Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR9Q5MVF058B82E66VY0BN

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Duration:
5.5s
Cost:
$0.000271

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air smelled like honey and damp earth, thick with the weight of something ancient. Aurora Carter stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the mossy ground. The pendant at her throat pulsed faintly, warm as a heartbeat against her skin. Nyx moved like a shadow given form, their silhouette stretching and compressing as they shifted between solid and incorporeal. The Grove swallowed them whole, the trees here taller than any in Richmond Park, their gnarled branches twisting into shapes that made her stomach tighten. The standing stones at the edge of the clearing stood like sentinels, their bark smooth and unblemished, as if carved from living wood. Isolde’s voice cut through the hum of the wind, soft as a sigh. *"Walk slower, little mortal. The stones remember."* Aurora glanced back. Isolde stood just beyond the threshold, her silver hair catching the dappled light like spun moonlight. Her pale lavender eyes held no warning, only the quiet certainty of someone who’d seen too much. The moment they crossed the boundary, the world tilted. The air grew warmer, thick with the scent of blooming flowers that weren’t there a moment before. Wildflowers, their petals shimmering with an inner light, dotted the forest floor in impossible abundance—roses the colour of crushed berries, lilies with veins of silver, blossoms that pulsed faintly, as if breathing. Nyx’s voice slithered through the air, a whisper carried on the wind. *"This place doesn’t like us."* Aurora didn’t answer. She was too busy staring at the vines coiling around the trees, their leaves shifting like living things. The bark beneath her fingers was warm, almost pulsing, as if the forest itself was breathing. Isolde’s fingers brushed the nearest standing stone. *"They’re not trees. They’re guardians."* A rustling came from the undergrowth. Something moved in the shadows, too quick to be human. Nyx’s form flickered, solidifying just long enough to block Aurora’s path before dissolving again. *"Stay close,"* they warned. Aurora exhaled sharply. "To what?" The Grove answered for them. A flash of movement—a fox, but not like any fox. Its fur shimmered like liquid silver, its eyes glowing faintly violet. It trotted ahead, vanishing into the undergrowth before reappearing a few paces further, as if testing their reaction. Isolde’s lips curved. *"A trickster. Or a guide."* The fox darted forward, its tail flicking like a metronome. It led them deeper into the heart of the clearing, where the trees thinned and the ground sloped upward, revealing a glade bathed in golden light. Aurora’s breath caught. The flowers here were different. Towering stalks of blooms, their petals unfurling in slow motion, as if time itself had slowed. The air hummed with a low, resonant vibration, like a string plucked too deep to be heard. The scent was intoxicating—warm spice, ripe fruit, something darker, like burnt sugar and old wine. Nyx’s voice was a breath against her ear. *"This is where the Veil thins."* Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant. It burned against her skin, the warmth spreading up her neck like a brand. Isolde stepped forward, her bare feet leaving no impression in the moss. *"The Fae Courts are close. But so is Hel."* The fox—if it was a fox—vanished without a sound. The silence that followed was heavy, broken only by the distant chime of wind through the trees. Aurora swallowed. "What do we do now?" Isolde’s gaze flicked to the standing stones, then to the horizon where the sky bled into something darker, richer. *"We wait. Or we listen."* A sound cut through the air—a low, rhythmic thrum, like the heartbeat of the earth itself. It pulsed from the ground, vibrating through Aurora’s boots, up her legs, into her bones. Nyx’s voice was a whisper in her mind. *"It’s singing."* Aurora pressed her palm to the earth. The warmth beneath her fingers was alive, shifting like liquid beneath her skin. Isolde’s fingers brushed her shoulder. *"The stones are calling."* The ground trembled. And then— The first flower bloomed beneath Aurora’s feet.
total_cost0.00027130000000000004

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount671
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount671
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"sentinels"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulsed"
2"stomach"
3"sentinels"
4"whisper"
5"flickered"
6"shimmered"
7"warmth"
8"silence"
9"flicked"
10"rhythmic"
11"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
49.62% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords50
totalWords665
ratio0.075
matches
0"\"Walk slower, little mortal. The stones remember.\""
1"\"This place doesn’t like us.\""
2"\"They’re not trees. They’re guardians.\""
3"\"Stay close,\""
4"\"A trickster. Or a guide.\""
5"\"This is where the Veil thins.\""
6"\"The Fae Courts are close. But so is Hel.\""
7"\"We wait. Or we listen.\""
8"\"It’s singing.\""
9"\"The stones are calling.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.54% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount608
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.81
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Grove2
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora11
Nyx5
Isolde7
persons
0"Carter"
1"Grove"
2"Aurora"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.595
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like honey and damp earth, thick w"
1"as if breathing"
2"as if testing their reaction"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount665
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean22.17
std17.22
cv0.777
sampleLengths
041
167
220
336
458
517
637
712
830
94
105
115
1239
138
1436
153
1653
1714
1820
1921
2026
217
2224
2331
2410
2520
269
273
282
297
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs101
matches
0"was breathing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences63
ratio0.095
matches
0"Wildflowers, their petals shimmering with an inner light, dotted the forest floor in impossible abundance—roses the colour of crushed berries, lilies with veins of silver, blossoms that pulsed faintly, as if breathing."
1"A flash of movement—a fox, but not like any fox."
2"The scent was intoxicating—warm spice, ripe fruit, something darker, like burnt sugar and old wine."
3"The fox—if it was a fox—vanished without a sound."
4"A sound cut through the air—a low, rhythmic thrum, like the heartbeat of the earth itself."
5"And then—"
92.25% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount614
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.048859934853420196
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.011400651465798045
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean10.56
std6.69
cv0.633
sampleLengths
015
112
214
319
425
523
613
77
83
916
1017
119
1217
1332
1412
155
163
1718
1816
197
205
216
2210
2314
244
253
262
275
2810
2911
3018
313
325
3310
3426
353
365
3716
3817
3915
408
416
426
4314
4412
459
469
4717
482
495
43.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.31746031746031744
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences49
matches
0"Her pale lavender eyes held"
1"She was too busy staring"
2"Its fur shimmered like liquid"
3"It trotted ahead, vanishing into"
4"It led them deeper into"
5"It burned against her skin,"
6"It pulsed from the ground,"
ratio0.143
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences49
matches
0"The air smelled like honey"
1"Aurora Carter stepped forward, her"
2"The pendant at her throat"
3"Nyx moved like a shadow"
4"The Grove swallowed them whole,"
5"The standing stones at the"
6"Isolde’s voice cut through the"
7"Aurora glanced back."
8"Isolde stood just beyond the"
9"Her pale lavender eyes held"
10"The moment they crossed the"
11"The air grew warmer, thick"
12"Wildflowers, their petals shimmering with"
13"Nyx’s voice slithered through the"
14"Aurora didn’t answer."
15"She was too busy staring"
16"The bark beneath her fingers"
17"Isolde’s fingers brushed the nearest"
18"A rustling came from the"
19"Something moved in the shadows,"
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The standing stones at the edge of the clearing stood like sentinels, their bark smooth and unblemished, as if carved from living wood."
1"Her pale lavender eyes held no warning, only the quiet certainty of someone who’d seen too much."
2"Wildflowers, their petals shimmering with an inner light, dotted the forest floor in impossible abundance—roses the colour of crushed berries, lilies with veins…"
3"She was too busy staring at the vines coiling around the trees, their leaves shifting like living things."
4"The bark beneath her fingers was warm, almost pulsing, as if the forest itself was breathing."
5"It trotted ahead, vanishing into the undergrowth before reappearing a few paces further, as if testing their reaction."
6"Towering stalks of blooms, their petals unfurling in slow motion, as if time itself had slowed."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"they warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.167
69.8854%