Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRA313KCJ51ATQRSP9VDHZ

Run Details

Duration:
18.7s
Cost:
$0.000407

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered weakly against the rain-slicked pavement, its glow bleeding into the damp air like a bruise. Inside, the hum of low conversation and the clink of glasses felt familiar, even though Rory hadn’t stepped foot in here since the night she left Cardiff for London—since the night she left *him* behind. She shouldn’t have come. The flat above Silas’ bar was drafty, the delivery routes unpredictable, and the thought of facing Evan again had kept her up half the night. But the letter had been clear: *Come back.* No explanation, no apology—just the old address scrawled in her father’s handwriting, the ink smudged where he’d wiped his thumb across the page. She’d burned it the second she’d read it, but the words had already seared into her skin. The door swung open before she could hesitate, the bell above it chiming softly. The air inside hit her like a wall—warm, thick with the scent of aged wood and something sharper, like leather and old whiskey. Her breath caught. The bar hadn’t changed. Neither had the way the dim light caught the silver in Silas’ ring, the way his auburn hair still carried the faintest streak of grey at the temples. He turned, his left leg giving a slight hitch as he adjusted his stance. His hazel eyes locked onto hers, sharp as they always had been, but something in them had sharpened further. Recognition flickered, then dissolved into something colder. “Rory.” The name tasted like ash. She swallowed it down. “Silas.” A beat. The silence between them stretched, heavy with things unsaid. He didn’t move to embrace her, didn’t offer the drink he’d once poured for her without being asked. Instead, he gestured to the stool beside him, his voice rough as gravel. “You’re not working tonight.” “No.” “Then what are you doing here?” She should’ve lied. Should’ve said she was passing through, that she’d heard the place was good for a drink. But the words stuck in her throat, choking on the truth. “I got a letter.” His jaw tightened. “From your father.” Not a question. A statement. She nodded, because what else was there to say? He exhaled through his nose, a sound like a man who’d spent too many years holding back. “He didn’t tell you.” “Tell me what?” “That he’s not the same man you left behind.” The words hit her like a backhand. She braced herself against the bar, her fingers curling into the worn wood. “What do you mean?” Silas’ gaze flicked to the hidden bookshelf, the one that led to the back room where they’d once share secrets. He didn’t move, but she saw the tension in his shoulders, the way his free hand twitched toward his pocket. “He’s not the only one.” The air left her lungs in a rush. “What?” “Evan.” His voice was low, controlled. “He’s still in Cardiff.” Rory’s stomach twisted. She’d thought she’d left him behind. Thought she’d outrun him. But the way Silas said his name—like it was a curse—made her skin prickle. “You’ve seen him.” “Not recently.” He took a slow sip of his drink, watching her over the rim of the glass. “But he’s there. Waiting.” She laughed, sharp and hollow. “For what? To drag me back to his bed?” Silas’ expression darkened. “For what he always does. To remind you what you’ve lost.” The words cut deeper than she’d expected. She thought of the nights she’d spent curled on the floor of her flat, Evan’s voice still echoing in her ears—*You’ll always be mine, Rory. You’ll always come back.* She thought of the way her father’s hands had shaken when he’d written that letter, how he’d looked at her like she was something fragile, something he might break if he looked too hard. “You look different,” she said, because she couldn’t stand the silence anymore. Silas’ lips twitched, just once. “So do you.” She ran her thumb over the scar on her wrist, the one that had festered into something ugly after Evan had tried to burn it off. “I’ve changed.” “You always did.” The old familiarity between them was a blade between her ribs. She remembered the way he’d taught her to pick a lock, the way he’d let her sit on his lap in the back room of this bar when she was sixteen and Evan had been a blur of fists and threats. She remembered the way he’d looked at her like she was something precious, something worth protecting. “What are you doing here, Rory?” he asked again, quieter this time. She should’ve lied. Should’ve said she was just passing through, that she’d heard the place was good for a drink. But