| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.565 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 77.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 882 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 882 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "navigated" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "stark" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "aligned" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "tinged" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "palpable" | | 10 | "apprehension" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "unspoken" | | 13 | "fleeting" | | 14 | "reminder" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "resolve" | | 17 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 39 | | matches | | |
| 69.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 39 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 879 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest, Soho, London - A Chilly Autumn Evening" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.54% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 694 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.73 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Alex" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 3 | | Nest | 4 | | Soho | 2 | | London | 1 | | Chilly | 1 | | Autumn | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Silas | 4 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Alexander | 1 | | Thompson | 1 | | Alex | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Carter" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Silas" | | 6 | "Blackwood" | | 7 | "Alexander" | | 8 | "Thompson" | | 9 | "Alex" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.635 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "eyes that seemed to hold a depth she couldn't quite fathom" | | 1 | "quite fathom" | | 2 | "as if returning to a role she once knew but had long forgotten" | | 3 | "entity that seemed to press against the walls of the Nest, seeking escape" | | 4 | "as if searching for the girl he once knew within the woman she'd become" | | 5 | "As if sensing the delicacy of the moment, Silas slid a second glass down the bar, this one filled with a clear liquid, which Alex caught with a quiet" | | 6 | "ision weighing visibly on her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 879 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 32.56 | | std | 17.93 | | cv | 0.551 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 85 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 75 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 40 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 26.24% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 49 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "**The Raven's Nest, Soho, London - A Chilly Autumn Evening**" | | 1 | "\"It's a fleeting concept, don't you think? One day, it's there; the next, it's just a memory, a reminder of all the compromises you made along the way.\"" |
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| 99.93% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 697 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.035868005738880916 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020086083213773313 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 49 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 49 | | mean | 17.94 | | std | 9.05 | | cv | 0.505 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 40 |
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| 89.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5510204081632653 | | totalSentences | 49 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed open the heavy" | | 1 | "Her gaze adjusted slowly to" | | 2 | "He slid a glass filled" | | 3 | "His hair, once a rich," | | 4 | "She paused, a hint of" | | 5 | "he ventured, his voice laced" | | 6 | "Her gaze swept over him," | | 7 | "Their hands touched briefly as" | | 8 | "His words trailed off, hanging" | | 9 | "She took a deep breath," |
| | ratio | 0.256 | |
| 11.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "**The Raven's Nest, Soho, London" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 2 | "She pushed open the heavy" | | 3 | "The dim warmth enveloped her," | | 4 | "Her gaze adjusted slowly to" | | 5 | "Rory said, her bright blue" | | 6 | "Silas, ever the man of" | | 7 | "He slid a glass filled" | | 8 | "Rory lifted the glass, the" | | 9 | "The glass hovered near her" | | 10 | "The name barely made it" | | 11 | "Alexander Thompson, a name etched" | | 12 | "The boy she once knew" | | 13 | "The lanky, carefree youth was" | | 14 | "His hair, once a rich," | | 15 | "Alex smiled, the gesture awkward," | | 16 | "Rory set the glass down," | | 17 | "She paused, a hint of" | | 18 | "The tension between them was" | | 19 | "Silas, ever the observant host," |
| | ratio | 0.897 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, as he stepped forward," | | 1 | "As if sensing the delicacy" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 45.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory set the glass down, her movements deliberate, as if returning to a role she once knew but had long forgotten." | | 1 | "The tension between them was palpable, a living, breathing entity that seemed to press against the walls of the Nest, seeking escape." | | 2 | "The silence that followed was a shared blanket of understanding, woven from the threads of their past, present, and the unspoken what-ifs." |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory repeated, a laugh catching in her throat" | | 1 | "Alex began, his voice low, a blend of longing and resolve" |
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| 63.04% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "past her lips her voice (past)" | | 1 | "Rory repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.174 | | leniency | 0.348 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.174 | |