Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR8E7EX36VQ63MGARRWHJJ

Run Details

Model:: GPT-4.1 Nano
Test:: Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:: Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:: 12.0s
Cost:: $0.000755
Provider:: OpenAI

Evaluation summary

Score	Evaluator	Details Link
88.89%	Adverbs in dialogue tags	(details)
53.31%	AI-ism adverb frequency	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism character names	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism location names	(details)
0.00%	AI-ism word frequency	(details)
66.67%	Cliché density	(details)
100.00%	Emotion telling (show vs. tell)	(details)
66.67%	Filter word density	(details)
100.00%	Gibberish response detection	(details)
100.00%	Markdown formatting overuse	(details)
100.00%	Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)	(details)
81.07%	Name drop frequency	(details)
70.63%	Narrator intent-glossing	(details)
100.00%	"Not X but Y" pattern overuse	(details)
100.00%	Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)	(details)
100.00%	Paragraph length variance	(details)
100.00%	Passive voice overuse	(details)
100.00%	Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse	(details)
0.00%	Em-dash & semicolon overuse	(details)
94.11%	Purple prose (modifier overload)	(details)
100.00%	Repeated phrase echo	(details)
100.00%	Sentence length variance	(details)
60.32%	Sentence opener variety	(details)
100.00%	Adverb-first sentence starts	(details)
100.00%	Pronoun-first sentence starts	(details)
6.67%	Subject-first sentence starts	(details)
0.00%	Subordinate conjunction sentence starts	(details)
72.83%	Technical jargon density	(details)
62.50%	Useless dialogue additions	(details)
0.00%	Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)	(details)
74.1221%	Overall

Model input

System

You are an expert fiction writer.

Always keep the following rules in mind:
- Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang.
- Write in active voice
- Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle.
- Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions.
- Convey events and story through dialogue.
- Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety.
- Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech
- Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself.
- Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action.
- Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe"

When writing text:
- NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely.
- NEVER end with foreshadowing.
- NEVER write further than what I prompt you with.
- AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions.
- STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.

User/Human

Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response:
<codex>
<character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist">
  <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor>
  <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair>
  <height>5'6"</height>
  <age>25</age>
  <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar>
  <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description>
  <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory>
</character>

<character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card">
  <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor>
  <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height>
  <age>ageless</age>
  <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form>
  <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice>
  <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description>
  <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory>
</character>

<character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle">
  <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor>
  <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair>
  <height>5'5"</height>
  <age>300 years old</age>
  <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance>
  <speech>speaks in riddles</speech>
  <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints>
  <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion>
  <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description>
  <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory>
</character>

<location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony">
  <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler>
  <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor>
  <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description>
</location>

<location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)">
  <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation>
  <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones>
  <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior>
  <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora>
  <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description>
</location>

<item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas">
  <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor>
  <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial>
  <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size>
  <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior>
  <glow>faint inner glow</glow>
  <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description>
</item>

<item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts">
  <material>moonsilver</material>
  <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape>
  <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature>
  <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow>
  <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power>
  <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo>
  <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description>
</item>

<lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology">
  <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect>
  <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance>
  <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring>
  <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description>
</lore>
</codex>

Continue the story using the following instructions:
<instructions>
Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre.

A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition.

Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore.
Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
</instructions>

Model response

The air shifted as the small party stepped beneath the towering oak standing stones, its gnarled roots tangled in mossy embrace. The sunlight outside blurred into a steady, golden haze, but once past the boundary, the world spun into something new—somethingother. Time seemed to slow, stretching in ways that twisted the senses.

Aurora’s boots crunched softly on the uneven ground, the scent of damp earth mixing with a surprisingly sweet floral undertone that made her blink. The flowers here looked impossible—colors that defied normal understanding, shimmering violet skies that flickered like flickering candle flames. She paused, legs trembling slightly. 

Nyx’s shadowed silhouette moved ahead, whispering on the edges of her vision, shifting between solid and intangible. Their faint violet glow pulsed softly, a steady heartbeat in the surreal silence. Once, a faint shimmer ran over their form as they brushed against a hanging vine heavy with luminescent fruit. 

“Careful,” Nyx’s voice was barely more than a whisper, carried as if on the wind itself, “this place isn’t just alive—it’s watching.”

Isolde Varga’s silver hair shimmered as she turned slowly, her gaze amused. “Eye sees beauty, even in strange.”

The group pressed on, stepping between pockets of wildflowers that seemed to hum with energy, their petals trembling as if caught in a breeze unseen. Aurora reached out, her fingertips brushing a bloom that pulsed with an internal glow, the petals opening wider at her touch. A soft warmth spread up her arm, unbidden, then receded.

They entered a clearing, and the landscape broke into something altogether alien. Ancient standing stones, similar yet different from the boundary markers outside, rose from the ground like ghostly sentinels. Their surfaces shimmered with runes Aurora couldn't decipher—presumably old Fae glyphs. They flickered as if alive.

“Is this...,” Aurora started but hesitated. The stones radiated a faint hum, a vibration she could feel deep down in her bones.

Nyx’s whisper of a voice broke her thought. “The Grove. The heart of this realm. The boundary, thin and fragile here.”

Isolde stepped closer to one stone, fingers grazing the rune-carved surface. Her pale lavender eyes widened slightly, her lips whispering a faint incantation. The air thickened—not heavy, but dense with magic, the kind that pricked at her skin like static.

“Time feels different,” she murmured, glancing at the world outside the stones. “Minutes here could be days...or centuries.”

Aurora wandered toward a cluster of glowing flora, her gaze catching a flicker of movement. Something luminous darted between the flowers, graceful as a shadow slipping through fog. She crouched, eyes narrowing. A tiny creature, no more than a flicker of motion, with wings like spun glass.

“What is it?”

Nyx hovered nearby, voice like a breeze. “A fae-born thing, perhaps. Or a remnant. Nothing mortal.”

Her gaze lingered on the tiny creature, intrigued yet wary. Since crossing the boundary, everything felt alive and watching. The ground beneath her feet was warm, almost like a heartbeat, pulsing softly.

Suddenly, a sharp gust swept through the grove. The flowers quivered more violently, and the faint hum grew louder. Aurora backed up instinctively, hand reaching for the Fae-Forged Blade given to her by Isolde. The weapon felt icy in her grip, luminescent moonlight crawling over its blade.

“Wait...” Isolde’s voice faint but urgent. Her gaze darted upward toward the sky, where the golden hues darkened, shadows stretching like living tendrils. “The Veil—it’s shifting. We’re near something old, something powerful.”

The trees here seemed to lean inward, as if listening. The stillness pressed down, thickening with silence broken only by the rustling leaves and the distant sound of something unplaceable—like a whisper in a forgotten tongue.

Nyx’s voice again. “Something’s waking.”

Aurora’s eyes darted around. She sensed it too—an underlying tremor in the fabric of the realm. She could feel the pulse of the Heartstone Pendant buried beneath her shirt, a faint inner glow radiating warmth. The relic, a gift from an unknown benefactor, seemed to vibrate in tandem with the increasing disturbance.

The ground suddenly shuddered beneath their boots, and a ripple ran across the clearing’s surface like water disturbed by a stone. From the Heartstone Pendant, the faint glow brightened—a heartbeat, a warning.

“Back!” Aurora snapped without hesitation, tightening her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade. Her voice carried through the tense silence.

Without warning, the stones roared. The faint glyphs flared with blinding light, inscriptions writhing like living creatures. A tremor tore through the grove, and then—a crack. A tear widened in the fabric of reality, a rift pulsating with flickers of otherworldly light: reds, blues, iridescent shades that did not belong in this world.

The atmosphere thickened with an unearthly tension, a strange blend of awe and dread curling in Aurora’s stomach.

“Not just an illusion,” Isolde whispered, voice strained. “This is a breach—one of the rift points the Wardens monitor.”

Nyx hovered closer, shadows swirling around them. “Whatever breaks through, it’s not meant to be seen here.”

Aurora stepped back, heart pounding. Her senses sharpened—tiny details amplified; the air thickened, almost molten. The glowing flora flickered violently, their hum turning into a deafening shriek of energy. Shadows grew darker, curling toward the rift as if drawn to it.

Then, a figure blinked into existence within the tear—someone or something, shrouded in deep shadows, standing silent amidst the chaos. Its form pulsed with an opaque glow, skin like starless night, eyes flickering violet. It was watching.

Aurora froze, Fae-Forged Blade raised slightly, breath caught in her throat. Her mind raced through possibilities—this was not something that came from their world, nor something easily understood.  

“You’ve come far,” the shadow’s voice was a whisper carried on a gust of wind, “but you’re not meant to see what awakens here.”

The tear pulsed again, brighter, threatening to swallow everything in an overflow of darkness.  

Aurora held her position, fists clenched, the cool touch of the blade grounding her.

“Who are you?” she demanded, voice firm despite the tremor in her chest.

The shadow’s figure hesitated, then a faint ripple passed through its form, a flicker of something human beneath the darkness.

“No time,” it said softly, “or you’ll drown in the flood.”

The rift pulsed once more, brighter than before. Aurora’s eyes locked on the figure, heart pounding in accord with the ominous rhythm. Whatever was coming, she knew this was only the beginning.

Evaluation details

Result

Evaluator

Details

Meta Data

88.89%

Adverbs in dialogue tags

Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs

totalTags

adverbTagCount

adverbTags

0	"it said softly [softly]"

dialogueSentences

tagDensity

0.444

leniency

0.889

rawRatio

0.125

effectiveRatio

0.111

53.31%

AI-ism adverb frequency

Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)

wordCount

1071

totalAiIsmAdverbs

found

adverb	"softly"
count	4

adverb	"slightly"
count	3

adverb	"slowly"
count	1

adverb	"suddenly"
count	2

highlights

0	"softly"
1	"slightly"
2	"slowly"
3	"suddenly"

100.00%

AI-ism character names

Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)

codexExemptions	(empty)
found	(empty)

100.00%

AI-ism location names

Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)

codexExemptions	(empty)
found	(empty)

0.00%

AI-ism word frequency

Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)

wordCount

1071

totalAiIsms

found

word	"flickered"
count	3

word	"pulsed"
count	5

word	"surreal"
count	1

word	"silence"
count	3

word	"whisper"
count	4

word	"shimmered"
count	2

word	"warmth"
count	2

word	"sentinels"
count	1

word	"could feel"
count	2

word	"flicker"
count	3

word	"quivered"
count	1

word	"pulse"
count	1

word	"otherworldly"
count	1

word	"tension"
count	1

word	"stomach"
count	1

word	"pounding"
count	2

word	"amidst"
count	1

word	"raced"
count	1

highlights

0	"flickered"
1	"pulsed"
2	"surreal"
3	"silence"
4	"whisper"
5	"shimmered"
6	"warmth"
7	"sentinels"
8	"could feel"
9	"flicker"
10	"quivered"
11	"pulse"
12	"otherworldly"
13	"tension"
14	"stomach"
15	"pounding"
16	"amidst"
17	"raced"

66.67%

Cliché density

Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window

totalCliches

maxInWindow

found

label	"eyes widened/narrowed"
count	1

label	"jaw/fists clenched"
count	1

label	"time stood still"
count	1

highlights

0	"eyes widened"
1	"fists clenched"
2	"Time seemed to slow"

100.00%

Emotion telling (show vs. tell)

Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling

emotionTells	0
narrationSentences	75
matches	(empty)

66.67%

Filter word density

Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words

filterCount

hedgeCount

narrationSentences

filterMatches

(empty)

hedgeMatches

0	"seemed to"

100.00%

Gibberish response detection

Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)

analyzedSentences	84
gibberishSentences	0
adjustedGibberishSentences	0
longSentenceCount	0
runOnParagraphCount	0
giantParagraphCount	0
wordSaladCount	0
repetitionLoopCount	0
controlTokenCount	0
maxSentenceWordsSeen	27
ratio	0
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Markdown formatting overuse

Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting

markdownSpans	0
markdownWords	0
totalWords	1053
ratio	0
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)

Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks

totalAttributions	4
unquotedAttributions	0
matches	(empty)

81.07%

Name drop frequency

Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words

totalMentions

wordCount

943

uniqueNames

maxNameDensity

1.38

worstName

"Aurora"

maxWindowNameDensity

worstWindowName

"Aurora"

discoveredNames

Isolde	5
Varga	1
Aurora	13
Fae	4
Fae-Forged	3
Blade	3
Heartstone	2
Pendant	2
Nyx	6

persons

0	"Isolde"
1	"Varga"
2	"Aurora"
3	"Blade"
4	"Pendant"
5	"Nyx"

places

0	"Heartstone"

globalScore

0.811

windowScore

70.63%

Narrator intent-glossing

Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns

analyzedSentences

glossingSentenceCount

matches

0	"wildflowers that seemed to hum with energy, their petals trembling as if caught in a breeze unseen"
1	"as if listening"

100.00%

"Not X but Y" pattern overuse

Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words

totalMatches

per1kWords

0.95

wordCount

1053

matches

0	"not heavy, but dense with magic, the kind"

100.00%

Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)

Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses

thatCount	0
totalSentences	84
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Paragraph length variance

Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts

totalParagraphs

mean

29.25

std

14.78

0.505

sampleLengths

0	52
1	47
2	49
3	22
4	18
5	56
6	46
7	22
8	21
9	40
10	18
11	47
12	3
13	16
14	32
15	47
16	32
17	36
18	5
19	52
20	32
21	19
22	53
23	18
24	19
25	17
26	41
27	37
28	28
29	24
30	14
31	14
32	13
33	20
34	11
35	32

100.00%

Passive voice overuse

Target: ≤2% passive sentences

passiveCount	0
totalSentences	75
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse

Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs

pastProgressiveCount

totalVerbs

157

matches

0	"was watching"
1	"was coming"

0.00%

Em-dash & semicolon overuse

Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons

emDashCount

semicolonCount

flaggedSentences

totalSentences

ratio

0.131

matches

0	"The sunlight outside blurred into a steady, golden haze, but once past the boundary, the world spun into something new—somethingother."
1	"The flowers here looked impossible—colors that defied normal understanding, shimmering violet skies that flickered like flickering candle flames."
2	"Their surfaces shimmered with runes Aurora couldn't decipher—presumably old Fae glyphs."
3	"The air thickened—not heavy, but dense with magic, the kind that pricked at her skin like static."
4	"The stillness pressed down, thickening with silence broken only by the rustling leaves and the distant sound of something unplaceable—like a whisper in a forgotten tongue."
5	"She sensed it too—an underlying tremor in the fabric of the realm."
6	"From the Heartstone Pendant, the faint glow brightened—a heartbeat, a warning."
7	"A tremor tore through the grove, and then—a crack."
8	"Her senses sharpened—tiny details amplified; the air thickened, almost molten."
9	"Then, a figure blinked into existence within the tear—someone or something, shrouded in deep shadows, standing silent amidst the chaos."
10	"Her mind raced through possibilities—this was not something that came from their world, nor something easily understood."

94.11%

Purple prose (modifier overload)

Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking

wordCount	957
adjectiveStacks	0
stackExamples	(empty)
adverbCount	42
adverbRatio	0.0438871473354232
lyAdverbCount	22
lyAdverbRatio	0.022988505747126436

100.00%

Repeated phrase echo

Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)

totalSentences	84
echoCount	0
echoWords	(empty)

100.00%

Sentence length variance

Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts

totalSentences

mean

12.54

std

5.78

0.461

sampleLengths

0	21
1	20
2	11
3	24
4	18
5	5
6	17
7	13
8	19
9	22
10	12
11	6
12	25
13	21
14	10
15	12
16	18
17	11
18	5
19	6
20	16
21	8
22	13
23	11
24	12
25	17
26	12
27	6
28	15
29	13
30	4
31	15
32	3
33	7
34	9
35	10
36	9
37	13
38	8
39	11
40	15
41	13
42	6
43	17
44	9
45	10
46	26
47	3
48	2
49	4

60.32%

Sentence opener variety

Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers

consecutiveRepeats	6
diversityRatio	0.40476190476190477
totalSentences	84
uniqueOpeners	34

100.00%

Adverb-first sentence starts

Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb

adverbCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"Once, a faint shimmer ran"
1	"Suddenly, a sharp gust swept"
2	"Then, a figure blinked into"

ratio

0.04

100.00%

Pronoun-first sentence starts

Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun

pronounCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"She paused, legs trembling slightly."
1	"Their faint violet glow pulsed"
2	"They entered a clearing, and"
3	"Their surfaces shimmered with runes"
4	"They flickered as if alive."
5	"Her pale lavender eyes widened"
6	"she murmured, glancing at the"
7	"She crouched, eyes narrowing."
8	"Her gaze lingered on the"
9	"Her gaze darted upward toward"
10	"She sensed it too—an underlying"
11	"She could feel the pulse"
12	"Her voice carried through the"
13	"Her senses sharpened—tiny details amplified;"
14	"Its form pulsed with an"
15	"It was watching."
16	"Her mind raced through possibilities—this"
17	"she demanded, voice firm despite"
18	"it said softly"

ratio

0.253

6.67%

Subject-first sentence starts

Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject

subjectCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"The air shifted as the"
1	"The sunlight outside blurred into"
2	"Time seemed to slow, stretching"
3	"Aurora’s boots crunched softly on"
4	"The flowers here looked impossible—colors"
5	"She paused, legs trembling slightly."
6	"Nyx’s shadowed silhouette moved ahead,"
7	"Their faint violet glow pulsed"
8	"Nyx’s voice was barely more"
9	"Isolde Varga’s silver hair shimmered"
10	"The group pressed on, stepping"
11	"Aurora reached out, her fingertips"
12	"A soft warmth spread up"
13	"They entered a clearing, and"
14	"Their surfaces shimmered with runes"
15	"They flickered as if alive."
16	"Aurora started but hesitated"
17	"The stones radiated a faint"
18	"Nyx’s whisper of a voice"
19	"Isolde stepped closer to one"

ratio

0.907

0.00%

Subordinate conjunction sentence starts

Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction

subConjCount	0
totalSentences	75
matches	(empty)
ratio	0

72.83%

Technical jargon density

Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns

analyzedSentences

technicalSentenceCount

matches

0	"Aurora’s boots crunched softly on the uneven ground, the scent of damp earth mixing with a surprisingly sweet floral undertone that made her blink."
1	"The flowers here looked impossible—colors that defied normal understanding, shimmering violet skies that flickered like flickering candle flames."
2	"The group pressed on, stepping between pockets of wildflowers that seemed to hum with energy, their petals trembling as if caught in a breeze unseen."
3	"Aurora wandered toward a cluster of glowing flora, her gaze catching a flicker of movement."
4	"Her mind raced through possibilities—this was not something that came from their world, nor something easily understood."

62.50%

Useless dialogue additions

Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments

totalTags

uselessAdditionCount

matches

0	"Isolde whispered, voice strained"

0.00%

Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)

Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags

totalTags

fancyCount

fancyTags

0	"she murmured (murmur)"
1	"Aurora snapped (snap)"
2	"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
3	"she demanded (demand)"

dialogueSentences

tagDensity

0.278

leniency

0.556

rawRatio

0.8

effectiveRatio

0.444

74.1221%