Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR8X4XCFCPD1YCK5NX70KN

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Duration:
31.8s
Cost:
$0.001551

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pressed her back against the rough bark of an ancient oak, a slow pulse of dread thrumming beneath her skin. She shouldn’t have come here. The Fae Grove had always drawn her in like moth to flame, yet now it felt like a dark carnival waiting to unfold its grotesque secrets. Shadows shifted, flickering in the corners of her vision, but every time she turned to confront them, she was faced only with the resilient underbrush of wildflowers, blooming defiantly in the heart of darkness. *What was I thinking?* She felt a familiar weight—her Heartstone Pendant—sway against her chest, warmed by her anxious breath. Given by an unknown benefactor, it now pulsed lightly, its warm crimson glow flickering like a heartbeat, yet offering no reassurance. She needed to find what she came for—an old relic said to be hidden deep within the grove—but the further she ventured in, the more the ground felt unsteady beneath her feet, as if the earth itself was shifting, luring her deeper into the tangled embrace of the foliage. The air thickened with an unnatural quiet, a tension that felt like a tightrope strung too far above the abyss. Each rustle of leaves became a whisper that sent prickles along her spine. It was as though unseen eyes settled upon her, each gaze equal parts judgement and hunger. She glanced at the standing stones, their surface etched with ancient runes, blackened and grim. They loomed like sentinel shadows, cradling something she could not see, something that watched and waited. Aurora forced herself forward, breaths shallow, the sound of her heart a wild rhythm in her ears. She remembered the stories whispered over pints at Silas’s bar. Tales of wanderers who found themselves lost within the Grove, never to be seen again, as if swallowed whole by the Earth itself. An inexplicable energy lurked here—alive and watchful. And tonight, it felt hungry. A flicker caught her attention—a movement, distant yet undeniably present. She turned sharply, heart pounding. A glimpse of something—no, someone—slipped between the shadows, just outside the edge of light. Her skin prickled. *Not someone.* She swallowed against the lump in her throat, fingers tightening around the pendant. The Grove stretched infinitely in all directions, and shadows twisted beneath the trees, alive. “Hello?” The word slipped out, echoing against the heavy stillness. Silence answered. Her breath came in sharper gasps as she stepped further into the clearing, seeking the source of that quicksilver movement. With each step, the foliage seemed to curl away from her, alive with secrets. The spell of enchantment woven into the Grove felt denser than before, the plants swaying of their own accord, pulling her off-balance. She could almost hear a soft laughter echoing through the trees, melodic and grave. *You don’t belong here,* the unwelcoming aura seemed to whisper. Heart pounding, she pressed on until an ethereal glow caught her eye—flowers that shimmered with unnatural luminescence. Dark violet petals trembled in the flickering light while translucent green tendrils curled around their stems. She crouched down, enchanted momentarily, when a scratching sound rose from somewhere behind her. A sudden rustle sent a wave of terror washing over her, and she spun around. Nothing. Just the eye of the grove watching as she grew increasingly frantic—each breath a little more laboured, each thought more muddled. Why had she come here? She couldn’t shake the image of the relic, its promised power swirling in her mind. It could end everything—the tumultuous memories, the haunting shadows from her past. Yet here, in this forsaken place, she felt only dread, as if the Grove itself was a living entity, hungry for her very essence. A distant thump resonated through the air, reverberating beneath her feet. Heartstone glowed brighter. Aurora stumbled back, nearly falling when something fluttered in her peripheral vision—was that a flash of silver? The flicker vanished like a candle snuffed out, but the rustle of leaves remained, relentless. “Stop it!” she shouted, voice cracking. Anger clashed with terror. She couldn’t let fear take hold. “Show yourself!” No response. Just those whispering shadows, swirling with life. The tension coiled tighter, and the space around her felt smeared with an irrational sense of foreboding. She turned again to face the trees, their gnarled branches like fingers grasping through the darkness. A low hum vibrated in her bones, intensifying with every moment she remained. The world outside the grove seemed a bearable distance away, but deep down, she sensed its encroachment, a thought clawing its way up, screaming for her to escape. Willing herself to move, she doubled back toward the place from which she'd entered, each step echoing with the weight of her pounding heart. Desperate to break the paralysis that gripped her limbs, she pressed on. But the Grove twisted differently now; paths that had felt carved and familiar only moments before spiralled into strange mazes that ensnared her even more tightly. And then she saw it—a figure standing still among the ancient stones, shrouded in darkness, arms lifted in supplication or perhaps mockery. A chill slithered along her spine, forcing the air from her lungs. “Who are you?” she tried to demand, though her voice wavered in the shifting shadows. “It’s not who I am,” the figure replied, voice an intimate caress laced with honey and malice. “It’s what you fear.” The glow from her pendant flickered, a weak heartbeat amidst the dark. Aurora’s throat tightened. “I came to find something. Tell me where it is!” In response, the figure’s laughter stirred the leaves, carrying a resonance echoed by unseen entities lurking around her. Everything felt wrong, shifting under her feet; the world swam in a dizzying kaleidoscope of light and shadow. “Backwards and forwards, all parts of the same dance,” the figure said softly, every word a thread that pulled at her consciousness. “Will you join us?” A furious determination coursed through Aurora. She bolted, but branches snagged at her clothes, tugging her back into the embrace of the grove. Shadows clung to her like fog, blurring her vision with a desperate urgency. “Don’t you see?” The figure’s tone dripped with insistent glee. “You’ve already danced. Just follow the tune.” The pulse of the pendant quickened, a frantic rhythm drowning out her thoughts as she raced deeper into the Grove. Echoes of laughter melded with the rustles, growing louder, a cacophony of trapped voices swirling around her. The heaviness thickened, and dread crawled up her throat as she glimpsed something flicker just out of reach—a vagrant memory, perhaps, or a promise abandoned long before. A hundred questions consumed her as she faced the reality that her escape from the shadows might not be from the trees but the bitter labyrinth of herself. The grove tightened around her, an insatiable maw yearning to consume her spirit whole. Alone. Lost. Caught in the grip of something dreadful, powerful enough to drag her down into the depths where darkness thrived. And then, she heard it—the drumming of footsteps, a chorus of remorse echoing steadily through the trees—hungry for her answers.
total_cost0.00155055

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the figure said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
79.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"sharply"
2"very"
3"tightly"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsms49
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"tension"
count2
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"loomed"
count1
8
word"sentinel"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count3
10
word"pounding"
count3
11
word"echoing"
count4
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"grave"
count1
14
word"shimmered"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"resonated"
count1
17
word"fluttered"
count1
18
word"sense of"
count1
19
word"foreboding"
count1
20
word"vibrated"
count1
21
word"chill"
count1
22
word"wavered"
count1
23
word"flickered"
count1
24
word"amidst"
count1
25
word"resonance"
count1
26
word"echoed"
count1
27
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
28
word"dance"
count1
29
word"quickened"
count1
30
word"raced"
count1
31
word"echoes"
count1
32
word"cacophony"
count1
33
word"maw"
count1
34
word"yearning"
count1
35
word"depths"
count1
36
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"familiar"
2"weight"
3"pulsed"
4"tension"
5"whisper"
6"etched"
7"loomed"
8"sentinel"
9"flicker"
10"pounding"
11"echoing"
12"silence"
13"grave"
14"shimmered"
15"trembled"
16"resonated"
17"fluttered"
18"sense of"
19"foreboding"
20"vibrated"
21"chill"
22"wavered"
23"flickered"
24"amidst"
25"resonance"
26"echoed"
27"kaleidoscope"
28"dance"
29"quickened"
30"raced"
31"echoes"
32"cacophony"
33"maw"
34"yearning"
35"depths"
36"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences78
matches
0"a wave of terror"
1"d with terror"
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords10
totalWords1176
ratio0.009
matches
0"What was I thinking?"
1"Not someone."
2"You don’t belong here,"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1126
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove7
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Silas1
Earth1
Silence1
Anger1
Aurora5
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Silas"
3"Silence"
4"Anger"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
32.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a dark carnival waiting to un"
1"felt like a tightrope strung too far ab"
2"It was as though unseen eyes settled upon her, each gaze equal parts judgement and hunger"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1176
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"was that a"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean45.23
std24.91
cv0.551
sampleLengths
086
189
280
362
461
512
670
710
884
956
1046
1127
1274
1362
1422
1527
1621
1725
1836
1926
2036
2117
2264
2342
2421
2520
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"was faced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs196
matches
0"was shifting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences82
ratio0.171
matches
0"*What was I thinking?* She felt a familiar weight—her Heartstone Pendant—sway against her chest, warmed by her anxious breath."
1"She needed to find what she came for—an old relic said to be hidden deep within the grove—but the further she ventured in, the more the ground felt unsteady beneath her feet, as if the earth itself was shifting, luring her deeper into the tangled embrace of the foliage."
2"An inexplicable energy lurked here—alive and watchful."
3"A flicker caught her attention—a movement, distant yet undeniably present."
4"A glimpse of something—no, someone—slipped between the shadows, just outside the edge of light."
5"Heart pounding, she pressed on until an ethereal glow caught her eye—flowers that shimmered with unnatural luminescence."
6"Just the eye of the grove watching as she grew increasingly frantic—each breath a little more laboured, each thought more muddled."
7"It could end everything—the tumultuous memories, the haunting shadows from her past."
8"Aurora stumbled back, nearly falling when something fluttered in her peripheral vision—was that a flash of silver?"
9"But the Grove twisted differently now; paths that had felt carved and familiar only moments before spiralled into strange mazes that ensnared her even more tightly."
10"And then she saw it—a figure standing still among the ancient stones, shrouded in darkness, arms lifted in supplication or perhaps mockery."
11"Everything felt wrong, shifting under her feet; the world swam in a dizzying kaleidoscope of light and shadow."
12"The heaviness thickened, and dread crawled up her throat as she glimpsed something flicker just out of reach—a vagrant memory, perhaps, or a promise abandoned long before."
13"And then, she heard it—the drumming of footsteps, a chorus of remorse echoing steadily through the trees—hungry for her answers."
95.19% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1143
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.045494313210848646
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.013123359580052493
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean14.34
std8.26
cv0.576
sampleLengths
021
15
226
334
419
521
649
720
813
916
1015
1116
1217
1310
1423
157
165
1710
185
1914
203
2115
2214
2310
242
2520
2614
2722
2814
2910
3017
3116
3214
3315
341
3521
365
3715
3812
3924
4011
413
4217
4315
446
454
466
474
487
4917
86.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.524390243902439
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners43
91.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"Just the eye of the"
1"Just those whispering shadows, swirling"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences73
matches
0"She shouldn’t have come here."
1"She needed to find what"
2"It was as though unseen"
3"She glanced at the standing"
4"They loomed like sentinel shadows,"
5"She remembered the stories whispered"
6"She turned sharply, heart pounding."
7"Her skin prickled."
8"Her breath came in sharper"
9"She could almost hear a"
10"*You don’t belong here,* the"
11"She crouched down, enchanted momentarily,"
12"She couldn’t shake the image"
13"It could end everything—the tumultuous"
14"she shouted, voice cracking"
15"She couldn’t let fear take"
16"She turned again to face"
17"she tried to demand, though"
18"She bolted, but branches snagged"
ratio0.26
76.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences73
matches
0"Aurora pressed her back against"
1"She shouldn’t have come here."
2"The Fae Grove had always"
3"Shadows shifted, flickering in the"
4"She needed to find what"
5"The air thickened with an"
6"Each rustle of leaves became"
7"It was as though unseen"
8"She glanced at the standing"
9"They loomed like sentinel shadows,"
10"Aurora forced herself forward, breaths"
11"She remembered the stories whispered"
12"Tales of wanderers who found"
13"An inexplicable energy lurked here—alive"
14"A flicker caught her attention—a"
15"She turned sharply, heart pounding."
16"A glimpse of something—no, someone—slipped"
17"Her skin prickled."
18"The Grove stretched infinitely in"
19"The word slipped out, echoing"
ratio0.767
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
64.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She needed to find what she came for—an old relic said to be hidden deep within the grove—but the further she ventured in, the more the ground felt unsteady ben…"
1"The air thickened with an unnatural quiet, a tension that felt like a tightrope strung too far above the abyss."
2"It was as though unseen eyes settled upon her, each gaze equal parts judgement and hunger."
3"Tales of wanderers who found themselves lost within the Grove, never to be seen again, as if swallowed whole by the Earth itself."
4"Heart pounding, she pressed on until an ethereal glow caught her eye—flowers that shimmered with unnatural luminescence."
5"But the Grove twisted differently now; paths that had felt carved and familiar only moments before spiralled into strange mazes that ensnared her even more tigh…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she shouted, voice cracking"
1"she tried, though her voice wavered in the shifting shadows"
2"the figure said softly, every word a thread that pulled at her consciousness"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
1"she tried (try)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.364
74.9057%