Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR9SVTTWAV4PHE98AP36B5

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Duration:
12.9s
Cost:
$0.028600
Provider:
Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood at the edge of The Fae Grove, the ancient oak standing stones casting long shadows in the moonlight. The air was thick with the scent of wildflowers, their vibrant colors muted in the darkness. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, its faint inner glow providing little comfort. She had come here for a reason, though the specifics eluded her in the oppressive silence of the night. The Grove was eerily quiet, the usual sounds of nocturnal creatures absent. Rory's breath fogged in the cool air, and she shivered, pulling her jacket tighter around her. She took a step forward, the grass crunching softly underfoot. The standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their rough surfaces seeming to pulse with an ancient energy. She moved deeper into the clearing, her eyes darting around, trying to pierce the darkness. The moonlight filtered through the trees, casting dappled patterns on the ground. Rory's heart pounded in her chest, each beat echoing in her ears. She couldn't shake the feeling that she was being watched. A rustling sound to her left made her freeze. She turned her head slowly, her bright blue eyes scanning the shadows. Nothing moved, but the sense of unease grew stronger. She took a deep breath and continued walking, her footsteps careful and deliberate. The pendant around her neck pulsed faintly with warmth, a reminder of its purpose. She had been given the Heartstone by an unknown benefactor, its significance a mystery. It was supposed to guide her, to protect her, but tonight it felt like a weight around her neck. A whisper of movement caught her attention, and she spun around, her heart leaping into her throat. The shadows seemed to shift and dance at the edge of her vision, but when she focused, there was nothing there. She swallowed hard, her mouth dry. "Get a grip, Rory," she muttered to herself, her voice barely more than a whisper. "You're just imagining things." But the feeling of wrongness persisted, a creeping dread that gnawed at her insides. She pressed on, her eyes flicking from side to side, every nerve on edge. The Grove seemed to close in around her, the trees pressing closer, their branches like skeletal fingers reaching for her. A sudden gust of wind rustled the leaves, and Rory's breath caught in her throat. The sound was too loud, too sudden, and it sent a shiver down her spine. She glanced up at the sky, the moon now partially obscured by clouds. The darkness deepened, and she felt a chill that had nothing to do with the temperature. She reached the center of the clearing, the standing stones forming a rough circle around her. The air was still, the silence oppressive. Rory's pulse raced, and she felt a prickling sensation at the back of her neck. She turned slowly, her eyes wide, searching for any sign of movement. A low, almost imperceptible hum filled the air, and the pendant grew warmer against her skin. Rory's hand tightened around it, her knuckles white. The hum grew louder, a vibration that seemed to resonate in her bones. She took a step back, her foot catching on a root, and she stumbled, barely catching herself. "Who's there?" she called out, her voice trembling. The hum stopped abruptly, and the silence was deafening. Rory's breath came in shallow gasps, her heart hammering in her chest. She strained to hear, her ears ringing in the stillness. A flicker of movement at the edge of the clearing caught her eye, and she turned, her body tense. A shadow detached itself from the darkness, a figure emerging from the trees. Rory's blood ran cold, and she took an involuntary step back. The figure moved with an unnatural grace, its form indistinct in the dim light. Rory's mind raced, trying to make sense of what she was seeing. The figure seemed to shimmer, its edges blurring and shifting. She felt a wave of nausea, her stomach twisting in knots. "Stay back," she warned, her voice barely more than a whisper. The figure paused, its head tilting as if studying her. Rory's grip on the pendant tightened, the metal warm against her skin. She could feel the pulse of its energy, a steady thrum that matched her racing heart. The figure took a step forward, and Rory's breath caught in her throat. She could see its eyes now, dark and empty, like twin voids. A sense of dread washed over her, and she felt rooted to the spot, unable to move. "Who are you?" she demanded, her voice shaking. The figure remained silent, its gaze fixed on her. Rory's mind raced, her thoughts a jumbled mess. She had to get out of here, had to find a way to escape. The pendant pulsed again, and she felt a surge of warmth spread through her chest. She took a deep breath, trying to steady herself. The figure took another step forward, and Rory's resolve hardened. She couldn't let fear paralyze her. With a sudden burst of determination, she turned and ran, her feet pounding against the ground. The trees blurred past her, the shadows closing in. She could hear the figure behind her, its footsteps silent but relentless. Rory's breath came in ragged gasps, her lungs burning. She reached the edge of the clearing, the standing stones looming ahead. She pushed herself harder, her muscles screaming in protest. The pendant grew hotter, its energy a beacon in the darkness. She could feel the figure closing in, its presence like a weight on her back. Rory's foot caught on a root, and she stumbled, falling to her knees. Pain shot through her leg, but she forced herself to her feet, her vision swimming. The figure was almost upon her, its dark eyes boring into her soul. With a final, desperate effort, she reached the standing stones, her hand brushing against the rough surface. The pendant flared with heat, and she felt a surge of energy. The air around her seemed to shimmer, and she was enveloped in a blinding light. When the light faded, Rory found herself outside the Grove, the standing stones now distant shadows. She collapsed to the ground, her body trembling. The pendant was cool against her skin, its glow faint. She lay there for a moment, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The night was still, the oppressive silence replaced by the distant sounds of the city. Rory's mind raced, trying to process what had just happened. She had come to the Grove for answers, but all she had found was more questions. The figure, the pendant, the strange energy – it all swirled in her mind, a tangled web of mystery. She knew she couldn't stay here, not now. With a groan, she pushed herself to her feet, her legs unsteady. She glanced back at the Grove, the standing stones now barely visible in the darkness. She turned and began to walk, her steps slow and deliberate. As she made her way back to the city, the sense of unease lingered. She couldn't shake the feeling that she was still being watched, that the figure was still out there, waiting. Rory's grip on the pendant tightened, its faint warmth a small comfort. She had survived the night, but she knew this was far from over. The Grove held secrets, and she was determined to uncover them. But for now, she needed to get away, to find safety in the familiar streets of London. The night was dark and full of shadows, but Rory walked on, her resolve unbroken. She would find the answers she sought, no matter the cost.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1279
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1279
totalAiIsms50
found
0
word"oppressive"
count3
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"sentinels"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count4
8
word"footsteps"
count2
9
word"pulsed"
count2
10
word"warmth"
count3
11
word"reminder"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"whisper"
count3
14
word"dance"
count1
15
word"down her spine"
count1
16
word"chill"
count1
17
word"raced"
count4
18
word"flicker"
count1
19
word"stomach"
count1
20
word"could feel"
count2
21
word"racing"
count1
22
word"resolve"
count2
23
word"pounding"
count1
24
word"looming"
count1
25
word"beacon"
count1
26
word"determined"
count1
27
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"oppressive"
1"silence"
2"loomed"
3"sentinels"
4"pulse"
5"echoing"
6"scanning"
7"sense of"
8"footsteps"
9"pulsed"
10"warmth"
11"reminder"
12"weight"
13"whisper"
14"dance"
15"down her spine"
16"chill"
17"raced"
18"flicker"
19"stomach"
20"could feel"
21"racing"
22"resolve"
23"pounding"
24"looming"
25"beacon"
26"determined"
27"familiar"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches7
maxInWindow7
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"blood ran cold"
count1
2
label"silence was deafening"
count1
3
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
4
label"air was thick with"
count1
5
label"wave of emotion"
count1
6
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"blood ran cold"
2"the silence was deafening"
3"A sense of dread"
4"The air was thick with"
5"a wave of nausea"
6"sent a shiver down"
73.98% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells6
narrationSentences98
matches
0"the sense of unease"
1"y with warmth"
2"felt a chill"
3"A sense of dread"
4"a surge of warmth"
5"the sense of unease"
55.39% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1280
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.85% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1265
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae1
Grove7
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Rory18
London1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"London"
globalScore0.789
windowScore0.833
72.68% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a weight around her neck"
1"vibration that seemed to resonate in her bones"
2"as if studying her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1280
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"watched, that the"
17.65% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean44.14
std9.35
cv0.212
sampleLengths
071
155
249
343
447
544
619
748
859
950
1054
1139
1243
1347
1449
1542
1639
1740
1846
1947
2041
2144
2234
2337
2443
2538
2645
2741
2826
87.36% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences98
matches
0"been given"
1"was supposed"
2"was enveloped"
3"being watched"
4"was determined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs211
matches
0"was being"
1"was deafening"
2"was seeing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences99
ratio0.01
matches
0"The figure, the pendant, the strange energy – it all swirled in her mind, a tangled web of mystery."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1264
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.022151898734177215
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.00870253164556962
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
47.73% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean12.93
std3.48
cv0.269
sampleLengths
021
116
215
319
412
516
610
717
815
912
1012
1110
129
1312
149
1513
1614
1714
1819
1917
2021
216
2215
234
2414
2514
2620
2715
2815
2913
3016
3116
327
3315
3412
3516
368
3713
3817
398
409
4112
4210
4319
4413
4511
4614
4712
4810
4911
44.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.16161616161616163
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners16
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences98
matches
0"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
1"She had come here for"
2"She took a step forward,"
3"She moved deeper into the"
4"She couldn't shake the feeling"
5"She turned her head slowly,"
6"She took a deep breath"
7"She had been given the"
8"It was supposed to guide"
9"She swallowed hard, her mouth"
10"she muttered to herself, her"
11"She pressed on, her eyes"
12"She glanced up at the"
13"She reached the center of"
14"She turned slowly, her eyes"
15"She took a step back,"
16"she called out, her voice"
17"She strained to hear, her"
18"She felt a wave of"
19"she warned, her voice barely"
ratio0.398
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences98
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood at the"
1"The air was thick with"
2"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
3"She had come here for"
4"The Grove was eerily quiet,"
5"Rory's breath fogged in the"
6"She took a step forward,"
7"The standing stones loomed like"
8"She moved deeper into the"
9"The moonlight filtered through the"
10"Rory's heart pounded in her"
11"She couldn't shake the feeling"
12"A rustling sound to her"
13"She turned her head slowly,"
14"Nothing moved, but the sense"
15"She took a deep breath"
16"The pendant around her neck"
17"She had been given the"
18"It was supposed to guide"
19"A whisper of movement caught"
ratio0.929
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
97.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences79
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She moved deeper into the clearing, her eyes darting around, trying to pierce the darkness."
1"She took a step back, her foot catching on a root, and she stumbled, barely catching herself."
2"The figure seemed to shimmer, its edges blurring and shifting."
3"The figure paused, its head tilting as if studying her."
4"She could feel the pulse of its energy, a steady thrum that matched her racing heart."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she muttered, her voice barely more than a whisper"
1"she called out, her voice trembling"
2"she warned, her voice barely more than a whisper"
3"she demanded, her voice shaking"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"she warned (warn)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
64.1778%