| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 596 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 596 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "wavering" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "glinting" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "unreadable" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "raced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 23 | | totalWords | 589 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "\"You shouldn’t be here.\"" | | 1 | "\"I came for you,\"" | | 2 | "\"You know why.\"" | | 3 | "\"Open it.\"" | | 4 | "watched" | | 5 | "\"You’ve been waiting for this,\"" | | 6 | "\"For a long time.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 547 | | uniqueNames | 2 | | maxNameDensity | 2.01 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.495 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 7.14% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if urging her on" | | 1 | "quite a smile" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 589 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 26.77 | | std | 23.61 | | cv | 0.882 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 89 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 32 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 48.48% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "was happening" | | 1 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 56 | | ratio | 0.125 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled a stream of smoke, the cigarette burning slow and deliberate, her fingers tracing the faint scar on her wrist—a childhood accident that had never quite healed." | | 1 | "The flat smelled of stale beer and something else—something metallic, like old blood." | | 2 | "A sound cut through the quiet—soft, wet, and deliberate." | | 3 | "She could feel it—something watching her, just beyond the edge of sight." | | 4 | "Aurora’s breath hitched as she saw it—a small, silver box, its surface worn smooth by time." | | 5 | "Inside was a single, dark stone—no larger than a pea, its surface smooth and unbroken." | | 6 | "But she knew one thing for certain—she wasn’t alone anymore." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 14 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 0 | | adverbRatio | 0 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 56 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 56 | | mean | 10.52 | | std | 7.02 | | cv | 0.667 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 48.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.32142857142857145 | | totalSentences | 56 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 69.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled a stream of" | | 1 | "She stepped into the hallway," | | 2 | "It wasn’t just warmth she" | | 3 | "She froze, her breath catching." | | 4 | "She turned, her back to" | | 5 | "She could feel it—something watching" | | 6 | "She knew that silhouette." | | 7 | "They were dark, unreadable." | | 8 | "She had no idea what" | | 9 | "She hesitated, then reached for" | | 10 | "She lifted the lid." | | 11 | "She had no idea what" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 53.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "The neon sign of" | | 1 | "She exhaled a stream of" | | 2 | "The pendant around her neck" | | 3 | "She stepped into the hallway," | | 4 | "The flat smelled of stale" | | 5 | "The kitchen was dark, the" | | 6 | "Aurora reached for the pendant" | | 7 | "It wasn’t just warmth she" | | 8 | "A sound cut through the" | | 9 | "She froze, her breath catching." | | 10 | "The fridge door swung open," | | 11 | "A knife, its blade dull" | | 12 | "Aurora’s pulse hammered in her" | | 13 | "She turned, her back to" | | 14 | "The pendant pulsed again, brighter" | | 15 | "She could feel it—something watching" | | 16 | "Aurora’s breath came faster, her" | | 17 | "The door above creaked open" | | 18 | "Aurora’s heart stuttered." | | 19 | "She knew that silhouette." |
| | ratio | 0.813 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 10.58% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled a stream of smoke, the cigarette burning slow and deliberate, her fingers tracing the faint scar on her wrist—a childhood accident that had never qu…" | | 1 | "The pendant around her neck pulsed faintly, its deep crimson glow warm against her skin, but it was the air that made her pause." | | 2 | "But the air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something that made her skin prickle." | | 3 | "The pendant pulsed, its glow intensifying, as if urging her on." | | 4 | "Eva’s expression was unreadable, her lips curling into something that wasn’t quite a smile." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva said, her voice low and smooth" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |