| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 65.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1158 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "deliberately" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "quickly" | | 6 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1158 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "flicker" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "sentinels" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "fleeting" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "tracing" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "flicked" | | 13 | "scanning" | | 14 | "tangible" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "macabre" | | 17 | "dancing" | | 18 | "sense of" | | 19 | "warmth" | | 20 | "uncanny" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "clenched her fists" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1129 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 8 | | wordCount | 1126 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.27 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Dymas" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "quite put her finger on but felt deep in her gut" | | 1 | "felt like a faint pulse radiated outwar" | | 2 | "susurrus that seemed to crawl directly into her ears, blending into the wind’s low moan" | | 3 | "as if sensing her growing alarm" | | 4 | "as if responding to her fear" | | 5 | "not quite touching her but closing in" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.886 | | wordCount | 1129 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite touching her but closing in" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 34.24% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 56.45 | | std | 15.23 | | cv | 0.27 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 64 | | 5 | 70 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 70 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 68 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 67 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 60 | | 19 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.95% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "was pushing" | | 1 | "was watching" | | 2 | "was slipping" | | 3 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 25 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0.304 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter—or Rory, as friends called her—paused in the shadow of an ancient oak, her eyes darting through the darkening woods, hunting the faintest flicker of movement." | | 1 | "Time, she knew, behaved differently here; an hour outside could stretch into days or fleeting minutes, and that alone was enough to plant doubt in her mind." | | 2 | "But the real unease simmered beneath that—something was wrong, something she couldn't quite put her finger on but felt deep in her gut." | | 3 | "A sudden movement flickered at the corner of her eye, quick as a flicker in a dark room—no more than a shadow passing through the trees, gone before she could focus." | | 4 | "She touched the rough bark of the standing stone nearest her, fingers tracing the deep carvings—symbols, or old runes now eroded with age." | | 5 | "Her eyes flicked up, scanning the shadows, waiting for something—anything—to reveal itself." | | 6 | "It was an invitation—no, a warning?" | | 7 | "A flicker of movement again—flittering at the very edge of her vision." | | 8 | "A faint, soft sound broke through the night–a low, cracking cough, distant but somehow closer." | | 9 | "Then, out of the corner of her eye, she saw it: a flicker—something moving behind the low-hanging branches, a shadow with no shape, no face, only a shifting darkness that slid closer." | | 10 | "Her hand clenched the Heartstone pendant tighter—almost painfully—feeling it pulse as if sensing her growing alarm." | | 11 | "Something was watching her—something that didn’t belong here, didn’t belong in her world at all." | | 12 | "She had read stories, seen the warning signs, but that primal fear—this creeping, suffocating dread—was unlike anything she had prepared for." | | 13 | "Her mind buzzed—was she imagining it?" | | 14 | "A sharp movement now—faint yet deliberate." | | 15 | "For a moment, she saw it—a figure, tall and hunched, cloaked in swirling darkness, face hidden beneath a hood." | | 16 | "A sudden, deafening crack split the silence—like a branch snapping, loud enough to shudder through her entire frame." | | 17 | "Everything remained still—except for the faint shifting of shadows, dark entities whispering secrets that she would never fully understand." | | 18 | "Instead she reached into her pocket for the small, crimson gem hanging from the Heartstone pendant—an artifact from Dymas with a power she barely grasped." | | 19 | "The boundary stones hummed softly beneath her fingertips—a gateway, a lock, maybe both—and she knew with grim certainty time was slipping faster now, no longer stopping at her command." | | 20 | "That’s when she saw it—something, just beyond the line of her sight, skimming the edge of the boundary." |
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| 93.48% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1155 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.04588744588744589 | | lyAdverbCount | 25 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.021645021645021644 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 16.36 | | std | 7.36 | | cv | 0.45 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 54.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.37681159420289856 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a whisper drifted through" | | 1 | "Instead, they seemed to pulsate" | | 2 | "Then, out of the corner" | | 3 | "Instead she reached into her" |
| | ratio | 0.06 | |
| 58.81% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath caught as the" | | 1 | "She shivered despite herself, a" | | 2 | "She had come here for" | | 3 | "She instinctively clenched her fists," | | 4 | "Her first instinct was to" | | 5 | "she muttered under her breath," | | 6 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 7 | "She touched the rough bark" | | 8 | "Her stomach clenched as it" | | 9 | "Her eyes flicked up, scanning" | | 10 | "It was an invitation—no, a" | | 11 | "She couldn’t tell, only that" | | 12 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 13 | "She froze, breath hitching." | | 14 | "Her eyes widened, trying to" | | 15 | "Her heart stuttered in her" | | 16 | "Her hand clenched the Heartstone" | | 17 | "Her stomach twisted into knots." | | 18 | "She had read stories, seen" | | 19 | "Her mind buzzed—was she imagining" |
| | ratio | 0.403 | |
| 49.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath caught as the" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter—or Rory, as friends" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly" | | 3 | "The thin, silver chained gift" | | 4 | "The boundary stood silent, marked" | | 5 | "She shivered despite herself, a" | | 6 | "The only sounds now were" | | 7 | "She had come here for" | | 8 | "That pendant, glowing with an" | | 9 | "A sudden movement flickered at" | | 10 | "She instinctively clenched her fists," | | 11 | "Her first instinct was to" | | 12 | "she muttered under her breath," | | 13 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 14 | "A place where centuries could" | | 15 | "She touched the rough bark" | | 16 | "Her stomach clenched as it" | | 17 | "Her eyes flicked up, scanning" | | 18 | "Darkness pressed in heavier, nearly" | | 19 | "It was an invitation—no, a" |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 15.31% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter—or Rory, as friends called her—paused in the shadow of an ancient oak, her eyes darting through the darkening woods, hunting the faintest flicker …" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly in her hand, warming subtly against her skin, a dull throb that reminded her she wasn’t here by accident." | | 2 | "That pendant, glowing with an inner crimson hue, pulsed irregularly, as if alive." | | 3 | "Then, a whisper drifted through the trees, an unintelligible susurrus that seemed to crawl directly into her ears, blending into the wind’s low moan." | | 4 | "Her pulse hammered in her ears, her fingers tightening around the pendant, as if it could shield her from whatever macabre game was unfolding." | | 5 | "Then, out of the corner of her eye, she saw it: a flicker—something moving behind the low-hanging branches, a shadow with no shape, no face, only a shifting dar…" | | 6 | "Her hand clenched the Heartstone pendant tighter—almost painfully—feeling it pulse as if sensing her growing alarm." | | 7 | "The underbrush rustled as if something or someone was pushing through it deliberately, creeping slowly, deliberately." | | 8 | "Something was watching her—something that didn’t belong here, didn’t belong in her world at all." | | 9 | "The pendant’s glow grew brighter, faintly warm against her skin, as if responding to her fear." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, voice cracking in the thick silence" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |