Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR9M7ENGPXRNA5NY19VNVA

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Duration:
29.4s
Cost:
$0.006097
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
**Chapter 1: The Grove's Unsettling Hush** Aurora Carter's boots scuffed against the worn dirt path as she stepped into the Fae Grove, the ancient oak standing stones looming before her like sentinels. The trees, swayless in the stillness, seemed to absorb the faint moonlight, casting the clearing in an eerie, emerald-green gloom. She had arrived just as the last wisps of daylight dissolved, the journey from London's bustling streets to this secluded Richmond Park entrance a blur of determined focus. Her reason for being here—uncovering the truth behind the cryptic messages from an unknown sender, alluding to her family's entwined history with the Fae realm—now seemed overshadowed by the oppressive atmosphere. "Hello?" Rory called out, her bright blue eyes scanning the grove, but her voice was swallowed by the unsettling hush. The only response was the creaking of branches, too loud for the windless night, and the faint, sweet scent of blooming wildflowers that seemed out of place in the autumn season. As she ventured deeper, the rustling of leaves underfoot was the only sound accompanying her. Rory's hand instinctively went to the Heartstone Pendant hidden beneath her jacket, its faint warmth a comforting presence. She had been drawn to this specific location by the pendant's increased pulsing, indicating proximity to a Hel portal, but now, the sensation was muted, as if the artifact too sensed the grove's wrongness. Rory approached a massive, gnarled oak at the grove's center, its trunk twisted with age. A piece of paper, secured by a thorn, fluttered against the bark. She plucked the note, recognizing the message scrawled in hasty, red ink: "They watch from the shadows. Leave now, Aurora Carter, while the veil is thin." A shiver coursed down her spine, but Rory's resolve hardened. She was not one to back down from the unknown. A soft, melodic humming began to permeate the air, faint but unmistakable. It didn't seem to emanate from any particular direction, yet it grew louder, more haunting. "Who's here?" Rory demanded, her voice firm, though a thread of unease wove its way into her words. The humming ceased. In the renewed silence, Rory detected the slightest creaking of twigs, not behind her, but to her sides, as if something was attempting to encircle her. Her grip on the note tightened. "Show yourself," she challenged, the stillness absorbing her words like a living entity. A figure, tall and imposing, emerged from the darkness between two standing stones. Not with a dramatic flourish, but with the quiet, deliberate steps of one who didn't wish to startle—yet. Rory's heart quickened, but her gaze remained locked on the stranger, her mind racing with scenarios. "Welcome, Aurora Carter," the figure said, its voice low, smooth, and devoid of any discernible accent. "I've been expecting you. Though, I must admit, your timing is... unfortunate." As the figure stepped closer, moonlight danced across its features, revealing sharp, angular cheeks and eyes that seemed to hold a world of ancient, wearied knowledge. "Unfortunate?" Rory echoed, her hand still resting on the pendant, now pulsing with a gentle, warning heat. "Yes," the stranger replied, halting a few feet away. "You see, the veil between worlds is indeed thinning, but not in the way you've been led to believe. The true horror, Aurora Carter, doesn't lurk in the shadows, but in the very fabric of time itself." Rory's gaze narrowed. "What do you mean?" The stranger's smile was a thin, mirthless line. "Allow me to show you. But first, a question: How much are you willing to sacrifice to uncover the truth about your family's past... and the fate of this realm?" The air seemed to thicken, heavy with anticipation, as Rory stood at the precipice of a decision that would alter everything. The pendant's warmth spiked, as if urging her toward the unknown, even as the shadows around them deepened, listening. "I'm willing to risk it all," Rory said finally, her voice clear, her heart pounding in anticipation of the horrors to come. The stranger's smile widened, just a fraction, before the world around Rory dissolved into an inky, chilling blackness, the last sound being the soft whisper: "Then let us begin."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory said finally [finally]"
1"The stranger's smile widened just [just]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.615
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
92.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount699
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount699
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"looming"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"determined"
count1
4
word"oppressive"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"fluttered"
count1
9
word"down her spine"
count1
10
word"resolve"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"imposing"
count1
13
word"quickened"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"anticipation"
count2
17
word"pounding"
count1
18
word"chilling"
count1
19
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"looming"
1"sentinels"
2"gloom"
3"determined"
4"oppressive"
5"scanning"
6"warmth"
7"comforting"
8"fluttered"
9"down her spine"
10"resolve"
11"silence"
12"imposing"
13"quickened"
14"racing"
15"echoed"
16"anticipation"
17"pounding"
18"chilling"
19"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
77.38% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences35
matches
0"y with anticipation"
1"g in anticipation"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences35
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences40
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords695
ratio0.009
matches
0"Chapter 1: The Grove's Unsettling Hush"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.19% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount578
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove2
Unsettling1
Aurora1
Carter1
Fae2
London1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Hel1
Rory12
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Pendant"
3"Rory"
places
0"Grove"
1"Fae"
2"London"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
5"Heartstone"
6"Hel"
globalScore0.462
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed overshadowed by the oppressive atmosphere"
1"eyes that seemed to hold a world of ancient, wearied knowledge"
2"as if urging her toward the unknown, even as the shadows around them deepened, listening"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.878
wordCount695
matches
0"not behind her, but to her sides, as if something was attempting to encircle her"
1"Not with a dramatic flourish, but with the quiet, deliberate steps of one who didn't wish to s"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean33.1
std16.7
cv0.505
sampleLengths
06
146
259
351
467
539
614
747
818
935
1013
1147
1228
1326
1417
1546
167
1738
1840
1922
2029
85.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences35
matches
0"was swallowed"
1"been drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs98
matches
0"was attempting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences40
ratio0.05
matches
0"Her reason for being here—uncovering the truth behind the cryptic messages from an unknown sender, alluding to her family's entwined history with the Fae realm—now seemed overshadowed by the oppressive atmosphere."
1"Not with a dramatic flourish, but with the quiet, deliberate steps of one who didn't wish to startle—yet."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount582
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"eerie, emerald-green gloom."
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.020618556701030927
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006872852233676976
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences40
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences40
mean17.38
std8.69
cv0.5
sampleLengths
06
126
220
328
431
520
631
715
818
934
1015
1112
1212
1314
1410
1510
1612
1715
1818
193
2026
216
2213
2313
2418
2516
2616
2712
2826
2917
309
3137
323
334
348
3530
3621
3719
3822
3929
89.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.55
totalSentences40
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences35
matches
0"She had arrived just as"
1"Her reason for being here—uncovering"
2"She had been drawn to"
3"She plucked the note, recognizing"
4"She was not one to"
5"It didn't seem to emanate"
6"Her grip on the note"
7"she challenged, the stillness absorbing"
ratio0.229
17.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount31
totalSentences35
matches
0"**Chapter 1: The Grove's Unsettling"
1"Aurora Carter's boots scuffed against"
2"The trees, swayless in the"
3"She had arrived just as"
4"Her reason for being here—uncovering"
5"Rory called out, her bright"
6"The only response was the"
7"Rory's hand instinctively went to"
8"She had been drawn to"
9"Rory approached a massive, gnarled"
10"A piece of paper, secured"
11"She plucked the note, recognizing"
12"A shiver coursed down her"
13"She was not one to"
14"A soft, melodic humming began"
15"It didn't seem to emanate"
16"Rory demanded, her voice firm,"
17"The humming ceased."
18"Her grip on the note"
19"she challenged, the stillness absorbing"
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The only response was the creaking of branches, too loud for the windless night, and the faint, sweet scent of blooming wildflowers that seemed out of place in …"
1"She had been drawn to this specific location by the pendant's increased pulsing, indicating proximity to a Hel portal, but now, the sensation was muted, as if t…"
2"In the renewed silence, Rory detected the slightest creaking of twigs, not behind her, but to her sides, as if something was attempting to encircle her."
3"As the figure stepped closer, moonlight danced across its features, revealing sharp, angular cheeks and eyes that seemed to hold a world of ancient, wearied kno…"
4"The air seemed to thicken, heavy with anticipation, as Rory stood at the precipice of a decision that would alter everything."
5"The pendant's warmth spiked, as if urging her toward the unknown, even as the shadows around them deepened, listening."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she challenged, the stillness absorbing her words like a living entity"
1"the figure said, its voice low, smooth, and devoid of any discernible accent"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory called out (call out)"
1"Rory demanded (demand)"
2"she challenged (challenge)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.462
56.7315%