| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her hand closed protectively [protectively]" | | 1 | "the voice came again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.519 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 78.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1621 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "utterly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.82% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1621 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "sturdy" | | 4 | "sentinels" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "depths" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "spectral" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "otherworldly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 142 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1592 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.77% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1425 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.82 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 5 | | London | 3 | | October | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Rory | 26 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.588 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite human" | | 1 | "felt like minutes" |
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| 11.56% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.884 | | wordCount | 1592 | | matches | | 0 | "no longer pulling her forward but" | | 1 | "not words, but a sound like pages turning, rapid" | | 2 | "not crimson but midnight blue, swirling with stars" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 72 | | mean | 22.11 | | std | 12.55 | | cv | 0.568 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 33 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 263 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 26 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 22 | | totalSentences | 142 | | ratio | 0.155 | | matches | | 0 | "Tonight, it had nearly burned her skin, and when she'd held it in her palm, it had tugged—actually tugged—in this direction." | | 1 | "She'd dressed sensibly—heavy jacket, jeans, sturdy footwear—but the cold still seeped through, raising gooseflesh on her arms." | | 2 | "The standing stones appeared suddenly through the mist—ancient oaks petrified into monoliths, arranged in a rough circle." | | 3 | "Flowers bloomed underfoot—foxglove, primrose, bluebells—flowers that shouldn't bloom together, shouldn't bloom at all this time of year." | | 4 | "She'd found it—the Fae Grove that odd little book had mentioned, the one she'd discovered wedged behind the bar when helping Silas clean." | | 5 | "Rory checked her watch—12:17 AM." | | 6 | "The first prickle of unease came when she realized she couldn't hear the distant sound of London anymore—no planes overhead, no far-off traffic." | | 7 | "\"Hello?\" Her voice sounded wrong—too loud and simultaneously muffled, as if the air itself swallowed sound." | | 8 | "She turned back to the stone altar, but something caught her eye—movement at the periphery of her vision." | | 9 | "Another sound—the rustle of cloth, perhaps, or dry leaves sliding across stone." | | 10 | "Something whispered behind her—not words, but a sound like pages turning, rapid and rhythmic." | | 11 | "Rory spun again and caught a glimpse of—what?" | | 12 | "Where minutes before bloomed colorful wildflowers, now grew pale, spectral blooms—ghost orchids and moon flowers, their petals luminescent in the strange half-light." | | 13 | "The digital display read the same—12:17 AM." | | 14 | "A soft sound drew her attention—a gentle splashing, like stones dropped into still water." | | 15 | "The rational part of Rory's mind—the part that had nearly completed a law degree before she'd fled Cardiff—told her to leave immediately." | | 16 | "Not a reflection—something beneath the surface, dark and sinuous." | | 17 | "A laugh echoed through the clearing—high and musical and utterly inhuman." | | 18 | "Rory turned toward the sound and for an instant saw a figure—tall and slender, with limbs too long and joints that bent wrong." | | 19 | "But before she could step through, something moved in her peripheral vision—something tall and angular and wrong." | | 20 | "Its proportions were subtly wrong—limbs too long, fingers too numerous, features beautiful but alien." | | 21 | "The mist dissolved, the otherworldly light faded, and the sounds of distant London returned—a siren, the rumble of a late-night lorry." |
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| 91.07% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1454 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 73 | | adverbRatio | 0.050206327372764786 | | lyAdverbCount | 27 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018569463548830812 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 142 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 142 | | mean | 11.21 | | std | 6 | | cv | 0.535 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 49.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.31690140845070425 | | totalSentences | 142 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 27.10% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "Only silence, broken occasionally by" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come because of the" | | 1 | "It pulsed once, twice, then" | | 2 | "She'd dressed sensibly—heavy jacket, jeans," | | 3 | "She'd lived in London for" | | 4 | "she whispered, stepping between two" | | 5 | "It smelled of wildflowers and" | | 6 | "She'd found it—the Fae Grove" | | 7 | "She'd give herself half an" | | 8 | "Her voice sounded wrong—too loud" | | 9 | "She turned back to the" | | 10 | "Its crimson depths seemed to" | | 11 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 12 | "Her voice betrayed her with" | | 13 | "It disappeared the moment she" | | 14 | "She'd been here at least" | | 15 | "It came from beyond a" | | 16 | "Its reflection showed not crimson" | | 17 | "She was certain of that." | | 18 | "It bounced from stone to" | | 19 | "Her hand closed protectively around" |
| | ratio | 0.252 | |
| 37.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 104 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "The mist clung to Richmond" | | 1 | "Rory checked the location on" | | 2 | "The screen had shown her" | | 3 | "She'd come because of the" | | 4 | "Tonight, it had nearly burned" | | 5 | "Rory muttered, her breath clouding" | | 6 | "The Heartstone swung from her" | | 7 | "It pulsed once, twice, then" | | 8 | "Rory followed, dried leaves crunching" | | 9 | "She'd dressed sensibly—heavy jacket, jeans," | | 10 | "The pendant grew warmer as" | | 11 | "The standing stones appeared suddenly" | | 12 | "Rory's steps faltered." | | 13 | "She'd lived in London for" | | 14 | "The stones stood silent, sentinels" | | 15 | "she whispered, stepping between two" | | 16 | "The mist remained, but the" | | 17 | "It smelled of wildflowers and" | | 18 | "Flowers bloomed underfoot—foxglove, primrose, bluebells—flowers" | | 19 | "The Heartstone burned hot against" |
| | ratio | 0.846 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Trusting the one thing that had guided her here, Rory moved in that direction, the mist trailing from her body like reluctant hands." |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory muttered, her breath clouding in the unseasonable chill" | | 1 | "Her voice sounded, as if the air itself swallowed sound" | | 2 | "Rory said, struggling to keep her voice level" |
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| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.148 | | leniency | 0.296 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |