Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR8G2FA0GZ5WS76EDDJD5R

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Duration:
15.5s
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$0.016127
Provider:
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest exuded an aura of mystery that was nearly tangible, its green neon sign flickering through the drizzling rain like a beacon calling to lost souls. Rory pushed open the heavy wooden door, the comforting aroma of aged scotch and wood polish welcoming her into the dim warmth of the bar. Her deliveries had taken less time today, and she welcomed the extra hours to unwind before the city's night clamour intruded upon her solitude. The bar pulsed with muted life, patrons hunched over their drinks, murmuring in hushed tones. Silas stood behind the counter, his silver signet ring gleaming momentarily as he reached for a bottle, pouring whiskey into a glass with the kind of deliberation only he possessed—a calm presence, unflustered under the weight of years. He glanced up, a slight smile breaking the stoic mask he usually wore. “Rory. You look like you’ve got the weight of the world on those shoulders,” Silas said, nodding towards an empty stool at the bar. “It’s just Cardiff calling back,” Rory replied, settling onto the stool. She ran a hand through her hair, pushing loose strands behind her ears in a practiced motion. “Funny how homesickness sneaks up when you least expect it.” “It’s inescapable, even for you.” Silas picked up his glass. “Would you care for a drink on the house? Something light, yes?” “Sure, but make it strong, please. Light can wait.” Rory’s smile was lopsided, edged with an exhaustion only discernible to those who knew her well. Silas chuckled and obliged with a glass of scotch. The evening trickled past with barstool chatter, Rory and Silas exchanging anecdotes of improbable days past. Silas regaled her with tales of operatives and dubious prospects from his MI6 days, painting them like old capers that seemed much lighter from afar. Rory listened, her bright blue eyes softening in shared nostalgia, her own tales peppering their conversation with a cocktail of Cardiff memories and London escapades. As the clink of glasses and murmured voices formed a soothing backdrop, the door swung open, letting in a gust of cold air. Rory paused mid-sentence, her gaze falling on a figure who seemed ghostly on the threshold. The rain-drenched trench coat was familiar. Recognition flickered across her features, surprise etched an invisible line across her forehead. “Evan?” The name slipped out, unbidden, charged with emotion that twisted her gut. The man paused in his stride, turning to face the now still patrons and the array of emotions directed his way. He looked... altered. The years had reshaped his features, mellowing harsh angles and dimming the fire that once burned in his eyes. Time had left its mark on him, as it had on Rory, yet something else lingered—an air of admission, perhaps resignation. “Rory. Didn’t expect to find you here.” Evan's voice carried a hint of disbelief, deepened with regret edges, yet tinged with relief at seeing a familiar face amidst strangers. “I could say the same about you, Evan. It’s been... four, no five years?” She glanced at Silas, who had withdrawn elegantly into the shadows behind the bar. “Yeah, a lifetime, it feels like. May I?” Evan gestured towards the stool beside her. Rory nodded, a silent affirmation. He dropped onto the stool, shedding the coat to reveal a buttoned shirt—neat, if slightly rumpled after a day’s wear. Silas hovered, his attentiveness never intrusive, procuring Evan’s drink in much the same way he did for every patron—a rhythm of precision. “Been a while since Cardiff. You still in touch with anyone?” Rory ventured, grasping the glass of scotch as if anchoring herself amid the swirl of recollection. “Every now and then. The place hasn’t changed much, but I needed a fresh start after...” Evan gestured vaguely, leaving unfinished sentences hanging between them like cobwebs. “Same. London was pretty much my reset button, too. New faces, new haunts.” Rory chuckled, a wry attempt to lighten the loaded air. Evan glanced down at her wrist, noting the crescent scar, a remnant of bygone days. His eyes lingered as if translating the scar into stories only Rory knew in their entirety. “You’re... different. Somehow even more resilient than I remember,” he observed, his tone soft yet inquiring. “Life demands it, doesn’t it? We adapt, grow tough from the roots up.” Evan nodded, absorbing the truth in her words. “I should’ve learnt that sooner. Took me a while to grow out of... well, you know.” Rory sighed, the past threading through her thoughts, intricate and tangled. “The years change you, show who really matters, what doesn’t survive the purges of memory.” Evan’s eyes met hers, holding a mix of admiration and the kind of regret that purges unholy timeliness—not rushed, yet undeniable. “I regret. A lot. You deserved more than what I was then.” Rory shrugged gently, a graceful acceptance that was hard-wrought through time. “Evan, every story’s two-sided. I’ve learnt peace in it, kept it simple—my own clarity.” “Peace... That’s good to hear, Rory.” Their conversation flowed, weaving tales of the intervening years without the weight of blame, nor heavy shackles of unforgiveness. Silas, ever-present in the comfort offered by The Raven’s Nest, occasionally chimed in, relaying stories with equal finesse, his hazel eyes sweeping across his realm like an old sage. Rory and Evan watched him, thankful for his unobtrusive company and quiet acts of camaraderie; a silent support that remained steadfast over the years. As London draped its veil of evening onto the city, The Raven’s Nest maintained its intimacy—a timeless, weathered arc grounding its patrons against the distant hum of a world outside. Rory and Evan leaned toward this semblance of occasional truce, bridging gaps and healing scars with words grounded in resignation, forgiveness, and acceptance that twined like gentle vines through their history. Though the world kept moving, inside the Nest, the moment was still—a reverie amid the spin of time. Together, Rory and Evan lingered, basking in the essence of renewed connections. Here, amidst maps and photographs yellowing from ages past, they unlocked histories buried within themselves, reflecting on the nuances of change and choices made.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Evan gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.55
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
85.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"tangible"
count1
1
word"beacon"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"weight"
count3
7
word"familiar"
count2
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"charged"
count1
11
word"tinged"
count1
12
word"amidst"
count2
13
word"intricate"
count1
highlights
0"tangible"
1"beacon"
2"comforting"
3"warmth"
4"pulsed"
5"gleaming"
6"weight"
7"familiar"
8"flickered"
9"etched"
10"charged"
11"tinged"
12"amidst"
13"intricate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
90.99% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences49
matches
0"d with regret"
1"d with relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences57
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1018
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount808
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.98
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven3
Nest4
Rory16
Silas9
Cardiff1
London2
Evan10
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.51
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed ghostly on the threshold"
1"as if anchoring herself amid the swirl of recollection"
2"as if translating the scar into stories only Rory knew in their entirety"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1018
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean36.36
std19.78
cv0.544
sampleLengths
077
166
224
338
422
534
666
757
813
964
1029
1128
1215
1325
1422
1527
1627
1723
1847
1913
2024
2126
2233
2325
246
2572
2661
2754
98.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"was lopsided"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs137
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences57
ratio0.14
matches
0"Silas stood behind the counter, his silver signet ring gleaming momentarily as he reached for a bottle, pouring whiskey into a glass with the kind of deliberation only he possessed—a calm presence, unflustered under the weight of years."
1"Time had left its mark on him, as it had on Rory, yet something else lingered—an air of admission, perhaps resignation."
2"He dropped onto the stool, shedding the coat to reveal a buttoned shirt—neat, if slightly rumpled after a day’s wear."
3"Silas hovered, his attentiveness never intrusive, procuring Evan’s drink in much the same way he did for every patron—a rhythm of precision."
4"Evan’s eyes met hers, holding a mix of admiration and the kind of regret that purges unholy timeliness—not rushed, yet undeniable."
5"Rory and Evan watched him, thankful for his unobtrusive company and quiet acts of camaraderie; a silent support that remained steadfast over the years."
6"As London draped its veil of evening onto the city, The Raven’s Nest maintained its intimacy—a timeless, weathered arc grounding its patrons against the distant hum of a world outside."
7"Though the world kept moving, inside the Nest, the moment was still—a reverie amid the spin of time."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount819
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02197802197802198
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.015873015873015872
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences57
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences57
mean17.86
std7.83
cv0.439
sampleLengths
028
125
224
315
438
513
624
711
817
910
1010
1112
1225
139
1416
1525
1625
1723
1815
196
2013
2113
2221
232
241
2519
2621
2729
2828
2915
305
3120
3222
3327
3427
3523
3615
3716
3816
3913
408
4116
4211
4315
4421
4512
4611
4714
486
4919
81.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.49122807017543857
totalSentences57
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences47
matches
0"Her deliveries had taken less"
1"He glanced up, a slight"
2"She ran a hand through"
3"She glanced at Silas, who"
4"He dropped onto the stool,"
5"His eyes lingered as if"
6"he observed, his tone soft"
7"Their conversation flowed, weaving tales"
ratio0.17
2.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences47
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest exuded an"
1"Rory pushed open the heavy"
2"Her deliveries had taken less"
3"The bar pulsed with muted"
4"Silas stood behind the counter,"
5"He glanced up, a slight"
6"Silas said, nodding towards an"
7"Rory replied, settling onto the"
8"She ran a hand through"
9"Silas picked up his glass"
10"Rory’s smile was lopsided, edged"
11"Silas chuckled and obliged with"
12"The evening trickled past with"
13"Silas regaled her with tales"
14"Rory listened, her bright blue"
15"Rory paused mid-sentence, her gaze"
16"The rain-drenched trench coat was"
17"Recognition flickered across her features,"
18"The name slipped out, unbidden,"
19"The man paused in his"
ratio0.915
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"Though the world kept moving,"
ratio0.021
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest exuded an aura of mystery that was nearly tangible, its green neon sign flickering through the drizzling rain like a beacon calling to lost sou…"
1"Silas regaled her with tales of operatives and dubious prospects from his MI6 days, painting them like old capers that seemed much lighter from afar."
2"Rory paused mid-sentence, her gaze falling on a figure who seemed ghostly on the threshold."
3"The years had reshaped his features, mellowing harsh angles and dimming the fire that once burned in his eyes."
4"His eyes lingered as if translating the scar into stories only Rory knew in their entirety."
5"Evan’s eyes met hers, holding a mix of admiration and the kind of regret that purges unholy timeliness—not rushed, yet undeniable."
6"Rory shrugged gently, a graceful acceptance that was hard-wrought through time."
7"Rory and Evan watched him, thankful for his unobtrusive company and quiet acts of camaraderie; a silent support that remained steadfast over the years."
8"Rory and Evan leaned toward this semblance of occasional truce, bridging gaps and healing scars with words grounded in resignation, forgiveness, and acceptance …"
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he observed, his tone soft yet inquiring"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory chuckled (chuckle)"
1"he observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.2
75.0405%