| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.581 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 73.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1118 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1118 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "unsettled" | | 5 | "dances" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "depths" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "trepidation" | | 10 | "intrigue" | | 11 | "potential" | | 12 | "unspoken" | | 13 | "resonated" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "echoes" | | 16 | "shimmered" | | 17 | "electric" | | 18 | "pulsed" | | 19 | "dance" | | 20 | "peril" | | 21 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "A thrill of trepidation" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1110 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 830 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Isolde | 8 | | Wildflowers | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Nyx | 15 | | Gaze | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Time | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Varga" | | 6 | "Half-Fae" | | 7 | "Time" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.536 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 27.75 | | std | 14.98 | | cv | 0.54 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 52 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 55 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 12.99% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "As she reached out to touch a slender petal, a laugh—musical and echoing—rang from somewhere beyond the trees." | | 1 | "When they emerged again, they held a silver half-circle in their hand—one of the resonant flowers twisting slowly, harmonizing with the grove's melody." | | 2 | "Before Nyx could reply, a sound rippled through the trees, soft as breath yet unmistakable—pulsing with an urgent rhythm." | | 3 | "The ancient Half-Fae carried an ethereal aura; her silver hair flowed like liquid moonlight down her waist, trailing behind her without touching the ground." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 838 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.029832935560859187 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010739856801909307 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 12.61 | | std | 5.69 | | cv | 0.451 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 97.73% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.6022727272727273 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, squinting at the" | | 1 | "she replied, glancing at Nyx" | | 2 | "They continued deeper into the" | | 3 | "It unsettled her, yet she" | | 4 | "It rippled as if alive," | | 5 | "she said, eyes wide" | | 6 | "She stepped closer, captivated by" | | 7 | "she countered, her reflection translucent" | | 8 | "It coiled through the glade," | | 9 | "she whispered, the words slipping" |
| | ratio | 0.145 | |
| 46.96% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The sun dipped below the" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, Rory to her" | | 2 | "A tingling sensation traveled up" | | 3 | "The air shifted, cool and" | | 4 | "she murmured, squinting at the" | | 5 | "Wildflowers of every shade imaginable" | | 6 | "The whispers of the place" | | 7 | "Nyx moved beside her, their" | | 8 | "The Shade’s faintly glowing violet" | | 9 | "Nyx whispered, voice as soft" | | 10 | "A cluster of luminescent flowers" | | 11 | "Nyx warned, an amused tone" | | 12 | "Rory chuckled, pulling back her" | | 13 | "she replied, glancing at Nyx" | | 14 | "The Shade took a step" | | 15 | "Rory said, her tone half-serious" | | 16 | "Nyx smirked, mischief glimmering in" | | 17 | "They continued deeper into the" | | 18 | "Aurora could feel the pulse" | | 19 | "It unsettled her, yet she" |
| | ratio | 0.826 | |
| 72.46% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Nyx could reply, a" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The sun dipped below the horizon, casting long shadows that stretched like fingers across the ancient grove." | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, Rory to her friends, stepped cautiously through the standing stones that marked the boundary of Isolde's grove." | | 2 | "The Shade’s faintly glowing violet eyes glimmered with curiosity, reflecting flickers of light as though they drank in the magic of the grove." | | 3 | "The grassy floor sparkled under the added glow of a faint silver light emanating from the glimmering stones that stood like guardians in a circle." | | 4 | "Rory stepped ahead, her heartbeat quickening, the environment shifting as they moved." | | 5 | "It coiled through the glade, as if the place itself exhaled, trembling with life and secrets long unspoken." | | 6 | "The ancient Half-Fae carried an ethereal aura; her silver hair flowed like liquid moonlight down her waist, trailing behind her without touching the ground." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her tone half-serious" | | 1 | "Nyx smirked, mischief glimmering in their eyes" | | 2 | "Nyx stated, their voice low, reverent" | | 3 | "Rory questioned, pausing to scrutinize the bark of an enormous oak" | | 4 | "she said, eyes wide" | | 5 | "Nyx stated, voice barely above a whisper" | | 6 | "Nyx warned, shadow flickering at their feet" | | 7 | "she countered, her reflection translucent under the surface" | | 8 | "Isolde replied, a playful smile curving her lips" | | 9 | "she whispered, the words slipping free before she could properly consider them" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 19 | | fancyCount | 11 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Nyx stated (state)" | | 4 | "Rory questioned (question)" | | 5 | "Rory laughed (laugh)" | | 6 | "Nyx stated (state)" | | 7 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 8 | "Nyx inquired (inquire)" | | 9 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 10 | "Isolde spoke (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.442 | | leniency | 0.884 | | rawRatio | 0.579 | | effectiveRatio | 0.512 | |