| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 97.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1762 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1762 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "down my spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "reminder" | | 1 | "cacophony" | | 2 | "symphony" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "churned" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "throb" | | 9 | "amidst" | | 10 | "depths" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "resonated" | | 13 | "down my spine" | | 14 | "scanned" | | 15 | "maw" | | 16 | "searing" | | 17 | "tangible" | | 18 | "echoed" | | 19 | "pounding" | | 20 | "raced" | | 21 | "throbbed" | | 22 | "could feel" | | 23 | "sanctuary" | | 24 | "normalcy" | | 25 | "solace" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "blood ran cold" | | 1 | "stomach churned" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1757 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1718 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.35 | | worstName | "Fae" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Fae" | | discoveredNames | | Christmas | 1 | | Fae | 6 | | Grove | 6 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Hell | 1 | | Aurora | 2 | | Carter | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Empress" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Carter" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1757 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that I" | | 1 | "knew that they" |
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| 68.61% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 43.93 | | std | 17.14 | | cv | 0.39 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 74 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 76 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 56 | | 23 | 55 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 58 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 56 | | 30 | 49 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 44 | | 33 | 49 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 58 | | 37 | 50 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 269 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "\"The Office of.getBy Hilton H\";" |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1723 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.017991874637260593 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00812536273940801 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 83.74% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 21.96 | | std | 7.89 | | cv | 0.359 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 31 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 35.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.325 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 17.40% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "My little brother had told" | | 1 | "My delivery truck idled behind" | | 2 | "Its presence nagged at my" | | 3 | "My stomach churned, bile clawing" | | 4 | "My hand instinctively grasped the" | | 5 | "My senses on high alert," | | 6 | "My breathing steadied as I" | | 7 | "I needed to be strong," | | 8 | "She'd stand tall, a pillar" | | 9 | "I reached for that same" | | 10 | "My blood ran cold." | | 11 | "They hovered in the air," | | 12 | "My throat constricted, sealing off" | | 13 | "My hand, trembling and slick" | | 14 | "I threw myself against the" | | 15 | "My fists pounded against the" | | 16 | "I screamed, my voice scraping" | | 17 | "My breath came in short," | | 18 | "I inhaled deeply, laboring to" | | 19 | "He stared at me, his" |
| | ratio | 0.506 | |
| 37.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "My little brother had told" | | 1 | "My delivery truck idled behind" | | 2 | "Its presence nagged at my" | | 3 | "Something about my eyes during" | | 4 | "The trees enclosed the glen" | | 5 | "A cacophony of crickets nestled" | | 6 | "A sickly-sweet scent pervaded the" | | 7 | "My stomach churned, bile clawing" | | 8 | "My hand instinctively grasped the" | | 9 | "The darkness weighed heavily upon" | | 10 | "My senses on high alert," | | 11 | "Every intact moment seemed to" | | 12 | "My breathing steadied as I" | | 13 | "The sound of my own" | | 14 | "I needed to be strong," | | 15 | "She'd stand tall, a pillar" | | 16 | "I reached for that same" | | 17 | "A whisper, barely audible over" | | 18 | "My blood ran cold." | | 19 | "That voice, it resonated with" |
| | ratio | 0.844 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Though formed from shadow and" | | 1 | "Now I stood shivering on" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | technicalSentenceCount | 20 | | matches | | 0 | "As I ventured deeper into the grove, the shadows lengthened, twisting into grotesque shapes that danced at the periphery of my vision, whispering dire promises …" | | 1 | "My hand instinctively grasped the Heartstone Pendant at my throat, seeking the warmth that promised protection from these eldritch forces with which I found mys…" | | 2 | "That voice, it resonated with ancient power and a casual malice that shot icy tendrils down my spine." | | 3 | "My fists pounded against the metal in a frenzied assault, the skin of my knuckles splitting and weeping crimson as they connected with the jagged edges." | | 4 | "I screamed, my voice scraping the edges of my throat raw, a cacophony of pleas and invectives that fell upon deaf ears." | | 5 | "My breath came in short, sharp bursts, each gasp clawing at the cold night air as I hauled myself to my feet, staggering away from the taxi." | | 6 | "The harsh glare of the streetlights washed out his features, rendering him a cadaverous husk draped in the trappings of mortality, a man who wore his guilt like…" | | 7 | "I had gone to the Fae Grove, seeking answers in the hallowed halls of forgotten gods, desperate for respite from the relentless whispers that had plagued me sin…" | | 8 | "I knew that I had angered powers beyond my comprehension, that the shadows that lurked in the forgotten corners of this realm knew my name and face." | | 9 | "I turned and fled, my feet pounding the damp pavement as I raced into the darkness, desperate to escape the malevolent forces that sought to reclaim the sanctit…" | | 10 | "The cold night air whipped past me, siphoning away the heat of my body as though it were hungry for the warmth that throbbed beneath my skin." | | 11 | "My heart pounded in my ears, a frantic cadence that drowned out the frantic chorus of insects and the rustle of leaves that danced upon the wind." | | 12 | "The taxi driver's voice pursued me like a wraith, his words haunting me like the desperate plea of a banshee, imploring me to return to the sanctity of the grov…" | | 13 | "My legs burned with the effort of propelling me forward, my lungs searing with the exertion of drawing air into their depths." | | 14 | "Each labored breath tore at my throat, a searing agony that felt as though I had swallowed shards of glass, the jagged edges shredding the delicate tissue like …" | | 15 | "The coppery taste of blood filled my mouth, the acrid tang of it intermingling with the stench of decay that pervaded the night air." | | 16 | "As I ran, the shadows lengthened, snaking out from the darkness to ensnare my ankles, ensconcing my legs in a frigid embrace." | | 17 | "The trees that lined the lane reached for me with gnarled fingers, their twisted branches scraping against my flesh like the desperate caress of the shambling d…" | | 18 | "I ran until the darkness of the night was no longer a suffocating shroud, but rather a cool balm that kissed my fevered skin with the promise of sanctuary." | | 19 | "I would spend the rest of my days in exile, a fugitive from the siren call of the Fae Grove that had ensnared my childhood fantasies, its siren song luring me b…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he hissed, venom dripping from each syllable like viscous poison," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the voice hissed (hiss)" | | 1 | "he hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.8 | |