Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRA3JGAMZC4F1VVY2J6FQS

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Duration:
21.3s
Cost:
$0.000141
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's boots scuffed against the earth as she walked, the sound echoing off the ancient oak standing stones. The Fae Grove was shrouded in darkness, the wildflowers that bloomed year-round seeming to glow with an otherworldly light. She had been here for hours, the dense foliage making it difficult to navigate. According to Isolde, the portal to the Fae realm was hidden deep within the grove, and she had been instructed to bring the Heartstone Pendant. As she walked, the trees seemed to close in around her, their branches tangling overhead like skeletal fingers. The air was heavy with the scent of damp earth and decay. Aurora's heart rate picked up, her senses on high alert. Something felt off, but she couldn't quite put her finger on it. She stopped in front of a massive stone, its surface etched with symbols that seemed to shimmer in the faint moonlight. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed faintly against her chest, as if urging her to proceed. Aurora hesitated, a growing sense of unease building in her stomach. She had been warned that the portal was hidden behind a series of trials, and she wasn't sure if she was ready. As she stood there, the silence was broken by the faint rustling of leaves. It was soft at first, almost imperceptible, but it grew louder, the sound of small creatures scurrying through the underbrush. Aurora's skin crawled as she scanned the area, but she couldn't see anything. The rustling stopped as suddenly as it had begun, leaving an oppressive silence in its wake. She took a deep breath and continued on, the trees seeming to press in around her. The air grew colder, the shadows deepening into dark pools that seemed to move of their own accord. Aurora's eyes scanned the area, but she couldn't shake the feeling that she was being watched. As she walked, the ground began to slope upward, the trees thinning out as she climbed. The air grew colder still, and Aurora could see her breath misting in the air. She was getting close, she could feel it. The ground leveled out, and Aurora found herself standing at the edge of a massive clearing. In the center of the clearing stood a massive stone, its surface smooth and unadorned. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed brightly against her chest, and Aurora felt a sudden surge of certainty. This was it. As she approached the stone, the air seemed to vibrate with energy. Aurora could feel the power of the portal building, her senses reeling from the sheer intensity of it. She reached out a hand, hesitated for a moment, and then placed the Heartstone Pendant on the stone. The air erupted into a cacophony of sound, the rustling of leaves, the snapping of twigs, and the distant howling of wolves. Aurora's head spun as the energy of the portal surged through her, and she felt herself being pulled toward it. But as she reached out, her hand hesitated, and she stumbled backward. Something was wrong. The howling grew louder, the sound of running water, and the creaking of trees. It was as if the very fabric of reality was unraveling around her. Aurora's eyes scanned the clearing, her heart racing with fear. That was when she saw it, a figure standing just beyond the edge of the clearing. It was tall and imposing, its features indistinct in the darkness. The air seemed to ripple around it, as if it was somehow... solidifying the shadows. Aurora's breath caught in her throat as she froze, her eyes fixed on the figure. She knew that she should run, that she should get as far away from this place as possible. But her legs seemed rooted to the spot, unable to move. The figure took a step closer, its presence seeming to fill the clearing. Aurora's heart pounded in her chest, her senses reeling from the sheer terror that was building inside her. She knew that she was in grave danger, that she was facing something that was beyond her comprehension. As the figure drew closer, Aurora felt a cold dread creeping up her spine. She was trapped, and she knew that she was in grave danger. The rustling of leaves, the howling of wolves, and the distant creaking of trees all seemed to fade into the background as her world narrowed down to a single, terrifying reality. She was not alone. The darkness seemed to coalesce into a presence, a shape that loomed over her, casting a shadow that seemed to engulf everything. Aurora's eyes were fixed on the figure, her mind racing with fear and uncertainty. And then, everything went black. Aurora came to with a start, her heart racing and her head pounding. She was lying on the forest floor, her body tangled in the underbrush. The rustling of leaves and the howling of wolves were still echoing through her mind, but she knew that it had been a dream. Or so she thought. As she sat up, she saw that the clearing was empty, the massive stone standing alone in the center. The air was still, the only sound the distant howling of wolves. Aurora's heart was pounding, her senses on high alert. She knew that she had to get out of there, to get as far away from this place as possible. But as she stood up, she saw something that made her blood run cold. The Heartstone Pendant was still on the stone, its inner glow pulsing softly in the darkness. And beside it, a small inscription had been carved into the stone, a single phrase that seemed to leap out at her: "You should not have come here."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
84.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount950
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount950
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"echoing"
count2
1
word"otherworldly"
count1
2
word"navigate"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"sense of"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"scanned"
count3
9
word"oppressive"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count2
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"cacophony"
count1
13
word"unraveling"
count1
14
word"racing"
count3
15
word"imposing"
count1
16
word"grave"
count2
17
word"loomed"
count1
18
word"pounding"
count2
highlights
0"echoing"
1"otherworldly"
2"navigate"
3"etched"
4"pulsed"
5"sense of"
6"stomach"
7"silence"
8"scanned"
9"oppressive"
10"could feel"
11"intensity"
12"cacophony"
13"unraveling"
14"racing"
15"imposing"
16"grave"
17"loomed"
18"pounding"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"The air was heavy with"
98.96% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences64
matches
0"g with fear"
1"g with fear"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords949
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount943
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.8
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove1
Isolde1
Heartstone5
Pendant5
Aurora17
persons
0"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Isolde"
globalScore0.599
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"quite put her finger on it"
1"symbols that seemed to shimmer in the faint moonlight"
2"as if urging her to proceed"
3"pools that seemed to move of their own accord"
4"It was as if the very fabric of reality was unraveling around her"
5"seemed rooted to the spot, unable to move"
6"shadow that seemed to engulf everything"
7"phrase that seemed to leap out at her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount949
matches(empty)
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount8
totalSentences65
matches
0"warned that the"
1"knew that she run, that she"
2"knew that she"
3"knew that she"
4"knew that it"
5"saw that the"
6"knew that she"
90.91% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean43.14
std20.2
cv0.468
sampleLengths
076
152
268
363
450
539
650
748
842
942
1052
1144
1249
1357
144
1536
165
1750
184
1960
2052
216
66.89% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences64
matches
0"was shrouded"
1"was hidden"
2"been instructed"
3"been warned"
4"was hidden"
5"was broken"
6"being pulled"
7"were fixed"
8"been carved"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was being"
1"was getting"
2"was unraveling"
3"was building"
4"was facing"
5"was lying"
6"was pounding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount944
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.0211864406779661
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006355932203389831
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
90.97% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean14.6
std5.51
cv0.377
sampleLengths
018
119
214
325
418
512
610
712
821
914
1011
1122
1214
1320
1413
1516
1616
1718
1816
1916
2015
218
2216
2315
2416
253
2612
2718
2818
2922
3020
3112
323
3314
3413
3510
3616
3711
3812
393
4015
4118
4211
4313
4418
4518
4614
4712
4831
494
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.23076923076923078
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners15
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences64
matches
0"She had been here for"
1"She stopped in front of"
2"She had been warned that"
3"It was soft at first,"
4"She took a deep breath"
5"She was getting close, she"
6"She reached out a hand,"
7"It was as if the"
8"It was tall and imposing,"
9"She knew that she should"
10"She knew that she was"
11"She was trapped, and she"
12"She was not alone."
13"She was lying on the"
14"She knew that she had"
ratio0.234
77.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences64
matches
0"Aurora's boots scuffed against the"
1"The Fae Grove was shrouded"
2"She had been here for"
3"The air was heavy with"
4"Aurora's heart rate picked up,"
5"Something felt off, but she"
6"She stopped in front of"
7"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed faintly"
8"Aurora hesitated, a growing sense"
9"She had been warned that"
10"It was soft at first,"
11"Aurora's skin crawled as she"
12"The rustling stopped as suddenly"
13"She took a deep breath"
14"The air grew colder, the"
15"Aurora's eyes scanned the area,"
16"The air grew colder still,"
17"She was getting close, she"
18"The ground leveled out, and"
19"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed brightly"
ratio0.766
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The Fae Grove was shrouded in darkness, the wildflowers that bloomed year-round seeming to glow with an otherworldly light."
1"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed faintly against her chest, as if urging her to proceed."
2"The air grew colder, the shadows deepening into dark pools that seemed to move of their own accord."
3"Aurora's heart pounded in her chest, her senses reeling from the sheer terror that was building inside her."
4"She knew that she was in grave danger, that she was facing something that was beyond her comprehension."
5"Aurora came to with a start, her heart racing and her head pounding."
6"But as she stood up, she saw something that made her blood run cold."
7"And beside it, a small inscription had been carved into the stone, a single phrase that seemed to leap out at her:"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
67.5487%