| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Evan gestured vaguely [vaguely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 85.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1031 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 12.71% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1031 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tangible" | | 1 | "beacon" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "gleaming" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "charged" | | 11 | "tinged" | | 12 | "amidst" | | 13 | "intricate" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 90.99% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "d with regret" | | 1 | "d with relief" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 49 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1018 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 808 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.98 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Evan" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 3 | | Nest | 4 | | Rory | 16 | | Silas | 9 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 2 | | Evan | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.51 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed ghostly on the threshold" | | 1 | "as if anchoring herself amid the swirl of recollection" | | 2 | "as if translating the scar into stories only Rory knew in their entirety" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1018 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 36.36 | | std | 19.78 | | cv | 0.544 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 72 | | 26 | 61 | | 27 | 54 |
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| 98.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 57 | | ratio | 0.14 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas stood behind the counter, his silver signet ring gleaming momentarily as he reached for a bottle, pouring whiskey into a glass with the kind of deliberation only he possessed—a calm presence, unflustered under the weight of years." | | 1 | "Time had left its mark on him, as it had on Rory, yet something else lingered—an air of admission, perhaps resignation." | | 2 | "He dropped onto the stool, shedding the coat to reveal a buttoned shirt—neat, if slightly rumpled after a day’s wear." | | 3 | "Silas hovered, his attentiveness never intrusive, procuring Evan’s drink in much the same way he did for every patron—a rhythm of precision." | | 4 | "Evan’s eyes met hers, holding a mix of admiration and the kind of regret that purges unholy timeliness—not rushed, yet undeniable." | | 5 | "Rory and Evan watched him, thankful for his unobtrusive company and quiet acts of camaraderie; a silent support that remained steadfast over the years." | | 6 | "As London draped its veil of evening onto the city, The Raven’s Nest maintained its intimacy—a timeless, weathered arc grounding its patrons against the distant hum of a world outside." | | 7 | "Though the world kept moving, inside the Nest, the moment was still—a reverie amid the spin of time." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 819 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.02197802197802198 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015873015873015872 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 57 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 57 | | mean | 17.86 | | std | 7.83 | | cv | 0.439 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 81.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.49122807017543857 | | totalSentences | 57 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "Her deliveries had taken less" | | 1 | "He glanced up, a slight" | | 2 | "She ran a hand through" | | 3 | "She glanced at Silas, who" | | 4 | "He dropped onto the stool," | | 5 | "His eyes lingered as if" | | 6 | "he observed, his tone soft" | | 7 | "Their conversation flowed, weaving tales" |
| | ratio | 0.17 | |
| 2.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven’s Nest exuded an" | | 1 | "Rory pushed open the heavy" | | 2 | "Her deliveries had taken less" | | 3 | "The bar pulsed with muted" | | 4 | "Silas stood behind the counter," | | 5 | "He glanced up, a slight" | | 6 | "Silas said, nodding towards an" | | 7 | "Rory replied, settling onto the" | | 8 | "She ran a hand through" | | 9 | "Silas picked up his glass" | | 10 | "Rory’s smile was lopsided, edged" | | 11 | "Silas chuckled and obliged with" | | 12 | "The evening trickled past with" | | 13 | "Silas regaled her with tales" | | 14 | "Rory listened, her bright blue" | | 15 | "Rory paused mid-sentence, her gaze" | | 16 | "The rain-drenched trench coat was" | | 17 | "Recognition flickered across her features," | | 18 | "The name slipped out, unbidden," | | 19 | "The man paused in his" |
| | ratio | 0.915 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "Though the world kept moving," |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven’s Nest exuded an aura of mystery that was nearly tangible, its green neon sign flickering through the drizzling rain like a beacon calling to lost sou…" | | 1 | "Silas regaled her with tales of operatives and dubious prospects from his MI6 days, painting them like old capers that seemed much lighter from afar." | | 2 | "Rory paused mid-sentence, her gaze falling on a figure who seemed ghostly on the threshold." | | 3 | "The years had reshaped his features, mellowing harsh angles and dimming the fire that once burned in his eyes." | | 4 | "His eyes lingered as if translating the scar into stories only Rory knew in their entirety." | | 5 | "Evan’s eyes met hers, holding a mix of admiration and the kind of regret that purges unholy timeliness—not rushed, yet undeniable." | | 6 | "Rory shrugged gently, a graceful acceptance that was hard-wrought through time." | | 7 | "Rory and Evan watched him, thankful for his unobtrusive company and quiet acts of camaraderie; a silent support that remained steadfast over the years." | | 8 | "Rory and Evan leaned toward this semblance of occasional truce, bridging gaps and healing scars with words grounded in resignation, forgiveness, and acceptance …" |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he observed, his tone soft yet inquiring" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory chuckled (chuckle)" | | 1 | "he observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |