Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRA3W33T7JC9F4Z40FJ88T

Run Details

Duration:
43.7s
Cost:
$0.024440
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above the door pulsed, casting ripples of jade light across Aurora’s collar as she slipped into the Nest. The door thunked shut behind her, muffling the Soho clatter. Smoke drifted in low ribbons beneath exposed beams. Walls bore brittle maps of Prague, Cairo, Seoul—wherever Silas had once slipped in and out of shadow. Black-and-white photographs hung edge to edge: young agents grinning behind cover stories, safe houses, sudden lateness of flight manifestos. The bar’s hush folded around her like an old coat. Aurora paused at the threshold. The stool at the far corner, beneath a slanted lamp, held a lone drink. Glass sweating on polished wood. A woman’s back. Curly dark hair cut to her jaw. She recognized that dry curve of shoulder blades anywhere. Aurora tightened the strap of her satchel and moved forward. The bar hummed on either side: low voices, the clink of ice against glass. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a tumbler with slow precision. Grey streaks in his auburn hair caught the neon. He glanced up, paused on Aurora’s face, then slid behind the shelf that hid the secret room. No questions. No greeting. Not yet. Aurora cleared her throat. Her boots scuffed the floorboards. The woman didn’t turn. “Rory?” A name from another life. Soft—but it cut the distance in half. The woman’s hand froze at the lip of her glass. Then she turned. Eyebrows lifted. Recognition flickered. A breath of surprise. “Aurora?” Her voice landed unevenly. She stood so fast the stool scraped. She smoothed her skirt and reached out. Aurora closed the gap. There was a moment when neither spoke. Sunken light in Carys’s eyes glinted—like seeing the wrong side of a mirror. “You came.” That was all Carys said. Aurora swallowed. “I needed…water.” Inhale. “And something stronger.” They settled onto stools side by side. Carys angled her glass toward Aurora. “Whisky?” Fingers tapped the rim. “Not the usual water.” Aurora nodded. Silas set down the tumbler in front of her without a word. Creased labrum of his lip. He limped back to the row of bottles. Carys jutted a chin at the maps. “You ever think you’d be back here?” Aurora lifted the glass and looked into the amber. She traced tiny whirlpools in the whisky. “Never thought I’d leave Cardiff, let alone end up at Spymaster Central.” Carys smiled, half crooked. “You always were drawn to chaos.” Aurora let her gaze drift to the photos—Silas in Prague, flanked by operatives with dead-eyes. “I’ve seen worse.” Carys’s smile faded. She wrapped both hands around her glass. Knuckles blanched. “You...you shut me out.” Aurora set her whisky down, straightened. Long hair brushed her collarbone. “I thought you’d stop calling.” “I called every month for two years.” Carys’s words came fast. She bent forward. “You moved, and the line went dead. I left messages. E-mails. Got no reply.” “I had to go.” Aurora’s voice lost its edge. She glanced at her wrist. The scar peeped from beneath her sleeve—a pale crescent, silent witness. “I had to disappear.” Carys’s eyes flickered to that curve. “‘Disappearing’ doesn’t mean ‘never cared.’” She shook her head. “You were my best friend. I thought—” “Thought what?” “That you were angry at me. I let you go.” Aurora pinched the bridge of her nose. A flicker of pain. “It wasn’t you.” Carys leaned back. Her hair caught the lamplight, bronze in the haze. “Then what was it?” Silence filled the space between them. A loose conversation flittered elsewhere in the bar. Aurora stared at the maps. Prague again. She remembered the operation Silas had mentioned once: the one that ended with him limping and them all scattering. She turned back to Carys. “I got scared.” Voice low. “Scared you’d judge me.” “Judge you for what?” Aurora’s nails went white on the glass. “My ex. Evan. The things he said. The things he did. You know how someone can squeeze your voice until it snaps?” Carys’s mouth flattened. She stared at Aurora as if seeing the scar for the first time. “I didn’t know.” Aurora’s head dipped. “I never told you.” “You ran instead.” Carys’s tone softened. “I left messages. I worried every minute. Thought you’d ended up in hospital or prison.” “I was in neither.” Aurora eased an arm out of her sleeve. Showed the mark. Clean and stitched by time. “I just…ran in circles for a while.” Carys reached out, moved a stray curl away from Aurora’s face. A gentle gesture that carried a thousand anchors. “You could have told me.” Aurora closed her eyes. When she opened them, they shone with years. “I was ashamed. I blamed myself.” “You’re not to blame.” Carys’s voice brushed against the rim of Aurora’s heart. “Not ever.” Aurora leaned forward. The bar’s green glow bent around her. She felt small for a moment. “You got married.” The words trembled in her throat. She pictured the wedding announcement Carys had posted online. A man in a dark suit, Carys’s hand in his. Carys half turned away. She blinked twice. “Two years ago.” Aurora’s heart thudded. “I didn’t know.” Carys wrapped her arms around herself. “You never asked.” Aurora’s mouth went dry. “As if I had the right.” Something broke in Carys’s expression. “You always had the right.” Silas reappeared behind the bar, set a fresh glass in front of Carys, then absently slid a bottle of water to Aurora. He tapped the counter once. His way of clearing the air. Aurora lifted the water, brought it to her lips. She stared at her reflection in the bottle. No illusions left. Carys picked up her new glass. Drained it. Set it down hard. “I’m sorry.” Carys’s words stopped the bar’s low murmur. “For everything.” Aurora blinked. The apology had edges—a blade sharpened on regret. “I’m sorry too.” They sat in the hush that followed, two ghosts of the past sharing the same light. Aurora traced the scar again. It felt like a promise written in flesh. To move on or to remember. Carys met her gaze. “Why here? Why tonight?” Aurora studied the maps behind Carys’s shoulder. “Because Silas’s place feels safe. And because tonight I ran out of excuses.” Carys’s lips curved. “No more excuses.” Aurora held that. Let the silence press down. She lifted her water. Carys mirrored her, whisky halfway gone. “In case you need to hear it again,” Aurora said, “I never stopped caring.” Carys raised her glass. “To not letting go.” They tapped rims. The sound cracked like old bones. Aurora watched the liquid inside shiver. A bar patron laughed at a joke over the counter. Silas leaned in, wiping his hands. He caught Aurora’s eye and inclined his head. No words needed. Aurora turned back to Carys. A slow breath emptied her lungs. “Tell me about him. Your husband.” Carys’s eyes flicked down to her glass. She ran a fingertip along the condensation. “He’s patient. Kind. Doesn’t mind my scatterbrain. Works in publishing.” Aurora nodded. “Sounds good.” “It is.” Carys lifted her chin. “And you? What’s next for you?” Aurora set her water on the bar. She folded her hands around the glass’s curve. “I deliver food by day. I’m thinking of law school again. Maybe finish what I started.” Carys smiled—real this time. “You’ll be brilliant.” Aurora’s lips twitched. “I want to try.” Carys placed a hand over Aurora’s. Warmth bloomed where skin met wood. “I’m glad you’re back.” Aurora let the words rest on her tongue. Then she said, “Maybe this time, I’ll stay.” Outside, the neon blinked in emerald pulses. Inside, two friends found each other again. Words hung between them, lighter now. They sat, glass in hand, facing the maps on the wall, ready to chart a new course.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Her voice landed unevenly [unevenly]"
1"Carys’s words came fast [fast]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.213
leniency0.426
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.066
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1299
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1299
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"traced"
count2
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"flickered"
2"traced"
3"flicker"
4"silence"
5"trembled"
6"flicked"
7"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences149
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences194
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1290
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions88
wordCount969
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity4.13
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora40
Nest1
Soho1
Prague3
Cairo1
Seoul1
Silas7
Soft1
Carys32
Showed1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Silas"
2"Carys"
places
0"Nest"
1"Soho"
2"Prague"
3"Cairo"
4"Seoul"
globalScore0
windowScore0
86.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if seeing the scar for the first time"
1"felt like a promise written in flesh"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1290
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences194
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean18.97
std13.5
cv0.712
sampleLengths
085
143
267
313
413
521
619
724
87
98
1013
119
1227
1314
1428
1510
1618
1716
1816
1928
2029
2122
222
2310
2414
2516
2640
2714
284
2929
3019
317
3221
3327
3424
3518
3615
3719
3825
3910
406
419
4210
4310
4433
4520
4612
4711
4813
4935
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs186
matches(empty)
39.76% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences194
ratio0.036
matches
0"Walls bore brittle maps of Prague, Cairo, Seoul—wherever Silas had once slipped in and out of shadow."
1"Soft—but it cut the distance in half."
2"Sunken light in Carys’s eyes glinted—like seeing the wrong side of a mirror."
3"Aurora let her gaze drift to the photos—Silas in Prague, flanked by operatives with dead-eyes."
4"The scar peeped from beneath her sleeve—a pale crescent, silent witness."
5"The apology had edges—a blade sharpened on regret."
6"Carys smiled—real this time."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount978
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.027607361963190184
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003067484662576687
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences194
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences194
mean6.65
std4.12
cv0.62
sampleLengths
021
110
28
317
419
510
65
714
85
93
107
119
1210
1314
1411
159
1617
172
182
192
204
215
224
236
247
2510
263
272
282
294
305
317
327
334
347
3513
367
372
383
393
407
416
425
434
442
4512
465
478
487
497
50.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.31958762886597936
totalSentences194
uniqueOpeners62
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences134
matches
0"Then she turned."
1"Then she said,"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences134
matches
0"She recognized that dry curve"
1"He glanced up, paused on"
2"Her boots scuffed the floorboards."
3"Her voice landed unevenly"
4"She stood so fast the"
5"She smoothed her skirt and"
6"They settled onto stools side"
7"He limped back to the"
8"She traced tiny whirlpools in"
9"She wrapped both hands around"
10"She bent forward."
11"She glanced at her wrist."
12"She shook her head"
13"Her hair caught the lamplight,"
14"She remembered the operation Silas"
15"She turned back to Carys."
16"She stared at Aurora as"
17"She felt small for a"
18"She pictured the wedding announcement"
19"She blinked twice."
ratio0.231
34.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount114
totalSentences134
matches
0"The green neon above the"
1"The door thunked shut behind"
2"Smoke drifted in low ribbons"
3"Walls bore brittle maps of"
4"The bar’s hush folded around"
5"Aurora paused at the threshold."
6"The stool at the far"
7"Glass sweating on polished wood."
8"A woman’s back."
9"She recognized that dry curve"
10"Aurora tightened the strap of"
11"The bar hummed on either"
12"Silas stood behind the bar,"
13"He glanced up, paused on"
14"Aurora cleared her throat."
15"Her boots scuffed the floorboards."
16"The woman didn’t turn."
17"A name from another life"
18"The woman’s hand froze at"
19"A breath of surprise."
ratio0.851
37.31% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"To move on or to"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.049
leniency0.098
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.1999%