Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR8MZQEKXHDJTCMHXN64YN

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Duration:
43.6s
Cost:
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sun dipped below the horizon, casting long shadows that stretched like fingers across the ancient grove. Aurora Carter, Rory to her friends, stepped cautiously through the standing stones that marked the boundary of Isolde's grove. A tingling sensation traveled up her spine, a warning and a welcome wrapped in the same breath. The air shifted, cool and fragrant, wrapping around her like silk. “Not at all what I expected,” she murmured, squinting at the riotous colors blooming in every nook and cranny. Wildflowers of every shade imaginable carpeted the ground, their sweet scent mingling with something deeper, older. The whispers of the place danced around her, a soft susurration, as if the very foliage had a story to tell. Nyx moved beside her, their silhouette merging with the shadows cast by the towering trees. The Shade’s faintly glowing violet eyes glimmered with curiosity, reflecting flickers of light as though they drank in the magic of the grove. “Look,” Nyx whispered, voice as soft as a breeze. “The petals shift as if they breathe.” A cluster of luminescent flowers swayed despite the stillness in the air, pulsating like gentle hearts. Enraptured, Rory knelt closer to inspect. As she reached out to touch a slender petal, a laugh—musical and echoing—rang from somewhere beyond the trees. “Watch out for the singing blooms,” Nyx warned, an amused tone threading through their words. “They like to tease newcomers.” Rory chuckled, pulling back her hand. “Let them sing. I could use a concert,” she replied, glancing at Nyx. The Shade took a step forward, disappearing into a pool of darkness cast by an ancient oak. When they emerged again, they held a silver half-circle in their hand—one of the resonant flowers twisting slowly, harmonizing with the grove's melody. “Careful,” Rory said, her tone half-serious. “Don’t turn into their pet.” “I enjoy the shadow’s embrace too much for that,” Nyx smirked, mischief glimmering in their eyes. They continued deeper into the grove, the air thickening as an all-encompassing energy enveloped them. Aurora could feel the pulse of the place resonate in her bones, like a heartbeat drumming beneath the earth. It unsettled her, yet she felt inexplicably drawn to it, pulled toward something just beyond her reach. “Isolde has done well,” Nyx stated, their voice low, reverent. “This grove breathes life.” "Life or magic?" Rory questioned, pausing to scrutinize the bark of an enormous oak. It rippled as if alive, patterns shifting under her touch. “Magic is life, in its own way,” Nyx replied, drifting to a patch of wildflowers. “These plants have been touched by the Fae. Their essence infuses our very air.” “This place feels… ancient.” Rory's eyes roamed over the towering trees, their trunks knotted and twisted in ways she couldn't comprehend. “How long has it been here?” Nyx inclined their head, studying her. “Longer than your time, and perhaps not at all. Here, time dances differently.” “A riddle already?” Rory laughed, shaking her head. “You’re worse than Isolde.” The laughter faded as the colorful flora gave way to an open glade. The grassy floor sparkled under the added glow of a faint silver light emanating from the glimmering stones that stood like guardians in a circle. Rory stepped ahead, her heartbeat quickening, the environment shifting as they moved. “Look at that,” she said, eyes wide. In the center of the glade, a shimmering pool glowed, its surface rippled with colors like a swirling galaxy. Moonlit reflections flickered across its depths, captivating her. “Water from the Fae realm,” Nyx stated, voice barely above a whisper. “Those who gaze too deeply might find more than they bargained for.” Gaze too deeply? A thrill of trepidation laced with intrigue prickled across Rory’s skin. She stepped closer, captivated by the depths of the pool. “Don’t,” Nyx warned, shadow flickering at their feet. “You could lose yourself.” “Or discover secrets,” she countered, her reflection translucent under the surface. “Isolde mentioned the potential for visions.” Before Nyx could reply, a sound rippled through the trees, soft as breath yet unmistakable—pulsing with an urgent rhythm. It coiled through the glade, as if the place itself exhaled, trembling with life and secrets long unspoken. Rory turned toward Nyx, eyes widening. “Did you hear that?” “Something approaches.” Nyx’s form flickered, the air around them vibrating with energy. From the shadows emerged a figure clad in hues of silver and azure. Isolde Varga stepped into the light, her pale lavender eyes shimmering with wisdom and mischief. The ancient Half-Fae carried an ethereal aura; her silver hair flowed like liquid moonlight down her waist, trailing behind her without touching the ground. “Welcome, children of the mortal realm,” Isolde's voice resonated, carrying the weight of ages. “You have crossed a threshold, and now you stand ready to witness.” “What are we witnessing?” Rory asked, instinctually stepping closer to Nyx, seeking their shadowy presence for assurance. “Potential,” Isolde replied, a playful smile curving her lips. “Whispers of fates unsealed. But tread carefully, for the light reveals much and can ensnare the unwary.” Rory felt the pull, electricity coursing through her as the grove responded to Isolde’s presence. “Where does this lead?” Nyx inquired, eyeing the pool, cautious and intrigued. “What is the truth hidden beneath?” “Truth reflects in myriad hues,” Isolde replied, stepping beside the shimmering waters. “Each gaze begets a choice, each choice echoes in realms beyond what you know. Are you ready for such revelations?” Rory hesitated. Beneath her curiosity, unease wrapped around her heart like creeping vines. “Isolde, what happens if we choose wrong?” Rory prodded, worry tightening her spine. “Choices carve paths unseen,” Isolde replied, dismissing the question with a graceful wave. “Let the currents of fate guide you. This sacred place holds the answer to what you seek.” Rory's breath hitched. The pool shimmered, an invitation and a warning, all wrapped in one. The questions swirled in her mind like the bloom around them. Which path would she choose? “Do I even want to know?” she whispered, the words slipping free before she could properly consider them. Time slowed, stretched, and wrapped around her, alive and electric. The grove pulsed, resonating with her unvoiced doubts. “Here, you may find a part of yourself long forgotten,” Isolde spoke, as her eyes glimmered like distant stars. “Dare to look deep, or turn away. The choice is yours.” And as Rory stared into the depths of the pool, the winds shifted, carrying a haunting melody through the air, weaving around her like shadows playing with the light. What lay ahead was uncertain, teasing a dance between discovery and peril. With heart pounding, she felt the pull of the mystery, beckoning her to choose.
total_cost0.00111617

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.581
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"very"
2"slowly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"unsettled"
count1
5
word"dances"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"depths"
count3
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"trepidation"
count1
10
word"intrigue"
count1
11
word"potential"
count2
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"resonated"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"echoes"
count1
16
word"shimmered"
count1
17
word"electric"
count1
18
word"pulsed"
count1
19
word"dance"
count1
20
word"peril"
count1
21
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"echoing"
2"could feel"
3"pulse"
4"unsettled"
5"dances"
6"flickered"
7"depths"
8"whisper"
9"trepidation"
10"intrigue"
11"potential"
12"unspoken"
13"resonated"
14"weight"
15"echoes"
16"shimmered"
17"electric"
18"pulsed"
19"dance"
20"peril"
21"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences70
matches
0"A thrill of trepidation"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1110
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount830
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory16
Isolde8
Wildflowers1
Shade2
Nyx15
Gaze1
Varga1
Half-Fae1
Time1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Shade"
4"Nyx"
5"Varga"
6"Half-Fae"
7"Time"
places(empty)
globalScore0.536
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1110
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean27.75
std14.98
cv0.54
sampleLengths
064
156
238
316
440
520
659
711
816
951
1014
1124
1229
1327
1419
1512
1650
1734
1824
1924
2012
2117
2237
2310
2412
2552
2626
2717
2826
2915
3018
3132
3213
3313
3430
3531
3618
3718
3830
3955
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs162
matches(empty)
12.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences88
ratio0.045
matches
0"As she reached out to touch a slender petal, a laugh—musical and echoing—rang from somewhere beyond the trees."
1"When they emerged again, they held a silver half-circle in their hand—one of the resonant flowers twisting slowly, harmonizing with the grove's melody."
2"Before Nyx could reply, a sound rippled through the trees, soft as breath yet unmistakable—pulsing with an urgent rhythm."
3"The ancient Half-Fae carried an ethereal aura; her silver hair flowed like liquid moonlight down her waist, trailing behind her without touching the ground."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount838
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.029832935560859187
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010739856801909307
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean12.61
std5.69
cv0.451
sampleLengths
017
119
217
311
419
516
621
715
823
99
107
1116
126
1318
1415
155
166
1713
1817
1923
206
215
2216
2315
2419
2517
2610
274
2814
2910
3015
3114
3221
336
346
3513
368
374
3813
3925
4012
417
4219
438
4412
4512
463
4711
4810
498
97.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.6022727272727273
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners53
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences69
matches
0"she murmured, squinting at the"
1"she replied, glancing at Nyx"
2"They continued deeper into the"
3"It unsettled her, yet she"
4"It rippled as if alive,"
5"she said, eyes wide"
6"She stepped closer, captivated by"
7"she countered, her reflection translucent"
8"It coiled through the glade,"
9"she whispered, the words slipping"
ratio0.145
46.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences69
matches
0"The sun dipped below the"
1"Aurora Carter, Rory to her"
2"A tingling sensation traveled up"
3"The air shifted, cool and"
4"she murmured, squinting at the"
5"Wildflowers of every shade imaginable"
6"The whispers of the place"
7"Nyx moved beside her, their"
8"The Shade’s faintly glowing violet"
9"Nyx whispered, voice as soft"
10"A cluster of luminescent flowers"
11"Nyx warned, an amused tone"
12"Rory chuckled, pulling back her"
13"she replied, glancing at Nyx"
14"The Shade took a step"
15"Rory said, her tone half-serious"
16"Nyx smirked, mischief glimmering in"
17"They continued deeper into the"
18"Aurora could feel the pulse"
19"It unsettled her, yet she"
ratio0.826
72.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Before Nyx could reply, a"
ratio0.014
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The sun dipped below the horizon, casting long shadows that stretched like fingers across the ancient grove."
1"Aurora Carter, Rory to her friends, stepped cautiously through the standing stones that marked the boundary of Isolde's grove."
2"The Shade’s faintly glowing violet eyes glimmered with curiosity, reflecting flickers of light as though they drank in the magic of the grove."
3"The grassy floor sparkled under the added glow of a faint silver light emanating from the glimmering stones that stood like guardians in a circle."
4"Rory stepped ahead, her heartbeat quickening, the environment shifting as they moved."
5"It coiled through the glade, as if the place itself exhaled, trembling with life and secrets long unspoken."
6"The ancient Half-Fae carried an ethereal aura; her silver hair flowed like liquid moonlight down her waist, trailing behind her without touching the ground."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"Rory said, her tone half-serious"
1"Nyx smirked, mischief glimmering in their eyes"
2"Nyx stated, their voice low, reverent"
3"Rory questioned, pausing to scrutinize the bark of an enormous oak"
4"she said, eyes wide"
5"Nyx stated, voice barely above a whisper"
6"Nyx warned, shadow flickering at their feet"
7"she countered, her reflection translucent under the surface"
8"Isolde replied, a playful smile curving her lips"
9"she whispered, the words slipping free before she could properly consider them"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx warned (warn)"
3"Nyx stated (state)"
4"Rory questioned (question)"
5"Rory laughed (laugh)"
6"Nyx stated (state)"
7"Nyx warned (warn)"
8"Nyx inquired (inquire)"
9"she whispered (whisper)"
10"Isolde spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.442
leniency0.884
rawRatio0.579
effectiveRatio0.512
75.1100%