Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR9J8151F9FSMT1603QZP8

Run Details

Model:
GPT-4.1
Duration:
1m 27s
Cost:
$0.018866
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Boots slapped through water. Rain hammered everything, even the furious engine inside Harlow Quinn’s chest. Her torch beam snatched brief shapes out of the black: shattered umbrella, a scarf stuck to a drain, the vanishing slice of a leather jacket as her quarry ducked into an alley off Dean Street. She chased him, lungs burning, sharp jaw clenched in stubborn fury. A bus rumbled past and made her glimpse herself in a puddle—a wet outline in bad trousers, with the city’s filth on her shoes and her purpose gritted between her teeth. She gained on him near Bateman Street. The suspect—a thin man, faster than she’d predicted—slipped under a scaffolding canopy. She pushed through it, rain drumming on canvas inches above her head, her flashlight darting over slick brickwork. The radio hissed at her belt, but she ignored the dispatcher’s bark for backup. Too slow. She refused to let him vanish like the last one. Ahead, sudden laughter—no, shouts—spilled from the open door of The Raven’s Nest. Neon bled green across the pavement, pooling about wet cigarette ends and flickering umbrellas. She skidded past the entrance, ignoring startled drunks. No sign of him ducking inside. Onwards—less than half a block, then she glimpsed him again, running hard, coat flapping behind. She followed into an alley behind Greek Street, where the city thinned to shadows, steam rising from bins. Her right shoe slid in some unspeakable soup but she kept moving, torch jouncing light off closed doors and broken windows. He leapt over a toppled shopping trolley—she hurdled it, breath rasping. Then, as she passed a black door, something gleamed in rain among the grime: a staircase, slick and ancient, plunging down under a half-broken sign—PIE & EEL | Family Recipes. Her suspect dived down it. Quinn’s body moved before doubt reached her mind. Down after him into basement dark, boots catching on broken steps. She landed in a lightless tunnel that stank of centuries-old rust and wet stone. Her torch played over mossy bricks, shapes like old railway archways, graffiti etched high and low in tangled scripts. The air grew colder. Beneath the splash of her boots were hurried, smacking footfalls—he hadn’t gotten far. She passed a locked maintenance gate, a knackered fuse box. He’d tossed something behind—she nearly stopped to check, but that would mean losing him. Ahead, the passage bent hard left, then widened. Quinn slowed, pressing herself against damp brick, breathing through her nose, peering around the corner. A faint blue glow rose from deeper inside, unsteady and sickly. She moved forward, following the blue light, pulse prickling behind her eyes, rain forgotten. The tunnel bloomed into something impossible. An underground station, gutted, the old tiles patterned by moss and drip marks. Blue lanterns hung from crumbling supports, swinging in a wind she couldn’t feel. Stalls lined the platform edge: someone sold bird skulls threaded on twine, another displayed books with titles that shifted when she blinked. Huddled knots of figures—some masked, some shrouded, some all-too-normal—bargained with fast, furtive hands. The low hum of voices wound around the columns. Her suspect, that thin blue jacket, darted between a curtain of ratty rugs and a display case labelled"Amulets—Curses Removed (No Refunds)." Quinn stopped dead at the platform’s mouth—the Underground’s yellowed sign hanging over a booth that offered “Wormwood Gin (No Questions)”. A woman with eyes like candle flames flicked her gaze over Quinn’s rain-soaked form. "You lost something, love?" Quinn kept her badge inside her coat, index finger tapping her aching wrist where her old watch lay hidden under sodden sleeve. Blending in was hopeless; her haircut, her bearing, the tilt of her nose all marked her as foreign to this world. Still, she scanned the crowd for blue jacket—there, cutting towards a filthy sign scrawled on a battered sandwich board: ‘Entries for Next Market, This Way — Token Only’. She moved after him. The shadows behind the lanterns shifted suspiciously. No one smiled. Several watched her openly, as though weighing up what to offer for a slice of her unease. She caught movement at the edge of her vision—a set of pale knuckles, gripping rough bone tokens. They changed hands as fast as money. The suspect accepted one from a squat, bald merchant with a jacket lined in lizard skin. Quinn forced herself to keep walking as if she knew what she did, eyes ahead. Her mind calculated what she’d already learned—strange abductions, stories the brass in the station didn’t believe, people showing up half-mad with tales of monsters in tube tunnels. The suspect reached a rusted gate. A gaunt-faced guard leaned down, palm out. The suspect handed over the bone token and stepped through. The gate wheezed shut after him. She closed the gap, wiping away the rain from her forehead with a knuckle. “Visitors pass?” the guard asked, baring teeth filed almost neat. She felt the worn badge in her pocket—absolutely useless here. She couldn’t let him escape again. His file had only cryptic hints—two unsolved disappearances, found objects burnt to slag, a single word he’d scrawled on an interview room table: "Veil." "Left mine with the missus. She’ll kill me if I’m late for the Market," she replied, voice low, bluffing with the weary sarcasm of every copper who’s ever had the night shift. He scanned her in a way no constable ever had. His eyes stopped at her leather watch, then swept up to her cropped hair. “Don’t see you here before. Suppose you’re keen.” His voice caught on the last word, humid and soft. “Market’s dangerous for newcomers.” Quinn glanced back. The blue-jacketed bastard’s head bobbed behind another tent. He hadn’t noticed her hesitation—yet. “If you want to keep the queue moving, let me in. Or are you angling for a bribe?” She flashed a sharp-edged grin, as near to native as she got. Anticipation flickered over the guard’s face. He weighed her—watch, stance, crackle of silent command in her muscles. Then, with a grunt, he stepped aside, dragging the gate wide. “Don’t say I didn’t warn you, officer.” The word hit her gut—had he guessed, had someone tipped him off? No time. She slipped through, pulse hammering now with a new note. The wet stone echoed every footstep. She pressed onwards, trailing through a maze of stalls where scabbed hands offered jars of something that moved and whispered, ashen faces bartered for locks of hair, and once—impossibly—a pair of empty red boots drifted five centimetres above cracked pavement. At a corner, a voice purred out: “You look lost, darling.” She didn’t look. Her focus had to narrow now—one man, blue coat, thinning hair, the back of his neck slick with sweat even in the chill. He turned a corner near a table that boasted pages torn from books, each sealed in wax. She followed, close enough to catch the scent of stale gin, then ducked behind a pillar slick with old posters. He knelt at another booth weighed down with black candles and silver objects. They exchanged rapid words—inaudible, but his agitation showed in the twitch of his hands. Quinn risked a glance, memorising the shape of the stallkeeper, the way his face seemed both old and brand-new in the lantern’s spectral wash. No visible weapon, no obvious way out—unless the tunnels ran deeper, which of course they must. “Don’t,” the suspect muttered as he caught her in the edge of his gaze, jolting upright. She feinted left, looping round a group arguing in agitated Polish over a box of feathers that squirmed. She almost lost him again; only the glimmer of his Saint Christopher medallion in the dim blue glow betrayed him as he turned, urgent, towards another, smaller archway choked with cobwebbed rope. Quinn shoved forward. Stalls grew stranger here, goods hidden behind thick curtains, soot-faced children bundled close to a man in red gloves. Echoes twisted in strange directions; somewhere music played on a tinny gramophone. Ahead, her quarry slipped past a curtain and vanished into gloom. Quinn forced herself not to slow or falter, ignoring the rising burn of fear in her throat. Her left hand dropped to her jacket for her torch, her right close to where she kept her badge. She stepped through the curtain. The market’s babble fell away. The space behind the drape narrowed to a plain corridor, dust softening the flagstones. The suspect jogged at the far end, pausing, wild-eyed, uncertain for the first time. He turned. Quinn held her ground. "You think you’re clever, ducking tunnels?" Her voice didn’t waver. He spat. "This isn’t for your lot, alright? Told you people to stay away—" She drew closer, notebook forgotten. "Still running means you’ve got something worth running for. Turn out your pockets." He hesitated, tension obvious in his hunched back and white-knuckled fists. “Could just let me go. Wouldn’t cost you—" She interrupted, three slow steps forward; her boots swallowed the silence. He bolted, twisting down another passage between storage crates marked in languages she didn’t recognise. She pressed on, grit scraping her words. “Stop! You’re not getting out of here that easy,” Distantly, vendors shouted, an alarm or a warning—Quinn’s heart gave an extra painful thud. She ducked around an overturned chair and gave chase into the deeper dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His file had only [only]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1577
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1577
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"jaw clenched"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count2
6
word"calculated"
count1
7
word"absolutely"
count1
8
word"anticipation"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
12
word"spectral"
count1
13
word"echoes"
count1
14
word"gloom"
count1
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"jaw clenched"
2"etched"
3"pulse"
4"flicked"
5"scanned"
6"calculated"
7"absolutely"
8"anticipation"
9"flickered"
10"echoed"
11"chill"
12"spectral"
13"echoes"
14"gloom"
15"tension"
16"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1539
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1400
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn12
Dean1
Street3
Bateman1
Raven1
Nest1
Greek1
Family1
Recipes1
Curses1
Removed1
Gin1
Anticipation1
Polish1
Saint1
Christopher1
Ahead3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Gin"
4"Anticipation"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Bateman"
3"Greek"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though weighing up what to offer for a slice of her unease"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1539
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean30.18
std20.58
cv0.682
sampleLengths
092
163
255
350
454
550
658
720
870
941
1014
114
1271
1331
1440
1542
1613
1716
1814
1910
2040
2132
2224
2322
2416
2530
2628
277
2814
2956
3011
3143
3247
3340
3416
3550
3634
3747
385
3935
404
4110
4214
4318
4411
458
4611
4722
489
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"were hurried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs252
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount26
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences27
totalSentences118
ratio0.229
matches
0"A bus rumbled past and made her glimpse herself in a puddle—a wet outline in bad trousers, with the city’s filth on her shoes and her purpose gritted between her teeth."
1"The suspect—a thin man, faster than she’d predicted—slipped under a scaffolding canopy."
2"Ahead, sudden laughter—no, shouts—spilled from the open door of The Raven’s Nest."
3"Onwards—less than half a block, then she glimpsed him again, running hard, coat flapping behind."
4"He leapt over a toppled shopping trolley—she hurdled it, breath rasping."
5"Then, as she passed a black door, something gleamed in rain among the grime: a staircase, slick and ancient, plunging down under a half-broken sign—PIE & EEL | Family Recipes."
6"Beneath the splash of her boots were hurried, smacking footfalls—he hadn’t gotten far."
7"He’d tossed something behind—she nearly stopped to check, but that would mean losing him."
8"Huddled knots of figures—some masked, some shrouded, some all-too-normal—bargained with fast, furtive hands."
9"Her suspect, that thin blue jacket, darted between a curtain of ratty rugs and a display case labelled\"Amulets—Curses Removed (No Refunds).\" Quinn stopped dead at the platform’s mouth—the Underground’s yellowed sign hanging over a booth that offered “Wormwood Gin (No Questions)”."
10"Blending in was hopeless; her haircut, her bearing, the tilt of her nose all marked her as foreign to this world."
11"Still, she scanned the crowd for blue jacket—there, cutting towards a filthy sign scrawled on a battered sandwich board: ‘Entries for Next Market, This Way — Token Only’."
12"She caught movement at the edge of her vision—a set of pale knuckles, gripping rough bone tokens."
13"Her mind calculated what she’d already learned—strange abductions, stories the brass in the station didn’t believe, people showing up half-mad with tales of monsters in tube tunnels."
14"She felt the worn badge in her pocket—absolutely useless here."
15"His file had only cryptic hints—two unsolved disappearances, found objects burnt to slag, a single word he’d scrawled on an interview room table: \"Veil.\""
16"He hadn’t noticed her hesitation—yet."
17"He weighed her—watch, stance, crackle of silent command in her muscles."
18"The word hit her gut—had he guessed, had someone tipped him off?"
19"She pressed onwards, trailing through a maze of stalls where scabbed hands offered jars of something that moved and whispered, ashen faces bartered for locks of hair, and once—impossibly—a pair of empty red boots drifted five centimetres above cracked pavement."
20"Her focus had to narrow now—one man, blue coat, thinning hair, the back of his neck slick with sweat even in the chill."
21"They exchanged rapid words—inaudible, but his agitation showed in the twitch of his hands."
22"No visible weapon, no obvious way out—unless the tunnels ran deeper, which of course they must."
23"She almost lost him again; only the glimmer of his Saint Christopher medallion in the dim blue glow betrayed him as he turned, urgent, towards another, smaller archway choked with cobwebbed rope."
24"Echoes twisted in strange directions; somewhere music played on a tinny gramophone."
25"She interrupted, three slow steps forward; her boots swallowed the silence."
26"Distantly, vendors shouted, an alarm or a warning—Quinn’s heart gave an extra painful thud."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount633
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.022116903633491312
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004739336492890996
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean13.04
std8.01
cv0.614
sampleLengths
04
111
235
311
431
57
612
718
814
92
1010
1112
1214
138
146
1515
1618
1721
1811
1930
205
218
2211
2314
2419
254
2613
2710
2814
298
3015
3111
3214
336
3413
3513
3622
3713
389
3941
4014
414
4222
4321
4428
454
467
473
4817
4917
49.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3220338983050847
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners38
93.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences107
matches
0"Then, as she passed a"
1"Then, with a grunt, he"
2"Distantly, vendors shouted, an alarm"
ratio0.028
33.08% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences107
matches
0"Her torch beam snatched brief"
1"She chased him, lungs burning,"
2"She gained on him near"
3"She pushed through it, rain"
4"She refused to let him"
5"She skidded past the entrance,"
6"She followed into an alley"
7"Her right shoe slid in"
8"He leapt over a toppled"
9"Her suspect dived down it."
10"She landed in a lightless"
11"Her torch played over mossy"
12"She passed a locked maintenance"
13"He’d tossed something behind—she nearly"
14"She moved forward, following the"
15"Her suspect, that thin blue"
16"She moved after him."
17"She caught movement at the"
18"They changed hands as fast"
19"Her mind calculated what she’d"
ratio0.467
44.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences107
matches
0"Boots slapped through water."
1"Her torch beam snatched brief"
2"She chased him, lungs burning,"
3"A bus rumbled past and"
4"She gained on him near"
5"The suspect—a thin man, faster"
6"She pushed through it, rain"
7"The radio hissed at her"
8"She refused to let him"
9"Neon bled green across the"
10"She skidded past the entrance,"
11"She followed into an alley"
12"Her right shoe slid in"
13"He leapt over a toppled"
14"Her suspect dived down it."
15"Quinn’s body moved before doubt"
16"She landed in a lightless"
17"Her torch played over mossy"
18"The air grew colder."
19"She passed a locked maintenance"
ratio0.832
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She pushed through it, rain drumming on canvas inches above her head, her flashlight darting over slick brickwork."
1"Quinn slowed, pressing herself against damp brick, breathing through her nose, peering around the corner."
2"Stalls lined the platform edge: someone sold bird skulls threaded on twine, another displayed books with titles that shifted when she blinked."
3"She pressed onwards, trailing through a maze of stalls where scabbed hands offered jars of something that moved and whispered, ashen faces bartered for locks of…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he caught (catch)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.125
84.9116%