| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 683 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 4.83% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 683 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "glinting" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "potential" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "quickened" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "clandestine" | | 9 | "scanned" | | 10 | "racing" | | 11 | "navigating" | | 12 | "treacherous" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 40 | | matches | | |
| 71.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 40 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 684 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.79% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 612 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.12 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 13 | | Tomás | 8 | | Herrera | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Tomás" | | 3 | "Herrera" | | 4 | "Raven" | | 5 | "Nest" | | 6 | "Market" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.438 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 82.43% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed oblivious to the hidden door, but Quinn's instincts screamed that this was more than just a simple back room" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 684 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.59% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | |
| 57.17% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 38 | | std | 13.3 | | cv | 0.35 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 15.87% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 45 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "The air grew thick with the scent of incense and something else – something sweet and acrid." | | 1 | "Tomás was nowhere to be seen, but Quinn spotted a familiar symbol etched into the wall – a bone token, the entry requirement for this clandestine market." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 611 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.01800327332242226 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006546644844517185 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 45 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 45 | | mean | 15.2 | | std | 6.31 | | cv | 0.415 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 13 |
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| 74.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.4444444444444444 | | totalSentences | 45 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "Her sharp jaw was set" | | 1 | "she yelled, her voice hoarse" | | 2 | "He was already pushing through" | | 3 | "She ignored them, her focus" | | 4 | "Her stomach twisted in a" | | 5 | "She'd heard whispers of this" | | 6 | "Her eyes scanned the crowd," | | 7 | "they said, their voice like" | | 8 | "She could try to find" | | 9 | "she said, her voice firm" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 22.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain lashed down on the" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted down" | | 2 | "Her sharp jaw was set" | | 3 | "she yelled, her voice hoarse" | | 4 | "Tomás didn't look back, his" | | 5 | "Quinn's military precision training allowed" | | 6 | "Tomás ducked into the bar," | | 7 | "Quinn followed, bursting through the" | | 8 | "The dimly lit bar was" | | 9 | "Quinn's eyes adjusted slowly, her" | | 10 | "He was already pushing through" | | 11 | "Quinn elbowed her way through" | | 12 | "She ignored them, her focus" | | 13 | "The shelf creaked, and a" | | 14 | "Quinn hesitated, her hand on" | | 15 | "Something didn't feel right." | | 16 | "The bar's patrons seemed oblivious" | | 17 | "The air grew colder, the" | | 18 | "A narrow stairway led down" | | 19 | "Quinn's heart rate quickened as" |
| | ratio | 0.875 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "But something about this place drew her in, a morbid curiosity about the secrets that lurked beneath the city's streets." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice firm" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |