Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR8DPJ3AK7D2XRPY6P5G5W

Run Details

Duration:
55.1s
Cost:
$0.001794
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green sign buzzed faintly as Rory pushed open the heavy wooden door of The Raven’s Nest. The bar was dimly lit, as always, the air thick with the scent of whiskey and wood polish. She slid onto a stool at the far end of the counter, her usual spot, and nodded at Silas, who was polishing a glass with a worn rag. He gave her a curt nod in return, his hazel eyes scanning the room as though he were still on some covert op. Rory admired that about him—he never let his guard down, even in retirement. “The usual?” Silas asked, his gravelly voice low. “That’s the plan,” Rory replied, slipping her fingertips along the edge of the scar on her wrist, a nervous habit she’d picked up since her teens. “Anything interesting tonight?” Silas shrugged, pouring a measure of Glenfiddich into a tumbler. “Quiet so far. But it’s early.” Early for most people, maybe, but Rory’s shift at Golden Empress had ended hours ago. She’d spent the evening delivering steaming boxes of dumplings and noodles to tired Londoners, dodging rain showers and weaving through traffic on her bike. Now, she just wanted to sit and sip her drink in silence, letting the hum of the bar soothe her frayed nerves. But silence didn’t last long. The door creaked open again, and a gust of cold air swept in, carrying with it the sound of laughter. Rory glanced up, her bright blue eyes narrowing as she took in the figure stepping inside. He was tall, broad-shouldered, his dark hair slicked back with a precision that screamed effort. His suit was tailored, expensive, and his grin was all teeth, the kind that could charm or disarm depending on the situation. Rory’s stomach dropped. She knew that grin all too well. “Evan?” Her voice came out sharper than she intended, cutting through the low murmur of the bar. The man froze, mid-step, his grin faltering for a fraction of a second before it widened again. “Rory? Christ, is that you?” She didn’t move. Her fingers tightened around the glass Silas had placed in front of her, the amber liquid catching the light. “You’re a long way from Cardiff.” “And you’re a long way from law school,” Evan shot back, his tone light but his eyes sharp, scanning her like he was trying to piece together a puzzle. He slid onto the stool next to her, his suit jacket creasing as he leaned an elbow on the counter. “Silas,” he said, nodding at the bartender. “Whiskey. Neat.” Silas gave him a curt nod, his expression unreadable, and poured the drink. Rory watched him carefully, noting the way he hesitated before sliding the glass across the counter. Silas always had a knack for reading people—and Rory wasn’t the only one who’d noticed the tension in the room. Evan took a slow sip of his whiskey, his eyes never leaving Rory. “You look good.” “You look expensive,” she replied, her tone flat. “What brings you to London?” He shrugged, the motion too casual, too practiced. “Business. You know how it is.” She didn’t know, not anymore. The Evan she’d known in Cardiff had been reckless, impulsive, a whirlwind of charm and chaos. This version of him was polished, calculated, every word and movement deliberate. It made her uneasy. “And you?” he asked, his gaze flickering over her face. “What are you doing here?” “Working,” she said shortly, not elaborating. She wasn’t about to tell him about her deliveries or the flat above the bar. Those were her secrets, her small victories in a life that had felt like one long fight for autonomy since she’d left Cardiff. Evan raised an eyebrow. “Working? You, Rory Carter, with the sharpest mind in Cardiff University, working in a bar?” “It’s not a bar,” Silas interjected, his voice calm but firm. “It’s a social club.” Evan chuckled, but there was a hardness in his eyes that hadn’t been there before. “Right. My mistake.” Rory took a sip of her whiskey, the burn in her throat grounding her. “People change, Evan. You should know that better than anyone.” He leaned back, studying her with a calculating gaze. “Yeah, I guess they do. You don’t write anymore.” The words hit her like a punch to the gut. She’d almost forgotten how much she used to love writing—short stories, poems, anything to escape the pressure of her father’s expectations. But Evan had a way of making her feel small, inadequate, like her dreams were childish fantasies. So she’d stopped. Buried that part of herself along with everything else she’d left behind in Cardiff. “Life got in the way,” she said, her voice tight. “Life, or me?” he asked, his tone soft but edged with something darker. Rory’s fingers twitched, her grip on the glass tightening. “Don’t flatter yourself.” He laughed, but it was hollow, devoid of any real humor. “Fair enough. Still, it’s good to see you, Rory. Been a long time.” “Too long,” she muttered, though she wasn’t sure if she meant it. Seeing him now, so polished and poised, only reminded her of how much she’d lost—and how much she still carried with her. Evan drummed his fingers on the counter, the sound echoing in the quiet bar. “You ever think about coming back?” “To Cardiff?” she asked, incredulous. “Why the hell would I do that?” He shrugged again, but there was a tension in his shoulders that hadn’t been there before. “It’s home. Or it used to be.” “Home isn’t a place,” she said, her voice quieter now. “It’s people. And the people I cared about in Cardiff are gone.” Evan’s jaw tightened, but he didn’t argue. Instead, he downed the rest of his whiskey and stood, smoothing the creases from his jacket. “Well, it was good seeing you, Rory. Take care of yourself.” “You too,” she said, though the words tasted bitter on her tongue. He lingered for a moment, his gaze searching her face for something she couldn’t—or wouldn’t—give. Then he turned and walked out, the door swinging shut behind him with a soft creak. Rory exhaled, the tension in her chest easing slightly as she stared at the empty space where he’d been. Silas appeared beside her, refilling her glass without a word. “You all right?” he asked, his voice low. She nodded, tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist with her thumb. “Yeah. Just didn’t expect to see him here.” Silas studied her for a moment, his hazel eyes sharp. “You’re stronger than you think, Rory. Don’t let him make you forget that.” She managed a small smile, though it didn’t reach her eyes. “Thanks, Silas.” He nodded and moved back to his post, leaving her to her thoughts. Rory stared at her reflection in the polished surface of the bar, the face staring back at her familiar yet foreign. She’d changed, just as Evan had—but where he’d become something harder, sharper, she felt like she was still picking up the pieces of who she used to be. The weight of time pressed down on her, heavy and unrelenting. She took a sip of her whiskey, the warmth spreading through her chest, and wondered if she’d ever stop carrying the ghosts of her past.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:48:45.026Z" 2/19/2026, 10:48:45 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said shortly [shortly]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.05
91.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1220
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1220
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"scanning"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"charm"
count2
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"tension"
count3
6
word"calculated"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"calculating"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"silence"
2"charm"
3"stomach"
4"unreadable"
5"tension"
6"calculated"
7"eyebrow"
8"calculating"
9"echoing"
10"tracing"
11"familiar"
12"weight"
13"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1212
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1002
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory13
Raven1
Nest1
Silas9
Glenfiddich1
Golden1
Empress1
Londoners1
Evan9
Cardiff3
Seeing1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Empress"
4"Londoners"
5"Evan"
places
0"Golden"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.851
windowScore0.833
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like one long fight for autonomy s"
1"appeared beside her, refilling her glass without a word"
2"felt like she was still picking up the"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.825
wordCount1212
matches
0"not a bar,” Silas interjected, his voice calm but firm"
99.33% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"knew that grin"
1"Buried that part"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean27.55
std19.98
cv0.725
sampleLengths
0100
18
229
316
461
55
673
710
817
922
1028
1158
1249
1316
1413
1514
1637
1715
1844
1919
2015
2118
2224
2318
2465
2510
2613
2712
2824
2934
3020
3112
3223
3322
3434
3512
3631
3729
388
3920
4023
4113
4262
4336
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"was tailored"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs178
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences99
ratio0.061
matches
0"Rory admired that about him—he never let his guard down, even in retirement."
1"Silas always had a knack for reading people—and Rory wasn’t the only one who’d noticed the tension in the room."
2"She’d almost forgotten how much she used to love writing—short stories, poems, anything to escape the pressure of her father’s expectations."
3"Seeing him now, so polished and poised, only reminded her of how much she’d lost—and how much she still carried with her."
4"He lingered for a moment, his gaze searching her face for something she couldn’t—or wouldn’t—give."
5"She’d changed, just as Evan had—but where he’d become something harder, sharper, she felt like she was still picking up the pieces of who she used to be."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1010
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03564356435643564
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.00891089108910891
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean12.24
std6.6
cv0.539
sampleLengths
018
118
228
323
413
58
626
73
810
96
1015
1124
1222
135
1420
1516
1615
1722
183
197
2017
2117
225
233
2419
256
2629
2720
287
292
3013
3116
3220
3313
343
358
365
378
386
395
4016
4112
424
4310
445
456
4615
4723
484
4915
63.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.40404040404040403
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners40
88.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Instead, he downed the rest"
1"Then he turned and walked"
ratio0.027
33.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences75
matches
0"She slid onto a stool"
1"He gave her a curt"
2"She’d spent the evening delivering"
3"He was tall, broad-shouldered, his"
4"His suit was tailored, expensive,"
5"She knew that grin all"
6"Her voice came out sharper"
7"She didn’t move."
8"Her fingers tightened around the"
9"He slid onto the stool"
10"he said, nodding at the"
11"she replied, her tone flat"
12"He shrugged, the motion too"
13"She didn’t know, not anymore."
14"It made her uneasy."
15"he asked, his gaze flickering"
16"she said shortly, not elaborating"
17"She wasn’t about to tell"
18"He leaned back, studying her"
19"She’d almost forgotten how much"
ratio0.467
20.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences75
matches
0"The neon green sign buzzed"
1"The bar was dimly lit,"
2"She slid onto a stool"
3"He gave her a curt"
4"Rory admired that about him—he"
5"Silas asked, his gravelly voice"
6"Rory replied, slipping her fingertips"
7"Silas shrugged, pouring a measure"
8"She’d spent the evening delivering"
9"The door creaked open again,"
10"Rory glanced up, her bright"
11"He was tall, broad-shouldered, his"
12"His suit was tailored, expensive,"
13"Rory’s stomach dropped."
14"She knew that grin all"
15"Her voice came out sharper"
16"The man froze, mid-step, his"
17"She didn’t move."
18"Her fingers tightened around the"
19"Evan shot back, his tone"
ratio0.88
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Now, she just wanted to"
ratio0.013
82.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She slid onto a stool at the far end of the counter, her usual spot, and nodded at Silas, who was polishing a glass with a worn rag."
1"He gave her a curt nod in return, his hazel eyes scanning the room as though he were still on some covert op."
2"He was tall, broad-shouldered, his dark hair slicked back with a precision that screamed effort."
3"His suit was tailored, expensive, and his grin was all teeth, the kind that could charm or disarm depending on the situation."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"she replied, her tone flat"
1"he asked, his gaze flickering over her face"
2"she said shortly, not elaborating"
3"Silas interjected, his voice calm but firm"
4"she said, her voice tight"
5"he asked, his tone soft but edged with something darker"
6"she asked, incredulous"
7"she said, her voice quieter now"
8"she said, though the words tasted bitter on her tongue"
9"he asked, his voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas interjected (interject)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.1
79.3934%