Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR8XDY5J2A1CMJ6HD689DP

Run Details

Duration:
26.2s
Cost:
$0.015787
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, punctuated by the clinking of glasses and the occasional burst of laughter. The green neon sign outside cast a soft glow through the windows, painting the patrons in shades of emerald. Aurora Carter, known to most as Rory, slipped through the door, her eyes scanning the room with a practiced ease. She had just finished her shift at the Golden Empress and was looking forward to unwinding with a drink. The bar was a familiar sanctuary, a place where she could blend into the background and let the world fade away. She nodded to Silas Blackwood, who stood behind the bar, his presence as steady as the oak counter he leaned against. His hazel eyes met hers with a knowing glint, and he gestured towards an empty stool. "Evening, Rory. Usual?" His voice carried the weight of years, a deep rumble that seemed to resonate with the very walls of the bar. "Please, Si. It's been a long day." She settled onto the stool, her fingers tracing the edge of the bar. The wood was smooth and worn, a testament to the countless stories it had witnessed. Silas poured her a glass of whiskey, sliding it across the bar with a practiced flick of his wrist. "Anything interesting happen on your rounds?" "Just the usual chaos," Rory replied, taking a sip. The liquid burned pleasantly, warming her from the inside out. "You know how it is." Before Silas could respond, the door swung open, and a gust of cool air swept through the room. Rory glanced over her shoulder, her gaze landing on a figure silhouetted against the neon glow. The man stepped inside, shaking off the chill, and Rory's breath caught in her throat. It was Evan. He looked different, older. His hair, once a wild mane of curls, was now neatly trimmed, and his face bore the lines of someone who had seen too much. But his eyes, a piercing green, were the same. They locked onto hers, and for a moment, the world seemed to hold its breath. "Rory," he said, his voice a mix of surprise and something else—something she couldn't quite place. "Evan." Her voice was steady, though her heart raced. She hadn't seen him since she left Cardiff, since she had fled the life they had once shared. He approached, his movements cautious, as if testing the waters. "I didn't expect to see you here." "Likewise." She gestured to the stool beside her. "Join me?" He hesitated, then nodded, taking the seat. Silas, ever the silent observer, poured Evan a drink without a word, his eyes flicking between the two of them. "So," Evan began, cradling his glass. "How have you been?" Rory considered the question, the weight of it pressing down on her. "I've been... finding my way. London has a way of keeping you on your toes." He chuckled, a sound that was both familiar and foreign. "I can imagine. It's been a while." "Years," she agreed, her gaze drifting to the scar on her wrist. A reminder of a different time, a different life. Evan followed her gaze, his expression softening. "I see you still have that." "Some things don't change," she replied, her tone light but her eyes serious. He nodded, taking a sip of his drink. "I've changed, though. I hope you know that." "Have you?" The question hung between them, heavy with unspoken history. "I have," he insisted, his voice earnest. "I had to. After you left, I realized... I needed to be better." Rory studied him, searching for the truth in his words. "And are you?" He met her gaze, unflinching. "I'm trying. It's not easy, but I'm trying." Silas moved away, giving them space, his presence a comforting shadow in the background. The bar continued to buzz around them, a cocoon of noise that made their conversation feel intimate, private. "Why are you here, Evan?" Rory asked, her curiosity getting the better of her. He sighed, running a hand through his hair. "I came to London for work. But I also wanted to see you. To apologize." "For what?" Her voice was soft, but there was an edge to it, a challenge. "For everything. For not being the person you needed me to be. For hurting you." Rory looked down at her drink, the amber liquid swirling in the glass. "I appreciate that. But you know it's not that simple." "I know," he admitted, his shoulders slumping. "But I had to try. I couldn't let things end the way they did." She nodded, understanding the sentiment even if she couldn't fully accept it. "We were different people back then." "We were," he agreed, a hint of nostalgia in his voice. "But I like to think we've both grown." "Maybe," she allowed, a small smile tugging at her lips. "But some things are better left in the past." Evan nodded, a resigned acceptance in his eyes. "I get that. I just... I wanted you to know I'm sorry." "Thank you," Rory said, the words simple but sincere. "That means a lot." They sat in silence for a moment, the past and present colliding in the space between them. It was a fragile peace, but it was something. "Do you think we could ever be friends again?" Evan asked, his voice tentative. Rory considered the question, the possibilities it held. "I don't know. But maybe we can start with this." He smiled, a genuine warmth in his expression. "I'd like that." Silas returned, his presence a gentle reminder of the world outside their conversation. "Another round?" Rory glanced at Evan, then nodded. "Why not?" As Silas poured their drinks, Rory felt a sense of closure, a chapter ending even as a new one began. The weight of the past lingered, but it was lighter now, less oppressive. Evan raised his glass, a silent toast to new beginnings. Rory mirrored the gesture, their glasses clinking softly in the dim light. The Raven's Nest continued to hum around them, a sanctuary in the heart of the city, a place where old friends could find each other again, even after years apart.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.395
leniency0.791
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1032
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1032
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"practiced ease"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"sanctuary"
count2
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"carried the weight"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"testament"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"reminder"
count2
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"comforting"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"sense of"
count1
17
word"oppressive"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"practiced ease"
2"familiar"
3"sanctuary"
4"glint"
5"carried the weight"
6"tracing"
7"testament"
8"chill"
9"raced"
10"weight"
11"reminder"
12"unspoken"
13"comforting"
14"silence"
15"warmth"
16"sense of"
17"oppressive"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
75.89% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1031
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount787
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Rory13
Golden1
Empress1
Silas7
Blackwood1
Evan8
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Evan"
places
0"Golden"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.674
windowScore0.667
16.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"rumble that seemed to resonate with the very walls of the bar"
1"quite place"
2"as if testing the waters"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.97
wordCount1031
matches
0"not easy, but I'm trying"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean22.41
std13.87
cv0.619
sampleLengths
080
158
224
335
425
524
649
73
853
916
1027
1117
1210
1327
1410
1527
1617
1721
1813
1913
2016
2111
2220
2313
2413
2532
2614
2723
2815
2915
3023
3121
3218
3319
3419
3520
3613
3726
3814
3918
4011
4115
428
4333
4422
4530
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs133
matches
0"was looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences89
ratio0.011
matches
0"\"Rory,\" he said, his voice a mix of surprise and something else—something she couldn't quite place."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount788
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.021573604060913704
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005076142131979695
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean11.58
std5.76
cv0.497
sampleLengths
022
119
220
319
421
521
616
724
820
915
1019
116
129
1310
145
1518
1616
1715
183
194
2025
219
2215
2316
249
2518
2610
277
288
292
307
3120
326
334
3412
3515
3610
377
3812
399
407
416
4213
438
448
4511
467
4713
4810
493
61.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4044943820224719
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences64
matches
0"She had just finished her"
1"She nodded to Silas Blackwood,"
2"His hazel eyes met hers"
3"His voice carried the weight"
4"She settled onto the stool,"
5"It was Evan."
6"He looked different, older."
7"His hair, once a wild"
8"They locked onto hers, and"
9"he said, his voice a"
10"Her voice was steady, though"
11"She hadn't seen him since"
12"He approached, his movements cautious,"
13"She gestured to the stool"
14"He hesitated, then nodded, taking"
15"He chuckled, a sound that"
16"she agreed, her gaze drifting"
17"she replied, her tone light"
18"He nodded, taking a sip"
19"he insisted, his voice earnest"
ratio0.469
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences64
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"The green neon sign outside"
2"Aurora Carter, known to most"
3"She had just finished her"
4"The bar was a familiar"
5"She nodded to Silas Blackwood,"
6"His hazel eyes met hers"
7"His voice carried the weight"
8"She settled onto the stool,"
9"The wood was smooth and"
10"Silas poured her a glass"
11"Rory replied, taking a sip"
12"The liquid burned pleasantly, warming"
13"Rory glanced over her shoulder,"
14"The man stepped inside, shaking"
15"It was Evan."
16"He looked different, older."
17"His hair, once a wild"
18"They locked onto hers, and"
19"he said, his voice a"
ratio0.953
78.13% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Before Silas could respond, the"
ratio0.016
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She nodded to Silas Blackwood, who stood behind the bar, his presence as steady as the oak counter he leaned against."
1"His hair, once a wild mane of curls, was now neatly trimmed, and his face bore the lines of someone who had seen too much."
2"He approached, his movements cautious, as if testing the waters."
3"The bar continued to buzz around them, a cocoon of noise that made their conversation feel intimate, private."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"She settled, her fingers tracing the edge of the bar"
1"she agreed, her gaze drifting to the scar on her wrist"
2"he insisted, his voice earnest"
3"Rory asked, her curiosity getting the better of her"
4"he admitted, his shoulders slumping"
5"he agreed, a hint of nostalgia in his voice"
6"she allowed, a small smile tugging at her lips"
7"Evan asked, his voice tentative"
56.98% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she agreed (agree)"
1"he insisted (insist)"
2"he admitted (admit)"
3"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.465
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.186
74.3971%