Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRA3N9Q5TZ74W5D82Y585A

Run Details

Duration:
6.0s
Cost:
$0.000287

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter—like honeyed wine left too long in the sun. Aurora Carter stepped through the standing stones, her boots sinking slightly into the moss, the pendant at her throat growing warm against her skin. The moment she crossed the threshold, the world *shifted*. The grove wasn’t a place. It was a *breathing* thing. Tall oaks stretched upward, their bark silvered with age, their leaves whispering in a language just beyond her hearing. The wildflowers here pulsed with light, shifting color like a living thing—pinks deepening to crimson, blues bleeding into violet. The air hummed, thick with something electric, the way the skin prickles before a storm. Beside her, Nyx didn’t move, didn’t speak. The Shade’s form flickered like smoke caught in a draft, their violet eyes fixed on the grove’s heart. Aurora followed their gaze. A glade opened before them, bathed in golden light that wasn’t sunlight. The trees here formed a perfect circle, their branches twisting into shapes that might have been faces or animals or both. At the center stood a stone altar, its surface carved with spirals that seemed to *breathe* when she looked too long. “This isn’t just a grove,” Isolde’s voice cut through the quiet, her silver hair catching the strange light. “It’s a *door*.” Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the pendant. “Or a trap.” Isolde tilted her head, pale lavender eyes gleaming. “All doors are traps, child. But not all doors are meant to be opened.” She stepped forward, her bare feet leaving no impression on the grass. “The Veil thins here. I can feel it.” A rustle from the trees. Nyx’s shadow stretched long, pooling at Isolde’s feet before lifting again, as if testing the air. “She’s right,” they murmured, their voice like wind through dead leaves. “Something’s watching.” Aurora’s pulse jumped. “Great. Just what we needed.” Isolde ignored her, kneeling to trace a finger along the altar’s edge. The stone was warm, almost *alive*. “The Fae Courts left this behind,” she said softly. “A way to step between worlds, but not all at once. Only *parts* of them.” A part of Aurora wanted to ask what that meant. Another part wanted to run. Then the flowers *moved*. Not all at once—just the ones nearest the altar, their petals curling inward like fingers closing around something. A low, resonant hum filled the air, vibrating in her bones. The ground beneath her feet seemed to *breathe*, rising and falling in slow, deliberate waves. “Okay,” Aurora said, voice steady despite the way her hands were shaking. “That’s new.” Isolde didn’t look up. “The grove feeds on curiosity.” Nyx’s shadow coiled around a low-hanging branch, the leaves parting as if drawn by an unseen hand. “Or hunger.” A sound like distant laughter echoed through the trees. Not human. Not fae. Something older. Aurora’s breath hitched. “We should go.” Isolde finally stood, her expression unreadable. “We’re already inside.” The air shifted again, colder now, carrying the scent of rot and spice. The flowers at the grove’s edge withered in seconds, their petals blackening like burnt paper. The trees groaned, their branches twisting toward the center as if drawn by an unseen force. “What the hell is happening?” Aurora’s voice cracked. Nyx’s whisper slithered into her mind. *The Veil is fraying.* A tear opened in the air before them—a swirling vortex of amber and shadow, the sky above it a bruised, bleeding orange. The scent of Dymas hit her then: rich, heavy, like a feast left to spoil in the sun. Aurora’s stomach twisted. “That’s not—” “Hel,” Isolde finished. “But not *all* of it.” The portal pulsed, its edges flickering like a dying flame. Beyond it, the sky of Dymas stretched endlessly, warm and golden, but something was wrong. The trees here were twisted, their branches heavy with fruit that wasn’t fruit—glowing, pulsing things that shifted when she stared too long. And then she saw *them*. Helbound souls, their forms half-shadow, half-light, moving in slow, jerky motions. They didn’t walk. They *floated*, their mouths open in silent screams, their eyes hollow. One turned its head toward them. Aurora’s blood turned to ice. The thing’s lips peeled back, revealing teeth that weren’t teeth at all—sharp, jagged things that glowed faintly, like the pendant at her throat. Isolde’s hand shot out, gripping Aurora’s wrist. “We don’t have time for this.” Nyx’s shadow surged forward, solidifying into a towering figure of living darkness. “Neither do they.” The first soul lunged.
total_cost0.0002875

