Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR99QWP9WX5RC53RNY46EH

Run Details

Duration:
28.9s
Cost:
$0.002222
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, known to few here as Rory, stepped out of the chill Richmond night and into the musty silence of The Fae Grove. The ancient oak standing stones, sentinel markers of the grove's boundary, loomed before her like specters, their gnarled branches etched against the moon's silver glow filtering through the canopy above. The wildflowers, oblivious to the season, swayed gently in the breeze, their colors muted in the dim light, like a muted palette of a mad artist. Rory's eyes, bright blue and ever alert, scanned the clearing, her gaze lingering on each element as if searching for something out of place. Her hand, adorned with the deep crimson Heartstone Pendant on its delicate silver chain, instinctively sought the reassuring pulse of the gemstone, a habit she'd developed since its mysterious arrival. Tonight, however, the warmth emanating from it seemed fainter, as if dampened by the very atmosphere of the grove. "I'm here," she whispered, the sound swallowed by the grove's silence. The words were meant for no one in particular, a ritualistic declaration of her presence in a place where time itself was notoriously capricious. Her靴 boots crunched on the gravel path as she moved deeper, the sound jarring in the stillness. Rory's mission was straightforward: to wait. Wait for whatever, or whoever, was supposed to meet her here at the stroke of midnight. The invitation, scrawled on a piece of parchment left on her doorstep without a return address, had been cryptic, speaking only of a "resolution" to her past troubles. The thought of Evan, her abusive ex, flared momentarily in her mind, but she quashed it, focusing instead on her surroundings. Something felt off. Not the grove itself — she'd been here before, under less ominous circumstances — but tonight, the air seemed heavy with an unspoken menace. Rory halted in the center of the clearing, her breath misting in the chill air. She listened. The night sounds were all wrong. Crickets provided a steady background hum, but there were gaps, silences that seemed to pulse like the Heartstone Pendant should. She turned slowly, her eyes probing the darkness beyond the silver-edged trees. "Is anyone here?" Her voice, a little louder now, sought to fill the void, to provoke a response from the oppressive silence. The only reply was the soft creaking of branches, a sound that could have been the grove itself shifting in the wind, yet seemed almost... deliberate. She took a step forward, her movements cautious, as if she feared disturbing a balance. The movement seemed to trigger a cascade of tiny sounds: a pebble rolling down a hidden slope, the snap of a twig, each sound distinct yet somehow muffled, as if filtered through a dense veil. Rory's grip on the pendant tightened. It was then she saw it — a flicker of movement, a shadow darting just beyond the edge of her vision. Her heart quickened, a slow, cold dread seeping into her bones. "Who's there?" The challenge cracked through the air, sharp and defiant. The response was immediate. Silence. Not just the absence of sound, but a palpable, heavy stillness, as if the grove itself was holding its breath in anticipation. The realization dawned on her, crawling up her spine like a cold, wet shroud: she was not alone in The Fae Grove. And whatever shared this space with her was watching, waiting for its moment, its presence as undeniable as it was unseen. The moon dipped below the canopy's horizon, plunging the grove into a darkness so profound, it seemed to have a life of its own. Rory, her back straight, her eyes straining into the void, whispered a single word, "Eva?" though she knew, deep within, that her friend was not the presence haunting the shadows. The darkness remained, unbroken and unresponsive, a living, breathing entity that enveloped her, a reminder that in The Fae Grove, under the cover of this oppressive night, she was at the mercy of forces beyond her understanding. And still, Rory waited, suspended in a sea of darkness, the Heartstone Pendant's warmth against her chest the only comfort in a place where time had lost all meaning, and terror lurked, unseen, just beyond the edge of every flickering shadow.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount705
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"very"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount705
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"sentinel"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"oppressive"
count2
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"quickened"
count1
12
word"palpable"
count1
13
word"anticipation"
count1
14
word"profound"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"silence"
2"sentinel"
3"loomed"
4"etched"
5"scanned"
6"pulse"
7"warmth"
8"unspoken"
9"oppressive"
10"flicker"
11"quickened"
12"palpable"
13"anticipation"
14"profound"
15"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences38
matches
0"h in anticipation"
30.08% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences38
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
85.30% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences38
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0.026
matches
0"Her靴 boots crunched on the gravel path as she moved deeper, the sound jarring in the stillness."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords707
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount698
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory7
Richmond1
Fae3
Grove3
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Evan1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Pendant"
3"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
globalScore0.999
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if searching for something out of place"
1"seemed fainter as if dampened by the very atmosphere of the grove"
2"seemed heavy with an unspoken menace"
3"silences that seemed to pulse like the Heartstone Pendant should"
58.56% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.414
wordCount707
matches
0"Not just the absence of sound, but a palpable, heavy stillness, as if the grove itself was hold"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
74.83% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean44.19
std18.2
cv0.412
sampleLengths
080
173
235
367
448
555
622
726
850
938
1011
1127
1243
1354
1437
1541
86.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences38
matches
0"were meant"
1"was supposed"
62.54% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs97
matches
0"was holding"
1"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences38
ratio0.053
matches
0"Not the grove itself — she'd been here before, under less ominous circumstances — but tonight, the air seemed heavy with an unspoken menace."
1"It was then she saw it — a flicker of movement, a shadow darting just beyond the edge of her vision."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount696
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.028735632183908046
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.01293103448275862
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences38
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences38
mean18.61
std10.21
cv0.549
sampleLengths
024
130
226
324
430
519
611
724
817
96
1016
1128
1221
133
1424
1515
162
176
1820
1912
2022
2125
221
2315
2435
256
2621
2711
2811
294
301
3122
3222
3321
3424
3530
3637
3741
69.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4473684210526316
totalSentences38
uniqueOpeners17
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences35
matches
0"Her hand, adorned with the"
1"she whispered, the sound swallowed"
2"She turned slowly, her eyes"
3"Her voice, a little louder"
4"She took a step forward,"
5"It was then she saw"
6"Her heart quickened, a slow,"
ratio0.2
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount30
totalSentences35
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known to few"
1"The ancient oak standing stones,"
2"The wildflowers, oblivious to the"
3"Rory's eyes, bright blue and"
4"Her hand, adorned with the"
5"Tonight, however, the warmth emanating"
6"she whispered, the sound swallowed"
7"The words were meant for"
8"Her靴 boots crunched on the"
9"Rory's mission was straightforward: to"
10"The invitation, scrawled on a"
11"The thought of Evan, her"
12"Something felt off."
13"Rory halted in the center"
14"The night sounds were all"
15"Crickets provided a steady background"
16"She turned slowly, her eyes"
17"Her voice, a little louder"
18"The only reply was the"
19"She took a step forward,"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Rory's eyes, bright blue and ever alert, scanned the clearing, her gaze lingering on each element as if searching for something out of place."
1"Tonight, however, the warmth emanating from it seemed fainter, as if dampened by the very atmosphere of the grove."
2"She took a step forward, her movements cautious, as if she feared disturbing a balance."
3"The movement seemed to trigger a cascade of tiny sounds: a pebble rolling down a hidden slope, the snap of a twig, each sound distinct yet somehow muffled, as i…"
4"Not just the absence of sound, but a palpable, heavy stillness, as if the grove itself was holding its breath in anticipation."
5"The darkness remained, unbroken and unresponsive, a living, breathing entity that enveloped her, a reminder that in The Fae Grove, under the cover of this oppre…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.4
65.9136%