Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR9GY4VCC83G09QFDXZQPV

Run Details

Duration:
15.0s
Cost:
$0.026915
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
**Aurora's knuckles hesitated inches from the door, the peeling paint an odd juxtaposition to Eva's methodical neatness inside. Three deadbolts. It seemed appropriate. She took a breath, a flood of memories mingling, some warm, most jagged. She knocked. Within moments she heard the faint pad of footsteps and the click of the first deadbolt, then the second. Her heart beat in her throat by the third. The door opened to reveal not Eva but Lucien Moreau, his imposing figure filling the threshold, dressed in one of his meticulously tailored charcoal suits. His heterochromatic eyes glanced at her with the same blend of curiosity and guardedness she'd grown accustomed to. Behind him, the tabby cat Ptolemy peeked out, nonplussed by the unfolding drama. “Aurora,” Lucien's voice smooth yet edged with faint surprise, “come in.” She stepped over the threshold, brushing past him, the subtle scent of amber and spice that clung to him stirring dormant feelings. Ptolemy wound between her legs as if greeting an old friend. The door shut with a final click. “I didn't expect you here,” Lucien continued, closing the door behind her, each word carefully measured. “Clearly,” Aurora replied, glancing around. The flat barely contained the chaos of books, scrolls, and half-finished cups of tea, typical remnants of Eva's nocturnal habits. “Eva at least gave me the courtesy of informing me you were…visiting.” Lucien's lips curved upwards ever so slightly, not quite a smile. “Eva and I have been collaborating on a project. Something of mutual interest. She’s out at the moment.” “Lucky me.” Aurora unshouldered her bag. She hesitated before setting it down, the sturdy canvas sagging onto the cluttered table. She braced herself against its edge, the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist catching the light, a fleeting reminder of simpler wounds. There was a pause, taut and heavy. Finally, Lucien moved, the silver tip of his cane echoing softly on the worn wooden floor. “Would you like some tea?” Aurora chuckled, shaking her head. “Lucien Moreau, playing host. I half-expected hellfire or at least a scotch offer.” “Perhaps later,” he countered, heading towards the narrow kitchen. She watched him disappear, a flash of blond following. Left alone, Aurora scanned the chaos of Eva’s research. Piles of mismatched books teetered precariously, marked with scribbled notes. Her fingers traced a line across a page left open, the ink blurred with hasty underlining. “Egyptian glyphs,” Lucien's voice came again, from the kitchen. He reappeared, holding two steaming mugs. “Eva's latest obsession. Fascinating stuff, really.” Aurora accepted the tea, the warmth countering the chill in her spine. She clung to the mundane act of sipping tea, a tether to normalcy. “I thought you’d left for good this time,” Lucien began, fixing her with his mismatched gaze. “Last I heard, you were adamant about never crossing paths again.” Her throat tightened. “I had my reasons.” “Evan.” The name struck her like a cold wind. She looked away, focused on the dust motes dancing in the streams of sunlight. “It's over. Has been for a while.” He took a step closer, sharp eyes never leaving her face. “But the shadows linger, don't they? It has a way of digging in, sticking around longer than it should.” For a moment, she wanted to lash out, to remind him of his own shadows. The words hung on the edge of her tongue but never found voice. “Why are you really here, Rory?” Lucien used her old nickname, softening the edges of his usual formality. She set the teacup down. “Eva told me she might require help with translating some of her texts. And I wanted to see her.” Her barely spoken excuse felt thin even to her own ears. Lucien didn’t press further. His silence was eloquent, filled with unreadable thoughts. Aurora knew his game, the cat-and-mouse dance they'd perfected across years and countless encounters. “Your scar,” Lucien inclined his head to her wrist. “Still there?” Aurora looked down at the mark on her wrist. It seemed insignificant compared to scars left on her heart. “Funny, isn't it?” she said. “The small cuts heal, but they never quite vanish.” Lucien touched his cane, an unconscious habit whenever conversations turned personal. “We all carry marks, Rory. Some visible, some not.” Aurora moved to the window, Ptolemy darting after her. She looked out over Brick Lane’s bustling, narrow street. Life continued outside, seemingly untouched by the turbulence inside Eva's flat. “The last time we stood this close,” she began, her voice barely above a whisper. “We made promises neither of us could keep.” Lucien moved behind her; she could feel his presence, like a shadow, close and unwavering. “I remember. You said things... I said things. Heated words, born from pain.” Silence enveloped them, pressing close, wrapping around old wounds. Neither moved, locked in a past neither could change. Then, a soft knock at the door. They turned, eyes meeting briefly before Lucien walked over. He drew back the bolts and opened the door to reveal Eva, her auburn hair tousled, arms encumbered with bags and a large book clutched in one hand. “Rory!” Eva’s face split into a beaming smile as she shuffled past Lucien and enveloped Aurora in a tight hug. “I had hoped you'd come.” Aurora returned the hug, feeling a strange mixture of relief and frustration. “I guess I’m just full of surprises today.” Lucien stepped back, observing as Eva and Aurora exchanged greetings. His aloof facade slipped for a moment, concern flaring in his mismatched eyes. Eva seemed to sense the loaded atmosphere and set her bags down with a decisive thud. “Let me put the kettle back on. We can catch up properly,” Eva said, moving towards the kitchen. “Lucien, maybe help me fetch some more cups?” Lucien followed her, casting one last glance towards Aurora. “Of course, Eva.” When they disappeared into the kitchen, Aurora released a breath she didn’t realize she was holding. The storm of unspoken words and unresolved feelings swirled around her, more oppressive than the clutter in the room. Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa next to her, purring softly. Aurora scratched behind his ears absently, her mind whirling. She watched the kitchen door, waiting, dreading, and hoping. Today, the past confronted the present. She wasn’t sure she was ready for that, but perhaps, just maybe, some scars needed to be reopened to heal properly. The clatter of teacups in the kitchen marked the lingering pause before the inevitable fallout, the resurgence of long-buried truths, and maybe, a second chance at understanding.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien's voice came again [again]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.424
leniency0.848
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.061
67.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1093
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"ever so slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count2
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"ever so slightly"
2"softly"
3"really"
4"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1093
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"methodical"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"imposing"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"sturdy"
count1
5
word"fleeting"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"fascinating"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
13
word"normalcy"
count1
14
word"dancing"
count1
15
word"silence"
count2
16
word"unreadable"
count1
17
word"dance"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count1
19
word"could feel"
count1
20
word"unwavering"
count1
21
word"facade"
count1
22
word"unspoken"
count1
23
word"oppressive"
count1
highlights
0"methodical"
1"footsteps"
2"imposing"
3"measured"
4"sturdy"
5"fleeting"
6"reminder"
7"echoing"
8"scanned"
9"traced"
10"fascinating"
11"warmth"
12"chill"
13"normalcy"
14"dancing"
15"silence"
16"unreadable"
17"dance"
18"whisper"
19"could feel"
20"unwavering"
21"facade"
22"unspoken"
23"oppressive"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1087
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
56.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount853
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva10
Lucien16
Moreau1
Ptolemy4
Aurora15
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.562
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if greeting an old friend"
1"not quite a smile"
2"seemed insignificant compared to scars left on her heart"
3"inued outside, seemingly untouched by the tu"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.92
wordCount1087
matches
0"not Eva but Lucien Moreau, his imposing figure filling the threshold, dr"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean27.87
std13.99
cv0.502
sampleLengths
038
184
211
340
416
537
629
741
828
918
1018
1135
1221
1325
1427
157
161
1729
1830
1928
2018
2135
2226
2311
2433
2520
2629
2723
2828
2918
3044
3125
3220
3339
3426
3512
3635
3728
3854
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs154
matches
0"was holding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences95
ratio0.011
matches
0"Lucien moved behind her; she could feel his presence, like a shadow, close and unwavering."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount858
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.039627039627039624
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.016317016317016316
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean11.44
std5.97
cv0.522
sampleLengths
018
12
23
313
42
519
69
725
818
913
1011
1122
1211
137
1416
155
1620
1712
1811
1918
206
2114
2221
237
2416
255
265
2713
289
299
309
3110
3216
339
346
356
3612
3713
3816
3911
403
414
421
438
4414
457
4611
4719
4815
4913
70.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4421052631578947
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners42
91.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"Finally, Lucien moved, the silver"
1"Then, a soft knock at"
ratio0.027
77.53% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences73
matches
0"It seemed appropriate."
1"She took a breath, a"
2"Her heart beat in her"
3"His heterochromatic eyes glanced at"
4"She stepped over the threshold,"
5"She hesitated before setting it"
6"She braced herself against its"
7"he countered, heading towards the"
8"She watched him disappear, a"
9"Her fingers traced a line"
10"He reappeared, holding two steaming"
11"She clung to the mundane"
12"Her throat tightened."
13"She looked away, focused on"
14"He took a step closer,"
15"She set the teacup down."
16"Her barely spoken excuse felt"
17"His silence was eloquent, filled"
18"It seemed insignificant compared to"
19"She looked out over Brick"
ratio0.356
21.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences73
matches
0"**Aurora's knuckles hesitated inches from"
1"It seemed appropriate."
2"She took a breath, a"
3"Her heart beat in her"
4"The door opened to reveal"
5"His heterochromatic eyes glanced at"
6"Lucien's voice smooth yet edged"
7"She stepped over the threshold,"
8"Ptolemy wound between her legs"
9"The door shut with a"
10"Lucien continued, closing the door"
11"Aurora replied, glancing around"
12"The flat barely contained the"
13"Lucien's lips curved upwards ever"
14"Aurora unshouldered her bag"
15"She hesitated before setting it"
16"She braced herself against its"
17"Aurora chuckled, shaking her head."
18"he countered, heading towards the"
19"She watched him disappear, a"
ratio0.877
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Ptolemy wound between her legs as if greeting an old friend."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she began, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.121
leniency0.242
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.061
82.4835%