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.318
leniency0.636
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.091
86.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount753
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount753
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"electric"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"electric"
2"flickered"
3"perfect"
4"gleaming"
5"pulse"
6"echoed"
7"unreadable"
8"whisper"
9"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
97.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans12
markdownWords15
totalWords745
ratio0.02
matches
0"shifted"
1"breathing"
2"breathe"
3"door"
4"alive"
5"parts"
6"moved"
7"breathe"
8"The Veil is fraying."
9"all"
10"them"
11"floated"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.60% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount644
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.71
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Nyx5
Shade1
Aurora11
Isolde8
Veil1
Dymas2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Nyx"
2"Shade"
3"Aurora"
4"Isolde"
5"Dymas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.646
windowScore0.833
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"spirals that seemed to breathe* when she looked too long"
1"as if testing the air"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount745
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean21.29
std16.37
cv0.769
sampleLengths
050
110
253
329
454
521
69
742
834
98
1042
1115
124
1344
1414
159
1619
1715
186
199
2044
218
2210
2340
245
258
2647
275
2825
296
305
3123
3213
3315
344
99.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"were twisted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs116
matches
0"were shaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences78
ratio0.077
matches
0"The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter—like honeyed wine left too long in the sun."
1"The wildflowers here pulsed with light, shifting color like a living thing—pinks deepening to crimson, blues bleeding into violet."
2"Not all at once—just the ones nearest the altar, their petals curling inward like fingers closing around something."
3"A tear opened in the air before them—a swirling vortex of amber and shadow, the sky above it a bruised, bleeding orange."
4"The trees here were twisted, their branches heavy with fruit that wasn’t fruit—glowing, pulsing things that shifted when she stared too long."
5"The thing’s lips peeled back, revealing teeth that weren’t teeth at all—sharp, jagged things that glowed faintly, like the pendant at her throat."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount652
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"growing warm against her"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03834355828220859
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007668711656441718
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean9.55
std6.55
cv0.686
sampleLengths
017
124
29
35
45
519
619
715
87
918
104
1112
1221
1321
1418
153
166
173
188
1926
208
215
2216
2311
242
253
265
2712
286
299
3015
3110
325
334
3418
3511
3615
3712
382
394
405
4117
422
439
442
452
462
473
483
496
53.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners30
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Then the flowers *moved*."
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences59
matches
0"It was a *breathing* thing."
1"She stepped forward, her bare"
2"they murmured, their voice like"
3"she said softly"
4"They didn’t walk."
5"They *floated*, their mouths open"
ratio0.102
36.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences59
matches
0"The air smelled of damp"
1"Aurora Carter stepped through the"
2"The moment she crossed the"
3"The grove wasn’t a place."
4"It was a *breathing* thing."
5"The wildflowers here pulsed with"
6"The air hummed, thick with"
7"The Shade’s form flickered like"
8"Aurora followed their gaze."
9"A glade opened before them,"
10"The trees here formed a"
11"Isolde’s voice cut through the"
12"Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the"
13"Isolde tilted her head, pale"
14"She stepped forward, her bare"
15"A rustle from the trees."
16"Nyx’s shadow stretched long, pooling"
17"they murmured, their voice like"
18"Aurora’s pulse jumped."
19"Isolde ignored her, kneeling to"
ratio0.847
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Nyx’s shadow stretched long, pooling at Isolde’s feet before lifting again, as if testing the air."
1"Nyx’s shadow coiled around a low-hanging branch, the leaves parting as if drawn by an unseen hand."
2"The thing’s lips peeled back, revealing teeth that weren’t teeth at all—sharp, jagged things that glowed faintly, like the pendant at her throat."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She stepped, her bare feet leaving no impression on the grass"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.136
leniency0.273
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.091
78.8980%