Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRA9M4D4VM39F7XPK66A07

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11.4s
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$0.024140
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain pummeled the streets of Soho, cascading down the neon-lit facades in a relentless torrent. Detective Harlow Quinn's breath misted the air as she ran, boots slapping through shallow puddles. Her quarry, a shadowy figure just ahead, darted down an alley, trench coat flaring like a dark specter. Through the downpour, Harlow kept her eyes focused, jaw clenched tight. The suspect’s movements were erratic, like prey desperate to outmaneuver its predator. She’d received word the clique was active tonight, and she wasn’t about to lose a lead. “Hold it right there!” Harlow’s voice cut through the rain, carrying an authority forged by years of relentless dedication. Her salt-and-pepper hair, once meticulously cropped, now clung to her forehead in the downpour. The suspect glanced back, just for a heartbeat. Brown eyes met the desperate gaze. He took a sharp left. Harlow's leather watch smacked her wrist as she pivoted, almost slipping on the slick stones beneath her. The alley led to a dead-end, but there, half-hidden by a derelict building’s shadow, was a flight of rickety stairs leading down. The suspect’s heels were just vanishing into the murk. Harlow’s instincts screamed danger. Dark and fetid air wafted up. She descended swiftly, each step resonating hollowly as the bustle of the city faded. Down here, the world narrowed to her task. At the bottom, a rusty gate hung ajar, leading into the abandoned Tube station long forgotten by most of London. Entering the station, Harlow felt the shift in atmosphere—the air pressed tighter, thicker. She could see why the clique chose it as their hideaway, this Veil Market everybody whispered of. She’d heard tales, of course—whispers of supernatural dealings and forbidden alchemy. Harlow’s fingers brushed the hidden pocket inside her coat. The bone token she acquired from an informer was here, her only ticket in. Torches, flickering with unnatural light, cast an eerie glow. The suspect’s silhouette flitted through arches and past old ticket booths turned into market stalls. Harlow blended into the shadows, wary eyes tracing her path. A merchant hawked glowing vials that exuded a sickly sweet scent, while another displayed a trove of cursed trinkets. The market's frenetic energy crackled around her, every stall filled with illicit wares and customers haggling in hushed tones. Harlow followed the suspect through this labyrinth, each turn threatening to steal him from her sight. “Stay the course,” she muttered under her breath. She couldn’t afford to falter now—Morris’s death still haunted her, bound by secrets she was only beginning to unravel. The suspect slipped behind a ragged curtain. Harlow glanced around, unnoticed among the throng. She pushed through after him, drawing herself into a cavernous enclave. The space was empty, save for a flickering torch and the pungent odor of mold and decay. She paced forward. Her heart hammered in her chest, each beat a war drum. The echo of her footsteps played tricks, as if someone or something might leap forth. A click sounded behind her. Harlow spun, arm swinging to grasp the suspect but revealing only the torch flickering fiercely as if sensing her turmoil. She stepped back, the handle of her pistol firm in her grip. Harlow advanced, scanning every shadow, each pockmarked stone a potential threat—until she heard it, the low, guttural whisper of something not quite human. She edged closer. Voices. Her suspect talked, a hurried exchange revealing fears and secrets. “...Shouldn’t be here,” one growled, “the market won’t protect you.” “I have what we need,” the suspect’s voice wavered, “and she’s here. The detective.” Silence, then a laugh devoid of warmth. “Then we baited her, as planned.” Baited. The realization struck hard as a sucker punch. This was no chase. Harlow steadied her breath. Retreat wasn’t an option—they knew she was here. A figure stepped from the shadows, cloaked in an aura of menace. He sported the scars of old battles, and eyes that gleamed with malicious intelligence. “You’ve been a thorn in our side, Quinn,” his voice slid like venom, “time you learned your place.” The torch sputtered, casting phantom shapes that danced threateningly. Harlow’s grip tightened on her weapon. “I'm not leaving without answers.” “Then you’ll join Morris,” he sneered, reaching for a dagger, its blade stained dark by deeds of treachery. Harlow lunged, worlds colliding in a swift, brutal dance. They struggled, grappling across the uneven ground. Each move was desperate, driven by urgency. He thrust the dagger; she parried, twisting to unbalance him. In his eyes, she saw not just threat, but memories of Morris, the partner lost in unsolved mysteries. With a final surge, Harlow twisted the dagger from his grip, sending it skittering into the darkness. She pinned him down, breath ragged. “Who are you working for?” His response was rage, scramble of limbs and effort to break free. “We’re everywhere. You can’t stop us.” Illuminated by wavering torchlight, Harlow almost smiled, a bitter curve of lips. She released a grunt, yanking him up. “We’ll see about that.” Around them, the market’s unsettling glow seemed to pulse with the hidden promise of retribution. She dragged her captive back into the frenetic ebb and flow, each unsure step an act of will. She had to reach the surface again, and quickly. The others were watching, and Harlow was starkly aware the game had changed. Isolated, the weight of the shadows bore on her, the danger of each moment magnified tenfold. Yet, there was belief—a smoldering core where fear could not conquer. The rain outside had changed from a force of nature to an entity that cleansed, heralding each step forward as closer to clarity.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"his voice slid like [like]"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.182
94.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount943
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount943
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"cascading"
count1
1
word"jaw clenched"
count1
2
word"predator"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"unravel"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"potential"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"wavered"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"dance"
count1
14
word"grappling"
count1
15
word"wavering"
count1
16
word"pulse"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"cascading"
1"jaw clenched"
2"predator"
3"tracing"
4"unravel"
5"echo"
6"footsteps"
7"scanning"
8"potential"
9"whisper"
10"wavered"
11"silence"
12"warmth"
13"dance"
14"grappling"
15"wavering"
16"pulse"
17"weight"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"heart hammered in her chest"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences77
matches
0"was desperate"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords932
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
45.83% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount864
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow18
Quinn1
Tube1
London1
Veil1
Market1
Morris2
Silence1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Market"
globalScore0.458
windowScore0.833
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if sensing her turmoil"
1"not quite human"
92.70% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.073
wordCount932
matches
0"not just threat, but memories of Morris, the partner lost in unsolved mysteries"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
76.89% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean33.29
std13.95
cv0.419
sampleLengths
048
139
233
336
441
542
664
734
854
927
1042
1129
1237
1337
1410
1514
1613
1725
1826
1918
2020
2118
2251
2328
2418
2523
2655
2750
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs161
matches
0"were watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences82
ratio0.085
matches
0"Entering the station, Harlow felt the shift in atmosphere—the air pressed tighter, thicker."
1"She’d heard tales, of course—whispers of supernatural dealings and forbidden alchemy."
2"She couldn’t afford to falter now—Morris’s death still haunted her, bound by secrets she was only beginning to unravel."
3"Harlow advanced, scanning every shadow, each pockmarked stone a potential threat—until she heard it, the low, guttural whisper of something not quite human."
4"Retreat wasn’t an option—they knew she was here."
5"He thrust the dagger; she parried, twisting to unbalance him."
6"Yet, there was belief—a smoldering core where fear could not conquer."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount875
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03542857142857143
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.012571428571428572
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean11.37
std5.42
cv0.476
sampleLengths
015
115
218
311
412
516
619
714
88
96
105
1117
1222
139
144
156
1614
178
1820
1913
2017
2111
229
2314
249
2515
2610
2719
2819
2916
308
3119
327
337
3411
3517
363
3711
3815
395
4020
4112
4223
433
441
4510
4610
4714
487
496
71.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.45121951219512196
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences74
matches
0"Her quarry, a shadowy figure"
1"She’d received word the clique"
2"Her salt-and-pepper hair, once meticulously"
3"He took a sharp left."
4"She descended swiftly, each step"
5"She could see why the"
6"She’d heard tales, of course—whispers"
7"she muttered under her breath"
8"She couldn’t afford to falter"
9"She pushed through after him,"
10"She paced forward."
11"Her heart hammered in her"
12"She stepped back, the handle"
13"She edged closer."
14"Her suspect talked, a hurried"
15"He sported the scars of"
16"his voice slid like venom"
17"he sneered, reaching for a"
18"They struggled, grappling across the"
19"He thrust the dagger; she"
ratio0.338
41.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences74
matches
0"Rain pummeled the streets of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's breath misted"
2"Her quarry, a shadowy figure"
3"The suspect’s movements were erratic,"
4"She’d received word the clique"
5"Harlow’s voice cut through the"
6"Her salt-and-pepper hair, once meticulously"
7"The suspect glanced back, just"
8"Brown eyes met the desperate"
9"He took a sharp left."
10"Harlow's leather watch smacked her"
11"The alley led to a"
12"The suspect’s heels were just"
13"Harlow’s instincts screamed danger."
14"She descended swiftly, each step"
15"She could see why the"
16"She’d heard tales, of course—whispers"
17"Harlow’s fingers brushed the hidden"
18"The bone token she acquired"
19"Torches, flickering with unnatural light,"
ratio0.838
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Yet, there was belief—a smoldering"
ratio0.014
57.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"A merchant hawked glowing vials that exuded a sickly sweet scent, while another displayed a trove of cursed trinkets."
1"The echo of her footsteps played tricks, as if someone or something might leap forth."
2"Harlow spun, arm swinging to grasp the suspect but revealing only the torch flickering fiercely as if sensing her turmoil."
3"With a final surge, Harlow twisted the dagger from his grip, sending it skittering into the darkness."
4"The rain outside had changed from a force of nature to an entity that cleansed, heralding each step forward as closer to clarity."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"he sneered (sneer)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.364
73.1431%