| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory shouted again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 65.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 726 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 726 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "pounding" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "determined" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "quickened" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "intensity" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "beacon" | | 11 | "gloom" | | 12 | "throbbed" | | 13 | "reverberated" | | 14 | "raced" | | 15 | "newfound" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 98.21% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 22 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 724 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.97% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 9 | | wordCount | 714 | | uniqueNames | 1 | | maxNameDensity | 1.26 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.87 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 724 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.20% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 40.22 | | std | 11.69 | | cv | 0.291 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 48 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 54.95% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 65 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "But the warmth also made her nervous; its intensity seemed to reflect her own fear." | | 1 | "Slowly, she became aware of her surroundings once more; the stones, the eerie stillness of the grove." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 716 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.0335195530726257 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015363128491620111 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 65 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 95.95% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 65 | | mean | 11.14 | | std | 4.34 | | cv | 0.39 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 69.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4461538461538462 | | totalSentences | 65 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Cautiously, she stepped onto the" | | 1 | "Suddenly, a loud snap broke" | | 2 | "Unexpectedly, the creatures froze, their" | | 3 | "Slowly, she became aware of" |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "It stirred something deep within," | | 1 | "She shivered, her breath forming" | | 2 | "She waited, straining her ears," | | 3 | "She swore she glimpsed movement" | | 4 | "She took a step forward," | | 5 | "Her pulse quickened." | | 6 | "It had been a gift" | | 7 | "She clutched it tightly, and" | | 8 | "She held it higher, using" | | 9 | "She wondered if it was" | | 10 | "She walked faster, the pendant" | | 11 | "she yelled, brandishing the pendant" | | 12 | "They hissed, their inhuman forms" | | 13 | "She considered throwing it, a" | | 14 | "She held the pendant in" | | 15 | "It had saved her, for" | | 16 | "Her mind raced with questions" |
| | ratio | 0.27 | |
| 94.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory took a final, uneasy" | | 1 | "The moon hung low, its" | | 2 | "Wildflowers danced in a soft" | | 3 | "An otherworldly hum filled the" | | 4 | "The grove's energy swept over" | | 5 | "It stirred something deep within," | | 6 | "She shivered, her breath forming" | | 7 | "Something rustled in the undergrowth," | | 8 | "Rory froze, heart pounding." | | 9 | "The sound paused, followed by" | | 10 | "She waited, straining her ears," | | 11 | "A sudden gust made the" | | 12 | "Branches creaked and rustled, casting" | | 13 | "She swore she glimpsed movement" | | 14 | "She took a step forward," | | 15 | "That's when she spotted them," | | 16 | "Her pulse quickened." | | 17 | "It had been a gift" | | 18 | "Rory fumbled in her pocket" | | 19 | "The heat it emitted made" |
| | ratio | 0.73 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She waited, straining her ears, feeling eyes on her from the darkness." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she yelled (yell)" | | 1 | "Rory shouted again (shout)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |