| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.909 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1260 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 28.57% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1260 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "wavered" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "comforting" | | 5 | "fractured" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "thundered" | | 9 | "pounding" | | 10 | "throb" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1240 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1171 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.77 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 9 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 56.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like mint and copper" | | 1 | "not quite human" | | 2 | "as if stretching after sleep" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.806 | | wordCount | 1240 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 34.44 | | std | 18.01 | | cv | 0.523 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 75 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 51 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 45 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 41 | | 35 | 28 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 214 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.133 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park stretched out behind her—civilised, lamplit, threaded with joggers and dogwalkers and the faint stink of London diesel." | | 1 | "\"Just get to the stones,\" she muttered—the words tripped out too sharp, bounced off wood and vapor and vanished." | | 2 | "Something blinked, high and quick, in the corner of her vision—a shape slinking between trunks, graceful, not quite human." | | 3 | "The Grove sprawled wider than she remembered—more space inside than out." | | 4 | "\"Don’t,\" whispered a voice, neither close nor far, a thistle on the wind—her voice, fractured." | | 5 | "The bark wriggled, soft and warm, not wood at all—a thing breathing under her palm." | | 6 | "The pendant pulsed harder—veins of warmth and dread, radiating down her chest." | | 7 | "A footstep behind her—all weight and intent." | | 8 | "The trees shifted—a sweep of nothing solid, a refusal of light behind trunks, a sideways movement that didn’t need legs." | | 9 | "\"Does it hurt?\" asked the voice—her father’s timbre now, low and cautious, threaded with disappointment." | | 10 | "She jerked back; a patch of nettles glistened, thick and black as oil." | | 11 | "The warmth at her throat spiked—heat and pressure, as if someone clutched her there." | | 12 | "\"Are you afraid?\" Voices overlapped—now her own, now a child’s, now hollow and blown apart." | | 13 | "The Heartstone’s heat became a steady, pounding throb—the only real sensation." | | 14 | "A long, rattling exhale from behind her shoulder—the stink of peat and rotting flowers." | | 15 | "In the corners of her sight, shapes lapped at the edges—never showing, just promising." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1191 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.03610411418975651 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006717044500419815 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 10.33 | | std | 6.62 | | cv | 0.64 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 53.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.36666666666666664 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 98.04% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the click of the" | | 1 | "Too late to regret." | | 2 | "Just a tiny, final thing." |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 98.43% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "She gripped the pendant at" | | 1 | "She slid between two ancient" | | 2 | "she muttered—the words tripped out" | | 3 | "Her trainers squelched into sodden" | | 4 | "She tried not to patch" | | 5 | "She inched forward, torch flickering," | | 6 | "Her heart stuttered." | | 7 | "She moved on, step after" | | 8 | "Her fingers itched for her" | | 9 | "She glanced down anyway: screen" | | 10 | "Her breath skittered thin." | | 11 | "She kept her body low." | | 12 | "She whipped round, torch beam" | | 13 | "She lunged up, tripped, one" | | 14 | "She pulled away, knuckles scraped" | | 15 | "Her father in the lounge," | | 16 | "She reached up, rubbed the" | | 17 | "She crouched again, hand trembling" | | 18 | "Her pulse thundered." | | 19 | "She jerked back; a patch" |
| | ratio | 0.304 | |
| 48.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory ducked under a tangled" | | 1 | "The old torchlight on her" | | 2 | "Richmond Park stretched out behind" | | 3 | "Here, deep inside the Fae" | | 4 | "The air wore that chill," | | 5 | "The path behind her had" | | 6 | "She gripped the pendant at" | | 7 | "The Heartstone pulsed under her" | | 8 | "She slid between two ancient" | | 9 | "she muttered—the words tripped out" | | 10 | "The Grove breathed." | | 11 | "Her trainers squelched into sodden" | | 12 | "She tried not to patch" | | 13 | "The pendant hummed with each" | | 14 | "She inched forward, torch flickering," | | 15 | "The air tasted like mint" | | 16 | "Rory spat, her voice fierce:" | | 17 | "Something blinked, high and quick," | | 18 | "Her heart stuttered." | | 19 | "She moved on, step after" |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 55.39% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The old torchlight on her phone wavered, eating a ragged circle in the mist that coiled thick over leaf and root." | | 1 | "The path behind her had vanished thirty paces in, swallowed by brambles and wildflowers that sparkled with dew like some too-sweet artificial world." | | 2 | "Different from her own shuffle, less the fall of a wild creature and more of someone who remembered how to own feet." | | 3 | "The warmth at her throat spiked—heat and pressure, as if someone clutched her there." | | 4 | "A root shifted beside her left boot, worming higher as if stretching after sleep." | | 5 | "Light blurred at the clearing’s edges, a slow ripple that dissolved flowers and rebuilt them as unfamiliar, bloated things." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory spat, her voice fierce:" | | 1 | "Voices overlapped, now a child’s, now hollow and blown apart" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered— (mutter)" | | 1 | "Rory spat (spit)" | | 2 | "whispered a voice (whisper)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0.8 | | effectiveRatio | 0.727 | |