| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 78.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 705 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 705 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "sentinel" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "unspoken" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "quickened" | | 12 | "palpable" | | 13 | "anticipation" | | 14 | "profound" | | 15 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 38 | | matches | | |
| 30.08% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 38 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 85.30% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "Her靴 boots crunched on the gravel path as she moved deeper, the sound jarring in the stillness." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 707 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.86% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 698 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 7 | | Richmond | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 3 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.999 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if searching for something out of place" | | 1 | "seemed fainter as if dampened by the very atmosphere of the grove" | | 2 | "seemed heavy with an unspoken menace" | | 3 | "silences that seemed to pulse like the Heartstone Pendant should" |
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| 58.56% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.414 | | wordCount | 707 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just the absence of sound, but a palpable, heavy stillness, as if the grove itself was hold" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.83% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 44.19 | | std | 18.2 | | cv | 0.412 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 67 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 41 |
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| 86.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | | 0 | "were meant" | | 1 | "was supposed" |
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| 62.54% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 38 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the grove itself — she'd been here before, under less ominous circumstances — but tonight, the air seemed heavy with an unspoken menace." | | 1 | "It was then she saw it — a flicker of movement, a shadow darting just beyond the edge of her vision." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 696 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.028735632183908046 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01293103448275862 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 38 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 38 | | mean | 18.61 | | std | 10.21 | | cv | 0.549 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 41 |
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| 69.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4473684210526316 | | totalSentences | 38 | | uniqueOpeners | 17 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 35 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 35 | | matches | | 0 | "Her hand, adorned with the" | | 1 | "she whispered, the sound swallowed" | | 2 | "She turned slowly, her eyes" | | 3 | "Her voice, a little louder" | | 4 | "She took a step forward," | | 5 | "It was then she saw" | | 6 | "Her heart quickened, a slow," |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 35 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, known to few" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones," | | 2 | "The wildflowers, oblivious to the" | | 3 | "Rory's eyes, bright blue and" | | 4 | "Her hand, adorned with the" | | 5 | "Tonight, however, the warmth emanating" | | 6 | "she whispered, the sound swallowed" | | 7 | "The words were meant for" | | 8 | "Her靴 boots crunched on the" | | 9 | "Rory's mission was straightforward: to" | | 10 | "The invitation, scrawled on a" | | 11 | "The thought of Evan, her" | | 12 | "Something felt off." | | 13 | "Rory halted in the center" | | 14 | "The night sounds were all" | | 15 | "Crickets provided a steady background" | | 16 | "She turned slowly, her eyes" | | 17 | "Her voice, a little louder" | | 18 | "The only reply was the" | | 19 | "She took a step forward," |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 35 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's eyes, bright blue and ever alert, scanned the clearing, her gaze lingering on each element as if searching for something out of place." | | 1 | "Tonight, however, the warmth emanating from it seemed fainter, as if dampened by the very atmosphere of the grove." | | 2 | "She took a step forward, her movements cautious, as if she feared disturbing a balance." | | 3 | "The movement seemed to trigger a cascade of tiny sounds: a pebble rolling down a hidden slope, the snap of a twig, each sound distinct yet somehow muffled, as i…" | | 4 | "Not just the absence of sound, but a palpable, heavy stillness, as if the grove itself was holding its breath in anticipation." | | 5 | "The darkness remained, unbroken and unresponsive, a living, breathing entity that enveloped her, a reminder that in The Fae Grove, under the cover of this oppre…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |