Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRA103320NNCC59HRWY023

Run Details

Duration:
32.0s
Cost:
$0.011500

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clink of glasses, the occasional burst of laughter. The air smelled of aged whiskey and polished wood, the kind of scent that clung to the walls like a second skin. Rory leaned against the bar, fingers tracing the rim of her half-empty gin and tonic. The ice had long since melted, watering down the sharpness of the drink, but she didn’t mind. It was the ritual of it that mattered—the way the glass felt in her hand, the way the alcohol burned just enough to make her feel something. The door creaked open, letting in a draft that carried the scent of rain and wet pavement. A man stepped inside, shaking water from his coat. He moved with the kind of easy confidence that came from knowing exactly where he belonged, his hazel eyes scanning the room before landing on her. Rory’s breath hitched. Evan. His hair was shorter now, cropped close to his skull, and the scruff along his jaw was more salt than pepper. He’d filled out, too—broader in the shoulders, the kind of build that came from time in a gym or, more likely, from years of carrying something heavier than weights. His gaze locked onto hers, and for a moment, neither of them moved. Then he smiled. Not the easy, charming grin she remembered, but something tighter, something that didn’t quite reach his eyes. “Rory Carter,” he said, voice low. “I’ll be damned.” She set her glass down. “Evan.” He crossed the room in a few long strides, pulling out the stool beside her. The wood groaned under his weight. “It’s been what, five years?” “Six.” “Six,” he repeated, nodding like he’d done the math himself. He signaled to the bartender—a young guy with a nose ring who looked like he’d rather be anywhere else—and ordered a whiskey, neat. “You look good.” She almost laughed. “You don’t.” His fingers stilled around the glass the bartender slid toward him. “No?” “You look like you’ve been through hell.” He took a slow sip, eyes never leaving hers. “Haven’t we all?” The silence between them stretched, thick with everything they weren’t saying. The last time she’d seen him, he’d had his hands around her wrists, her back pressed against the wall of their flat. She’d screamed until her voice gave out, until the neighbors called the police. He’d been arrested, but the charges had been dropped—his father’s influence, his family’s money. She’d left Cardiff the next day, changed her number, burned every bridge that led back to him. And now here he was, sitting beside her like none of it had ever happened. “What are you doing in London?” she asked, because the alternative was to ask why he was here, in this bar, in her life again. “Business,” he said. “And you?” “Same.” He smirked. “Still delivering takeout?” Her fingers tightened around her glass. “Still pretending you’re not a spoiled rich kid playing at being important?” The smirk faded. “I deserved that.” “You deserved worse.” The whiskey in his glass caught the light as he swirled it, the amber liquid clinging to the sides. “I’m not the same person I was, Rory.” “People don’t change, Evan. They just get better at hiding.” He exhaled through his nose, a sharp sound that might have been a laugh if it hadn’t been so bitter. “You always did have a way with words.” “And you always had a way of making me regret ever opening my mouth.” The bartender dropped a bowl of peanuts between them, the sudden noise making her jump. Evan didn’t react. He just stared at his drink like it held all the answers he’d ever need. “Do you ever think about it?” he asked quietly. “That night?” She didn’t have to ask which night. “Every damn day.” He flinched. Just a little, just enough for her to notice. “I do too.” “Good.” His jaw tightened. “I’m not asking for forgiveness.” “Then what are you asking for?” He opened his mouth, then closed it. The signet ring on his finger glinted as he flexed his hand, a nervous habit she remembered all too well. “I don’t know.” The door to the back room swung open, and Silas stepped out, his limp more pronounced than usual. His gaze flicked between them, sharp and assessing. “Rory,” he said, voice carefully neutral. “Everything alright?” She forced a smile. “Fine. Just catching up with an old friend.” Silas’ eyes lingered on Evan for a beat too long before he nodded. “Don’t stay too late. Weather’s turning.” The door swung shut behind him, leaving them in the dim glow of the bar. Evan leaned in, his voice low. “Who’s that?” “None of your business.” He studied her for a long moment, then sat back, rubbing a hand over his face. “You’re different.” “So are you.” “No, I mean—” He gestured vaguely at her. “You’re harder. Colder.” She barked out a laugh. “You say that like it’s a bad thing.” “It’s not,” he said quickly. “It’s just… I remember you being softer. Kinder.” “And I remember you being a decent human being.” The words hung between them, heavy and unyielding. He looked away first, his throat working as he swallowed. “I was an asshole.” “You were a monster.” He didn’t argue. The rain outside picked up, drumming against the windows in a relentless rhythm. Rory finished her drink in one long pull, the gin burning all the way down. She set the glass down with a sharp *clink*. Evan watched her, his expression unreadable. “Are you happy?” The question caught her off guard. She opened her mouth, then closed it. Happy wasn’t the word she’d use. Safe, maybe. In control. But happy? “I get by,” she said finally. He nodded like that was answer enough. “I should go.” She didn’t stop him. He stood, pulling on his coat, the fabric damp from the rain. At the door, he hesitated. “It was good to see you, Rory.” She didn’t look at him. “Don’t come back.” The door swung shut behind him, the bell above it jingling softly. The bar felt smaller without him in it, the air thinner. Rory exhaled, her shoulders sagging. Silas reappeared from the back room, a glass of something dark in his hand. He set it in front of her without a word. She wrapped her fingers around it, the warmth seeping into her skin. “How much did you hear?” “Enough.” She took a sip. It was whiskey, smoky and strong. “He’s not the same.” “People rarely are.” “He wanted something.” Silas leaned against the bar, his signet ring tapping against the wood. “And you?” She looked at him, really looked at him—the lines around his eyes, the grey in his beard, the way his hands had started to shake just a little when he thought no one was watching. “I don’t know.” He didn’t push. He never did. Outside, the rain kept falling.
total_cost0.0115

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
64.41% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he asked quietly [quietly]"
1"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"he said quickly [quickly]"
3"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.153
leniency0.305
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.136
82.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"quickly"
2"softly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"scanning"
2"weight"
3"silence"
4"flicked"
5"unreadable"
6"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1164
ratio0.001
matches
0"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount913
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Cardiff1
Silas3
Rory4
Evan4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite reach his eyes"
1"looked like he’d rather be anywhere else—"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.859
wordCount1164
matches
0"Not the easy, charming grin she remembered, but something tighter, something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean16.63
std17.52
cv1.053
sampleLengths
0100
152
23
31
463
520
69
76
826
91
1036
115
1212
137
1412
1577
1615
1725
185
191
205
2118
226
233
2427
2510
2628
2714
2833
2911
3010
3114
321
338
346
3530
3634
3712
3819
3915
408
414
4218
433
4411
4513
4613
479
4822
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"been arrested"
1"been dropped"
77.30% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs163
matches
0"weren’t saying"
1"was, sitting"
2"was watching"
40.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences140
ratio0.036
matches
0"It was the ritual of it that mattered—the way the glass felt in her hand, the way the alcohol burned just enough to make her feel something."
1"He’d filled out, too—broader in the shoulders, the kind of build that came from time in a gym or, more likely, from years of carrying something heavier than weights."
2"He signaled to the bartender—a young guy with a nose ring who looked like he’d rather be anywhere else—and ordered a whiskey, neat."
3"He’d been arrested, but the charges had been dropped—his father’s influence, his family’s money."
4"She looked at him, really looked at him—the lines around his eyes, the grey in his beard, the way his hands had started to shake just a little when he thought no one was watching."
93.96% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount661
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.046898638426626324
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007564296520423601
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean8.31
std6.72
cv0.808
sampleLengths
019
122
215
317
427
517
69
726
83
91
1021
1129
1213
133
1417
156
163
175
181
1915
206
215
221
2310
2423
253
263
272
2811
291
307
319
323
3311
3422
3513
3614
3717
3815
3925
403
412
421
432
443
456
4612
473
483
493
46.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.30714285714285716
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners43
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Then he smiled."
1"Just a little, just enough"
ratio0.024
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences82
matches
0"It was the ritual of"
1"He moved with the kind"
2"His hair was shorter now,"
3"He’d filled out, too—broader in"
4"His gaze locked onto hers,"
5"he said, voice low"
6"She set her glass down."
7"He crossed the room in"
8"he repeated, nodding like he’d"
9"He signaled to the bartender—a"
10"She almost laughed."
11"His fingers stilled around the"
12"He took a slow sip,"
13"She’d screamed until her voice"
14"He’d been arrested, but the"
15"She’d left Cardiff the next"
16"she asked, because the alternative"
17"Her fingers tightened around her"
18"He exhaled through his nose,"
19"He just stared at his"
ratio0.573
2.68% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences82
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"The air smelled of aged"
2"Rory leaned against the bar,"
3"The ice had long since"
4"It was the ritual of"
5"The door creaked open, letting"
6"A man stepped inside, shaking"
7"He moved with the kind"
8"Rory’s breath hitched."
9"His hair was shorter now,"
10"He’d filled out, too—broader in"
11"His gaze locked onto hers,"
12"he said, voice low"
13"She set her glass down."
14"He crossed the room in"
15"The wood groaned under his"
16"he repeated, nodding like he’d"
17"He signaled to the bartender—a"
18"She almost laughed."
19"His fingers stilled around the"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He moved with the kind of easy confidence that came from knowing exactly where he belonged, his hazel eyes scanning the room before landing on her."
1"He’d filled out, too—broader in the shoulders, the kind of build that came from time in a gym or, more likely, from years of carrying something heavier than wei…"
2"Not the easy, charming grin she remembered, but something tighter, something that didn’t quite reach his eyes."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, voice low"
1"she asked, because the alternative was to ask why he was here, in this bar, in her life again"
2"he said, voice carefully neutral"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.136
leniency0.271
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.034
77.0704%