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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR8W126BN9BQW8B4JMCYBS
Run Details
Model:
Mistral NeMO
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
9.8s
Cost:
$0.000391
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
83.51%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
9.32%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
0.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
66.67%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
58.68%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
94.18%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
34.76%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
73.26%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
9.01%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
14.95%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
54.95%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
76.6425%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The rain was a relentless
drumbeat on the city streets, each drop a tiny, cold fist
pounding
against the pavement.
Detective Harlow Quinn's breath misted
in the
chill
air as she sprinted after the fleeing figure, her worn leather
watch
a heavy presence on her left wrist.
The man she pursued darted
around a corner, his dark coat a blur against the neon glow of Soho.
Quinn's heart pounded in her
chest, a metronome keeping time with her
footsteps
. Her salt-and-pepper hair, closely cropped,
was plastered
to her scalp by the rain.
She rounded the corner, her
sharp jaw set,
eyes narrowed
against the downpour.
The man was fast, but
she
was driven
.
She could see him, a
dark silhouette against the green neon sign of The Raven's Nest.
The man skidded to a
halt, turning to face her.
His eyes, warm brown and
wide with fear, met hers for a moment before he spun and disappeared through the distinctive green neon sign's glow.
Quinn hesitated, her military precision
kicking in.
She was out of her
jurisdiction here, chasing a suspect into a known supernatural haunt. But she'd come this far, and she wasn't about to turn back now. She stepped into the bar, the dim lighting a
stark
contrast to the neon-drenched streets.
The air was thick with
smoke and the hum of hushed conversations. Old maps and black-and-white photographs covered the walls, a
testament
to the city's history.
The patrons were a mix
of humans and... others.
She could feel their eyes
on her, the
tension
in the room
palpable
. Quinn pushed through the crowd, her gaze fixed on the door the man had disappeared through.
She could feel the weight
of her gun in its holster, a
comforting
presence.
She reached the door, her
hand hovering over the handle. She took a deep breath, steeling herself for what lay beyond.
Then, she pushed the door
open and stepped into the unknown. The room beyond was a
stark
contrast to the bar.
It was a hidden back
room, accessible only through a bookshelf that swung open on silent hinges. The walls
were lined
with shelves filled with ancient tomes and strange artifacts. A long table dominated the center of the room, around which sat a group of men and women.
They were all human, but
there was something off about them. Their eyes were too bright, their skin too pale. Quinn's hand went to her gun, her fingers wrapping around the
familiar
grip. The man she'd been chasing stood at the head of the table, his chest heaving.
He looked at her, fear
in his eyes. "You shouldn't be here,"
he said, his voice barely
above a
whisper
. Quinn's gaze swept the room, taking in every detail. "I'm Detective Quinn,"
she said, her voice steady
. "I'm here for him." She nodded at the man, her eyes never leaving the group at the table. A woman stood, her chair scraping loudly against the stone floor.
She was tall, her hair
a cascade of dark curls down her back.
Her eyes were a piercing
blue, almost too bright to look at directly. "You're not welcome here, Detective,"
she said, her voice like
ice. "This is a private gathering." Quinn's grip tightened on her gun. "I'm not here to cause trouble," she said. "I just want to talk to him." She nodded at the man again, her gaze flicking back to the woman. "Alone." The woman smiled, a cold, humorless expression. "That's not possible, I'm afraid." She took a step towards Quinn, her heels clicking on the stone floor. "You see, we have rules here. Rules that you, as a human, wouldn't understand."
Quinn's heart pounded in her
chest. She
could feel
the danger in the room, a
tangible
thing that prickled her skin. But she'd come this far, and she wasn't about to back down now. "I'm not leaving without him,"
she said, her voice steady
. The woman laughed, a sound like breaking glass. "You're brave, I'll give you that," she said. "But you're out of your depth, Detective. This is a world you don't understand. A world you shouldn't even know about." Quinn's gaze swept the room again, taking in the strange artifacts, the too-bright eyes of the people gathered. She thought of DS Morris, of the unexplained circumstances of his death. She thought of the man she'd been chasing, of the fear in his eyes. She made her decision. "I don't care,"
she said, her voice steady
. "I'm not leaving without him." The woman's smile faded, her eyes narrowing. "Very well," she said. "But don't say I didn't warn you." She turned to the man, her voice dropping to a low growl. "Kill her." The room erupted into chaos. The man Quinn had been chasing lunged at her, his eyes wild. She brought her gun up, firing off a shot. The bullet hit him in the shoulder, spinning him around. He fell to the ground, groaning in pain. Quinn's gaze
flicked
to the woman, who
was advancing
on her, her eyes glowing with an
otherworldly
light. Quinn fired again, the bullet hitting the woman in the chest. She stumbled back, surprise
etched
on her face. Then, she smiled, a slow, cruel curve of her lips. "You can't kill me, Detective,"
she said, her voice a low purr
. "I'm already dead."
Quinn's heart pounded in her
chest. She
could feel
the fear, the uncertainty, but she pushed it down. She couldn't afford to hesitate, not here, not now. She fired again, the bullet hitting the woman in the head. She fell to the ground, her body dissolving into a pile of ash and bone. The room was silent, the
otherworldly
glow fading from the eyes of the people gathered. Quinn stood, her gun still raised, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She looked at the man she'd been chasing, at the wound in his shoulder. She holstered her gun, her hands shaking
slightly
. "I'm Detective Quinn,"
she said, her voice steady
. "You're under arrest." The man looked at her, fear still in his eyes. But there was something else there too, something she couldn't
quite put her finger on
. "You shouldn't have come here,"
he said, his voice barely
above a
whisper
. "You don't know what you've gotten yourself into." Quinn looked around the room, at the strange artifacts, at the pile of ash and bone that had once been a woman. She thought of the world she'd stumbled into, a world she didn't understand. But she was a detective, and she'd sworn to uphold the law.
No matter what world she
was in. "I'll take my chances,"
she said, her voice steady
. She reached down, grabbing the man by the arm. She pulled him to his feet, her grip firm. "Let's go,"
she said, her voice brooking no argument
. "You have some explaining to do." As they stepped out of the room, back into the dimly lit bar, Quinn couldn't shake
the feeling of unease
. She'd come here chasing a suspect, but she'd found something else entirely. She'd found a world hidden within the world she knew, a world of danger and the unknown. And she had a
feeling that this
was just the beginning.
total_cost
0.00039089999999999996
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
17
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
27
tagDensity
0.63
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
83.51%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1213
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
2
1
adverb
"very"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"barely above a whisper"
1
"very"
2
"slightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
9.32%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1213
totalAiIsms
22
found
0
word
"pounding"
count
1
1
word
"chill"
count
1
2
word
"footsteps"
count
1
3
word
"stark"
count
2
4
word
"testament"
count
1
5
word
"could feel"
count
4
6
word
"tension"
count
1
7
word
"palpable"
count
1
8
word
"weight"
count
1
9
word
"comforting"
count
1
10
word
"familiar"
count
1
11
word
"whisper"
count
2
12
word
"tangible"
count
1
13
word
"flicked"
count
1
14
word
"otherworldly"
count
2
15
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"pounding"
1
"chill"
2
"footsteps"
3
"stark"
4
"testament"
5
"could feel"
6
"tension"
7
"palpable"
8
"weight"
9
"comforting"
10
"familiar"
11
"whisper"
12
"tangible"
13
"flicked"
14
"otherworldly"
15
"etched"
0.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
5
maxInWindow
4
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
3
1
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
2
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"eyes narrowed"
2
"The air was thick with"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
2
narrationSentences
95
matches
0
"e with fear"
1
"the feeling of unease"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
95
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
105
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
27
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1207
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
15
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
66.67%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
22
wordCount
1063
uniqueNames
6
maxNameDensity
1.6
worstName
"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow
1
Quinn
17
Soho
1
Raven
1
Nest
1
Morris
1
persons
0
"Harlow"
1
"Quinn"
2
"Raven"
3
"Morris"
places
0
"Soho"
globalScore
0.7
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
84
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"quite put her finger on"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1207
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
105
matches
0
"feeling that this"
58.68%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
25
mean
48.28
std
17.16
cv
0.355
sampleLengths
0
66
1
63
2
70
3
63
4
62
5
91
6
35
7
35
8
53
9
35
10
39
11
44
12
37
13
48
14
13
15
32
16
44
17
62
18
53
19
49
20
11
21
46
22
54
23
42
24
60
94.18%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
95
matches
0
"was plastered"
1
"was driven"
2
"were lined"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
174
matches
0
"was advancing"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
105
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1069
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
34
adverbRatio
0.031805425631431246
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.01028999064546305
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
105
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
105
mean
11.5
std
4.91
cv
0.427
sampleLengths
0
20
1
27
2
19
3
13
4
13
5
13
6
8
7
16
8
10
9
25
10
7
11
15
12
13
13
15
14
12
15
14
16
8
17
1
18
13
19
16
20
14
21
10
22
11
23
11
24
10
25
17
26
13
27
18
28
11
29
9
30
13
31
15
32
8
33
12
34
9
35
8
36
18
37
11
38
13
39
13
40
11
41
5
42
6
43
8
44
20
45
1
46
7
47
18
48
14
49
6
34.76%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
16
diversityRatio
0.24761904761904763
totalSentences
105
uniqueOpeners
26
73.26%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
91
matches
0
"Then, she pushed the door"
1
"Then, she smiled, a slow,"
ratio
0.022
9.01%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
48
totalSentences
91
matches
0
"Her salt-and-pepper hair, closely cropped,"
1
"She rounded the corner, her"
2
"She could see him, a"
3
"His eyes, warm brown and"
4
"She was out of her"
5
"She stepped into the bar,"
6
"She could feel their eyes"
7
"She could feel the weight"
8
"She reached the door, her"
9
"She took a deep breath,"
10
"It was a hidden back"
11
"They were all human, but"
12
"Their eyes were too bright,"
13
"He looked at her, fear"
14
"he said, his voice barely"
15
"she said, her voice steady"
16
"She nodded at the man,"
17
"She was tall, her hair"
18
"Her eyes were a piercing"
19
"she said, her voice like"
ratio
0.527
14.95%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
81
totalSentences
91
matches
0
"The rain was a relentless"
1
"Detective Harlow Quinn's breath misted"
2
"The man she pursued darted"
3
"Quinn's heart pounded in her"
4
"Her salt-and-pepper hair, closely cropped,"
5
"She rounded the corner, her"
6
"The man was fast, but"
7
"She could see him, a"
8
"The man skidded to a"
9
"His eyes, warm brown and"
10
"Quinn hesitated, her military precision"
11
"She was out of her"
12
"She stepped into the bar,"
13
"The air was thick with"
14
"The patrons were a mix"
15
"She could feel their eyes"
16
"Quinn pushed through the crowd,"
17
"She could feel the weight"
18
"She reached the door, her"
19
"She took a deep breath,"
ratio
0.89
54.95%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
91
matches
0
"No matter what world she"
ratio
0.011
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
55
technicalSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"It was a hidden back room, accessible only through a bookshelf that swung open on silent hinges."
1
"The man she'd been chasing stood at the head of the table, his chest heaving."
2
"Quinn's gaze flicked to the woman, who was advancing on her, her eyes glowing with an otherworldly light."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
17
uselessAdditionCount
12
matches
0
"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
1
"she said, her voice steady"
2
"She nodded, her gaze flicking back to the woman"
3
"She took, her heels clicking on the stone floor"
4
"she said, her voice steady"
5
"she said, her voice steady"
6
"She turned, her voice dropping to a low growl"
7
"she said, her voice a low purr"
8
"she said, her voice steady"
9
"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
10
"she said, her voice steady"
11
"she said, her voice brooking no argument"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
13
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
27
tagDensity
0.481
leniency
0.963
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
76.6425%