| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the figure said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 79.04% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1193 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "tightly" | | 4 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1193 | | totalAiIsms | 49 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | | 31 | | | 32 | | | 33 | | | 34 | | | 35 | | | 36 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "loomed" | | 8 | "sentinel" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "pounding" | | 11 | "echoing" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "grave" | | 14 | "shimmered" | | 15 | "trembled" | | 16 | "resonated" | | 17 | "fluttered" | | 18 | "sense of" | | 19 | "foreboding" | | 20 | "vibrated" | | 21 | "chill" | | 22 | "wavered" | | 23 | "flickered" | | 24 | "amidst" | | 25 | "resonance" | | 26 | "echoed" | | 27 | "kaleidoscope" | | 28 | "dance" | | 29 | "quickened" | | 30 | "raced" | | 31 | "echoes" | | 32 | "cacophony" | | 33 | "maw" | | 34 | "yearning" | | 35 | "depths" | | 36 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "a wave of terror" | | 1 | "d with terror" |
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| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 1176 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "What was I thinking?" | | 1 | "Not someone." | | 2 | "You don’t belong here," |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1126 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.62 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 7 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Anger | 1 | | Aurora | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Silence" | | 4 | "Anger" | | 5 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 32.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a dark carnival waiting to un" | | 1 | "felt like a tightrope strung too far ab" | | 2 | "It was as though unseen eyes settled upon her, each gaze equal parts judgement and hunger" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1176 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 45.23 | | std | 24.91 | | cv | 0.551 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 89 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 70 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 84 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 74 | | 13 | 62 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 64 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.171 | | matches | | 0 | "*What was I thinking?* She felt a familiar weight—her Heartstone Pendant—sway against her chest, warmed by her anxious breath." | | 1 | "She needed to find what she came for—an old relic said to be hidden deep within the grove—but the further she ventured in, the more the ground felt unsteady beneath her feet, as if the earth itself was shifting, luring her deeper into the tangled embrace of the foliage." | | 2 | "An inexplicable energy lurked here—alive and watchful." | | 3 | "A flicker caught her attention—a movement, distant yet undeniably present." | | 4 | "A glimpse of something—no, someone—slipped between the shadows, just outside the edge of light." | | 5 | "Heart pounding, she pressed on until an ethereal glow caught her eye—flowers that shimmered with unnatural luminescence." | | 6 | "Just the eye of the grove watching as she grew increasingly frantic—each breath a little more laboured, each thought more muddled." | | 7 | "It could end everything—the tumultuous memories, the haunting shadows from her past." | | 8 | "Aurora stumbled back, nearly falling when something fluttered in her peripheral vision—was that a flash of silver?" | | 9 | "But the Grove twisted differently now; paths that had felt carved and familiar only moments before spiralled into strange mazes that ensnared her even more tightly." | | 10 | "And then she saw it—a figure standing still among the ancient stones, shrouded in darkness, arms lifted in supplication or perhaps mockery." | | 11 | "Everything felt wrong, shifting under her feet; the world swam in a dizzying kaleidoscope of light and shadow." | | 12 | "The heaviness thickened, and dread crawled up her throat as she glimpsed something flicker just out of reach—a vagrant memory, perhaps, or a promise abandoned long before." | | 13 | "And then, she heard it—the drumming of footsteps, a chorus of remorse echoing steadily through the trees—hungry for her answers." |
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| 95.19% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1143 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.045494313210848646 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013123359580052493 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 14.34 | | std | 8.26 | | cv | 0.576 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 86.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.524390243902439 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 91.32% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the eye of the" | | 1 | "Just those whispering shadows, swirling" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn’t have come here." | | 1 | "She needed to find what" | | 2 | "It was as though unseen" | | 3 | "She glanced at the standing" | | 4 | "They loomed like sentinel shadows," | | 5 | "She remembered the stories whispered" | | 6 | "She turned sharply, heart pounding." | | 7 | "Her skin prickled." | | 8 | "Her breath came in sharper" | | 9 | "She could almost hear a" | | 10 | "*You don’t belong here,* the" | | 11 | "She crouched down, enchanted momentarily," | | 12 | "She couldn’t shake the image" | | 13 | "It could end everything—the tumultuous" | | 14 | "she shouted, voice cracking" | | 15 | "She couldn’t let fear take" | | 16 | "She turned again to face" | | 17 | "she tried to demand, though" | | 18 | "She bolted, but branches snagged" |
| | ratio | 0.26 | |
| 76.44% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pressed her back against" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have come here." | | 2 | "The Fae Grove had always" | | 3 | "Shadows shifted, flickering in the" | | 4 | "She needed to find what" | | 5 | "The air thickened with an" | | 6 | "Each rustle of leaves became" | | 7 | "It was as though unseen" | | 8 | "She glanced at the standing" | | 9 | "They loomed like sentinel shadows," | | 10 | "Aurora forced herself forward, breaths" | | 11 | "She remembered the stories whispered" | | 12 | "Tales of wanderers who found" | | 13 | "An inexplicable energy lurked here—alive" | | 14 | "A flicker caught her attention—a" | | 15 | "She turned sharply, heart pounding." | | 16 | "A glimpse of something—no, someone—slipped" | | 17 | "Her skin prickled." | | 18 | "The Grove stretched infinitely in" | | 19 | "The word slipped out, echoing" |
| | ratio | 0.767 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 64.94% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She needed to find what she came for—an old relic said to be hidden deep within the grove—but the further she ventured in, the more the ground felt unsteady ben…" | | 1 | "The air thickened with an unnatural quiet, a tension that felt like a tightrope strung too far above the abyss." | | 2 | "It was as though unseen eyes settled upon her, each gaze equal parts judgement and hunger." | | 3 | "Tales of wanderers who found themselves lost within the Grove, never to be seen again, as if swallowed whole by the Earth itself." | | 4 | "Heart pounding, she pressed on until an ethereal glow caught her eye—flowers that shimmered with unnatural luminescence." | | 5 | "But the Grove twisted differently now; paths that had felt carved and familiar only moments before spiralled into strange mazes that ensnared her even more tigh…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she shouted, voice cracking" | | 1 | "she tried, though her voice wavered in the shifting shadows" | | 2 | "the figure said softly, every word a thread that pulled at her consciousness" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 1 | "she tried (try)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |