, as if he’d memorised them for some gala. I crossed my arms. “I offered you refuge once. You left me standing in a gravel car park at dawn.” A flicker of pain darkened his amber eye. I had seen it before—when he spared me a half-truth, when he vanished without explanation. “I wasn’t myself.” His gaze traced the peeling wallpaper. “There are matters I needed to resolve.” I suppressed a laugh. “Matters.” He’d always had a talent for understatement. “And now you resolve them here?” He placed his cane against the wall, then crossed to where my notebooks and scrolls overflowed from every surface. He lifted one carefully, as though it contained a lost masterpiece. “You’ve been busy.” He traced a doodle in the margin with a fingertip. “Research, runes. You never stop.” I stepped forward, blood pulsing in my ears. “I need no lecture from a man who treats loyalty like a broken clock.” I snatched the notebook away. He leaned back, lips curved. “You wound me, Rory.” My breath caught. He’d always called me Rory when he let down his guard. The word felt like both a caress and a razor. “How long do you intend to stay?” I asked, voice low. I guided him into the cramped living room, past Ptolemy’s prickle of fur. He surveyed the one-bedroom flat above the curry house, every surface crowded with books and parchments. A scrawl-covered table stood opposite a battered armchair. A single bare bulb swung overhead. “I hope only until you hear me out.” He straightened his shoulders. “Something’s coming.” My heart thudded, an unwelcome rhythm. “Is that so?” I sat on the edge of the armchair, leaning forward. “Care to elaborate?” He moved to the windowsill where rain rattled against the glass. He absorbed the patter as if it held secrets. “Avaros,” he said softly. “They know of me now.” I snapped a pen cap, studs of frustration biting into my palm. “Avaros? The realm of your father’s making?” He nodded. The motion was stiff, unnatural. “There’s a storm gathering on both sides of the Veil. I thought keeping you out of it would be safer.” “You thought wrong.” I stood and paced. My scar itched. “Everything fell apart because of you.” His lip twitched. The corner of his mouth betrayed tenderness. “You left just as I wired those funds to your account.” I halted, glare steady. “Don’t pretend generosity excuses silence.” He folded his arms. Then he stepped off the sill so suddenly that the bulb swung, casting shadows across his face. “I couldn’t risk you getting hurt. Not when my world collapsed.” My chest tightened. “Then why risk showing up now? You broke our pact. If there was danger—if there still is—you should have stayed away.” He gave me a deliberate look. “I’m here because you’re safe. And because I need you.” “I need you,” I repeated. The words tasted like ash. “You needed me when we parted. And I needed answers.” He approached again. Close now, I felt the whisper of demon heat radiating from him. Not enough to scorch, but enough to prick every nerve. “You always made me think.” He bent his head. His amber eye caught the light. “You taught me hope.” Ptolemy hopped onto the table, swiping his claws at a rolled-up parchment. Lucien smiled faintly and stroked the cat’s head. “Ptolemy remembers me.” His gaze met mine. “You should too.” I felt tears where I refused to cry. His scent—old tobacco, rain-soaked leather—pulled me sideways. I swallowed. “Why would he remember me?” He shrugged as if the gesture were no more than a shrug should be. “I fed him. Before I left.” My knees weakened. I gripped the armchair—hard, until the wood dug into my palm. “You give a cat food but leave the person who loved you?” He ran a hand through his hair. “I was afraid. You had no place in my world and no right to know it.” “I’m human.” My voice shook with every suppressed emotion. “Fragile. I broke under smaller weight.” He knelt in front of me. Eyecolours shifting—amber, then black—captured the room’s meagre light. “You’re not fragile.” His hand hovered near my wrist scar, but didn’t touch. “You’re sharper than any blade.” I jerked my hand away. “Spare me the poetry.” He smiled again, a slow, rueful curve. “I’ve chosen my metaphors poorly.” Silence draped the flat. Rain hammered the windows. Ptolemy purred, oblivious to history. I paced again, each step a question. “You said something was coming.” He rose and retrieved his cane. The ivory handle gleamed with promise and peril. “Men with steel and stakes. Hunters of my kind.” He held up the cane so its concealed blade slid free. “They’re tracking me. If they find any trace of demon blood here, you die too.” My pulse kicked. Words refused to form. He folded the blade back into its shaft. “I’m sorry.” His voice dropped. “I won’t ask you to run. I’ll fight them.” “Don’t.” I reached for his coat sleeve. His skin felt warm under my trembling fingers. “I won’t stand by.” He froze, tension seeping into his shoulders. “Together, then.” I swallowed, nodded. “Together.” A sudden crash rattled the door. Keys jingled on the other side. He slid to the nearest window and peered down the narrow fire escape. The rain made the metal slick, but three forms in dark coats slid into view. Guns glinted in the orange glow of the streetlamp. He turned. One amber eye held urgency. “That’s them.” My heart thundered. All the rehearsed questions fled. I pulled a thick scroll from the table, unrolled it, and traced a crude sigil with my fingertip. Lucien drew his cane. “You’ve studied that.” I thrust it toward him. “Light it.” He cautioned, “Aurora—” “Do it!” I forced the syllables out. “Cast it.” He angled his cane toward the symbol. The blade inside ignited with emerald flame that coiled like smoke, then spilled across the floor. The rune glowed. Outside, the door rattled again. Panicked shouts. Iron met wood. He took my hand. The flame danced around us. His fingers felt incredible—stronger than heat. “Hold on.” “Never let me go,” I whispered. “Never.” He squeezed and turned back to the door. The lock splintered, the frames shook. Rain and gunmetal seeped through the gap. The emerald rune flared, then pulsed like a beating heart. He raised his cane, blade shining bright. “Open the door.” I exhaled, steadying every racing thought. “Open the door.” He gave me that one crooked half-smile I’d never forget. His sharpened gaze met mine. “Together,” he repeated. The door splintered inward. In the green light, we braced for the moment everything changed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He’d always [always]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.362
leniency0.725
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.058
85.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1376
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
2"softly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1376
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"effortless"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"traced"
count3
6
word"resolve"
count2
7
word"tenderness"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"peril"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"tension"
count1
14
word"thundered"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
16
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"effortless"
2"glinting"
3"measured"
4"flicker"
5"traced"
6"resolve"
7"tenderness"
8"silence"
9"whisper"
10"weight"
11"peril"
12"pulse"
13"tension"
14"thundered"
15"pulsed"
16"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences129
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1360
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount976
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.41
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Betrayal1
Ptolemy4
Eva1
British1
French1
Rory1
Rain3
persons
0"Betrayal"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Rain"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like both a caress and a razor"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.735
wordCount1360
matches
0"Not enough to scorch, but enough to prick every nerve"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
80.91% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean17.89
std7.75
cv0.433
sampleLengths
035
128
211
328
423
57
617
726
826
919
1019
1116
1216
1323
1416
1518
1630
1718
1827
199
2024
2124
2230
2314
2422
2520
269
2719
2827
2916
3021
319
3232
3324
3416
3520
3625
3719
3820
3910
4022
4120
4226
4323
4415
4514
4618
479
4812
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
59.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences172
ratio0.029
matches
0"I had seen it before—when he spared me a half-truth, when he vanished without explanation."
1"His scent—old tobacco, rain-soaked leather—pulled me sideways."
2"I gripped the armchair—hard, until the wood dug into my palm."
3"Eyecolours shifting—amber, then black—captured the room’s meagre light."
4"His fingers felt incredible—stronger than heat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount990
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03434343434343434
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005050505050505051
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean7.91
std4.77
cv0.604
sampleLengths
014
121
26
322
45
56
614
714
819
94
107
1117
1212
1314
148
1518
1613
176
1813
196
2012
214
2216
238
2415
259
267
274
288
296
3019
3111
3213
335
348
3519
365
374
383
3911
4010
4111
4213
4316
448
456
4612
472
486
4913
41.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.29651162790697677
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners51
27.55% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences121
matches
0"Then he stepped off the"
ratio0.008
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount80
totalSentences121
matches
0"He stepped across the threshold"
1"I narrowed my bright blue"
2"My voice stayed calm"
3"He bowed once, head dipping"
4"His tone remained effortless, as"
5"I released the doorframe and"
6"He paused in the narrow"
7"His suit jacket hung slightly"
8"I clenched my fingers against"
9"He stepped forward, placing a"
10"He drew in a measured"
11"His British accent carried a"
12"I crossed my arms."
13"I had seen it before—when"
14"His gaze traced the peeling"
15"I suppressed a laugh."
16"He’d always had a talent"
17"He placed his cane against"
18"He lifted one carefully, as"
19"He traced a doodle in"
ratio0.661
1.32% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount111
totalSentences121
matches
0"He stepped across the threshold"
1"Rain trickled off his charcoal"
2"I narrowed my bright blue"
3"The door closed somewhere behind"
4"My voice stayed calm"
5"Betrayal tasted coppery in my"
6"He bowed once, head dipping"
7"His tone remained effortless, as"
8"I released the doorframe and"
9"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, hissed"
10"He paused in the narrow"
11"His suit jacket hung slightly"
12"I clenched my fingers against"
13"He stepped forward, placing a"
14"He drew in a measured"
15"His British accent carried a"
16"The words sounded rehearsed, as"
17"I crossed my arms."
18"A flicker of pain darkened"
19"I had seen it before—when"
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He lifted one carefully, as though it contained a lost masterpiece."
85.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"His tone remained, as if he’d wandered into a gallery rather than barged into my life unannounced"
1"I asked, voice low"
92.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"The tabby cat Ptolemy hissed (hiss)"
1"I repeated (repeat)"
2"I whispered (whisper)"
3"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.087
leniency0.174
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.116
79.9211%