| 64.41% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he asked quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "He gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 2 | "he said quickly [quickly]" | | 3 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 59 | | tagDensity | 0.153 | | leniency | 0.305 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.136 | |
| 82.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1171 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1171 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tracing" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "flicked" | | 5 | "unreadable" | | 6 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 140 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1164 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 913 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Silas | 3 | | Rory | 4 | | Evan | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 63.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite reach his eyes" | | 1 | "looked like he’d rather be anywhere else—" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.859 | | wordCount | 1164 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the easy, charming grin she remembered, but something tighter, something" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 70 | | mean | 16.63 | | std | 17.52 | | cv | 1.053 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 100 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 77 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "been arrested" | | 1 | "been dropped" |
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| 77.30% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 163 | | matches | | 0 | "weren’t saying" | | 1 | "was, sitting" | | 2 | "was watching" |
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| 40.82% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 140 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "It was the ritual of it that mattered—the way the glass felt in her hand, the way the alcohol burned just enough to make her feel something." | | 1 | "He’d filled out, too—broader in the shoulders, the kind of build that came from time in a gym or, more likely, from years of carrying something heavier than weights." | | 2 | "He signaled to the bartender—a young guy with a nose ring who looked like he’d rather be anywhere else—and ordered a whiskey, neat." | | 3 | "He’d been arrested, but the charges had been dropped—his father’s influence, his family’s money." | | 4 | "She looked at him, really looked at him—the lines around his eyes, the grey in his beard, the way his hands had started to shake just a little when he thought no one was watching." |
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| 93.96% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 661 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.046898638426626324 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007564296520423601 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 140 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 140 | | mean | 8.31 | | std | 6.72 | | cv | 0.808 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 46.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.30714285714285716 | | totalSentences | 140 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 81.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he smiled." | | 1 | "Just a little, just enough" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "It was the ritual of" | | 1 | "He moved with the kind" | | 2 | "His hair was shorter now," | | 3 | "He’d filled out, too—broader in" | | 4 | "His gaze locked onto hers," | | 5 | "he said, voice low" | | 6 | "She set her glass down." | | 7 | "He crossed the room in" | | 8 | "he repeated, nodding like he’d" | | 9 | "He signaled to the bartender—a" | | 10 | "She almost laughed." | | 11 | "His fingers stilled around the" | | 12 | "He took a slow sip," | | 13 | "She’d screamed until her voice" | | 14 | "He’d been arrested, but the" | | 15 | "She’d left Cardiff the next" | | 16 | "she asked, because the alternative" | | 17 | "Her fingers tightened around her" | | 18 | "He exhaled through his nose," | | 19 | "He just stared at his" |
| | ratio | 0.573 | |
| 2.68% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven’s Nest hummed with" | | 1 | "The air smelled of aged" | | 2 | "Rory leaned against the bar," | | 3 | "The ice had long since" | | 4 | "It was the ritual of" | | 5 | "The door creaked open, letting" | | 6 | "A man stepped inside, shaking" | | 7 | "He moved with the kind" | | 8 | "Rory’s breath hitched." | | 9 | "His hair was shorter now," | | 10 | "He’d filled out, too—broader in" | | 11 | "His gaze locked onto hers," | | 12 | "he said, voice low" | | 13 | "She set her glass down." | | 14 | "He crossed the room in" | | 15 | "The wood groaned under his" | | 16 | "he repeated, nodding like he’d" | | 17 | "He signaled to the bartender—a" | | 18 | "She almost laughed." | | 19 | "His fingers stilled around the" |
| | ratio | 0.915 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 87.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "He moved with the kind of easy confidence that came from knowing exactly where he belonged, his hazel eyes scanning the room before landing on her." | | 1 | "He’d filled out, too—broader in the shoulders, the kind of build that came from time in a gym or, more likely, from years of carrying something heavier than wei…" | | 2 | "Not the easy, charming grin she remembered, but something tighter, something that didn’t quite reach his eyes." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, voice low" | | 1 | "she asked, because the alternative was to ask why he was here, in this bar, in her life again" | | 2 | "he said, voice carefully neutral" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 59 | | tagDensity | 0.136 | | leniency | 0.271 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.034 | |