the words died in her throat. “I don’t know.” Silas studied her for a long moment, his hazel eyes unreadable. Then he gestured to the stool beside him. “Stay.” She hesitated, then slid onto it. The leather creaked under her weight, familiar and foreign all at once. The bartender—someone new—set a glass of whiskey in front of her, neat and untouched. “You drink it slow,” Silas said, nodding toward the glass. “Like the rest of your life.” She picked it up, the amber liquid catching the light. “What’s that supposed to mean?” “Nothing.” He took a sip of his own drink, his gaze never leaving hers. “Just an observation.” She downed the whiskey in one go, the burn sliding down her throat like a brand. Silas watched her, his expression unreadable. “You’ve always been reckless.” “And you’ve always been a fucking spy.” His lips quirked, just for a second. “I was a field agent.” “Same thing.” He sighed, running a hand through his hair. “You’re not the same girl who walked out of here five years ago.” “No.” “And neither am I.” She studied him, really studied him. The lines around his eyes were deeper. His beard was trimmed shorter, but the grey had spread. His left leg gave another hitch as he shifted his weight, a reminder of the injury that had ended his career. “What happened?” she asked. Silas’ gaze flicked to the back room, then back to her. “A job went wrong in Prague.” “You got hurt.” “More than that.” He took another sip of his drink, his voice quieter now. “I lost someone.” Rory’s breath caught. She knew that look. She’d seen it in the mirror every morning since Evan had left her for dead. “Who?” “Doesn’t matter.” “It does to me.” He exhaled sharply, running a hand through his hair. “A colleague. A friend.” “You don’t talk about it.” “There’s nothing to say.” She reached out, her fingers brushing against his. He didn’t pull away. “Talk to me.” Silas looked down at their joined hands, then back up at her. His voice was rough, raw. “I was supposed to extract a target. A diplomat. But the building was rigged. Booby traps. Explosives. I got him out. Barely. But the cost was high.” “What happened?” “My team. They didn’t make it out.” Rory’s stomach twisted. She remembered the way Silas had talked about his team, the way he’d looked at them like they were family. “I’m sorry.” He shook his head, his gaze distant. “It was my fault.” “No.” “Yes.” She squeezed his hand, her voice steady. “You did what you had to do.” Silas looked at her, his hazel eyes filled with something she couldn’t name. “You always were good at making me feel better.” She laughed, but it was hollow. “I’m not trying to make you feel better.” “No.” He looked down at their joined hands, then back up at her. “I just needed to say it out loud.” She nodded, her throat tight. “I get it.” Silas looked at her, his expression unreadable. “You really do.” The silence between them was heavy, charged with something unspoken. She thought of the way Evan had looked at her, the way he’d made her feel like she was nothing more than a possession. She thought of the way Silas had always looked at her, like she was something precious, something worth fighting for. “What now?” she asked. Silas looked at her, his hazel eyes filled with something she couldn’t name. “We wait.” She nodded, her throat tight. “We wait.” The bartender set another glass of whiskey in front of her, neat and untouched. She picked it up, the amber liquid catching the light. “You drink it slow,” Silas said, nodding toward the glass. “Like the rest of your life.” She downed the whiskey in one go, the burn sliding down her throat like a brand. Silas watched her, his expression unreadable. “You’ve always been reckless.” “And you’ve always been a fucking spy.” His lips quirked, just for a second. “I was a field agent.” “Same thing.” He sighed, running a hand through his hair. “You’re not the same girl who walked out of here five years ago.” “No.” “And neither am I.” She studied him, really studied him. The lines around his eyes were deeper. His beard was trimmed shorter, but the grey had spread. His left leg gave another hitch as he shifted his weight, a reminder of the injury that had ended his career. “What happened?” she asked. Silas’ gaze flicked to the back room, then back to her. “A job went wrong in Prague.” “You got hurt.” “More than that.” He took another sip of his drink, his voice quieter now. “I lost someone.” Rory’s breath caught. She knew that look. She’d seen it in the mirror every morning since Evan had left her for dead. “Who?” “Doesn’t matter.” “It does to me.” He exhaled sharply, running a hand through his hair. “A colleague. A friend.” “You don’t talk about it.” “There’s nothing to say.” She reached out, her fingers brushing against his. He didn’t pull away. “Talk to me.” Silas looked down at their joined hands, then back up at her. His voice was rough, raw. “I was supposed to extract a target. A diplomat. But the building was rigged. Booby traps. Explosives. I got him out. Barely. But the cost was high.” “What happened?” “My team. They didn’t make it out.” Rory’s stomach twisted. She remembered the way Silas had talked about his team, the way he’d looked at them like they were family. “I’m sorry.” He shook his head, his gaze distant. “It was my fault.” “No.” “Yes.” She squeezed his hand, her voice steady. “You did what you had to do.” Silas looked at her, his hazel eyes filled with something she couldn’t name. “You always were good at making me feel better.” She laughed, but it was hollow. “I’m not trying to make you feel better.” “No.” He looked down at their joined hands, then back up at her. “I just needed to say it out loud.” She nodded, her throat tight. “I get it.” The door to the bar swung open, the bell chiming softly. A gust of cold air rushed in, carrying with it the scent of rain and something else—something familiar. Evan’s cologne. Evan’s presence. Silas’ body tensed beside her, his grip on her hand tightening. “You’re not supposed to be here.” Evan’s voice was smooth, dangerous. “I’m here to see my wife.” Rory’s blood turned to ice. She looked at Silas, her eyes wide. “Evan.” Silas’ voice was low, deadly. “Leave.” Evan laughed, a sound like broken glass. “Or what? You’ll throw me out?” Silas stood, his chair scraping against the floor. “I will.” Evan’s gaze flicked to Rory, his smile widening. “But she’s mine.” Silas moved before Rory could react, his hand closing around Evan’s collar. “She’s not yours.” Evan’s eyes widened, then narrowed. “Watch your tongue, old man.” Silas’ grip tightened, his voice a growl. “She’s not yours.” Rory stood, her voice steady. “Let him go.” Silas’ gaze flicked to her, his expression unreadable. “No.” Evan’s laughter filled the bar, echoing off the walls. “She’s always been a fool.” Silas’ fist connected with Evan’s jaw, the sound of bone cracking echoing through the room. Evan staggered back, his hands flying to his face. Blood trickled between his fingers, dark and glistening. Rory’s breath caught. She looked at Silas, her eyes wide. “What are you doing?” Silas’ gaze flicked to her, his expression unreadable. “Protecting you.” Evan’s voice was a snarl. “You think you can protect her?” Silas’ voice was low, deadly. “I will.” Evan’s eyes widened, then narrowed. “You don’t know what you’re dealing with.” Silas’ gaze flicked to the back room, then back to Evan. “I know exactly what I’m dealing with.” The bartender stepped forward, his voice steady. “You’re going to have to leave.” Evan’s gaze flicked to the bartender, then back to Rory. “She’s coming with me.” Silas’ voice was low, deadly. “She’s not.” Evan’s eyes widened, then narrowed. “You’re making a mistake.” Silas’ gaze flicked to Rory, his expression unreadable. “I’m not.” Evan’s voice was a snarl. “You don’t know what you’re doing.” Silas’ voice was low, deadly. “I do.”
total_cost0.00040710000000000003

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he asked again [again]"
dialogueSentences128
tagDensity0.109
leniency0.219
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.016
83.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2179
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count3
2
adverb"sharply"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
2"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2179
totalAiIsms39
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"flicked"
count9
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count3
6
word"echoing"
count3
7
word"unreadable"
count7
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"reminder"
count2
10
word"charged"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"glistening"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"silence"
3"flicked"
4"tension"
5"stomach"
6"echoing"
7"unreadable"
8"weight"
9"reminder"
10"charged"
11"unspoken"
12"glistening"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count3
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences145
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences275
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords12
totalWords2171
ratio0.006
matches
0"him"
1"Come back."
2"You’ll always be mine, Rory. You’ll always come back."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1444
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity7
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory13
Cardiff1
London1
Silas19
Evan20
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.807
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2171
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences275
matches
0"written that letter"
1"knew that look"
2"knew that look"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs135
mean16.08
std15.42
cv0.959
sampleLengths
059
177
272
340
41
59
61
746
81
96
1034
116
1214
1321
143
159
1624
1745
189
1910
2030
2122
2214
2314
2470
2512
268
2728
283
2968
3012
3130
3220
3332
3416
3515
3617
3726
387
3912
402
4121
421
434
4444
454
4617
473
4817
4922
98.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences145
matches
0"being asked"
1"was trimmed"
2"was trimmed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs279
matches
0"was passing"
70.13% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences275
ratio0.025
matches
0"Inside, the hum of low conversation and the clink of glasses felt familiar, even though Rory hadn’t stepped foot in here since the night she left Cardiff for London—since the night she left *him* behind."
1"But the letter had been clear: *Come back.* No explanation, no apology—just the old address scrawled in her father’s handwriting, the ink smudged where he’d wiped his thumb across the page."
2"The air inside hit her like a wall—warm, thick with the scent of aged wood and something sharper, like leather and old whiskey."
3"But the way Silas said his name—like it was a curse—made her skin prickle."
4"She thought of the nights she’d spent curled on the floor of her flat, Evan’s voice still echoing in her ears—*You’ll always be mine, Rory."
5"The bartender—someone new—set a glass of whiskey in front of her, neat and untouched."
6"A gust of cold air rushed in, carrying with it the scent of rain and something else—something familiar."
89.19% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount382
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.05235602094240838
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.015706806282722512
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences275
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences275
mean7.89
std6.63
cv0.839
sampleLengths
024
135
24
325
431
517
614
723
83
94
1028
1114
1219
137
141
155
164
171
182
199
2018
2113
224
231
246
253
2616
2711
284
293
303
313
322
339
3417
354
363
379
387
3913
404
4120
4220
435
448
451
466
474
483
496
45.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.17454545454545456
totalSentences275
uniqueOpeners48
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences138
matches
0"Instead, he gestured to the"
1"Then he gestured to the"
ratio0.014
11.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount72
totalSentences138
matches
0"She shouldn’t have come."
1"She’d burned it the second"
2"Her breath caught."
3"He turned, his left leg"
4"His hazel eyes locked onto"
5"She swallowed it down."
6"He didn’t move to embrace"
7"She should’ve lied."
8"His jaw tightened."
9"She nodded, because what else"
10"He exhaled through his nose,"
11"She braced herself against the"
12"He didn’t move, but she"
13"His voice was low, controlled"
14"She’d thought she’d left him"
15"He took a slow sip"
16"She laughed, sharp and hollow."
17"She thought of the nights"
18"You’ll always come back.* She"
19"she said, because she couldn’t"
ratio0.522
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount127
totalSentences138
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"She shouldn’t have come."
2"The flat above"
3"She’d burned it the second"
4"The door swung open before"
5"The air inside hit her"
6"Her breath caught."
7"The bar hadn’t changed."
8"Neither had the way the"
9"He turned, his left leg"
10"His hazel eyes locked onto"
11"Recognition flickered, then dissolved into"
12"The name tasted like ash."
13"She swallowed it down."
14"The silence between them stretched,"
15"He didn’t move to embrace"
16"She should’ve lied."
17"His jaw tightened."
18"She nodded, because what else"
19"He exhaled through his nose,"
ratio0.92
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His left leg gave another hitch as he shifted his weight, a reminder of the injury that had ended his career."
1"His left leg gave another hitch as he shifted his weight, a reminder of the injury that had ended his career."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He took, his voice quieter now"
1"He took, his voice quieter now"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences128
tagDensity0.055
leniency0.109
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.7975%