Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR8JYC2Z6J5K7Z4BYCWHGN

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Duration:
31.6s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before I could knock a second time. Aurora stood there, a takeaway bag from Golden Empress in one hand, her keys dangling from the other. The scent of soy sauce and five-spice powder curled into the hallway. Her bright blue eyes narrowed, not in surprise, but calculation—like she was already deciding whether to slam the door in my face or hear me out. "Lucien." My name came out flat, all the warmth of a bank vault closing. "Rory." I adjusted my grip on the ivory handle of my cane. "May I come in?" She didn’t move. The keys jingled as her fingers tightened around them. "Depends. Are you here to fix something, or break something else?" A fair question. I inclined my head. "I’d prefer not to conduct business in the hallway. Ptolemy might overhear." That got a twitch of her lips. Not quite a smile, but close. She stepped aside, the movement sharp, efficient. The deadbolts had already been thrown back when I arrived—three of them, just like the codex said. Either she’d been expecting someone, or she was more careless than I remembered. The flat smelled of old paper and Earl Grey. Books teetered on every surface, some stacked so precariously they looked like they might avalanche at a loud noise. A tabby cat—presumably Ptolemy—watched me from the back of the sofa, tail flicking like a metronome set to distrust. Aurora dumped the takeaway bag on the kitchen counter. "Speak. I’ve got a shift in an hour." I set my cane against the wall, careful not to let the blade inside scrape the plaster. "Straight to business. How refreshing." "You know me." She pulled out two containers, not bothering to offer me one. "I don’t do small talk with people who ghosted me." Ghosted. A crude word, but accurate. I’d left London abruptly six months ago, after our last conversation turned into an argument about boundaries and broken promises. Aurora had a way of making me forget mine. I took the chair opposite her at the tiny kitchen table. The wood creaked under my weight. "I had matters to attend to in Marseille." "Matters." She peeled the lid off a container of dumplings. "That’s what you’re calling it now?" "I’m calling it the truth." She snorted, but there was no real heat in it. "Right. Because you’re all about truth, aren’t you, Lucien?" The way she said my name—like it was something bitter on her tongue—made my jaw tighten. I’d missed that, in a way. The way she saw through the tailored suits and polished manners to the half-demon underneath. Most people didn’t. I leaned forward, resting my forearms on the table. The amber of my left eye caught the light from the window, making it glow like a banked fire. "I’m here because I need your help." That made her pause. A dumpling hovered halfway to her mouth. "My help." "Yes." "With what?" "A situation that requires discretion. And your particular set of skills." She set the dumpling down. "You mean my ability to disappear into a crowd and deliver noodles without being noticed." "I mean your ability to think ten steps ahead while everyone else is still trying to figure out the rules of the game." A beat of silence. The cat jumped down from the sofa and wound itself around her ankles, purring. Aurora bent to scratch behind its ears, but her gaze never left mine. "Flattery won’t work." "It’s not flattery if it’s true." "Fine." She straightened, crossing her arms. "What’s the job?" I reached into my jacket and pulled out a folded piece of paper. Slid it across the table. "A name. An address. A time." She didn’t touch it. "That’s it?" "That’s the beginning." "And the rest?" "The rest depends on what we find." "We." She laughed, but there was no humour in it. "There is no *we*, Lucien. Not anymore." I picked up the paper, unfolded it. "There is if you say yes." She watched me, her expression unreadable. Then, slowly, she reached out and took the paper from my fingers. Our hands brushed. A spark, like static electricity. She didn’t react, but I saw the way her pupils dilated, just for a second. The name on the paper was *Evan Whitaker*. Aurora’s ex. The one she’d fled Cardiff to escape. Her fingers curled around the paper, crumpling the edges. "You’re joking." "I never joke about work." "Why him?" "Because he’s not just an abusive ex-boyfriend anymore." I tapped the address. "He’s moved up in the world. Now he’s working for someone who doesn’t like loose ends." "And I’m a loose end." "You’re a problem that needs solving." She crumpled the paper into a ball and threw it at my chest. It bounced off my tie and landed in her half-eaten dumplings. "Get out." I didn’t move. "Rory—" "Don’t." Her voice was low, dangerous. "Don’t act like you care. You left. You didn’t call. You didn’t write. You just *vanished* like I was some fling you could walk away from." "I had my reasons." "Reasons." She scoffed. "Right. And I’m sure they were very important. More important than the fact that I waited for you. That I *trusted* you." The word *trusted* hung between us, heavy as a guillotine blade. I’d known this would be hard. I hadn’t realised how much it would hurt to see the betrayal in her eyes, even after all this time. I stood, pushing the chair back with a scrape. "I’ll go. But think about it. Evan’s not the type to let things go. And his new employer? Even less so." She didn’t answer. Just stared at the wall, her jaw clenched so tight I could see the muscle twitching. I picked up my cane, let the blade slide free just enough to catch the light. A reminder of what was at stake. "You know where to find me." The door clicked shut behind me. I was halfway down the stairs when I heard it—the sound of something heavy hitting the wall. A book, maybe. Or a plate. Then, softer, the unmistakable sound of someone trying not to cry.
total_cost0.01685

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.163
leniency0.327
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1035
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1035
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"efficient"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"efficient"
2"weight"
3"silence"
4"unreadable"
5"jaw clenched"
6"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences75
matches
0"t in surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords6
totalWords1027
ratio0.006
matches
0"we"
1"Evan Whitaker"
2"vanished"
3"trusted"
4"trusted"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount706
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Earl1
Grey1
Ptolemy1
Ghosted1
London1
Cardiff1
Aurora5
persons
0"Earl"
1"Grey"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
55.66% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"Not quite a smile, but close"
1"looked like they might avalanche at a lou"
5.26% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.947
wordCount1027
matches
0"not in surprise, but calculation"
1"Not quite a smile, but close"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean18.67
std13.33
cv0.714
sampleLengths
011
156
214
316
423
519
650
747
817
922
1024
1135
1225
1316
145
1519
1640
1735
1813
191
202
2111
2220
2323
2434
256
269
2724
286
293
303
317
3217
3313
3441
358
369
3711
385
392
4028
415
426
4326
444
4532
464
4725
4837
4930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"been thrown"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs131
matches(empty)
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences115
ratio0.043
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes narrowed, not in surprise, but calculation—like she was already deciding whether to slam the door in my face or hear me out."
1"The deadbolts had already been thrown back when I arrived—three of them, just like the codex said."
2"A tabby cat—presumably Ptolemy—watched me from the back of the sofa, tail flicking like a metronome set to distrust."
3"The way she said my name—like it was something bitter on her tongue—made my jaw tighten."
4"I was halfway down the stairs when I heard it—the sound of something heavy hitting the wall."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount714
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.036414565826330535
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0056022408963585435
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean8.93
std5.8
cv0.649
sampleLengths
011
118
212
326
414
512
64
73
89
911
103
114
1212
137
146
157
1617
1713
189
1919
2019
219
228
2317
245
2514
2610
271
285
2920
309
3111
326
338
3410
356
365
3710
389
3916
406
4115
423
439
4419
457
464
477
482
491
55.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3652173913043478
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences72
matches
0"Then, slowly, she reached out"
1"Just stared at the wall,"
2"Then, softer, the unmistakable sound"
ratio0.042
25.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences72
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes narrowed,"
1"My name came out flat,"
2"I adjusted my grip on"
3"She didn’t move."
4"I inclined my head."
5"She stepped aside, the movement"
6"I set my cane against"
7"She pulled out two containers,"
8"I’d left London abruptly six"
9"I took the chair opposite"
10"She peeled the lid off"
11"She snorted, but there was"
12"I’d missed that, in a"
13"I leaned forward, resting my"
14"She set the dumpling down."
15"She straightened, crossing her arms"
16"I reached into my jacket"
17"She didn’t touch it."
18"She laughed, but there was"
19"I picked up the paper,"
ratio0.486
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences72
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Aurora stood there, a takeaway"
2"The scent of soy sauce"
3"Her bright blue eyes narrowed,"
4"My name came out flat,"
5"I adjusted my grip on"
6"She didn’t move."
7"The keys jingled as her"
8"A fair question."
9"I inclined my head."
10"That got a twitch of"
11"She stepped aside, the movement"
12"The deadbolts had already been"
13"The flat smelled of old"
14"Books teetered on every surface,"
15"A tabby cat—presumably Ptolemy—watched me"
16"Aurora dumped the takeaway bag"
17"I set my cane against"
18"She pulled out two containers,"
19"A crude word, but accurate."
ratio0.889
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Either she’d been expecting someone,"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She pulled out, not bothering to offer me one"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.02
leniency0.041
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.041
82.1594%