Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR8MZTGKEWR79E5A22Z3ZD

Run Details

Duration:
19.5s
Cost:
$0.012205
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory took a final, uneasy look around before entering the fae grove. The moon hung low, its pale glow casting eerie shadows through the dense foliage. Tall, ancient oaks rose like guardians, their gnarled roots tangled and overgrown. Wildflowers danced in a soft breeze, their blooms a vivid contrast to the dimness. An otherworldly hum filled the air, a buzz she felt more than heard. Cautiously, she stepped onto the path, marked by time-worn standing stones. The grove's energy swept over her, a buzz under her skin. It stirred something deep within, a primal warning. She shivered, her breath forming clouds in the chill air. Something rustled in the undergrowth, invisible beyond the tall ferns. Rory froze, heart pounding. Was it just an animal? The sound paused, followed by an unsettling silence. She waited, straining her ears, feeling eyes on her from the darkness. A sudden gust made the trees groan. Branches creaked and rustled, casting shadows across the grass. She swore she glimpsed movement in the corner of her eye, a flash of colour retreating into the woods. But when she spun around, all she saw was an empty path. She took a step forward, determined. That's when she spotted them, faint and pulsing, the standing stones. Her pulse quickened. The pendant! How could she forget it? It had been a gift from an anonymous benefactor, but with the chaos of the journey, she'd forgotten it existed until now. Rory fumbled in her pocket for the chain, her fingers closing around the smooth gemstone. As she drew it forth, the pendant glowed brighter, a deep crimson against her palm. The heat it emitted made her want to look closer, but she resisted, aware something lurked in the darkness, watching. The pendant began to warm further, almost pulsing in her hand. She clutched it tightly, and it responded in kind, its hum soothing. But the warmth also made her nervous; its intensity seemed to reflect her own fear. She held it higher, using the crimson glow to light her way forward. As she approached the center of the grove, the pendant pulsed strongly, a beacon in the gloom. The more nervous Rory became, the brighter it shined, a cautious optimism in a perilous location. She wondered if it was a wayfinding tool, a guide through this place. She walked faster, the pendant leading her on. Despite the warmth, Rory felt a chill deep in her bones. The deeper she ventured, the stranger the grove became. Fae tricks, her mind whispered. But even her sharp mind struggled to find logic in the sights and sounds. The grove's silence enveloped her now, unsettling. The wind had stopped, and the rustling ceased. All she could hear was her own breath and the rush of blood in her ears. Suddenly, a loud snap broke the quiet, followed by more footfalls, heading directly toward her. Rory spun, the pendant swinging wildly in her hand. The woods erupted into chaos as dark forms emerged from the shadows, moving with preternatural speed. "Get back!" she yelled, brandishing the pendant like a weapon. The creatures halted momentarily, their glowing red eyes reflecting the stone's light. They hissed, their inhuman forms blending into the woods. "Stay away!" Rory shouted again, backing towards the stones. The crimson gem throbbed in her hand, its light a beacon to the encroaching darkness. A menacing hiss reverberated through the clearing as the creatures advanced. Rory realised their target wasn't her but the pendant, their gazes fixated on its glow. She considered throwing it, a distraction, but feared they might rip it from her grasp. In desperation, she raised it higher, almost beseeching. "Take it, but leave me be." Unexpectedly, the creatures froze, their eyes fixed on the gem. A soft vibration filled the air, the stones resonating with the pendant's energy. The creatures shrieked, a high-pitched wail, before vanishing as quickly as they'd appeared. Rory collapsed, panting, adrenaline coursing through her veins. Slowly, she became aware of her surroundings once more; the stones, the eerie stillness of the grove. She held the pendant in trembling fingers, studying its glow. It had saved her, for now. But what was its purpose? Who had sent it, and why? Her mind raced with questions as she retreated, vowing to uncover the mysteries of the fae grove, and her newfound pendant.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory shouted again [again]"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
65.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount726
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"tightly"
2"suddenly"
3"quickly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount726
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"chill"
count2
2
word"pounding"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"determined"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"quickened"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"beacon"
count2
11
word"gloom"
count1
12
word"throbbed"
count1
13
word"reverberated"
count1
14
word"raced"
count1
15
word"newfound"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"chill"
2"pounding"
3"silence"
4"determined"
5"pulse"
6"quickened"
7"warmth"
8"intensity"
9"pulsed"
10"beacon"
11"gloom"
12"throbbed"
13"reverberated"
14"raced"
15"newfound"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences64
matches
0"felt a chill"
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords724
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount714
uniqueNames1
maxNameDensity1.26
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory9
persons
0"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.87
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount724
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
40.20% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean40.22
std11.69
cv0.291
sampleLengths
065
140
239
347
449
550
651
746
847
931
1040
1131
1224
1341
1414
1536
1625
1748
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs136
matches(empty)
54.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences65
ratio0.031
matches
0"But the warmth also made her nervous; its intensity seemed to reflect her own fear."
1"Slowly, she became aware of her surroundings once more; the stones, the eerie stillness of the grove."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount716
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.0335195530726257
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.015363128491620111
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
95.95% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean11.14
std4.34
cv0.39
sampleLengths
012
114
212
314
413
511
611
78
810
910
104
115
128
1312
147
159
1619
1712
186
1911
203
212
225
2322
2415
2515
2620
2711
2812
2915
3013
3117
3216
3313
348
3511
369
375
3814
397
408
4116
4215
439
4416
4510
4612
479
489
4915
69.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4461538461538462
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences63
matches
0"Cautiously, she stepped onto the"
1"Suddenly, a loud snap broke"
2"Unexpectedly, the creatures froze, their"
3"Slowly, she became aware of"
ratio0.063
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences63
matches
0"It stirred something deep within,"
1"She shivered, her breath forming"
2"She waited, straining her ears,"
3"She swore she glimpsed movement"
4"She took a step forward,"
5"Her pulse quickened."
6"It had been a gift"
7"She clutched it tightly, and"
8"She held it higher, using"
9"She wondered if it was"
10"She walked faster, the pendant"
11"she yelled, brandishing the pendant"
12"They hissed, their inhuman forms"
13"She considered throwing it, a"
14"She held the pendant in"
15"It had saved her, for"
16"Her mind raced with questions"
ratio0.27
94.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences63
matches
0"Rory took a final, uneasy"
1"The moon hung low, its"
2"Wildflowers danced in a soft"
3"An otherworldly hum filled the"
4"The grove's energy swept over"
5"It stirred something deep within,"
6"She shivered, her breath forming"
7"Something rustled in the undergrowth,"
8"Rory froze, heart pounding."
9"The sound paused, followed by"
10"She waited, straining her ears,"
11"A sudden gust made the"
12"Branches creaked and rustled, casting"
13"She swore she glimpsed movement"
14"She took a step forward,"
15"That's when she spotted them,"
16"Her pulse quickened."
17"It had been a gift"
18"Rory fumbled in her pocket"
19"The heat it emitted made"
ratio0.73
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She waited, straining her ears, feeling eyes on her from the darkness."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she yelled (yell)"
1"Rory shouted again (shout)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
80.2172%