| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1354 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1354 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "sentinel" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "quivered" | | 8 | "flicked" | | 9 | "gloom" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "traced" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "scanned" | | 15 | "wavering" | | 16 | "beacon" | | 17 | "thundered" | | 18 | "raced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 183 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 184 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 19 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1347 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1345 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.89 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Aurora | 12 | | Torch | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Torch" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1347 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.62% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 37.42 | | std | 15.25 | | cv | 0.408 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 58 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 48 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 255 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 184 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "She wrenched the torch upward; a gout of light cascaded across the clearing." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1352 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay open, bare earth" | | 1 | "Thin, bone-coloured fingers" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.027366863905325445 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0029585798816568047 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 184 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 184 | | mean | 7.32 | | std | 3.83 | | cv | 0.523 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 47.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.31521739130434784 | | totalSentences | 184 | | uniqueOpeners | 58 | |
| 77.07% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "Even her own breath seemed" | | 1 | "Then a single distorted voice" | | 2 | "Soft, intimate, twisted." | | 3 | "Then something slid across the" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "Her pulse drummed through her" | | 1 | "She’d come for that warmth," | | 2 | "She forced her jaw to" | | 3 | "Her wrist brushed the small" | | 4 | "She shook her head, blinking." | | 5 | "She reached the grove’s centre." | | 6 | "Her pendant pulsed hotter." | | 7 | "She lifted it out on" | | 8 | "She dropped the pendant." | | 9 | "She bent for the pendant." | | 10 | "She stood and swept the" | | 11 | "She glanced up." | | 12 | "She swallowed, stepping closer." | | 13 | "Her eyes darted to the" | | 14 | "She flinched and swung the" | | 15 | "She spun, torch beam slicing" | | 16 | "She aimed pendant at that" | | 17 | "She felt each second pulse" | | 18 | "She pressed pendant to her" | | 19 | "She kicked out." |
| | ratio | 0.277 | |
| 29.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 149 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora crouched behind the nearest" | | 1 | "Her pulse drummed through her" | | 2 | "The clearing’s centre lay open," | | 3 | "Heartstone Pendant pressed warm against" | | 4 | "She’d come for that warmth," | | 5 | "Something watched from the treeline" | | 6 | "A breeze whispered through the" | | 7 | "A susurration like distant laughter" | | 8 | "Aurora inched forward, torch high." | | 9 | "The goatsbeard flowers unfurled around" | | 10 | "She forced her jaw to" | | 11 | "Errant late traveller." | | 12 | "Nothing explained the pendant’s glow," | | 13 | "Her wrist brushed the small" | | 14 | "Childhood memory flashed: chasing a" | | 15 | "Pain blossomed then, bright as" | | 16 | "She shook her head, blinking." | | 17 | "She reached the grove’s centre." | | 18 | "The torch revealed faint colour" | | 19 | "Her pendant pulsed hotter." |
| | ratio | 0.861 | |
| 28.90% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "Now every instinct screamed wrongness." |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The clearing’s centre lay open, bare earth scattered with pale wildflowers that gleamed like ghostly eyes in the beam." | | 1 | "Nothing explained the pendant’s glow, its steady throb as if drawn to something buried under leaf and root." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |