Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR8M4KNNKN2HXRZEAZZXFC

Run Details

Duration:
15.9s
Cost:
$0.000081
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sign above the entrance creaked in the gentle evening breeze, the distinctive green neon of The Raven's Nest beckoning passersby into the dimly lit world within. Aurora "Rory" Carter navigated the crowded bar with ease, dodging a group of raucous revelers near the pool table. She made her way to the counter, exchanging a warm smile with the bartender as she claimed her usual stool. "You working tonight, Si?" she asked, running a hand through her straight black hair as she leaned against the polished wood. Silas Blackwood looked up from behind the bar, his eyes crinkling at the corners as he returned her smile. His grey-streaked auburn hair and neatly trimmed beard made him look every inch the distinguished gentleman he'd become. For a moment, they simply regarded each other, the air thick with unspoken history. And then, without warning, the door swung open and a young woman strode into the bar. Tall, with a striking bright blue gaze and shoulder-length black hair, she moved with a confident air that drew the eye. Rory's heart skipped a beat as she took in the stranger's features, her mind racing to place the face. The woman's eyes scanned the room, locking onto Rory with a flash of recognition. A slow smile spread across her face, and she began to weave through the crowd with an ease that belied her obvious youth. As she drew closer, Rory felt a jolt of disquiet, her mind racing with memories long buried. "Eva?" Rory's voice caught on the edge of a question, her hand faltering as she reached for her drink. Eva's smile faltered for an instant, before she launched herself across the bar, wrapping Rory in a tight hug. "Rory, oh my god, it's been ages!" Rory's initial stiffness melted beneath Eva's warm grip, and she found herself hugging her old friend back with equal fervor. For a moment, they simply held each other, the tension between them palpable. As they pulled back, Rory's eyes locked onto Eva's, searching for some sign of recognition, some echo of the girl she'd once known. But Eva's eyes were different now, her gaze harder, her features more defined. She looked... polished, somehow, like she'd been honed to perfection. The realization hit Rory like a punch to the gut. It had been years since they'd last spoken, since Eva had fled Cardiff in the wake of that awful summer with Evan. Rory had assumed she'd never see her friend again, that Eva had left their lives behind to start anew. But here she was, looking... transformed. Eva's eyes sparkled with amusement as she took in Rory's gaze. "You look like you've seen a ghost," she teased, snagging a stool beside Rory. Rory shook her head, her eyes drifting to the barkeep as he expertly juggling three drinks at once. "I just... I didn't expect to see you here," she admitted, feeling a little lost. Eva's gaze softened, her voice taking on a hint of apology. "I'm so sorry, Rory. I know I disappeared without a word, and for that, I'm truly sorry." The words hung in the air, unspoken regrets and unmet promises hovering between them like a challenge. Rory's heart ached with a deep-seated sorrow, the weight of years compressed into a single, poignant moment. "Where have you been, Eva?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Eva's eyes flashed with a fierce light, her shoulders squaring as she took on a defensive air. "I've been doing just fine, thank you for asking. I left Cardiff for a reason, Rory. I needed to get out, to start fresh. And I did." The words stung, Rory's feelings of abandonment and hurt flaring like a fire. She opened her mouth to respond, but Eva beat her to it, her voice taking on a lighter tone as she clapped Rory on the back. "Let's catch up, shall we? I've got so much to tell you, Rory. So much." As the night wore on, Rory found herself swept up in Eva's whirlwind, her friend spinning a tale of triumph and hardship that left Rory breathless. But beneath the surface, Rory detected a different Eva, one who'd been honed by fire and tempered by adversity. The girl she'd known was gone, replaced by a confident, driven woman who seemed to have left Rory's small world far behind. As the hours ticked by, Rory's initial excitement gave way to a growing sense of unease. They'd been friends since childhood, bound together by shared secrets and unspoken promises. But now, it seemed, they'd grown apart, their paths diverging in ways Rory couldn't quite comprehend. As the crowd thinned and the night drew to a close, Rory felt a pang of sadness. She knew, in that moment, that things would never be the same again. The Eva she'd known was gone, and in her place stood a stranger, one who seemed to be moving through the world with a confidence Rory could only envy. With a sense of finality, Eva reached out and grasped Rory's hand, her bright blue eyes sparkling in the dim light. "It's been ages, Rory. Let's not lose touch again, okay?" Rory nodded, her heart aching with a deep-seated longing. She knew, in that moment, that she'd never see her friend the same way again. The Eva she'd known was a ghost of the past, a reminder of memories long buried. And as she watched her friend disappear into the London night, Rory felt the weight of years settling heavy on her shoulders, a bittersweet reminder of what could never be again.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:48:51.623Z" 2/19/2026, 10:48:51 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount937
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount937
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"unspoken"
count3
2
word"skipped a beat"
count1
3
word"racing"
count2
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"palpable"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"sense of"
count2
11
word"pang"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count2
highlights
0"navigated"
1"unspoken"
2"skipped a beat"
3"racing"
4"scanned"
5"tension"
6"palpable"
7"echo"
8"weight"
9"whisper"
10"sense of"
11"pang"
12"reminder"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"a flash of recognition"
92.32% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences51
matches
0"felt a jolt"
1"a pang of sadness"
30.81% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences51
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences56
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords933
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount830
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity3.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Silas1
Blackwood1
Rory26
Eva15
Cardiff1
Evan1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Rory"
6"Eva"
7"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite comprehend"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount933
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
66.15% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean42.41
std16.18
cv0.382
sampleLengths
066
121
251
356
454
519
626
733
846
957
1025
1133
1228
1347
1444
1539
1615
1767
1845
1959
2031
2171
77.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences51
matches
0"been honed"
1"been honed"
2"was gone"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs139
matches
0"was, looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount834
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.027577937649880094
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008393285371702638
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences56
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
86.76% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences56
mean16.66
std6.11
cv0.367
sampleLengths
027
119
220
321
419
518
614
716
821
919
1014
1123
1217
1319
1419
157
1620
1713
1823
1913
202
218
2210
2322
2419
255
261
2711
2814
2918
3015
3111
3217
3317
3417
3513
3617
3727
3813
3926
4015
4126
4219
4322
4416
4513
4616
4717
4813
4929
61.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.39285714285714285
totalSentences56
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences49
matches
0"She made her way to"
1"she asked, running a hand"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair and"
3"It had been years since"
4"she teased, snagging a stool"
5"she admitted, feeling a little"
6"she asked, her voice barely"
7"She opened her mouth to"
8"They'd been friends since childhood,"
9"She knew, in that moment,"
10"She knew, in that moment,"
ratio0.224
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences49
matches
0"The sign above the entrance"
1"Aurora Carter navigated the crowded"
2"She made her way to"
3"she asked, running a hand"
4"Silas Blackwood looked up from"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair and"
6"Rory's heart skipped a beat"
7"The woman's eyes scanned the"
8"A slow smile spread across"
9"Rory's voice caught on the"
10"Eva's smile faltered for an"
11"Rory's initial stiffness melted beneath"
12"The realization hit Rory like"
13"It had been years since"
14"Rory had assumed she'd never"
15"Eva's eyes sparkled with amusement"
16"she teased, snagging a stool"
17"Rory shook her head, her"
18"she admitted, feeling a little"
19"Eva's gaze softened, her voice"
ratio0.673
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Tall, with a striking bright blue gaze and shoulder-length black hair, she moved with a confident air that drew the eye."
1"Rory shook her head, her eyes drifting to the barkeep as he expertly juggling three drinks at once."
2"The girl she'd known was gone, replaced by a confident, driven woman who seemed to have left Rory's small world far behind."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory's voice caught on, her hand faltering as she reached for her drink"
1"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she teased (tease)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.364
72.0064%