Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR9G3AR442KWQ2J1QKWNEM

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Duration:
4.4s
Cost:
$0.000221

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon flickered like a dying ember, casting jagged shadows across the bar’s walls. Silas Blackwood leaned against the counter, his silver signet ring catching the glow, while Aurora Carter—Rory—poured another drink, her fingers tracing the rim of the glass with deliberate care. The bar was quiet now, save for the hum of conversation in the corner where a group of strangers debated the merits of a new jazz album. "Another?" Silas asked, his voice low, the kind that carried the weight of years spent listening to secrets. "No," she said, setting the glass down with a clink. "Just to wash the taste of that meeting away." Silas didn’t look up from his phone. "You look different." She turned, her bright blue eyes flicking over him. "And you look like you’ve been dragged through a hedge backward." His laugh was a rustle of paper. "And you look like you’ve been carrying the world on your shoulders for years." The bar door swung open, and a gust of damp London air slithered in, carrying the scent of rain and something older—something like old books and aged leather. A woman stepped inside, her straight black hair catching the light like a blade. She wore a leather jacket, the kind that said she’d seen more than most people in a lifetime. Silas’s gaze followed her. "Laila." Aurora’s breath hitched. "Eva." Silas’s eyes narrowed. "You’ve changed." Eva didn’t flinch. "And you haven’t." The air between them thickened, like the moment before a storm. Rory’s scar on her wrist—small but sharp—pulled at her memory. The way she used to laugh, the way she used to run her fingers through her hair when she was thinking too hard. Now, it was just a scar, a reminder of what she’d left behind. Eva tossed her jacket onto a stool, her fingers brushing the edge of the bar. "You still work here?" Silas didn’t answer. He just watched her, his expression unreadable. Rory exhaled sharply. "I used to. Before." Eva’s gaze flicked to her, sharp and knowing. "Before what?" The question hung between them, heavy as the weight of all the things they’d left unsaid. Rory’s fingers tightened around the glass, the ice clinking against the sides. Silas cleared his throat. "You know why you’re here." Eva’s smile was slow, dangerous. "Because you’re the only one who still remembers the old Rory." Rory’s jaw clenched. "I remember the person I was." Eva leaned in, her voice a whisper. "And I remember the person you were trying to be." The bar’s lights dimmed just a little, as if the world outside had paused to listen. Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. Silas finally spoke, his voice a low growl. "She’s right." Rory’s hands trembled. "What?" Eva’s eyes burned into hers. "You ran. And now you’re stuck in some fucked-up version of the past, pretending you never left." The door creaked open again, and a man in a tailored suit stepped inside, his tie slightly askew. He was the kind of man who didn’t belong here, who’d just stepped out of a meeting room and into the wrong place. Silas’s signet ring glinted as he reached for his phone. "You’re late." The man’s smile was polite, but his eyes were on Rory. "Aurora. I didn’t know you were back." Rory’s blood ran cold. "Brendan." Silas’s voice dropped to a whisper. "Your father." Brendan’s gaze flicked to Eva, then back to Rory. "You look well." Eva’s laugh was bitter. "She’s been well. She just doesn’t know it." Brendan’s smile didn’t reach his eyes. "I heard you’re working at the restaurant again." Rory’s fingers dug into the bar’s surface. "I’m not." Silas’s voice was a blade. "You’re not?" Brendan’s eyes flicked to Silas’s signet ring. "No. I’m not." Eva’s voice cut through the tension like a knife. "You’re not." The air between them crackled, charged with something raw and dangerous. Rory’s breath came fast, her chest tightening. Silas stood, his limp a silent reminder of the battles he’d fought. "You’re all here for one reason." Brendan’s smile faltered. "What?" Silas’s gaze locked onto Rory’s. "To tell you that you’re not welcome here anymore." The room seemed to tilt, the weight of all the years of secrets pressing down on Rory. She wanted to run. She wanted to scream. She wanted to remember the Rory she’d been—before the lies, before the fear, before the weight of the past dragging her down. Eva’s hand found hers, her fingers cold. "We all have to leave somewhere." Rory’s vision blurred. "Where?" Silas’s voice was quiet, final. "Somewhere that doesn’t remind you of what you lost." The door swung open again, and the world outside London’s streets rushed in, indifferent and vast. Rory looked at her hands, at the scar on her wrist, at the weight of the past pressing down on her like a stone. Eva’s voice was a whisper. "We’re not done yet." Rory’s breath hitched. "What?" Eva’s smile was dark. "You’re not." Silas’s signet ring caught the light as he turned away, leaving Rory standing there, the weight of the past pressing down on her like a stone she couldn’t lift. The neon flickered again, and for a moment, the world was just Rory, Eva, and the ghosts of what they’d left behind.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.05
leniency0.1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount886
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount886
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"carried the weight"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count2
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count3
6
word"weight"
count5
7
word"jaw clenched"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count3
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"tracing"
2"carried the weight"
3"reminder"
4"unreadable"
5"flicked"
6"weight"
7"jaw clenched"
8"whisper"
9"pulse"
10"trembled"
11"tension"
12"charged"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences67
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords879
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount692
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Blackwood1
Aurora2
Carter1
Rory20
Silas16
London2
Eva13
Brendan4
persons
0"Blackwood"
1"Aurora"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
6"Brendan"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.055
windowScore0
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like old books and aged leather"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount879
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean17.24
std14.75
cv0.856
sampleLengths
070
118
219
310
420
521
660
75
84
95
106
1157
1219
1310
147
1510
1628
179
1816
199
2017
2122
2210
234
2422
2541
2612
2718
285
298
3012
3112
3214
339
347
3510
3611
3718
3818
394
4014
4147
4213
434
4414
4540
469
474
486
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs123
matches
0"was thinking"
34.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences105
ratio0.038
matches
0"Silas Blackwood leaned against the counter, his silver signet ring catching the glow, while Aurora Carter—Rory—poured another drink, her fingers tracing the rim of the glass with deliberate care."
1"The bar door swung open, and a gust of damp London air slithered in, carrying the scent of rain and something older—something like old books and aged leather."
2"Rory’s scar on her wrist—small but sharp—pulled at her memory."
3"She wanted to remember the Rory she’d been—before the lies, before the fear, before the weight of the past dragging her down."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount698
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.03008595988538682
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004297994269340974
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean8.37
std6.86
cv0.819
sampleLengths
014
129
227
318
410
59
67
73
89
911
107
1114
1228
1314
1418
154
161
173
181
193
202
213
223
2311
2410
2523
2613
2715
284
293
307
313
324
338
342
3516
3612
374
385
395
4011
413
426
437
4410
4516
466
478
482
493
48.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.24761904761904763
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences67
matches
0"she said, setting the glass"
1"She turned, her bright blue"
2"His laugh was a rustle"
3"She wore a leather jacket,"
4"He just watched her, his"
5"He was the kind of"
6"She wanted to run."
7"She wanted to scream."
8"She wanted to remember the"
ratio0.134
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences67
matches
0"The neon flickered like a"
1"Silas Blackwood leaned against the"
2"The bar was quiet now,"
3"Silas asked, his voice low,"
4"she said, setting the glass"
5"Silas didn’t look up from"
6"She turned, her bright blue"
7"His laugh was a rustle"
8"The bar door swung open,"
9"A woman stepped inside, her"
10"She wore a leather jacket,"
11"Silas’s gaze followed her."
12"Aurora’s breath hitched."
13"Silas’s eyes narrowed."
14"Eva didn’t flinch."
15"The air between them thickened,"
16"Rory’s scar on her wrist—small"
17"The way she used to"
18"Eva tossed her jacket onto"
19"Silas didn’t answer."
ratio0.985
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Now, it was just a"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Silas Blackwood leaned against the counter, his silver signet ring catching the glow, while Aurora Carter—Rory—poured another drink, her fingers tracing the rim…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.05
leniency0.1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.0655%