Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR9WJH3CTHAAQ9JQVSX8M7

Run Details

Duration:
6.6s
Cost:
$0.000090

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The front door of Eva’s flat groaned under the weight of the deadbolt, the old hinges protesting like a tired old man. Aurora Carter stepped inside, her boots crunching on the dusty floorboards, the scent of old paper and something faintly metallic clinging to her coat. She hadn’t come for a fight. Not this time. Eva was already on her feet, her sharp green eyes darting between the doorframe and the chaos of bookshelves that stretched like spines across the walls. "Aurora," she said, voice tight, "you’re not supposed to be here." Aurora didn’t answer. She moved past her, the scar on her wrist—small, jagged—catching the dim light of the streetlamps outside. The flat smelled like the last time she’d been here, like coffee and something sharp, like she’d been crying. She didn’t remember that. Eva’s fingers brushed the edge of a scroll, her thumb skimming the ink before she set it down. "Sit," she ordered, voice low. "Now." Aurora hesitated, then dropped onto the edge of the bed, the mattress sagging under her. The flat was a mess—papers scattered, a half-empty mug of tea forgotten on the table. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, blinked up at her from his usual perch on the windowsill, tail flicking lazily. Eva didn’t sit. She stood in the middle of the room, arms crossed, the way she always did when she was about to lose patience. "You came back," she said, not a question. Aurora exhaled, slow and steady. "I needed to see you." Eva’s jaw tightened. "And what did you find?" Aurora’s fingers tightened around the hem of her coat. "I found out what Evan did to you." A sharp intake of breath. "You—what?" Aurora didn’t look away. "He took you. Took you away. And I didn’t stop him." Eva’s voice dropped, rough. "You didn’t know." Aurora shook her head. "I should have. I should have seen the signs." The silence between them was thick, suffocating. Eva’s hands clenched into fists at her sides. "You left me," she said finally, voice breaking. "You left me here, alone." Aurora’s throat burned. "I didn’t know what else to do." Eva’s eyes burned, too. "And now?" Aurora stood abruptly, the chair scraping back against the floor. "Now, I’m here. And I’m not leaving again." Eva’s breath hitched. The air between them crackled, charged with something raw and electric. Aurora reached for the doorknob, but Eva’s hand shot out, gripping her wrist. "Don’t," she whispered. Aurora’s pulse hammered in her throat. "What’s wrong?" Eva’s grip loosened just enough for Aurora to pull free, but her voice was steady, deadly. "You’ve been gone too long." Aurora’s stomach twisted. "What does that mean?" Eva’s gaze flicked to the cane leaning against the wall, the ivory handle polished to a shine. "It means I didn’t think you’d come back." Aurora’s breath caught. "You didn’t think I’d come back?" Eva’s eyes darkened. "I didn’t think you’d *care*." Aurora’s fingers dug into the fabric of her coat. "I care." Eva’s voice was a razor’s edge. "Then why didn’t you stop him?" Aurora’s jaw clenched. "Because I didn’t know what else to do." A beat of silence. Then Eva’s fingers traced the edge of a scroll, her voice dropping to a whisper. "You should have told me." Aurora’s chest ached. "I tried." Eva’s eyes flashed. "You *tried*?" Aurora’s voice was barely a whisper. "I tried to reach you. I tried to warn you. But he had you locked away—" Eva’s hands flew to her throat, fingers digging into her skin. "And you let him." Aurora’s breath came fast. "No—" Eva’s voice cut through her. "You left me." Aurora’s eyes burned. "I didn’t know what else to do." Eva’s grip loosened, but her voice was still sharp. "You should have *known*." Aurora’s hands clenched into fists. "I didn’t know what to do." Eva’s eyes narrowed. "Then you should have asked." Aurora’s voice was raw. "I didn’t know how." Eva’s breath hitched. The air between them was charged, thick with something unspoken. Aurora’s fingers brushed the scar on her wrist, the small, jagged mark a reminder of the past. Eva’s gaze flicked to it, then back to her face. Eva’s voice was low, dangerous. "You should have asked me." Aurora’s chest tightened. "I tried." Eva’s eyes burned. "And you left me." Aurora’s breath came fast. "I didn’t know what else to do." Eva’s voice was a whisper. "You should have *known*." Aurora’s fingers tightened around the doorknob. "I tried." Eva’s gaze locked onto hers, unblinking. "You should have *told* me." Aurora’s voice was a rasp. "I tried." The door swung open, the wind rushing in, carrying the scent of rain and something sharp, like the edge of a blade. Eva’s eyes locked onto Aurora’s, and for a moment, there was nothing but the weight of what they’d left unsaid. Aurora stepped outside, the door slamming shut behind her. Eva’s voice followed, sharp and cutting. "You should have *known*." Aurora didn’t look back. She didn’t have to. The past was a weight she’d carried for too long. Now, she had to carry it forward.
total_cost0.00008956

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.106
leniency0.213
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.043
94.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount853
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount853
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"charged"
count2
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count2
7
word"jaw clenched"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count3
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"charged"
3"electric"
4"pulse"
5"stomach"
6"flicked"
7"jaw clenched"
8"traced"
9"whisper"
10"unspoken"
11"reminder"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count2
2
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"clenched into fists"
2"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords6
totalWords848
ratio0.007
matches
0"care"
1"tried"
2"known"
3"known"
4"told"
5"known"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount628
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity4.78
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity7.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva28
Carter1
Aurora30
persons
0"Eva"
1"Carter"
2"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like the last time she’d been here"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount848
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean16
std12.32
cv0.77
sampleLengths
055
137
243
324
448
533
610
78
817
96
1015
117
1213
1328
1410
156
1618
1727
183
198
2021
217
2225
239
248
2511
2612
2711
2824
295
305
3122
3215
335
348
3510
3613
3711
388
398
4040
4110
425
437
4411
459
468
4711
487
4942
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs113
matches(empty)
94.84% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences119
ratio0.017
matches
0"She moved past her, the scar on her wrist—small, jagged—catching the dim light of the streetlamps outside."
1"The flat was a mess—papers scattered, a half-empty mug of tea forgotten on the table."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount632
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.0379746835443038
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00949367088607595
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean7.13
std5.47
cv0.768
sampleLengths
022
124
26
33
426
511
63
717
819
94
1018
115
121
1315
1415
1518
163
1722
188
195
205
213
225
239
248
255
261
274
2811
294
303
314
329
337
348
358
365
373
387
394
402
4110
428
433
4411
4513
463
476
482
4916
47.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.15966386554621848
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners19
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Then Eva’s fingers traced the"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences76
matches
0"She hadn’t come for a"
1"she said, voice tight"
2"She moved past her, the"
3"She didn’t remember that."
4"she ordered, voice low"
5"She stood in the middle"
6"she said, not a question"
7"she said finally, voice breaking"
8"She didn’t have to."
ratio0.118
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences76
matches
0"The front door of Eva’s"
1"Aurora Carter stepped inside, her"
2"She hadn’t come for a"
3"Eva was already on her"
4"she said, voice tight"
5"Aurora didn’t answer."
6"She moved past her, the"
7"The flat smelled like the"
8"She didn’t remember that."
9"Eva’s fingers brushed the edge"
10"she ordered, voice low"
11"Aurora hesitated, then dropped onto"
12"The flat was a mess—papers"
13"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, blinked"
14"Eva didn’t sit."
15"She stood in the middle"
16"she said, not a question"
17"Aurora exhaled, slow and steady."
18"Eva’s jaw tightened."
19"Aurora’s fingers tightened around the"
ratio0.961
65.79% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Now, she had to carry"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Eva was already on her feet, her sharp green eyes darting between the doorframe and the chaos of bookshelves that stretched like spines across the walls."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, voice tight,"
1"she ordered, voice low"
2"she said finally, voice breaking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she ordered (order)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.106
leniency0.213
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.085
77.6179%