| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.318 | | leniency | 0.636 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 86.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 753 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.96% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 753 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "electric" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "gleaming" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "unreadable" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.51% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 12 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 745 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "shifted" | | 1 | "breathing" | | 2 | "breathe" | | 3 | "door" | | 4 | "alive" | | 5 | "parts" | | 6 | "moved" | | 7 | "breathe" | | 8 | "The Veil is fraying." | | 9 | "all" | | 10 | "them" | | 11 | "floated" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.60% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 644 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.71 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Shade | 1 | | Aurora | 11 | | Isolde | 8 | | Veil | 1 | | Dymas | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Dymas" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.646 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 30.95% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to breathe* when she looked too long" | | 1 | "as if testing the air" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 745 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 21.29 | | std | 16.37 | | cv | 0.769 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 4 |
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| 99.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 116 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter—like honeyed wine left too long in the sun." | | 1 | "The wildflowers here pulsed with light, shifting color like a living thing—pinks deepening to crimson, blues bleeding into violet." | | 2 | "Not all at once—just the ones nearest the altar, their petals curling inward like fingers closing around something." | | 3 | "A tear opened in the air before them—a swirling vortex of amber and shadow, the sky above it a bruised, bleeding orange." | | 4 | "The trees here were twisted, their branches heavy with fruit that wasn’t fruit—glowing, pulsing things that shifted when she stared too long." | | 5 | "The thing’s lips peeled back, revealing teeth that weren’t teeth at all—sharp, jagged things that glowed faintly, like the pendant at her throat." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 652 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "growing warm against her" |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.03834355828220859 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007668711656441718 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 9.55 | | std | 6.55 | | cv | 0.686 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 53.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.38461538461538464 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 56.50% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the flowers *moved*." |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a *breathing* thing." | | 1 | "She stepped forward, her bare" | | 2 | "they murmured, their voice like" | | 3 | "she said softly" | | 4 | "They didn’t walk." | | 5 | "They *floated*, their mouths open" |
| | ratio | 0.102 | |
| 36.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped through the" | | 2 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 3 | "The grove wasn’t a place." | | 4 | "It was a *breathing* thing." | | 5 | "The wildflowers here pulsed with" | | 6 | "The air hummed, thick with" | | 7 | "The Shade’s form flickered like" | | 8 | "Aurora followed their gaze." | | 9 | "A glade opened before them," | | 10 | "The trees here formed a" | | 11 | "Isolde’s voice cut through the" | | 12 | "Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the" | | 13 | "Isolde tilted her head, pale" | | 14 | "She stepped forward, her bare" | | 15 | "A rustle from the trees." | | 16 | "Nyx’s shadow stretched long, pooling" | | 17 | "they murmured, their voice like" | | 18 | "Aurora’s pulse jumped." | | 19 | "Isolde ignored her, kneeling to" |
| | ratio | 0.847 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 66.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx’s shadow stretched long, pooling at Isolde’s feet before lifting again, as if testing the air." | | 1 | "Nyx’s shadow coiled around a low-hanging branch, the leaves parting as if drawn by an unseen hand." | | 2 | "The thing’s lips peeled back, revealing teeth that weren’t teeth at all—sharp, jagged things that glowed faintly, like the pendant at her throat." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped, her bare feet leaving no impression on the grass" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.136 | | leniency | 0.273 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |