Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR8MA44ZH76XA6P5227MA5

Run Details

Duration:
34.8s
Cost:
$0.002618
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
**The Raven's Nest, Soho, London - A Chilly Autumn Evening** Aurora Carter, known to her acquaintances as Rory, navigated through the swirling mist of the Soho streets, the distinctive green neon sign of The Raven's Nest beckoning her like a familiar haven. She pushed open the heavy door, a soft chime announcing her arrival. The dim warmth enveloped her, a stark contrast to the biting chill outside. Her gaze adjusted slowly to the muted light, old maps and faded black-and-white photographs coming into focus on the walls as she made her way to the bar. "A whiskey, neat. Your finest, please, Si," Rory said, her bright blue eyes locking onto Silas Blackwood's, his hazel eyes sparkling with a hint of warmth from across the bar. Silas, ever the man of few words, nodded, his neatly trimmed beard twitching with a suppressed smile. "On the house, for the prodigal deliveries expert." He slid a glass filled with amber liquid down the polished wood, where it stopped perfectly aligned with Rory's waiting fingers. Rory lifted the glass, the whiskey's smoky aroma teasing her senses, when a voice, like the sudden jolt of a forgotten memory, made her pause. "Aurora Carter? Rory, is that you?" The glass hovered near her lips, her gaze darting towards the source of the voice. Across the room, by the window, a figure stood, partially obscured by the shadows. Yet, as he stepped forward, the faint light outlining his features, a mixture of shock and unease kindled within Rory. "Alex?" The name barely made it past her lips, her voice a blend of disbelief and caution. Alexander "Alex" Thompson, a name etched in her memory alongside countless late-night conversations, spontaneous adventures, and the comfort of unconditional friendship, approached her. The boy she once knew had transformed. The lanky, carefree youth was now a man, with sharp, defined features and eyes that seemed to hold a depth she couldn't quite fathom. His hair, once a rich, dark brown, was now flecked with premature grey, cut short in a stylish, yet subdued manner. Alex smiled, the gesture awkward, tinged with sadness. "It's been...a long time, Rory." Rory set the glass down, her movements deliberate, as if returning to a role she once knew but had long forgotten. "Eight years, two months, and..." She paused, a hint of her old self peeking through the layers of time and experience. "...I lost count of the days." The tension between them was palpable, a living, breathing entity that seemed to press against the walls of the Nest, seeking escape. Silas, ever the observant host, sensed the shift in atmosphere and busied himself with polishing glasses, his eyes occasionally flicking towards the duo. "Can I...join you?" Alex asked, his hand gesturing towards the stool next to Rory, the question hanging in the air like a tentative bridge. Rory nodded, a slight, stiff movement. "Of course." Alex sat, his eyes never leaving hers, as if searching for the girl he once knew within the woman she'd become. "You look...different," he ventured, his voice laced with a mixture of nostalgia and apprehension. "Different?" Rory repeated, a laugh catching in her throat. "We both are, aren't we?" Her gaze swept over him, taking in the changes time had etched. "I see you've...found success, or so it seems." "Success," Alex echoed, the word heavy with unspoken regret. "It's a fleeting concept, don't you think? One day, it's there; the next, it's just a memory, a reminder of all the compromises you made along the way." The silence that followed was a shared blanket of understanding, woven from the threads of their past, present, and the unspoken what-ifs. "What brings you here, Alex? To London, to this place?" Rory's curiosity finally broke the surface, her bright blue eyes seeking answers. "Fate, perhaps. Nostalgia. I was in the area, heard the whispers of a bar with a secretive allure...and then, I saw you. It felt like the universe's way of telling me to stop, reflect, and confront the ghosts of my past." Rory's gaze dropped, her eyes lingering on the whiskey she had yet to taste. "You're not the only one with ghosts, Alex." As if sensing the delicacy of the moment, Silas slid a second glass down the bar, this one filled with a clear liquid, which Alex caught with a quiet "Thanks, Si." Their hands touched briefly as Alex accepted the drink, a spark of the old familiarity igniting, only to be quickly smothered by the layers of time and unspoken words. "Rory," Alex began, his voice low, a blend of longing and resolve. "Can we...talk about it? About what happened, about why I left, and..." His words trailed off, hanging precariously in the balance between their past and present. Rory's gaze met his, a world of emotions swirling within those bright blue depths. She took a deep breath, the decision weighing visibly on her. "Yes, Alex. We can talk about it. Here, now, in this place where time seems to bend a little, just for us." As she spoke, she reached for her whiskey, the amber liquid glowing softly in the dim light of The Raven's Nest, a symbol of the shared past and the uncertain, yet inevitable, journey into the depth of their unspoken regret.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:48:51.798Z" 2/19/2026, 10:48:51 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.565
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount882
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"perfectly"
2"quickly"
3"softly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Thompson"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount882
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"aligned"
count1
6
word"etched"
count2
7
word"tinged"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"palpable"
count1
10
word"apprehension"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count4
13
word"fleeting"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"resolve"
count1
17
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"familiar"
2"warmth"
3"stark"
4"chill"
5"aligned"
6"etched"
7"tinged"
8"tension"
9"palpable"
10"apprehension"
11"echoed"
12"unspoken"
13"fleeting"
14"reminder"
15"silence"
16"resolve"
17"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences39
matches
0"d with sadness"
69.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences39
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences49
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords10
totalWords879
ratio0.011
matches
0"The Raven's Nest, Soho, London - A Chilly Autumn Evening"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.54% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount694
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Alex"
discoveredNames
Raven3
Nest4
Soho2
London1
Chilly1
Autumn1
Aurora1
Carter1
Rory12
Silas4
Blackwood1
Alexander1
Thompson1
Alex7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Blackwood"
7"Alexander"
8"Thompson"
9"Alex"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.635
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"eyes that seemed to hold a depth she couldn't quite fathom"
1"quite fathom"
2"as if returning to a role she once knew but had long forgotten"
3"entity that seemed to press against the walls of the Nest, seeking escape"
4"as if searching for the girl he once knew within the woman she'd become"
5"As if sensing the delicacy of the moment, Silas slid a second glass down the bar, this one filled with a clear liquid, which Alex caught with a quiet"
6"ision weighing visibly on her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount879
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean32.56
std17.93
cv0.551
sampleLengths
010
185
230
346
425
56
649
717
875
913
1048
1145
1224
138
1435
1534
1637
1722
1822
1941
2022
2131
2229
2338
2425
2522
2640
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs111
matches(empty)
26.24% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences49
ratio0.041
matches
0"**The Raven's Nest, Soho, London - A Chilly Autumn Evening**"
1"\"It's a fleeting concept, don't you think? One day, it's there; the next, it's just a memory, a reminder of all the compromises you made along the way.\""
99.93% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount697
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.035868005738880916
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.020086083213773313
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences49
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences49
mean17.94
std9.05
cv0.505
sampleLengths
010
132
212
313
428
530
617
729
825
96
1015
1114
1220
1317
1423
157
1624
1721
188
195
2021
2121
226
2322
2423
2524
266
272
2821
2914
309
3117
328
339
3428
3522
3622
3741
3814
398
4031
4129
4212
4312
4414
4514
4611
4722
4840
89.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5510204081632653
totalSentences49
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences39
matches
0"She pushed open the heavy"
1"Her gaze adjusted slowly to"
2"He slid a glass filled"
3"His hair, once a rich,"
4"She paused, a hint of"
5"he ventured, his voice laced"
6"Her gaze swept over him,"
7"Their hands touched briefly as"
8"His words trailed off, hanging"
9"She took a deep breath,"
ratio0.256
11.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences39
matches
0"**The Raven's Nest, Soho, London"
1"Aurora Carter, known to her"
2"She pushed open the heavy"
3"The dim warmth enveloped her,"
4"Her gaze adjusted slowly to"
5"Rory said, her bright blue"
6"Silas, ever the man of"
7"He slid a glass filled"
8"Rory lifted the glass, the"
9"The glass hovered near her"
10"The name barely made it"
11"Alexander Thompson, a name etched"
12"The boy she once knew"
13"The lanky, carefree youth was"
14"His hair, once a rich,"
15"Alex smiled, the gesture awkward,"
16"Rory set the glass down,"
17"She paused, a hint of"
18"The tension between them was"
19"Silas, ever the observant host,"
ratio0.897
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences39
matches
0"Yet, as he stepped forward,"
1"As if sensing the delicacy"
ratio0.051
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory set the glass down, her movements deliberate, as if returning to a role she once knew but had long forgotten."
1"The tension between them was palpable, a living, breathing entity that seemed to press against the walls of the Nest, seeking escape."
2"The silence that followed was a shared blanket of understanding, woven from the threads of their past, present, and the unspoken what-ifs."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory repeated, a laugh catching in her throat"
1"Alex began, his voice low, a blend of longing and resolve"
63.04% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"past her lips her voice (past)"
1"Rory repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.174
75.8095%