Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR937S1CNXVKJ4NAHR2W8G

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Duration:
30.5s
Cost:
$0.010834

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of aged whiskey and lemon polish, the kind of scent that clung to the walls like a second skin. Rory wiped her hands on her jeans, the crescent scar on her wrist catching the dim light as she reached for the pint Silas had slid across the bar. The glass left a wet ring on the wood, and she traced it with her thumb, watching the condensation bead and run. "You’re late," Silas said, his voice rough as gravel under boots. He didn’t look up from wiping down the counter, but the signet ring on his right hand glinted as he moved. "Traffic on the Strand." She took a sip, the bitterness of the ale sharp on her tongue. "Or did you expect me to materialize out of thin air?" Silas smirked, finally lifting his gaze. His hazel eyes held the same quiet assessment they always had, but the lines around them had deepened, like cracks in old parchment. "Wouldn’t put it past you." The door creaked open behind her, letting in a gust of cold air and the distant wail of a siren. Rory didn’t turn. She didn’t need to. The way Silas’s fingers stilled on the rag, the way his jaw tightened—just for a second—told her everything. "Well," a voice drawled from the doorway, smooth as aged bourbon. "If it isn’t the infamous Rory Carter." She froze. The glass stopped halfway to her lips. The name curled around her like smoke, familiar and foreign all at once. No one had called her that in years. Not since— Rory turned slowly. Eva stood there, her dark curls shorter now, cropped close to her scalp in a way that made her sharp cheekbones look even sharper. She wore a leather jacket that hadn’t been cheap, and the heels of her boots clicked against the floor as she stepped inside. The green neon sign above the door painted her face in an eerie glow, turning her skin sallow, her eyes hollow. "Eva," Rory said, and her voice came out steadier than she felt. Eva’s lips curved, but the smile didn’t reach her eyes. "Surprise." Silas cleared his throat. "I’ll leave you two to it." He limped toward the back, the slight drag of his left leg more pronounced than Rory remembered. The silence that followed was thick enough to choke on. Eva slid onto the stool beside Rory, close enough that Rory caught the scent of her perfume—something expensive, something that didn’t smell like the Eva she knew. The Eva who used to steal her mother’s vanilla body spray and douse herself in it. "You look different," Eva said, tilting her head. "Older." Rory laughed, but it came out wrong, too sharp. "We all do." Eva’s fingers drummed against the bar. "Not like this." She gestured vaguely at Rory’s face, her wrist. "You’ve got that whole *mysterious* thing going on now. The scar’s new. Or is it?" Rory’s fingers twitched toward her wrist, but she stopped herself. "It’s been there a while." "Huh." Eva’s gaze flicked away, toward the wall of black-and-white photographs. "I like the hair. When did you stop dyeing it?" "When I stopped caring what people thought." Eva’s smile faltered. "Right. That’s—yeah. That tracks." Rory took another sip of her ale, buying time. The last time she’d seen Eva, she’d been sobbing on the phone from a hostel in Edinburgh, her voice breaking as she begged Rory to come with her. *Just for a little while. Just until I figure things out.* And Rory had said no. Not because she didn’t want to, but because she’d just started at Cardiff, because her father had drilled into her that *responsibility* was the only thing that mattered, because she’d been too scared to admit she was drowning too. Eva had left without her. And now here she was, polished and poised, like she’d stepped out of a magazine spread. "You’re in London, then?" Rory asked, because the alternative was silence, and silence was worse. Eva nodded. "For work. I’m in finance now. Private equity." She said it like she was waiting for Rory to be impressed. Rory wasn’t. "That’s—great." Eva’s eyes narrowed. "You don’t sound like you mean that." "I do." Rory set her glass down. "I’m happy for you. Really." Eva scoffed. "Bullshit." The word hung between them, heavy and ugly. Rory exhaled through her nose. "What do you want me to say, Eva? That I’m surprised? That I missed you? I did. But you didn’t exactly keep in touch." "I texted you." "Once. A year ago. And you didn’t even ask how I was." Eva’s jaw tightened. "I didn’t think you’d want to hear from me." Rory laughed, but it was a hollow sound. "That’s rich, coming from you." Eva flinched like she’d been struck. "What’s that supposed to mean?" Rory leaned in, her voice dropping. "You left. You just—*left*. No warning, no nothing. And now you waltz in here like nothing happened?" Eva’s hands clenched into fists on the bar. "I had to go. You know that." "Do I?" Rory’s pulse pounded in her ears. "Because from where I was standing, it looked like you just decided I wasn’t worth the trouble." Eva’s breath hitched. "That’s not fair." "Neither is this." Rory gestured between them. "Neither is showing up after all this time and acting like we’re just old friends catching up." Eva’s eyes glistened, but she blinked hard, and the moment passed. "I didn’t come here to fight." "Then why did you come?" Eva opened her mouth, then closed it. She looked away, her throat working. "I don’t know." Rory’s chest ached. She wanted to reach out, to touch Eva’s arm, to tell her it was okay. But the words stuck in her throat, tangled in years of silence and unspoken hurt. Eva stood abruptly, her stool scraping against the floor. "I should go." Rory didn’t stop her. The door swung shut behind Eva, the green neon sign flickering as it closed. Rory stared at her half-finished pint, the bubbles rising and popping like tiny, useless apologies. Silas reappeared from the back, his limp more pronounced in the quiet. He didn’t ask. He just slid a fresh glass toward her and poured two fingers of whiskey into it. Rory picked it up and drank.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Eva’s gaze flicked away [away]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.302
leniency0.605
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.093
90.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1058
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1058
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"silence"
count4
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"familiar"
2"silence"
3"flicked"
4"pulse"
5"unspoken"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"clenched into fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords14
totalWords1052
ratio0.013
matches
0"mysterious"
1"Just for a little while. Just until I figure things out."
2"responsibility"
3"left"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount793
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity3.28
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas6
Rory26
Eva23
Edinburgh1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
places
0"Edinburgh"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1052
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean21.92
std18.64
cv0.851
sampleLengths
074
132
228
334
445
518
632
73
868
912
1011
1127
1253
139
1412
1532
1615
1721
187
197
2092
2121
2215
2322
243
2510
2612
273
2837
293
3012
3112
3213
3311
3423
3515
3625
376
3824
3917
405
4116
4233
4312
444
4529
4631
476
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"was, polished"
1"been struck"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs149
matches
0"was drowning"
1"was waiting"
60.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences104
ratio0.029
matches
0"The way Silas’s fingers stilled on the rag, the way his jaw tightened—just for a second—told her everything."
1"Not since—"
2"Eva slid onto the stool beside Rory, close enough that Rory caught the scent of her perfume—something expensive, something that didn’t smell like the Eva she knew."
98.86% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount799
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.04130162703379224
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007509386733416771
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean10.12
std7.51
cv0.742
sampleLengths
023
129
222
311
421
517
611
76
823
95
1020
113
124
1318
1411
157
162
177
1813
198
202
213
2224
2323
2421
2512
2610
271
284
2923
3010
3127
3216
338
341
359
363
376
3811
3915
4010
415
4211
4310
447
453
464
479
4828
495
50.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.33653846153846156
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners35
96.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"*Just for a little while."
1"Just until I figure things"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences69
matches
0"He didn’t look up from"
1"She took a sip, the"
2"His hazel eyes held the"
3"She didn’t need to."
4"She wore a leather jacket"
5"He limped toward the back,"
6"She gestured vaguely at Rory’s"
7"She said it like she"
8"She looked away, her throat"
9"She wanted to reach out,"
10"He didn’t ask."
11"He just slid a fresh"
ratio0.174
3.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences69
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
1"Rory wiped her hands on"
2"The glass left a wet"
3"Silas said, his voice rough"
4"He didn’t look up from"
5"She took a sip, the"
6"Silas smirked, finally lifting his"
7"His hazel eyes held the"
8"The door creaked open behind"
9"Rory didn’t turn."
10"She didn’t need to."
11"The way Silas’s fingers stilled"
12"a voice drawled from the"
13"The glass stopped halfway to"
14"The name curled around her"
15"Rory turned slowly."
16"Eva stood there, her dark"
17"She wore a leather jacket"
18"The green neon sign above"
19"Rory said, and her voice"
ratio0.913
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Eva stood there, her dark curls shorter now, cropped close to her scalp in a way that made her sharp cheekbones look even sharper."
1"Eva slid onto the stool beside Rory, close enough that Rory caught the scent of her perfume—something expensive, something that didn’t smell like the Eva she kn…"
2"The Eva who used to steal her mother’s vanilla body spray and douse herself in it."
3"The last time she’d seen Eva, she’d been sobbing on the phone from a hostel in Edinburgh, her voice breaking as she begged Rory to come with her."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Silas said, his voice rough as gravel under boots"
1"She took, the bitterness of the ale sharp on her tongue"
2"Rory asked, because the alternative was silence, and silence was worse"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"a voice drawled (drawl)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.14
leniency0.279
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.047
78.8944%