| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1166 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1166 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "shattered" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "wavering" | | 8 | "measured" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "throbbed" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "loomed" | | 14 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 24 | | totalWords | 1141 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "Deer. Just deer. Or a fox. City thinking, Rory. Not every shuffle in the dark wants you dead." | | 1 | "meet me at the grove NOW" |
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| 83.33% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, boots silent on moss, she coaxed herself forward." |
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| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1114 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.81 | | worstName | "Eva" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 9 | | Rory | 6 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Aurora | 2 | | Long | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 87.50% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite human, tuneless and cold" | | 1 | "seemed possible" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 32.6 | | std | 18.87 | | cv | 0.579 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 83 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 55 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 190 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "After Eva’s frantic text—gone garbled and then blank—Rory had doubled her pace, cycling until the city crumbled away." | | 1 | "Her hand trailed across her wrist, thumb nudging the tiny crescent scar—a nervous habit she’d never quite lost." | | 2 | "The wildflowers—jarring in their abundance—spilled across the grove." | | 3 | "Nothing replied but a faint rustle, the kind leaves make when a rat squeezes past or an owl lands—a sound that could have been an accident." | | 4 | "Something shifted at the edge of her vision—movement gone as she looked round." | | 5 | "She caught the faintest threads of music—a melody far away, not quite human, tuneless and cold." | | 6 | "She thumbed through messages, the last one from Eva flickering at the top: *meet me at the grove NOW*—before devolving into random punctuation and symbols, a digital scream." | | 7 | "Sound again—behind this time, closer." | | 8 | "It eked upwards, uncoiling—very tall, wrong-angled elbows, bones that didn’t know how to sit together properly beneath thin skin." | | 9 | "Far-off, the not-music returned—notes tumbling brokenly, as if played on wind through hollow bones." | | 10 | "Her palm throbbed—she must have brushed against a thorn or splinter on the stone, maybe just nervous sweat." | | 11 | "Something dragged behind it—a root, pale and slick, wound round her ankle like a leash." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1139 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "tall, wrong-angled elbows," |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03687445127304653 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00877963125548727 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 9.51 | | std | 6.33 | | cv | 0.665 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 67.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.425 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 33.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Too rounded, as if the" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "She held her breath, but" | | 1 | "You had to know the" | | 2 | "She’d left her bike tangled" | | 3 | "Her hand trailed across her" | | 4 | "Its faint pulse felt too" | | 5 | "She scanned the clearing, jaw" | | 6 | "She swallowed the lump in" | | 7 | "Her voice dropped into the" | | 8 | "She drifted closer, chin tilted," | | 9 | "Her fingers dug into her" | | 10 | "She wouldn’t let herself spook." | | 11 | "She’d seen what happened when" | | 12 | "She caught the faintest threads" | | 13 | "It rang inside her teeth," | | 14 | "She thumbed through messages, the" | | 15 | "She jammed the device deep" | | 16 | "She spun, back hunching." | | 17 | "She stepped backwards, biting down" | | 18 | "Her hand shot out to" | | 19 | "She jerked back." |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Footsteps behind the fifth oak." | | 1 | "The wind shouldn’t carry footsteps," | | 2 | "Rory froze mid-stride, one shoe" | | 3 | "She held her breath, but" | | 4 | "The grove crouched in its" | | 5 | "You had to know the" | | 6 | "She’d left her bike tangled" | | 7 | "Her hand trailed across her" | | 8 | "The cold weight of the" | | 9 | "Its faint pulse felt too" | | 10 | "A twig snapped to her" | | 11 | "Metal taste on the back" | | 12 | "Rory caught herself." | | 13 | "City thinking, Rory." | | 14 | "She scanned the clearing, jaw" | | 15 | "The wildflowers—jarring in their abundance—spilled" | | 16 | "Blues and pinks and bruised" | | 17 | "Moonlight bled through the canopy," | | 18 | "The air carried a living" | | 19 | "Trees hunched together, not touching," |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 50.51% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, boots silent on moss," |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory froze mid-stride, one shoe sinking into the lush wildflowers that pressed against her ankles, petals shivering as if they too flinched from the sound." | | 1 | "Trees hunched together, not touching, their shadows pooling thick between them." | | 2 | "Rory had grown up with city shadows, alleys that spat gutterlight and memories best left undisturbed." | | 3 | "The Heartstone thrummed only slightly, but she felt it nonetheless, as if it called out to something else with every flutter." | | 4 | "It eked upwards, uncoiling—very tall, wrong-angled elbows, bones that didn’t know how to sit together properly beneath thin skin." | | 5 | "Far-off, the not-music returned—notes tumbling brokenly, as if played on wind through hollow bones." | | 6 | "The crawling thing that wore Eva’s trainers choked on another syllable." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "The rest slurred (slur)" | | 1 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |